Templar

Templar (T):
-Shield of Our People, Maintainer of Peace
"Our Lady of White is Our Mother (Dwayna)


Story/Background:
Coming Soon^^!...


Skill and Boss Color:
-Cream


Emblem:


Cream Flower


Followed God/ess/s:
-Dwayna and Balthazar


Racial Availability:
-Human and Norn


Health and Energy:
-Maximum Health 480.
-Maximum Energy 20.
-2 pipes of energy.


Armour:

Headgear
-Helmet

-Starter Armor: AL 30
-Low: Al 40-50
-Medium: AL 60-70
-Maximum: AL 80

Insignia:

Paladin's
-Bonus Armor +15 (While Health is Above 50%)

Martyr's
-Bonus Armor +25 (While Health is Below 50%)


Weapon:

Mace
Blunt Damage 12-20 (req.9 Mace Mastery)
Reswing 1.49 Seconds
One-Handed


Premise:
Coming Soon^^!...


Attributes:

Valor(Primary)
-For each rank of Valor, You gain 2.5% more Adrenaline from Damage you take.

Mace Mastery
-Specializes in Wielding Maces.

Guardianship
-Specializes in Supportive Auras.

Chilvary
-Specializes in Offensive Auras.


Skill Listing:


Valor(Primary)

Iron Maiden's Aura[Elite]
-Spell, 10e|60r : For 10 seconds, You are Immobilized and but you gain 20-80 AL and you can't be a Target of a Spell.

Avatar of The Iron Maiden[Elite]
-Form, 15e|45r : For 15-60 seconds, Transform into The Iron Maiden. For each Shield Spells on you, You gain 5-20 additional AL and for each Flag Spells on you, You gain 1-3 Health Regeneration (Maximum 80 AL, Maximum 10 Health Pipe). This skill is Disabled for 160 seconds.

Shield of the Iron Maiden
-Enchantment, 10e|2c|25r : For 5-15 seconds, Whenever you take Damage you are healed for 10-50 Health.

Mace Mastery

Iron Maiden's Strike[Elite]
-Mace Attack, 10a : Deal +10-31 Holy Damage on Target Foe, if Target Foe's Health reaches Below 50% that Foe suffers from Weakness for 2-10 seconds.

Paladin's Strike
-Mace Attack, 5a : Deal +1-7 Damage to Target Foe for each Aura on you (Maximum 28 Damage).

Zealous Strike
-Mace Attack, 5e|12r : Deal +10-25 Damage to Target Foe, If that Foes is under an Enchantment you gain 1-7 Energy.

Guardianship

Angelic Shield[Elite]
-Aura, 5a : For 5 seconds, Allies within the Aura gains Angelic Aura, While maintaining Angelic Aura 50% Damage they take is Redirected to you. 4 ranks or Below, 25% Chance of Success. 8 ranks or Below, 50% Chance of Success. 9 ranks or Above, 75% Chance of Success.

Flag of Miracles
-Aura, 6a : For 1-10 seconds, Allies within the Location gains Miracle Aura. While Maintaining Miracle Aura they gain 50% chance to Block Attacks and 25% chance of Hostile or Hex Spell to Fail.

Flag of Shields
-Aura, 8a : For 1-12 seconds, Other Allies within the Location gains Shielding Aura. While Not Moving, Affected Other Allies gains 75% Chance to Block Attacks.

Chilvary

Shield of Divine Light[Elite]
-Aura, 8a : For 5-15 seconds, Attacking Foes within the Aura suffers from Blind for 1-10 seconds.

Shield of Punishment
-Aura, 10a : For 5-10 seconds, Allies within the Aura gain Shield of Punishment, Next Time Affected Allies take Damage that Attack, Hex Spells and Hostile Spells are Negated.

Flag of Piety
-Aura, 12a : For 5-15 seconds, Allies within the Location gains Pious Aura. Whenever Affected Allies are Target of an Attack while no Attacking, The Attacker suffers from Weakness for 5-17 seconds.


Functions:

Aura System
-Auras are like Mobile Wards which affects Allies within its Area, A normal Aura's Range would be Adjacent.

Mace System
-The Mace can Weaken Enemy's Defense. Enemy's Physical Defense is Decreased by 1.5% whenever they get hit, If Target foe wasn't hit again for 3 seconds Targeted Foe gains back his/her Normal PD.

1.5% - 1st Hit
3.0% - 2nd Hit
4.5% - 3rd Hit
6.0% - 4th Hit
7.5% -5th Hit

The Max for PD Weakening is 33%.


