An Old Tyrian Folklore Children's Song

Kai Nui

Kai Nui

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Aug 2005

Behind you with a knife

Celebrity Gangsters [FamE]

Me/

An Old Tyrian Folklore Children's Song.

Five little blood stones sitting in rows,
One fell off and broke its nose.
Four little blood stones sitting in piles,
Volcanoe shot one a hundred miles.
Three little blood stones sitting in fear,
Another blew off and landed right here.
Two little blood stones alone in the rubble,
They waved to each other as one landed in Maguuma Jungle.
One little blood stone took one last look to the south,
Now he's at the entrance to Abbadon's Mouth!

Arkantos

Arkantos

The Greatest

Join Date: Feb 2006

W/

Lol, really nice.

Aleks

Academy Page

Join Date: Jul 2006

Under your bed!

Me/E

Fix the amount of syllables in:

"Three little blood stones sitting in fear,
Another blew off and landed right here."

I would just change it to

"Three little blood stones sitting in fear,
Another blew off and landed here."

ubrikkean

ubrikkean

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: May 2005

E/

/--/- /--/
-/--/ -/--/

/--/ -/--/
-/--/ -/ -/

I think either can work, there's no necessary syllable structure for this...

Anyway, fun stuff

Aleks

Academy Page

Join Date: Jul 2006

Under your bed!

Me/E

Eh?

I guess. Maybe it's just me then It usually is .. haha.