Tyria's Next Top Model Cycle 2

Flawed Perfectien

Flawed Perfectien

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Feb 2006

Spokane, WA

Frogs In The Ghetto Say Moo [DaWg]

Me/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paloma Song
I don't know any of you or any of your guilds, so no personal bias here - I just wanted to chime in since I just read the thread front to back, and saw far more accusations of drama and flaming than actual drama and flaming. In fact, the vast majority of contestants and commentators are far more civil than they ought to be, given some of the wretched things said by the judges. Yes yes, it's a cruel world, the modeling community, but it's important for the judges to remember that this is not, in fact, the modeling community. These are your peers, not your employees. These are your friends, not your personal verbal abuse toys. Your anonymity is not a free pass to be senselessly mean. 'Screening' entries and 'preparing' people for criticism isn't either.

I have judged and won screenshot contests for another game many times, and I would be utterly embarrassed to, first, say such nasty things about the entries, and second, to actually post such nasty things for the artist to see, let alone for public view. You've no right to complain if drama or hurt feelings arise over this 'game' of yours, since the entire contest seems intentionally organized to be dramatic, hurtful, and casually cruel. The integrity of the judging - based strictly on the judges' decisions and comments, since we have no information about their actual credentials - is questionable, and that has the unintended side-effect of undermining the whole competition - which is really very sad, since that will tend to negate the beautiful entries of talented artists. (And I'm not just talking about the political ousting of Beyoncee, which is astonishingly transparent, however deserved).

I very much hope that the next such competition enlists the aid of reviewers who can post relevant, constructive criticism as to the art, rather than seeing who can get in the snarkiest, meanest one-liner, as though they were TV icons with a hardcore image to maintain. If not, then we should continue expecting the same reaction from both model and lurker. In the meantime, perhaps you moderators could hold these nameless judges to the same standard of forum conduct with which you're threatening the rest of us. Not only do they contribute to it, they provoke it in the first place, yet ironically seem unwilling to accept public criticism themselves. Thank you for summing up exactly what I was feeling/thinking. I'd edit down your post to only quote one line, but there's no possible way I could do it justice.

Thank you for coming in and articulating what so many of us are thinking/feeling.

~Lucy

Seamus Finn

Seamus Finn

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2006

Xxx The Final Thrust Xxx[RIP]

P/A

I always thought it would have been more fun in the thread if the judges weren't anonymous. They could also develop personalities and even have a designated "mean judge"(this would also mirror the show more and would allow the drama filled critiques but be balanced with more level-headed responses as well). I actually enjoy the "edrama" on the thread, but I can understand how the contestants feel lost when it seems all three judges are mimicing the same archtype. I suppose ingame pms could be bothersome, but as a pvper, I know first hand there's always the ignored list... Just a thought for a future cycles that might have the best of both worlds.

bart

bart

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Aug 2005

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paloma Song
I don't know any of you or any of your guilds, so no personal bias here - I just wanted to chime in since I just read the thread front to back, and saw far more accusations of drama and flaming than actual drama and flaming. In fact, the vast majority of contestants and commentators are far more civil than they ought to be, given some of the wretched things said by the judges. Yes yes, it's a cruel world, the modeling community, but it's important for the judges to remember that this is not, in fact, the modeling community. These are your peers, not your employees. These are your friends, not your personal verbal abuse toys. Your anonymity is not a free pass to be senselessly mean. 'Screening' entries and 'preparing' people for criticism isn't either.

I have judged and won screenshot contests for another game many times, and I would be utterly embarrassed to, first, say such nasty things about the entries, and second, to actually post such nasty things for the artist to see, let alone for public view. You've no right to complain if drama or hurt feelings arise over this 'game' of yours, since the entire contest seems intentionally organized to be dramatic, hurtful, and casually cruel. The integrity of the judging - based strictly on the judges' decisions and comments, since we have no information about their actual credentials - is questionable, and that has the unintended side-effect of undermining the whole competition - which is really very sad, since that will tend to negate the beautiful entries of talented artists. (And I'm not just talking about the political ousting of Beyoncee, which is astonishingly transparent, however deserved).

