Guardian/Magus

Guardian/Magus:
-A Devout to protects he's/she's Belief and to its People, Astrologers of Fate.
Using the Constellations to Guide and Protect them.

Story:
-Story of the Founder
Seeing her brother's death made her wan't to avenge her older brother.
She started to train in hand-to-hand combat and then she Devoted her life to Balthazar to bring Justice to her brother. Until one Faithful day she have seen her brother's killer she fought him with every blood and sweat she had, but he was too strong she died.Then Balthazar asked Dwayna to resurrect her for she have deed which no normal Human would do so then Dwayna resurrected her, She thanked Dwayna and Balthazar. Then she realized that she is still too weak and asked for guidance to Balthazar in her revenge. While in her training she looked up into to the stars and saw figures which looked like Beings. Which made her curious then she started studying it until she found alot of secrets about the constellations and then Kormir gave her the ability to call fort those Heavenly Beings she thanked Kormir. Then she continued for the search for her Brother's killer, she went on top of mountains to scary dark dungeons. While in her search she fought alot of enemies. Until she found the killer then she killed him. She made a Temple and a Guild called "The Gaurdians/Magus" then poeple who hunger for justice joined her to bring justice to (name of the continent she is from).

Characters of Story:

Protagonist:(Gaurdian/Magus)
Just think she has weilding Gauntlets^^. Think of naming her "Resha Oathkeeper".


Antagonist:(Assassin)
His the Killer O_O" !


Minor Character:(Warrior)
His the Brother^^.



Skill and Boss Color:
-Beige, Peach or White.


Followed God/s:
-Balthazar and Kormir.


Health and Energy:
-Maximum Health 480.
-Maximum Energy 40.
-4 Pipes of Energy.


Armour:
-A Med-Heavy Armour.
-Starter Armor: AL 20
-Low: AL 30-40
-Medium: AL 50-60
-Maximum: AL 70

Summoner's/Evoker's
-Bonus: AL +15(If you have a summoned being).

Protector's
-Bonus: AL +30(Requires 13 Devotion).

Devote's
-Bonus: +10 Energy.


Weapons:

Gauntlets
Blunt Damage 9-22(req. 9)
Attack Speed 0.99 second
Dual Handed

Premise:
-Unlike other professions(Except Bunny Thumper) a Gaurdian/Magus can summon a Heavenly Being while fight in a Limited Time but it can support your allies alot^^!


Attribute:

Devotion(Primary)
-For each 2 ranks of Devotion the damage you take is reduced by -1 when you reach the rank 12 for Devotion you will gain the ability to attack while casting spells.
-Devotion specializes in increasing your defences and damage reduction.

Gauntlet Mastery
-Increases the damage using gauntlets, chance of inflicting critical hits and double striking.

Chakra Mastery
-Specializes in self healing, energy stealing and increasing allies damage to enemies.

Summoning
-Gives you the ability to summon Heavenly Beings and strengthening them.


Heavenly Beings(can only Summon 1 at a time).
An Heavenly Being have
-Maximum Health 750
-Maximum Energy 150
-4 Pipes of Health
-4 Pipes of Energy
-100 AL


Special Concept:
-This Profession can Summon, and Tank its Allies in battle.
-The name Magus came from the Summoning stuff
-and the Guardian came from the Tanking.


Skill Listing:

Devotion(Primary)

"I follow my fate!"[Elite]
-Shout, 5e|1/4c|20r : For 10-23 seconds, Whenever your a target of an attack that attack would be interupted. But you cannot attack.

Flesh of Steel
-Stance, 5e|1/4c|20r : For 5-15 seconds, you gain 1-12 damage reduction and become immune to Critical hits.

Auto-Counter
-Stance, 10e|1/4c|30r : For 8-18 second, You have 75% chance to block attacks. Whenever you block a melee attack the attacker takes disame amount of damage(Maximum 10-50 Damage).

