my poem

Link Kokori

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Apr 2007

South Carolina

HyPr:Hyrulean Protectors

E/W

27 May 2007 at 00:10 - 1

the sidewalk of my life stands here,
unbudging,yet full of turns and suprises
many people gaze upon nothing but the clouds
for their rays of light almost never penetrate

if the some that see a little black could see what i have,
their eyes would be torn out by their own hands
for what they glimpse will make them cry
yet, i hang on to the drindle of hope i have

and, for now, i dream of a new,better day

that's all for now, keep checking in to hear my woes of greatness,though my life could be better

~Link~

Storm Crow

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Jul 2005

With Vanatiel by the Lion's Arch Lighthouse, waiting for the storm with which we are accoustomed

Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-

27 May 2007 at 04:19 - 2

There is already a poetry thread that can be found here. We're trying to keep this forum as organized as possible.

Thanks.

Link Kokori

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Apr 2007

South Carolina

HyPr:Hyrulean Protectors

E/W

27 May 2007 at 15:35 - 3

i know that but, gosh i want people to telll me what they like about it as it evovles,cause there is more to the poem than this, it'll eventuallt be about a page long

The Yoink

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Nov 2005

Knights of the Ring

Mo/W

07 Jun 2007 at 22:56 - 4

verr dark, verrr scary