I very much hope that the next such competition enlists the aid of reviewers who can post relevant, constructive criticism as to the art, rather than seeing who can get in the snarkiest, meanest one-liner, as though they were TV icons with a hardcore image to maintain. If not, then we should continue expecting the same reaction from both model and lurker. In the meantime, perhaps you moderators could hold these nameless judges to the same standard of forum conduct with which you're threatening the rest of us. Not only do they contribute to it, they provoke it in the first place, yet ironically seem unwilling to accept public criticism themselves. You sir have earned my salute! I think this is the best post i've ever read in GWG. Anyway, speaking from experience, one of the golden rules for reviewing a person's work is to not judge the character.

Jaden Stone

Jaden Stone

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Oct 2006

Rebel Rising [rawr]

A/E

I really don't see where all this judge hate is comming from?

Quote:
I just read the thread front to back, and saw far more accusations of drama and flaming than actual drama and flaming. In fact, the vast majority of contestants and commentators are far more civil than they ought to be, given some of the wretched things said by the judges.
Here are the only 4 things I found even slightly rude said by the judges toward a contestant throughout all evaluations and posts in this thread. All the rest of the evaluations had some form of constructive critism and informed the model what was wrong with the shot as to help her improve. Most of these comments are tame even by cycle one standards.

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Judge 1: Your face is hidden, you're holding a focus item which is kinda glitchy, your male model is unnoticable. The picture is a sloppy mess.
Quote: Mojave - (This is where I draw the line on rude comments) Quote: Mila - butt looks too big Quote: Judge 1: These shots are dreadful. It looks boring, very unintersting, I wouldn't buy anything with these being used for ads. Most and almost all the drama was being caused by outbursts from the save caleb Kane fan club and his close person friends, along with very few miscreants from [GR] (who are a stand up guild for the majority). I would need a whole page to quote the personal flames and random accusations by them in this thread alone.

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(And I'm not just talking about the political ousting of Beyoncee, which is astonishingly transparent, however deserved). QFT

I dont know if you understand the rules of this competition and what the models have been forwarned about. They were told they would be under intense and harsh critisism. They were informed by both me and nilene that Personality did play a large factor in elimination, as it does in the show.

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I very much hope that the next such competition enlists the aid of reviewers who can post relevant, constructive criticism as to the art This is not an art competition, it's a modeling competetion. The nicest shot may not always win. There are many factors to which to win this competition and if you truely read this thread you'd understand that. This is what makes this competition great. Oh, and about the judges, Should we hire some top designers? fashion editors? I know, models!.... Right now you have 3 avid fans of ANTM who are impartial and really care about this competition. I don't think you are going to get any better than that.

I know the one thing that really got people going was the judges seeming to not care about mila during her hospital stay, and I have to say I was expecting them to be a bit more empathetic. But, I don't think this warrants the judge bashing at all. /done rant . KANE DEFENDERS UNITE... SMITE THIS THREAD WITH ALL YOUR POWER!

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Jaden Stone 4 Eva QFT.

edit, Fixed the K's to unleash the wrath

LadyNilene

LadyNilene

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: May 2006

Silver Millenium

E/Me

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paloma Song
I don't know any of you or any of your guilds, so no personal bias here - I just wanted to chime in since I just read the thread front to back, and saw far more accusations of drama and flaming than actual drama and flaming. In fact, the vast majority of contestants and commentators are far more civil than they ought to be, given some of the wretched things said by the judges. Yes yes, it's a cruel world, the modeling community, but it's important for the judges to remember that this is not, in fact, the modeling community. These are your peers, not your employees. These are your friends, not your personal verbal abuse toys. Your anonymity is not a free pass to be senselessly mean. 'Screening' entries and 'preparing' people for criticism isn't either.
Yes, this isn't a real modeling community, however, that is what I am trying to portray and simulate for our participants. I am not forcing any of our contenders to partake in this competition, if they do not like it, they can and are welcome to leave at any time they please.