Strengths:
Coming Soon^^!...

Weaknesses:
Coming Soon^^!...


Pictures:









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Inspired Iron Maiden Jeane^^!..
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iron_Maiden_Jeanne

More CCs of mine^^.
CC Case

This reminds of a Paladin a bit with the negation of damage and such. The class may need to have its skills toned done a bit though, it hits as hard as a warrior and heals just as well as a monk. In addition to the damage and heals, it has the better enegry than a monk with valor and has the same armor as a warrior. All in All, not a bad idea, but its more like an overpowered Paladin.

whats the 2nd and 3rd picture form?

The 2nd one is from an Upcoming Online Game "Shine Online"
The Other one are Concept Models for a Class in RF made by "Shirow Masamune" himself^^! XD

interesting, just where do you get all the pictures?

Uhm, Yahoo and Google Search Engine, Photobucket, Sometimes in DeviantArt(I have to ask permission here XD).

Valor is way overpowered. 16 adrenaline and 8 energy every time you get hit?

Respect is a cool skill, but needs to be powered down. You can easily farm any place with no aggro for 15 seconds. Make the duration less.

I agree with Devorian, I think this is just a developed bonder. You need to add something new to the game.

I nerfed it if you have suggestions for new skills, Systems or etc.
I would appreciate it^^, It was actually meant for Tanking and Bonding^^.
I have 2 CCs which Bonds you may comment my Weaver about the Bonding Abilities.^^

uuum no this sucks too someone lock it

Question why should this be locked?
I don't care if someones CCs suck if it sucks then Improve it you don't lock it away = p.

I like the mace mastery, will bring a cool new 1 handed weapon to the game, I also like the choices for the attributes. One thing though, making a Paladin, or the opposite, a Dark Knight, is fairly easily done by using the Monk or Necro as a secondary on Warrior, all the armor and looks are there already. Even the idea for the mace is already done in some part with hammers. I don't really think I would play this class unless it's attributes really brought something more to the game.

This CC's Role is a Tank and Bonder^^.
If Not much people would play this cause it just Tanks and Bonds but I don't care^^.

Made the Templar's Function Easier^^!...

You won't now need to Target Allies for Damage Redirection you just have to shout.

Well, I'll support anything linked to RF. God, that game was so much fun!
Just out of curiousity, did you play on Fire before the merge?

On Topic: Zeal and Rage seem rather overpowered. Imagine using them on a 600 monk? Scary stuff. Also, how many Favors can be active at once?

Sorry, I dont understand^^.

And their is Unlimited Favor you can take. But it would be hard having alot favors. Maintaining that and that makes you crazy!

Templar: A knight that serves the temple.

Templar = Paragon

Paragon is a knight that serves Balthazar and Dwayna.

and stop stealing pictures from flyff

Parafags similar to Templars? Jesus....

Maces were used for concussion and armour penetration, they should have a higher max-damage than the sword, 12-25 for instance.

I'd happily trade both the Dervish and Paragon for ONE enchantment and shout-based class.

I lowered the Damage of Mace cause their is already the cause of AL Decreasing Damage = p.
Would be Overpowered for it to Decrease AL and as High Damage = p.
I can't fined a Nice name so I named it Templar, and it sounds nicer than Knight^^.
So I named it Templar^^, And the Templars are more Pious than Paragons, But lesser Angelic Type.
And anyway the most Important part of CCs are Functions.
The Paragon is a Shouting Buffer, While the Templar is a Developed Tank and Bonder.

That is a lot of shouts, no surprise people think it is like a paragon.
You should change each and every one of those chants, I think the idea of a holier than thou guy that sings elaborate prayers to the gods more than one that shouts in your ear.

Offering armor penetration to anyone that is attacking the same foe as you is wonderful, especially in hard mode my critical disrupter has a extremely tough time against highly armored warrior mobs.

Though, for balance reasons I think mace should only reduce armor against physical damage.
And even so you might want to cap the armor reduction at around 30%, if 3-4 templars start smacking the same foe, it would plummet his armor making them far more of a spike team than a tank-bonder should be.

OMFGWTF?!
80 AL a shield and 4 pips? That is like paying people to abuse it!
Imagine a immortal earth ele, those would get an additional 40+16 armor +(2 damage reduction while enchanted) for free
Giving any class tank's armor and caster's energy regain is definitely unbalancing.

