Deva/Templar

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Feb 2007

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Deva/Templar:
-The Follower of Peace and Just, Descendant of the Valkyries
Using Holy and Blunt Damage to Protect and to Smite Foes.


Skill and Boss Color:
-Color Pinkish Beige, Beige, Peach or White.

Followed God/s:
-Balthazar, Kormir and Dwayna


Health and Energy:
-Maximum Health 480.
-Maximum Energy 40
-4 Pipes of Energy.


Armour:
-The look is a cross between the Gandharva or Garuda and Yaksa in Tantra Online, and Inphyy and Aspharr in N9 or even my avatar.
-Starter Armor: AL 20
-Low: AL 30-40
-Medium AL 50-60
-Maximum AL 70

Satya's
Bonus: Recieved Damage -10 + AL -10.

Vidya's
Bonus: Energy +10

Saint's
Bonus: AL +5(While affected by 1 or more Enchantments.)
AL +5(While affected by 2 or more Enchantments.)
AL +5(While affected by 3 or more Enchantments.)

Evoker's/Summoner's
Bonus: AL +5(If 1 or more Ally is affected by Valkyrie Form.)
AL +5(If 2 or more Ally is affected by Valkyrie Form.)
AL +5(If 3 or more Ally is affected by Valkyrie Form.)


Weapons:
The Weapons are all Blunt Damage to deal more damage to Skeletal Monsters.

Gauntlet/Tonfa(Acts like Daggers)
Blunt Damage 9-18(Req. 9)
Dual Handed

Mace/Baton(Acts like a Sword or Axe)
Blunt Damage 16-22(req. 9)
One Handed

Giant Shield/Wheel(Could hit 3 nearby people)
Blunt Damage 12-38(req.9)
AL 30+
Two Handed
Ranged Type(You throw the Shield/Wheel, Works like a boomerang.)
Half Range


Premise:
-Unlike normal Animaters(Minion Masters), Tanks, Nukers or Healers a Deva can Deal Holy Damage to enemies which is armor ignoring so this profession may be deadly and its kinda like a mixture of Summoner, Smiter and a Paladin.


Attribute:

Faith(Primary)
-For each rank of Faith you gain additional 5+ Maximum Health and for every 3 ranks of Faith you gain additional 5+ Maximum Energy, and chance when you are resurrected you will be in a Valkyrie Form.
-Faith Specializes in the Survivability of you and your party.

Blunt Mastery
-Increases the Damage dealt in Blunt Weapons(Except Hammer) and chance of dealing Critical Hit, Blocking and
-For Gaunlets/Tonfas - Double Striking.
-For Giant Shields/Wheels - Increasing AL.

Mantra Weaving
-Deals in Heavy Holy AoE Damage and Summoning Valkyries(Angels).

Chakra Healing
-Specializing in Healing, Energy Restortion and Protecting you and your Allies.


Valkyrie(Angel) Form(Kinda like Dervish's Avatar/Form.)
-In a Valkyrie Form you can
-Deal Holy Damage,
-Deal Armor Penetration(With no Chance, Passive),
-And deal 15% more damage.
-Gain more Adrenaline
-have 100+ more Maximum Health.
-And lesser Energy cost in casting spells.


Special Concept:
-This Profession which makes it Stand out on any other Profession cause of it's Chance of Blocking, Increasing AL, Ranged AoE Damage and Summoning Valkyries(Angels).


Skill Listing:

Faith(Primary)

Chakra Bonding[Elite]
-Spell, 10e|2c|25r : For 9-18 seconds, Whenever party member takes damage they take half of the damage and the other half is redirected to and the damage is reduced by 12-25

"Imbue with Fayth!"[Elite](the Fayth here talks about the FFX Fayth.)
-Shout, 20e|3/4c|60r : For 16 seconds, You gain 90-260+ Maximum Health, 10-50+ Maximum Energy and 3+ pipes(Maximum Bonus 9) Energy and Health Regeneration(for each enchantment on you), This is renewed when an ally dies, When this shout successfuly ends this skill is disabled for 90 seconds.(this shout ends when you run out of enchanments).

Blunt Mastery

Champion's Strike[Elite]
-Blunt Attack, 7a|3/4c|2r : If it hits, This attack Deals 12-34+ damage, If target foes health is below 50% you deal additional 8-16+ damage and you gain 5 energy.

Templar's Throw[Elite]
-Shield Attack, 9a|1c|8r : If it hits, This attack Deals 10-30+(Maximum Bonus 130) for each Enchantment on you.

Mantra Weaving

Valkyrie's Touch[Elite]
-Spell, 15e|1/4c|20r : Target touched foe and nearby foes take 150 Holy Damage and you steal target and nearby enemie's enchanments.

Summon Valkyrie[Elite]
-Resurrect target ally at full health and energy and in Valkyrie Form for 10-30 seconds.

Mantra of The Valkyrie
-You Deal Holy Damage and 10%+ Armor Penetration.


Chakra Healing

Chakra Restortion[Elite]
-Stance, 10e|2c|15r : For 5-9 seconds, You are healed for 20-60 health and 1-5 energy until this stance ends.

Valkyrie's Chakra
-Stance, 10e|20r : For 30-76 seconds, Whenever you take or deal Elemental and Physical that damage is converted to Holy Damage and whenever you take Holy damage the damage is reduced to 26-45% and you gain 2 Energy.

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Wish you would like What a have done^^!

holababe

holababe

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Dec 2006

Goon Squad [LLJK]

Mo/

How do you get your shield back after you throw it?

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Feb 2007

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Sorry, Forgot proofreading so I didn't fix that so now its fixed^^.