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I have judged and won screenshot contests for another game many times, and I would be utterly embarrassed to, first, say such nasty things about the entries, and second, to actually post such nasty things for the artist to see, let alone for public view. You've no right to complain if drama or hurt feelings arise over this 'game' of yours, since the entire contest seems intentionally organized to be dramatic, hurtful, and casually cruel. The integrity of the judging - based strictly on the judges' decisions and comments, since we have no information about their actual credentials - is questionable, and that has the unintended side-effect of undermining the whole competition - which is really very sad, since that will tend to negate the beautiful entries of talented artists. (And I'm not just talking about the political ousting of Beyoncee, which is astonishingly transparent, however deserved) This is a simulation of a popular modeling competition show, not an art exhibition. Modeling is an art, but unlike traditional art, there is a right and wrong to modeling. Yes, I understand who's to say that we are the top all-knowing people of modeling, but we do hold this competition dear and we do know what we're talking about.

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I very much hope that the next such competition enlists the aid of reviewers who can post relevant, constructive criticism as to the art, rather than seeing who can get in the snarkiest, meanest one-liner, as though they were TV icons with a hardcore image to maintain. If not, then we should continue expecting the same reaction from both model and lurker. In the meantime, perhaps you moderators could hold these nameless judges to the same standard of forum conduct with which you're threatening the rest of us. Not only do they contribute to it, they provoke it in the first place, yet ironically seem unwilling to accept public criticism themselves I am tired of these quotes, cause I've heard them all last round. You, the thread viewers, have no idea what goes on behind the scenes, you have no idea what we say and do with our contestants. We are not heartless, we do talk to our contestants in individual emails, we do keep them up to date, and we do encourage them throughout the competition. We value and cherish our contestants, cause without them, we have no competition. We edit the thread for suspense and drama, cause first and foremost, this is a "reality tv show" remake to thread. Until you are in my shoes, spending the time and effort, and giving the heart into this competition as much as me and my fellow judges, all I ask is for the benefit of the doubt. As I said, whether our opinion is with the majority of the audience, or with minority of the audience, we will never please everyone.

And no, we are in no way assosciated with Grenth's Rejects, I don't even know how that came up, but no, we're not.

mojave mango juice

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Aug 2006

Quote:
Originally Posted by LadyNilene
And no, we are in no way assosciated with Grenth's Rejects, I don't even know how that came up, but no, we're not. Thank you
I don't know how that silly rumour came about.

Unlucky Slayer

Unlucky Slayer

RAGE INCARNATE

Join Date: Apr 2006

Sitting at The Guild Hall 2, being happy.

Nerd Clan [NK]

R/

I love it when everyone picks the time that I'm not actually around to do all their pointless flaming... We were done with it days ago. Why the hell does it have to come back now. Cut it out!

Stalker Haras

Stalker Haras

I Didn't Do It

Join Date: Jul 2005

Mo/

I believe my post was not flame, so therefore I'm reposting it.

Stalkers Tip of the Day to Jaded Stone:

Stop Posting here, you're not helping any.

Caleb Kane

Academy Page

Join Date: Feb 2006

Caleb Kane Fanclub [CK]

A/

nilene did u get my PM?

Evenstar

Evenstar

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Aug 2006

Mystic Falls

Guildless....

E/Me

Hhmm maybe some people here will say that i dont know what im talking about but i personally think that all of you guys shouldnt take this competition so seriosly and remember that after all its just a game and that its just a competition in a game(!). It doesnt effect anyone's life and future (i hope very much that im not wrong here) so there is no need to be sooo carried away with it and absolutely no need to offend and hurt anyone.

Morag D

Morag D

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Mar 2007

UK/Austria

[bone]

P/

I like to watch the contest from behind the line and I'm always very much looking forward to the way the contestants deal with their assignments. But reading all this I have only one thing left to say:

LOL???

this is supposed to be fun, isn't it? or did I miss something? everyone is so stubborn on expressing his/her point of view and defending his/her position, it's getting ridiculous

Evenstar

Evenstar

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Aug 2006

Mystic Falls

Guildless....

E/Me

exactly what i said.... i considered entering this competition when cicle two was announced and now im happy that i didnt...because instead of focusing on who should win most of the people here are focused on proving that they have a stronger point....and thats sad....