Gauntlet Mastery

Chakra Punch[Elite](so its Spammable)
-Fist Attack, 5a|3/4c : If it hits, You deal +2-17 damage, lose all energy and equivalent to how much Energy you have lost is how much Andrenaline you gain.

Continues Assault(Works like when an Assassin in Ro attacks).
-Stance, 5e|1/4c|45r : The next time you attack will deal continues damage to target foe(Maximum 5-15 Strikes).

Energy Punch
-Fist attack, 5a|3/4c : If it hits, You Deal +10-24 damage and +10-24 additional Lightning Damage.

Power Punch
-Fist Attack, 8a|3/4c : If it hits, you deal +1-32 more damage.

Chakra Mastery

Chakra Cleansing[Elite]
-Skill, 5e|1/4c|1r : Heal self from all conditions and is healed for +5-20 health removed this way.

Chakra Absorption[Elite]
-Spell, 7e|2c|60r : Steal nearby enemies' energy and gain half of it(Maximum 15-30 Energy).

Chakra Restoration
-Enchantment Skill, 10e|1/4c|5r : Self Heal for +10-65 and +1-5 Health Regeneration.

Chakra Bomb
-Spell, 10e|1c|8r : Deal 50-125 Lightning Damage to touched and adjacent foes.

Chakra Barrier
-Spell, 15e|2c|25r : For the next Damage you take is converted to your energy(Maximum 20-50 Energy).

Chakra Storm
-Spell, 15e|3c|30r : Sacrifice all energy and the amount of energy you lost will be converted to lightning damage and striking foes in within your location for 5-10 seconds.

Summoning
-You can only summon 1 Heavenly Being at a time.(Other party members can summon same/different Heavenly Beings too even if thiers already a summon in the battle).

Summon Virgo[Elite](Support/Healer)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Virgo The Virgin.

Summon Ophiuchus[Elite](Tank/Degen)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Ophiuchus The Serpent.

Summon Sagittarius[Elite](Spiker)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Sagittarius The Archer.

Summon Capricorn[Elite](Spiker)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Capricorn The Goat.

Summon Aries[Elite](Support/Protection)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summone Aries The Ram.

Summon Pisces[Elite](Nuker/Spiker)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Pisces The Fish.

Summon Taurus[Elite](Tank/Interupt)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Taurus The Bull.

Summon Gemini[Elite](Interupt/Tank)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Gemini The Twins.

Summon Cancer[Elite](Support/Warder)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Cancer The Crab.

Summon Leo[Elite](Tank/Degen)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Leo The Lion.

Summon Libra[Elite](Nuker/Condition Remover)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Libra The Balance.

Summon Scorpio[Elite](Tank/Degen)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Scorpio The Scorpion.

Summon Aquarius[Elite](Nuker/Spiker)
-Summon, 25e|-1p|3c|60r : Summon Aquirius The Water-Bearer.

"Dismiss!"
-Shout, 1/4c|45r : Destroy target summoned being and and gain * energy.
Types: Energy:
Undead - 5 energy
F. Golem - 15 energy
Nature - 10 energy
Binding - 10 energy
Heavenly - 15 energy
G. Heavenly - 15 energy

None-Attribute:

"When Two Worlds Collide!"
Shout, 5e|2c|45r : Whenever two Heavenly Being are both together(Range is "Nearby".), both of them die.