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

Desert Nomad

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And how did you get that 100% Morale Boost?

holababe

holababe

Jungle Guide

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Goon Squad [LLJK]

Mo/

1337 hax

Also known as photoshop. Although I stuffed up the % sign

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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Thank You^^!

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

Desert Nomad

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Why won't anyone READ!?

holababe

holababe

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Dec 2006

Goon Squad [LLJK]

Mo/

The idea isn't awfully original - the Paladin has existed since the dawn of roleplaying. That's not necessarily a bad thing though.

'Imbue With Fayth' looks like it could potentially spawn a new wave of IWAY-style builds.

I don't really like the idea of a boomerang shield, since throwing and catching a shield, whilst in combat and wearing medium-heavy armor isn't awfully realistic.

Also, what do you mean by maximum health of 500? Maximum possible health including runes?

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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oop sry. miscalculation.^^ hihi!
It's really 480 hp ill fix that.(It Talks about when you reach lv.20, no runes.)
What inspired me about the Shield throwing is the Force Shielder(Guy with Giant Shield.) in Cabal online(when they use thier Astral Weapons,You could see it somewhere in the middle of the video.) Click This. Have fun^^!

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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"Valkyrie Form" already implemented.

BahamutKaiser

BahamutKaiser

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Heightened state of mind.

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Because this is one of those silly newb ideas full of broken abilities and next to no new content. Being broken isn't original, it is just broken.

Valkyrie Forms and AoE damage for a melee combatant, that's dervish, Shield and melee weapon combat, Warrior, utterly broken abilities, that's covered under newbmanships, which is so well explored in the forums that it doesn't need a place in the game.

Once you seperate your console solo games from online competative games, and try to come up with something that isn't a twin brother to Paragon, and mimic of Dervish with broken abilities, than maybe people will read your idea.

Why do people not respond to your idea?, because it's so flagrant that they don't even think you will realize when they tell you it is ridiculous.

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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Dervish's can't res thier allies in a Form, Warriors can't use Ranged Giant Shields, Dervish's have only AoE Dammage to foes Beside them while this one to to target foes and adjacent, But it seems that I may have mimiced some of the other profs, you may be right but still don't to use so much harsh words.
Thanks you just motivated me to make a new Concept Class and next time It'll be Original^^!

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[M]agna_[C]arta

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Now I need Some Inspiration!= D

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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Check my Guardian/Magus^^.

actionjack

actionjack

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Oct 2005

Kali

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sometime... you just don't get what you wish for.....


Its alright.. I like how it is organize, and your avatar is cool, as I like Magna Carta's character design too...

In term of the class... just don't see much that is poping out at me...

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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Aww, thanks anyway.

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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Thier Have been 170 views why stil 4 people have only posted

General of the blade

General of the blade

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Jan 2007

Here

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I like the throwing shield idea, reminds me of cap.America. Brilliant set up i might add = P
but like actionjack said nothing really has the right flavor.

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[M]agna_[C]arta

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It's not supposed to be Capt. America and those other ugly fashioned people like Superman whats with the underwear and the plainess!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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why won't you check my Guardian/Magus^^?

General of the blade

General of the blade

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Jan 2007

Here

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because i like cap. America better!!!
it just sounds cool a person with a shied tossing it at enemies.
you should make a class called peace keepers or something... and have that.

BahamutKaiser

BahamutKaiser

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Join Date: May 2005

Heightened state of mind.

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The broken features got you the rating you deserve, and a mix match of exsisting traits is still a mix match, not something new. Offering features from every class with broken stats isn't original, it is a mass repeat, over diversified, and broken.

You got the examination this idea deserves, your acceptance isn't neccessary, this idea is broken. Blocking, Protecting and damage spliting are already in the game, not a new feature, Summoning is not new, and a broken version of it isn't either, Ranged AoE damage isn't new, and increasing your armor level isn't new either, the only new thing about this is a broken combination of melee combat, magic damage, ranged AoE, support protection, and Summoning all in one class basicly allowing every function in the game without even including a secondary, wrapped in a melee class which has more base energy than a caster, and spells which do armor ignoring damage.

Why don't you just make an instagib character. This is really that fragrantly repeatative and even moreso broken and overly functional. It really is a Newb idea which tries to offer far to many abilities and power into one class. Combining part of every class in the game doesn't make new features, and slight variations of the same ability are not new either, that is like saying swords and axes are different. Even the difference between bows and spears is comparably weak, alone it isn't a legitimate difference, and the so called differences in this character are nothing more, minor variations of a dozen things already in the game.

P.S. Stop double and triple posting just to bump your crappy idea, it is against forum guidelines, you can use edit add more information.

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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I am done with this CC I am already working on my Guardian
so say all you want, your just wasting your time.

fleshvirus

fleshvirus

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Jul 2006

Swe

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I'm not familiar to the word ''Deva¨ were you refering to ''Daeva'' as gods?

ShadowsRequiem

ShadowsRequiem

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Oct 2005

Inde is Smoking [Hawt] *ToA*

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hmmm a weapon that adds +30 al O_O

way over powered
plus theres a thing called a Mo/W with smite skills and a hammer >_> yes i've seen very very dumb ppl run this

[M]agna_[C]arta

[M]agna_[C]arta

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Quote:
Originally Posted by fleshvirus
I'm not familiar to the word ''Deva¨ were you refering to ''Daeva'' as gods?
Hmmm, I guess^^.

[M]agna_[C]arta

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Quote:
Originally Posted by ShadowsRequiem
hmmm a weapon that adds +30 al O_O

way over powered
plus theres a thing called a Mo/W with smite skills and a hammer >_> yes i've seen very very dumb ppl run this
and thats why i stop editing this CC.

[M]agna_[C]arta

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How do you close a Thread^^?