The Organisation Xiii

big121

Pre-Searing Cadet

Join Date: May 2007

the organisation XIII

E/D

hi all welcome to my poem i hope u pm and join my guild
cause if u dont u will be more meaner then my build.

if u join i will like u 4ever more
so pls come and join or i will be crying on the floor

thank u for reading XDXDXDXDXd

Storm Crow

Storm Crow

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Jul 2005

With Vanatiel by the Lion's Arch Lighthouse, waiting for the storm with which we are accoustomed

Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-

That entire thing was wrong. You've just mutilated the word 'poem', and the English language. First, unless you're under the age of five, you should know that the first letter in the first word of any sentence is capitalized. Second, NEVER use chat talk here. People will tear you apart because it reflects an unserious person who could care less about the message they are trying to convey. Third, spelling is appreciated. If one cannot read it, typically one will not.

Thank you.

Government Flu

Government Flu

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Apr 2007

Albuquerque, New Mexico

Paradoxa Zoloft Asylum [PXZ]

W/R

Everything else aside, you should at least spell properly. Poetry shouldn't be slapped together in two minutes.

Edit: Looks like Storm Crow beat me to the punch. :P

Hecate Lyonset

Pre-Searing Cadet

Join Date: Oct 2006

Sacred Heros

E/

You're poem disgusts me. But, I won't waste my time repeating everything to you that Storm Crow just said. Instead, I think I'll ask you what was going through your mind when you decided to call your organization "Organization XIII"?

If it has anything to deal with Kingdom Hearts II at all, I do believe that all thirteen members have just died a horrid death. I can only hope that my favorite swirly-haired Roxas had the most peaceful passing. -tear-

"Hi all welcome to my poem,
I hope you PM and join my guild,
'Cause if you don't,
You will be more meaner than my build.

If you join,
I will like you forever more,
So please come and join,
Or I will be crying on the floor."

Retype this on your own into that little space. Do not do so in the format I have used, or else I can report you for plagiarism. Retype it as I have, but in your own format. I will know if you copied and pasted it.

Good day.

EDIT: Unless you live in the United Kingdom, it's organiZation.