Heavenly Being List:

Virgo The Virgin
Figure: Valkyrie and an Angel Mixture(check Ultima the Esper in FFXII).
Gender: Female
Damage: Holy
Skills: Cure
Cura
Curaga
Heavenly Skill:
Great Gospel

Ophiuchus The Serpent
Figure: Serpent with Wings(made of Stones not Feather) and Horns.(Check Zodiark The Esper in FFXII).
Gender: Male
Damage: Dark
Skills: Demi
Doom
Death
Heavenly Skill:
Final Eclipse

Saggitarius The Archer
Figure: A Great Centaurion Archer.
Gender: Male
Damage: Piercing
Skills: Double Strafe
Take Aim
Arrow Shower
Heavenly Skill:
Garuda Shot

Capricorn The Goat
Figure: Mixture of Goat and Chinese Dragon(Check Adrammelech).
Gender: Male
Damage: Lightning
Skills: Bolt
Tunder
Flash Arc
Heavenly Skill:
Judgement Bolt

Aries The Ram
Figure: Woman With Ram Horns and Wearing Sheep Wool.
Gender: Female
Damage: Wind
Skills: Aero
Wind Shield
Aeroga
Heavenly Skill:
White Wind

Pisces The Fish
Figure: A Mermaid with a Pet Fish(inside a Floating bubble).
Gender: Female(Mermaid) and Male(Pet)
Damage: Cold
Skills: Blizzard Palm
Blizzard
Blizzaga
Heavenly Skills:
Frostwave

Taurus the Bull
Figure: A Chimera Mixture of Bull and Muscled Man.
Gender: Male
Damage Earth
Skills: Varja
Roxxor
Petrify
Heavenly Skill:
Gaia's Wrath

Gemini The Twins
Figure: Two Sibling Nymph Muses.
Gender: Both are Female
Damage: Chaos (has a high chance to double attack).
Skills: Teleport
Deeth
Wisenen
Heavenly Skill
Sword Dance

Cancer The Crab
Figure: A Wise-Talking Hermit Crab with a Shell made of Silver.
Gender: Male
Damage: Light
Skills: Ribbon
Shell
Protect
Heavenly Skill:
Mighty Guard

Leo The Lion
Figure: (Check Ifrit).
Gender: Male
Damage: Fire
Skill: Fire Puch
Flare
Pain Flare
Heavenly Skill:
Hellfire

Libra The Balance
Figure: Woman in Robe holding a Sword and a Scale.
Gender: Female
Damage: None
Skills: Nova
Esuna
Regen
Heavenly Skill:
Ultima

Scorpio The Scorpion
Figure: (Check Zeromus)
Gender: Male
Damage: Shadow
Skills: Bio
Osmose
Drain
Heavenly Skill:
Blight

Aquirius The Water-Bearer
Figure: Woman holding an Urn full of Water.
Gender: Female
Damage: Water
Skills: Watera
Waterga
Brinny Cannonade
Heavenly Skill:
Tsunami


Functions:
-First, Before a Fight, Summon a Heavenly Being to support you and your party.
-Second, cast some Stances and Enchantments to keep you on the run.
-Third, Slaughter all foes!
-And then heal yourself if you need to.
-It's Easy^^!
-You may also use a staff to be a Full-Summoner and bring some Monk Healing or Protection Spells to heal your Allies and Summons^^.


Strengths:
-A Guardian/Magus can Summon Heavenly Beings.
-A Guardian/Magus have damage reduction.
-A Guardian/Magus can Self Heal.
-A Guardian/Magus can Deal alot of damage.
-And ability to steal energy.

Weaknesses:
-Heavy Spike Damage.
-Domination Magics.(taking damages from it.)
-Degenerations.(Degens don't affect the damage reduction.)

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Who here thinks I should change my char into a Spellcaster?(I just need 1 post saying that, but I think that this will affect the name too.)
I already have some Spellcaster skills in my mind^^.
And I'll make sure it's Balance.

Why is every skill an elite?

I agree, why are they all elites? lol
Also, 480 health max!?!?!?!? nooo......
And wouldn't this summon thingy fall under A ritualist?

Whats its weakness?

I wrote most of the Elites except for "Flesh of Steel".
I'll add some more soon.

yeah, you may be right = (

I'll Fix it.

