The use of swords on Paragons isn't bad, but I wouldn't run this build for reasons already mentioned(1.No Speed boost 2.No Snare).
I see an attempt at creating an adrenaline based swordsman, but a mesmer with soothing images and imagined burden would pump your breaks with ease. Your current build has holes that are rather large, and that being the case, makes it inferior to a well built warrior. However,in PvE, this build is fine because you really don't need a speed boost, but you could be more effective with a snare.
Also, the use of "FtW!" is fine, but not gauranteed to give a deep wound. Gash and Sever Artery are classics and still can be used in combination with either Sun and Moon Slash or the Galrath Slash. Dragon Slash, imo, is a touch like adrenal overkill. AR and "GFtE!" will fuel the adrenal engine just fine. This would be a build I might think would be more useful, but if you have fun with your build, just ignore what I put here.
[skill=card]"You're All Alone!"[/skill][skill=card]Sever Artery[/skill][skill=card]Gash[/skill][skill=card]Galrath Slash[/skill][skill=card]Aggressive Refrain[/skill][skill=card]"Go for The Eyes!"[/skill][skill=card]Leader's comfort[/skill][skill=card]"Fall Back!"[/skill]
Even though "FB!" recharges at 25s,it is far better than no speed boost at all. However, I'm not trying to say not to use the OP's build, just trying to build on what is already in use. Alternatives are always possible.