Noanoa

Noanoa

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Aug 2005

Finland

I Need Scissors [Aivo]

Rt/

Please swallow your pride and frustration, and just shut up already. There are still several rounds in this contest and I'd like to enjoy them as I did the first ones.

Ember010

Ember010

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2006

D/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Noanoa
Please swallow your pride and frustration, and just shut up already. There are still several rounds in this contest and I'd like to enjoy them as I did the first ones. Likewise over here. All of you who feel the need to express your opinions right now, seem to have saved it all for now. To be totally honest, i don't really give a dam about your opinions, and your right, its not life changing and it doesnt concern you, so unless you have something that is gonna contribute to the fun/enjoyment of this competition, we dont need to hear every recycled observation from the sidelines thankyou. I have reserved posting until now but I'm just fed up.

Edit: And im convinced everyone else is also fed up.

Calluette Hanuette

Calluette Hanuette

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Nov 2006

Me/

There should be some seperate thread for all the comments about this... That way those who want to follow the cycle can follow it without having to steamshovel through all the junk. ._.

And what happened to the rule about:
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Please keep all replies tasteful. Swearing, flaming, crude comments, pointless comments will not be tolerated! Most of the comments are pointless, some are crude/flaming... >>;
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On a side-note: Lady Nilene, if you don't want them all to comment about what may happen off-scene, why not tell them about it a bit after the round? That way there are no comments about it afterwards and you wouldn't have to continually shout at the posters about "not knowing what is happening behind the scenes"? Or is what happened during the round somewhat secret, or possibly embarrassing to some of the contestants? If so, mabye you could ask for their permission to post the comments said in the individual e-mails?

Just an idea... >>; Although this post is probably going to get ignored anyway so whatever~ ~.~

Sihaya Syme

Sihaya Syme

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Jan 2007

Belgium, Europe

Grenth's Rejects [GR]

N/Me

I like that idea a lot, Caluette

Baibai

Baibai

Academy Page

Join Date: Sep 2005

Australia

Squee Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee [yay]

Just as well the screenshots are posted as thumbnails otherwise I'd sail by them skim reading! Sorry to be yet another lurker crawling out of the woodwork but I guess this is how the internet works (there's safety in numbers, and no matter what the most vocal will not always represent the actual demographic). The bane of fame (or infamy?) is that everyone seems to have an opinion. :P

I also think its funny that most critisims of the judges comments suffer from the same problem - they're are just a general dissatisfied statement with no suggestion for improvement. I think Calluette's idea is pretty good though:

Quote:
Originally Posted by Calluette Hanuette
On a side-note: Lady Nilene, if you don't want them all to comment about what may happen off-scene, why not tell them about it a bit after the round? As Nilene has repeatedly said there's much more behind the scenes 'footage' we miss out on - however this content is what made up the majority of an ANTM show. Elimination was, although important, a minimal proportion of what a viewer may see. We dont even get to see the panel discussion before elimination! (Only a couple sentences from each judge and a paragraph from Nilene.) If you intend a 'bare-bones' presentation for fans/lurkers of the competition proceedings thats fine but understand that it may get frustrating that scoring decisions simply aren't as transparent (especially when although a conestant may receive a poor score the comments from judges seem to repeat themselves giving the impression the result is due to an error pointed out 3 times. o_o)

It'd be fun to see a re-cap before the elimination posting or more substantial discussion or suggestions to contestants work (or even ensure that judges comment focuses on different aspects of the picture and only refer to another judge in agreeance/disagreeance), because as cheesey as this comparison is - the shot content may be great but the cropping doesn't manage to reflect it. xD;
As far as learning curve has gone if someone was following outside the competition Jaden's comments have been the most helpful and constructive.

Anyway, sorry for the longwinded-ness but I intend this really to be my only post here (to keep from clutter) so I thought I'd make it count. Back to lurking and good luck to all competition participants alike.
(P.S - hope I dont offend or anything, I just enjoy watching the competition progress as there's some great artistic talent here)

Ember010

Ember010

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2006

D/

Oh dear god we broke it! We broke the forum! nooooooooooo......

