Northern wall history

lol here comes a story when me and another guy passed throught the norhtern wall in pre-searing.
He paid 50 gold thats all... no :P
He wanted me to leave when we opened the gate but i wanted to finish the quest in thereu get from the guy outside. I died and he yelled noob at me.
Me: Lol, you may call me noob but i've completed prophecies and factions in 2 weeks and thats true.
Him: Lol, i have completed prophecies, factions and nightfall in 2 weeks
Him: so lol mofo
Me: trying to be better? Or are you just lying?
Him: I'm better than you
Me: I bought this game 2,5 weeks ago
Him: Lol noob
Me: For sure, maybe you are better
Me: And it seem to be a pleasure for you to call people noob
Him: *Swearword* gs idíot
Me: well, why are you yelling at me at all?
Me: you have once been a noob too
Me:
Me: thanks for the 50 g by the way
Me: I needed them so much!
Him: -_-
Him: idiot
Me: no
Me: when shal you go to post-searing then?
Me: lvl 13, farming dyes?
Him: I'm going to be lvl 20 pre
Him: I have 5 lvl 20 in post
Me: Cool
Me: Well, this conversation is going to be posted at guildwars.se (Nordic, they have a special thread for those)
Him: i don't care
Him: Why?
Me: No names so don't worry
Him: Pm me when you do that, idiot

END

Well, this is kinda funny for me becouse i like to mess with people who think they're something.

Too many "lols". I don't think internet chatter belongs in a fan fiction section. And personally, this conversation you had doesn't seem like anything out of the ordinary. People talk like that all the time in Guild Wars. Perhaps...a little too much.

Lastly, that title is a misnomer. There is nothing of any historic importance regarding the Wall in your little thread, so what was the point?

Well, i did'nt find any more suitable topic, i'm new here. Don't you have a topic for happenings like this?

why would anyone care

Bah, I was expecting a good story too...

There are cirtain things that have no written value. This is one of those things. I think Flu beat me to the punch on this one, so I won't go on my five-paragraph rant about how many grammatical and spelling errors you've made here.

Ah, the fun of true role playing!

Well, to the OP: I'd suggest you "adapt" your dialog into a more lore based conversation. Perhaps, when writing about having met another boastful adventurer across the Northern Wall and the name calling that ensued, you could tell the story as one would tell it in a crowded tavern over ales.

Braggarts are nothing new to epic story telling and usually there's a moral embedded in those types of stories. In your attempt above it appears you tried to combat another's vain boastfulness with your own.

And try not to intermingle in-game and extra-game concepts in your "story"...that kind of ruins things.