This profession is over powered for sure. One example is the devotion attribute. With lvl 16 devotion that would give u a constant -32 dmg reduction plus the non elite stance flesh of steel in the same attribute line that gives -34 dmg for a total of -66 dmg that can be kept on forever. Anyone see that overpowered? Second, a sommoned monster with the ablility to knock down every attack? Or one that does 500 lightning damage? Come on that is way overpowered. This idea is pretty good though so if you could heavily nerf the skills and attributes maybe -1 dmg every two attributes of devotion then this wouldn't be that bad. And also, why don't you have any non-elite skills?

He probably doesnt have any non elites yet because, simple... HE HASNT THOUGHT OF ANY YET!

Oh btw, I can see 8 Guardian/Magus' with all same/different summons :P

sry. I didn't calculate about the devotions stuff ill fix it.

Then that may be a very strong PvP Build hihi^^.

This class concept takes reduced damage, is able to cast spells while attacking, has a high chance to do critical hits, can double strike, self-heals, steals energy, increases damage, and is a summoner. Dude, there is a reason there are multiple classes that specialize in different techniques. Do the following if you want to make a worthy offering:

1) First and foremost, create a novel function.
2) Explain how it works.
3) Attach a cool identity and background.

This concept doesn't really offer anything new, it just jumbles a million skills into one. The identity could possibly be cool if it were expanded beyond a two sentence explanation. There's also no real explanation of how it functions.

The Critical hit is not that high its disame as a normal sin(without the critical mastery), dervish and war weapon masteries, Thanks ill add that ^^!

Please send some more comments to improve this Profession

Basically all your summons are elite ritualist spirits that can mvoe along with the party, and cost less energy recharge twice as fast and all last too long.

Now personally there are a few spirits I want elite versions off(shelter for instance), but a diferent class is not really how I would want that.

Though many people want a unarmed fighter, slapping 2 gauntlets on a class and saying they hit people with those is not the way to do that it belive.
Use equpable fightingstyles that have a 3/4/5/6(perhaps increasing with the level of the item) hit pattern each hit a diferent animation and difent damage figures, or effects. Such as:

1. Blunt: 10-25
2. 50% interupt
3. Blunt: 5-15 & 25% cripple
4. Block attack
5. Blunt: 15-30 (2 seconds recharge before next combo)

With kicks and good looking animations, that seems the only way to not make unarmed combat look underpowered apposed to swords and other weapons. just hitting a foe would not really look powerfull would it.
What is a ASPD? Did I miss something? is it an ald elite?

They have far too overpowered energy denial form foes, chacra fo absorption on its own would make a unplug build able to dominate PvP you would not need any other skill to keep the enemy monks energy at <5.

one can over do pre-nerfing I often say you do not really need to, but here it looks like you deliberatly overpowered that is normal for FC forums but Anet does not nerf all skills by 60% before placing them ingame and thereby you can post them with their normal power, makes the class easyer to reed too.

Though I can't directly make it up out of a 2 class comby it does not really bring anything unique, summoning holy/celestial being is similar to sumoning spirits as a ritualist, not exactly the same but you still use the creatures to support your party, just like RT spirits.
Also you can't have a non primary abilety that has almost no other skills than elites, each class has a set amount of elites I think(or a set to start and +2 every expantion, I may be wrong)
somany elite summons would not leave much to work with.

The -32 damage from the elite together with the healing capabileties of the class, is as others have stated not feasable.
It might be posible as a conditional effect(elemental damage only or such) for the primary or a skill in the primary of a class that has poor healing abileties, but for this class is just not done.