(its the only explanation for all the repitition)...
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Fed up ya hear?! -.-

Noanoa

Noanoa

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Aug 2005

Finland

I Need Scissors [Aivo]

Rt/

One question about the assignment, is there really no question in it? :D So we don't have to explain the picture or add any captions or anything?

I must say I was a bit "eegh" at first about this assignment (because I'd had it as an illustration homework at school just a month ago >_>), but when I started to take pictures I got really excited, it's nice to take some "bad girl" shots for a change <3.

(edit. fixed some embarrassing typos >_>)

cellardweller

cellardweller

Likes naked dance offs

Join Date: Aug 2005

The Older Gamers [TOG]

What has happened to this competition is a real shame.

Seamus Finn

Seamus Finn

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2006

Xxx The Final Thrust Xxx[RIP]

P/A

Honestly, it's just a bit of drama in a faux modeling competition. With the right outlook it can be seen as added entertainment in a thread meant to entertain. And if that's not acceptable, ignoring edrama tends to put out teh flame fastest...

shadez

shadez

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: May 2007

OZ

Rt/

Believe what some are irritated by are the overwhelming numbers of *cough cough anyomous guildies that have reciently made accounts in support of one of the models ~all the (girls) work hard and are appreciated but when it comes down to it one has to be eliminated. (Keep in mind theres always next Cycle.) Cant wait to see what the Girlz come up with on this assignment! /pouts Caleb, I think you may have stolen the show had you been given a sin /wink~!!!

For you Mila, Shadez is belonging to [RIP], I have no specific support for anyone model only the talent and by this I mean all those involved.
As for Caleb, he has a great eye for beauty, but needs to focus on the Art/Design ~ bleh.... (goes for all actually) meaning cropping ~ foreground ~ background ~ placement........Focal Points and where your eye is lead tells alot bout the photo ~ or what the model is selling.


And btw if your gonna take a quote please DO NOT HACK up what I say to suit you because I did give props to ******(~ all the (girls) )*****

Ember010

Ember010

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2006

D/

Quote:
Originally Posted by shadez
*cough cough anyomous guildies that have reciently made accounts in support of one of the models. /pouts Caleb, I think you may have stolen the show had you been given a sin /wink~!!! That suggests to me that you are indeed the batch of anonymous guildies. I cant decide on ur point.

But yeh! This assignment is great fun! I've chosen my picture already, couldnt wait to get working on it, but i cant bring myself to crop it!! I love the whole thing too much =[.

LadyN, for this assignment do we basically JUST send the pic in? nothing else? (cropped and uncropped ofc)

Maca

Maca

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Dec 2005

Guardians Of The Stars

Me/Mo

Quote:
Originally Posted by Calluette Hanuette
There should be some seperate thread for all the comments about this... That way those who want to follow the cycle can follow it without having to steamshovel through all the junk. ._.
This is nice idea, so what about it, can anyone do this? since you won't be able to stop silly comments...

Unlucky Slayer

Unlucky Slayer

RAGE INCARNATE

Join Date: Apr 2006

Sitting at The Guild Hall 2, being happy.

Nerd Clan [NK]

R/

That is a nice idea. The problem I have with that is that the silly comments should not even be made. I even posted the section's rules on the first page. -_-

Maca

Maca

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Dec 2005

Guardians Of The Stars

Me/Mo

Ban them all hehe i am kidding, but its just a shame, i really enjoyed 1st round, not just the pics of girls in competition, but from people that were asking for advice and such..now all i can see here is 10 pages without any ss ,just pointless fights..

Foxeye

Foxeye

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Nov 2006

D/A

Quote:
Originally Posted by Maca
but its just a shame, i really enjoyed 1st round, not just the pics of girls in competition, but from people that were asking for advice and such.. I think part of the reason for that is that they requested that those sorts of posts be moved to a thread dedicated for that.

Thread for Feedback for those who haven't found it. It's a yummy thread!

Caleb Kane

Academy Page

Join Date: Feb 2006

Caleb Kane Fanclub [CK]

A/

Quote:
Originally Posted by shadez
/pouts Caleb, I think you may have stolen the show had you been given a sin /wink~!!! hahaha. i was just thinking with beyoncee's ego do you know how amazing her "pride" would be?

