Gervasium's art

Hello! I've been playing guild wars for over mounths now and, as I like to make drawings, i started to picture my characters.
I'm 14 years old and this is my dervish, Volain of Cristals:

There is also a female dervish, my father made her:

Please say what you think of them! We really need to know if we should make more!

nice pictures go colour them to make em really stand out!

try some more active poses on new ones, more like the second one, make your character's body move, not just the hand...

Your on the right track though

yeah, I have a problem with poses! My father is more original and his pictures seem more alive. I'll see what I can do! Thx for seeing them!!

They are very nice! I would recommend that you don't put so much blocky shading on the first one and on the second get rid of all that stuff around the character!