I thought I have fixed the prob. about devotion I lowered it down to -8 damage reduction. please read again^^. ASPD means "Attack SPeeD".

the idea of a zodiac summoner has been posted by myself in other forums.

no offense but i like my idea alot more

and your aspd is most commonly known as dps (damage per second).

oh, OK please link your thread here^^! I wanna see.

if only it wasnt so overpowered i agree this would be a top-ten class

Oh, not sure where it originally came from but guru uses the term re-swing instead of attack speed, just naming so I guess theres nothing wrong with it I just got confused.
Perhaps because in other games diferent weapons and profesions can have diferent attack times as well as recharge times, in GW wether you swing a sword fire a bow or wiggle your wand the time it takes is the same the reswing is diferent for them though.
Still rank 16 of what, none fo the skills you have say increases attack speed by ...
I'm glad none of them do because when used with weapons other than gauntlets that would be unblancing, especially when coupled with other attackspeed increase skills(most of which are deliberatly stances so they don't stack).

With a max of 8 damage reduction it is better yes, it adds abilety to tank without Highly increasing armor, making the class morelikely to be targeted and still able to survive.
But able to attack while casting at 12, its something interesting and will likely be very usefull.
But if it is only applied at 1 point why is it not a skill, all abilety increases are usually scaling, if you make it a enchantment with long duration it is likely to achieve the same effect but fit more into GW.

Still the summons need a diferent role than a suporting pet, they should do things the class can not do without them that is why you summon them is it not?
With skills that can achieve effects similar to the summons, what point do the summons have, other than over power the effects already achieved when nerfed I guess they would do exactly the same thing(thus support you by doing your job without it costing you energy)
I like the ciritcal critter, as the class does not have skill to increase ally crit chance without it, giving it less of a supportive role.
Still it needs to be severely nerfed down in order to be functional(every hit OMG I want a disrupting acurecy and keen arrow with that to PWN the heck out of any spell caster and I guess everyone else in PvP(and unlike sin crit increases it is not on primary))
Not even mentioning that it deals a lot of crits itself right?

Ooohhh, Thanks Alot^^! I didn't think of that saddly my imagination can't think of something without an inspiration .

Please, send some things to inspire me or more tips how to improve my CC^^.
Please and Thank You^^!

I would say for tips on making CC (in a more genertic term):

-read the "Things missing from existing professions " thead. That is helpful
-read about the current proffession in GW, and understand the principle how how each work.
-read other's CC, and use a critical eyes to see what they have is good, not good, or missing, and how you might make it better.
-read other classes in differnt game, and think what is it that make them fun, and how they could be apply onto GW's setting.
-Always consider balance. For every strength, there need a counter weakness. While number is hard to balance, and with out play-test, hard to find the right one, but still try to keep it in limit (or use X and Y and T for subsitue)
-Think how it might play in your head. Also how it could combo with other classes.
-Play less Tentra.

lol. No, I don't Play Tantra I Just Admire thier Armor^^!
And Thanks^^!

The guy has no sense of balanced gameplay, just go back to console games, these superhero concepts don't work in a competative game.

And double post all you want, I am certain you can't understand a working concept so this is where your ignored.

Thanks People It supports me alot with what you taught me(Except BahamutKaiser = P, But if it weren't for you I couldn't have done this thread).
and now I am asking what you want me to do, to improve my CC^^.
but you could still send some tips and ActionJack I am still not yet done with the research you told me to do^^.

Who here thinks I should change my CC to a Spellcaster or still stick to it whatever it is ^^?
I'll be happy in any desicion you guys want.
I already have things in mind for Spellcaster so its no prob. ^^!

unstripable Blessings ftw. I like the concept of unremovable buffs

ummm i've looked at some of your threads and these characters are terribly unbalanced....... I mean this game doesnt exist like anything you suggest, it just doesnt work.... take a look at the Mannai thread and read the skills and stuff, he as very indepth ideas which are actually plausible,(not a super human character that we all know would never make it in this game)

its strange i get temp banned for bumping 2 hours early, yet you post like 2-5 messages in a row... these forum guidelines are a joke.

i would like to know if i could* cause im makeing chars of my own* how did you make those imagaes.... i need to make some like that for my ideas but currently do not have a good program to help.... so if you could inform me that would be great

I didn't make those I searched for those^^.

hahah thought so.... damn back to photoshop..... grrr