Instead give them only 2 pips, and 30 max energy
(I would prefer higher, but more than 30 can only be done by focuses and staffs)
And have them rack up energy quickly for taking damage.
The high max energy is there so the energy gain from valor is less likely to be wasted because of full energy.

I do not think their primary should fire every time they take damage, instead you should leave that to a couple of favors to function like essence bond.

Instead the primary should encourage the templar to suck in large amounts of damage, hence: the effect needs to be better the more damage is taken.

Valor(Primary)
For every 25 damage you take during 2 seconds you gain 5 health, for every 40 1 adrenaline and for every 55 1 energy.
Each level in valor reduces the damage you need to take by 1 point. - Many skills especially skills that convert damage taken into useful effects become more effective with higher valor.

With 16 valor a templar can reduce damage taken to half, and gain energy and adrenaline at an excellent rate.
But most importantly it will make sucking in large amounts of damage their energy management.

Okay now I added Aura, The only problem is I gotta fix my Sopphetio^^.
Anyone can help me fix it?
What do you think of renaming it "Crusader" or "Paladin"?

Now that won't work at all, this way valor reduces it's own effectiveness and the effectiveness of your skills.
Because it reduces the damage taken it also reduces the health lost and the amount of damage that can be converted into energy or adrenaline.

And does adrenaline have 50%? I though it was kind of unlimited.

Oops I'll change that^^.
Well if you got a Spike Damage lets say 90 then the 1/4 for it would be 22 but it seems too high right? So then reducing it lets say with 12 Valor so thats 30-90=60 then 60,30 then 15.
So you'll gain 15 Energy but that still seems a little many energy to me but anyways I think it's Balanced^^.

So... zeal and rage will give me more benefit if I have 0 points in Favor?

90 - 0% = 90/4 = 22 - 10 (the skill costs energy) = 12 + 0(from Favor)
90 - 40% = 54/4 = 13 -10 = 3 + 5
(+5 only if there is less than 60 point bonus to max health)
Doesn't seem like skill I would use.

Or are you calculating 10% of current health? so that Favor would become more powerful when you have low health(that actually is a pretty good idea)

Eeek, I'll fix that^^!
Thanks^^!

Improve and Changed Skill^^!..

Could you explain the connection between valor, a code for honorable knights; and an iron maiden, a torturing tool designed to execute the tortured at the same time?
Or did you just not know what an iron maiden is?
Yay for wiki(note the bottom part about the Iraqi Olympian team, which I find rather hard to believe)

A iron maiden mace strike I get, a mace relates well too an iron maiden for its immobilizing function, or just to torture as its great for breaking bones.

And even though it doesn't fit in valor, a iron maiden shield could work, but it would definitely not heal you
More like for X seconds physical and elemental damage you take is negated but whenever you would take damage you lose 30...18(11) health
Might fit in some torturer class, and probably needs nerfing.

The other 2 just make me go, WFT?¿?¿

And while I was gone you've been hard at work appearantly.

^^!

Well like what is written below "Inspired by Iron Maiden Jeane^^!.."

Iron Maiden Jeane is a Zealous Peace-Seeking Shaman who wants to Destroy Hao(the guy who will destroy the world or so).

It is actualy based on her not the Torture Device^^!

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iron_Maiden_Jeanne

But I think I might change some stuff^^.

Yea but you know why she is called iron maiden right?
Se tortures herself half to death at least 5 times per day, using an iron maiden.

Her name is not derived from her (not too sane) behavior and ideal, of world peace by killing people she thinks are (helping) evil.
But from her nail filled coffin, which she uses 99% of the time.

A form skill to transform into something from season 3 of SK, would be sorta weird in a game unconnected to SK; (non the less cool a class that can turn into your favorite anime character)
But naming it after something that people who don't know SK(including me until I read the wiki stub 'bout her) will interpret as something completely different.
I'd make form skills for changing into 'crow' (although... 30+% might know who that is)
Instead: a form changing into 'Jackal', for an artillery based class; that should have peeps wondering what I'm on about.

I swear I saw the second set of pictures from a game called Fiesta......

but I may be wrong

/signed for idea but skills r waayyy overpowered

and 4 pips at 80al is not good

^^, I actually made a new Templar.
I tried to improve the Templar with my new Idea and I think it goes^^.

Here's the link:
http://www.guildwarsguru.com/forum/s...php?t=10226699

And it was called Shine Online before^^.
This has been uneddited for a while already^^.
I really don't like people digging my old crappy CCs^^.