gwgc 10

Haroldinium

hey you... shutup

Join Date: Dec 2005

haroldinium raiders

Me/Mo

06 Aug 2006 at 23:34 - 1

gwgc 10 is...

HERE
ok people i always do this

please tell me what ya think.

this time ive tried my best not to cut corners in story and in the artwork, and i really like it, issue 6 used to be my fave, now this is. this issue is twice the usual length, and this will be the same for the next to issues, same size and style. thank you if youve read it, this is the story starting to get into itself

anything is apreciated

thank you already

Draxus

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: May 2006

Way of the Gun [DOTS]

06 Aug 2006 at 23:55 - 2

I personally enjoyed this one, just because of the simple fact it was longer then the others

Keep this coming i look forward to the next one in the series. GJ

anubis_master

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Apr 2006

playing GW

07 Aug 2006 at 02:07 - 3

i hit the cup of tea one by accedent it was great

Zinger314

Debbie Downer

Join Date: May 2006

N/Me

07 Aug 2006 at 06:46 - 4

You fail miserably at satire.

What the heck is that supposed to be spoofing? Seems like Ruins of Surmia/Dragon's lair. Doesn't seem like Guild Wars at all.

I felt like an idiot reading it. I shouldn't have to with comics.

(Plus, there's a your/you're typo. That threw me off as an insult)

Sjeng

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Aug 2005

in my GH

Limburgse Jagers [LJ]

07 Aug 2006 at 07:40 - 5

typo's:

minute(s), not minuet(s)
I can escape easILY
you're not Sam
he COULDN'T have travelled
which is where
yoooou fiend
as far as your amulets of all seeing sight will see (?)
we're real
pumpkin juice
I think

Otherwise, it's ok. It was funnier during the earlier issues though. I fear this is turning into megatokyo... lots of blah, little plot. You don't even need a plot for satire. But then again, it's your decision if you make it a satire or just a story.

Martian

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Dec 2005

The Arse-end of no-where

Grey Mortals

Me/E

07 Aug 2006 at 10:20 - 6

Since when did grammar mean squat in internet cartoons? This is the lowest form of entertainment,I think we're all in agreement, but it is the highest of the low, if u get wot i mean.
U know, "in the land of the blind, the one eyed man is king"
Internet toons= Blind
GwGC= one-eyed king
A cookie to anyone who understood a word of that :P

Haroldinium

hey you... shutup

Join Date: Dec 2005

haroldinium raiders

Me/Mo

07 Aug 2006 at 13:49 - 7

thanks everyone, i really apreciate all this negative feedback after the hours and hours i put into this for you. face it, my comic isnt like the rest ok. its not a short but sweet healbot, its not satire all the way. im trying to do something different. and yes its loosly based on guildwars sometimes, if all gw fan comics stayed 100% close to the heart of gw, then they would all end up the same, just with different characters... witch end up looking the same.

Martian

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Dec 2005

The Arse-end of no-where

Grey Mortals

Me/E

07 Aug 2006 at 14:52 - 8

No cookie for you.....

Haroldinium

hey you... shutup

Join Date: Dec 2005

haroldinium raiders

Me/Mo

07 Aug 2006 at 14:54 - 9

lol sorry, been mifed by some other stuff. thanks for the commetns people. il be glad to use some of these quotes on something later on.

and thanks for your comment martin... martian

Illusion'sParadox

Pre-Searing Cadet

Join Date: Aug 2006

07 Aug 2006 at 15:01 - 10

Okay dokie here...
Lets me through...
Okay...Well where do i begin? Lets see..Spelling issues? Satire humor...
Okay valid arguments and points...Personally though i found it humorous as all hell just because of the main fact it's satire humor was pretty much so obvious it sorta ended up as becoming simplistic pure grand sarcasim. A dashing wit and a battle of brains always make me giggle madly...Ahhh
As for the spelling issues...It's a pretty well known fact Jake can't spell. So what? Show me a man who can spell perfectly and I'll show you a a man who hasn't looked at himself and found the self denied imperfections. Now simply put i'm a entirely third neutral party, who found this and it's obvious sarcastic satire humor of games, and the people who sometimes play them...Utterly hilarious
Sorry people...Your geeks...I'm a geek...get used to it
Have fun with it and enjoy it
I'm sorry but i don't think i stopped laughing once.
Made me giggle all the way through from issue one all the way here.
Onto the technical shite...So i don't bore myself
Art wise it was better then the last few issues, so he gets a good score on that from me for pure improvements. The size and coloring was vastly improved and more pleasing to the eye, so no complaints over here. Meh so what if he can't spell...I think the point of this comic is the humor and the art more then the words that most people don't even realize are spelled wrong in the first place.
The humor helped the story flow, and although it was much more prominent in this issue it also seemed to help the jumpy qaulity of alot of the other issues flow better, giving the entire series to date a much more obvious sense of direction and plot through the whole of it
Anything he can works on?
Yup...Spell check before you copy and paste into photoshop...The complaints for bad grammar should stop if that happens.
Varying of Camera shots and dramatic shots
Play with some of the lighting and color schemes.
Practice some layout design since the flow of the comic itself was sporadic and hard to determine
Anything else? Nope think thats it...
Gonna take a nap now...
Enjoy

Martian

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Dec 2005

The Arse-end of no-where

Grey Mortals

Me/E

07 Aug 2006 at 15:03 - 11

*gives virtual cookie*

Ya see folks, there's not a wild beast can't be tamed with a bit of confectionary based bribery

Also, i realise my point was unclear first time round, i enjoyed this episode as much as any of the others if not more so and i cant wait for the next one.

Also i have realised that unclear is an anagram of nuclear O.o

Haroldinium

hey you... shutup

Join Date: Dec 2005

haroldinium raiders

Me/Mo

07 Aug 2006 at 15:21 - 12

wow, you joined this forum cause you read my comics?... thanks thank you so much for that!

yeah its hard to play with the layout when you have to get so much in one issue, i was annoyed with how the early issues seemed sparadic, this sint trying to be a "healbot" the issues link together, like a sitcom maybe.

and yes, my ocmics are being sarcastic at obvious houmer, tony and sam are basicaly going "your a lvl 20 huh? wow your reeeealy cool" at everything.

satire is only a small part of the comics, its trown in ocasonaly to pep it up. and im glad they were good enough to keep you reading through all 10 of them

i hope to hear from you in the future

Martian

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Dec 2005

The Arse-end of no-where

Grey Mortals

Me/E

18 Aug 2006 at 16:05 - 13

Right well i hate to bring dead threads back up from the grave, but i need to know how you actually managed to post a poll. I have searched several times and apparently there used to just be a button, and it got changed, but you still made this thread so, how?

Haroldinium

hey you... shutup

Join Date: Dec 2005

haroldinium raiders

Me/Mo

18 Aug 2006 at 23:26 - 14

dead huh? my comics dead! you just click the add poll option at the bottom when makeing a new thread. then you click make thread, then you come to second screen, were you make the poll to add

Martian

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Dec 2005

The Arse-end of no-where

Grey Mortals

Me/E

19 Aug 2006 at 14:40 - 15

No the comics are'nt dead, just this thread, i think you need to get a massage or a weekend break or something, it's like you're on crack, thx for the advice though