LadyNilene

LadyNilene

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: May 2006

Silver Millenium

E/Me

For those who asked about the questions for this assignment, no, they're arent any that are mandatory, but if anyone would like to send in an explanation of your submission, then by all means, please do!

CasterOfShame27

CasterOfShame27

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Mar 2007

Sorry if this is stated somewhere else, but is there going to be another Tyria's Next Top Model? I feel bad I wasn't here earlier, I would really like to submit my necromancer, she'd be great.

LadyNilene

LadyNilene

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: May 2006

Silver Millenium

E/Me

Yes, there will be another, definitely four more before the Guild Wars 2 move. We're hoping to do...

TNTM Boot Camp - Survival of the Fiercest
TNTM Cycle 3
TNTM Cycle 4
TNTM All Stars or a Cycle 5

and maybe even more!

TNTM Boot Camp is still in the talks... originally, we wanted it to be a three way contest between Cycle 1, 2 and potential 3 contestants, but since the release of Guild Wars Eye Of The North is earlier than expected, we might just go ahead and push Cycle 3 first. And hold Boot Camp off, who knows, it might even be a Male versus Female if we can get TMW on board with the idea of a battle of the sexes type deal.

But definitely, look forward for more TNTM!

CasterOfShame27

CasterOfShame27

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Mar 2007

Thanks! Oohh I'm excited now...XD

Killaya

Killaya

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Jul 2006

Ohio

Fabric of Existence [ohGr]

N/Mo

*Is very excited to see the entries from this week* The theme for this photoshoot was amazing, I can't wait for the results!

seandom

seandom

Academy Page

Join Date: Feb 2006

Bay Area, CA

Nine Inch Males [IX]

W/E

I vote Beyoncee for All-Stars ~~

Ember010

Ember010

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2006

D/

i cannot waaait to see todays results! This assignment was amazing, can't wait to see all the angelic little models being bad girls for once =P

shadez

shadez

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: May 2007

OZ

Rt/

Sean are u kidding? lol ~ more like Boot Camp survival of the fiercests~!!!

The Last Anthem

The Last Anthem

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Aug 2006

my guildhall.

Mo/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ember010
i cannot waaait to see todays results! This assignment was amazing, can't wait to see all the angelic little models being bad girls for once =P me either hehe

p.s. we better have a party tomorrow !! with the tmw people because im gona rage my gvg to go this time heh

LadyNilene

LadyNilene

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: May 2006

Silver Millenium

E/Me

Here are the evaluations for Week 06, in alphabetical order...


Arala Starsong - Gluttony

http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z...laStarsong.jpg


Judge 1: I love the pose, the whole picture itself looks great. However, this isn't gluttony for me. Gluttony is an over consumption, its an extreme, this just looks like a rich aristocrat having a sip of champagne, rather than someone who is just gone overboard with the bottle.

Judge 2: I like this picture, you look like you're sitting on your bum waiting for more food to be brought to you, and you're just drinking away.

Judge 3: I really liked where you were going with this picture, but I definitely think the shot you showed on the other thread was much more convincing. If you had used that shot, and had done it with the servers with the trays of food and drinks around you, you would've totally nailed gluttony for me, this shot falls just short of gluttony.


Bierflesjes Klauw - Sloth

http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z...esjesKlauw.jpg

Judge 1: Everything in this picture is right, the tree over there is dead and lifeless, the skies are gloomy, your armor is grey, everything is monotone and stale.

Judge 2: I love the pose used in this shot, its a boring pose, which is perfect for sloth. You look like you're just standing there like a lazy person just waiting for time to pass you by in slow motion, the colors really work.

Judge 3: This is a good shot, everything does sort of work in your favor, even your skin tone is pale. I would like to see more on your character's part to show sloth, the pose right now is safe and bored, which is good, but take it to the next level and do something more interesting that also shows bored. Like /sigh, you had a really nice shot with your eyes closed in the feedback thread, so I think you could've done better.


Lokii Dia - Pride

http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z...06LokiiDia.jpg

Judge 1: My biggest problem with this shot is that it's almost too close to wrath. I almost want to label this picture wrath rather than pride. It looks like people are begging you to spare their lives rather than begging you for help. I think the dark and eerie background really pushed your picture of pride into wrath. Something more low key would've been more suited for pride.

Judge 2: I agree with the background to some extent, it really is does pushes your interpretation of pride into wrath. The pose is right on target though, you look very vain, very egotistical.

Judge 3: Pose is strong. I can picture your character just saying "talk to the hand". Love the pose, very strong, very confident, very prideful.


Lunamaria Cruz - Lust

http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z...amariaCruz.jpg

Judge 1: Wow. Wow. Wow. This picture really takes my breath away, this is lust. This is an extreme, this isn't just sexy, it isn't sensual, it's lust. You totally nailed your sin perfectly, and you are the center of attention.

Judge 2: This shot is really steamy, it's almost just like the photoshoot they did in Canada's Next Top Model recently, where the male models we're holding the model's naked breast and everything. It's a very sexy shot.

Judge 3: This is lust, everything works. I love the background choice, its dark and full of candles, the guy's are all shirtless, its very raunchy. I think the female dervish should've had less clothes as well, cause right now, she does look like the odd man out.


Mila Fox - Wrath

http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z.../06MilaFox.jpg

Judge 1: On the plus side, this picture is dark, on the negative side, this picture is dark. This does feel like wrath, the land is destroyed, and you're a lone figure in the dark with your scythe, you look very demonic, very evil, very dark. You did lose the face, but you did capture wrath to it's fullest.

Judge 2: You did capture wrath, but it's not worth it if you lose the modeling appeal to it. If you we're going that far, I would say just put on the hood and go all out, least that way, you would totally nail wrath and look like some demonic grim reapper.

Judge 3: You captured exactly what I wanted from wrath, you look vengeful and evil, and full of wrath.


Miss Melly - Greed

We're all really shocked that you did not send in a submission, we all saw the beautiful picture of greed you took in the feedback thread, we loved how you used the piles of jewels in the background, but also, made your own by dropping some gold to the side as well. We're all sure that you're probably busy with your own circumstances, but unfortunately, not sending in an assignment will hurt your standing in the competition. Whatever the case may be, we will take in your past work into consideration during deliberations, and we wish the best for you and whatever you may be going through.


Szei Ren - Envy

http://i193.photobucket.com/albums/z.../06SzeiRen.jpg

Judge 1: This is a good shot for envy, it's very envious, I like the body language, you do look like someone who is extremely jealous at someone they're looking at.

Judge 2: This shot is just green, it doesn't show me envy. It's green, but certainly not with envy. This was your oppurtunity to really utilize and show us that you can take command of your aura and use it to its fullest. I think if you used a good beckon or point emote and have your aura trail your hand, it would've made more of a statement for me "I wish I had that".

Judge 3: I think this is a good shot for envy, you do look like a "mean girl" with her hands on her hip just thinking "ugh, I wished I had this and that".



Everyone really showed promise this week, and unfortunately someone didn't turn in an assignment at all...we have our scores and we will deliberate shortly, so good luck to everyone!

Geishe

Geishe

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: May 2006

The Agonized

Rt/Mo

OMGOD, EVERYONE THIS WEEK WAS AMAZING, AMAZING!

Even my psychic predictions are stunted!

EDIT: on second look, Lunamaria, congratulations on your MOTW!

Miss Melly!! Oh no! Good luck, my friend. Mila, woooooow, I wouldn't like to bump into you at night. I actually love all the shots posted, they're all quite amazing.

Noanoa

Noanoa

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Aug 2005

Finland

I Need Scissors [Aivo]

Rt/

I can assure you, /point and /beckon didn't nor wouldn't have worked at all. The former just looks curious and sincere, and the latter is just something totally not "envy". The only other emote I could have hoped to use was /pout, which I almost sent in but wasn't too happy with the light.

All the pictures sent in this week have been stunning :O really strong, every one of them. Waiting anxiously for the scores~!