and yeah grammers errors sounds like me
i thought i fixed it up ok but obviously not 
i will keep an eye on that in the future thanks judges
Screenshot: Guild Wars' Most Wanted
tidus yumemiru
ah well i spose my story wasn't qite everyones cup of tea, but it is christmas/winterday everyone loves a bit of cheese right? and like a lot people ascalons where i had my first wintersday so i liked the thought of the shot being there
and yeah grammers errors sounds like me i thought i fixed it up ok but obviously not i will keep an eye on that in the future
thanks judges
and yeah grammers errors sounds like me
i thought i fixed it up ok but obviously not i will keep an eye on that in the future thanks judges
Ember010
haha everyones shots were great. Glad I'm not the one judging.
Yeah my ending seemed a little moody, perhaps something I need to work on =]
~Gotta say, I really love your shot Render
Can't wait for the results!
Yeah my ending seemed a little moody, perhaps something I need to work on =]
~Gotta say, I really love your shot Render
Can't wait for the results!
Queen Kitiara
Wow guys so much fun and creativity...but where is all this writing I'm reading about???...looking at the judges comments on Toutatis, and Tidus' comments and then Heavenly's comment...am I missing something??? Did Scarlett and maybe Hotel have an explanation for their pic that I missed?
There wasn't a writing assignment but I gather some wrote about their pics?
I'm confused :S
edit/ thanks nymph...I was looking for it to be with the posted submissions if there was any but I guess Tender didn't think it necessary
There wasn't a writing assignment but I gather some wrote about their pics?
I'm confused :S
edit/ thanks nymph...I was looking for it to be with the posted submissions if there was any but I guess Tender didn't think it necessary
~nymph~
wow nice job everyone! cant wait for results
@ Kitiara
it was just write a little bit about what your picture is about
cant wait for results@ Kitiara
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Hotel
@ Kit:
My "story" was really just an explanation of my shot being centered around stress. I decided to chose this for my entry because well, I was stuck in New York a day later than I intended and I came back the day before the due date and was pretty much a nervous wreck.
I understand why the judges feel my shot is lacking that special "something". Seeing how talented the others are, its a sink or swim kind of deal here.
Seeing my shot compared to others,and honestly, yes it worries me a little, but there's always that "what if" lingering in the back of your head. Despite that - I'm famined for the results to come in.
With that said, best of luck.
My "story" was really just an explanation of my shot being centered around stress. I decided to chose this for my entry because well, I was stuck in New York a day later than I intended and I came back the day before the due date and was pretty much a nervous wreck.
I understand why the judges feel my shot is lacking that special "something". Seeing how talented the others are, its a sink or swim kind of deal here.
Seeing my shot compared to others,and honestly, yes it worries me a little, but there's always that "what if" lingering in the back of your head. Despite that - I'm famined for the results to come in.
With that said, best of luck.
The Grumple
golly! I am so impressed with those shots! The dervish, who's name I'll never be able to spell ---> soooo pretty!
I also looked at some shots - Toutatis's for example, and was a bit confused until i read the judges comment about how he was 'creating' (?) the winter? That is a really creative idea and made me view the picture in a very different light ^^
Anyway, I thought that if there was any time when I could get away with my pic being too dark - it'd be a picture, depicting the shortest, darkest day of the year
p.s. Useless rocks! .... (sounds so weird)
I also looked at some shots - Toutatis's for example, and was a bit confused until i read the judges comment about how he was 'creating' (?) the winter? That is a really creative idea and made me view the picture in a very different light ^^
Anyway, I thought that if there was any time when I could get away with my pic being too dark - it'd be a picture, depicting the shortest, darkest day of the year
p.s. Useless rocks! .... (sounds so weird)
tidus yumemiru
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golly! I am so impressed with those shots! The dervish, who's name I'll never be able to spell ---> soooo pretty!
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<3 yeah i picked a real doosey of a name there :S just call her Nobu for short makes it a bit easierand yeah Kit there was a picture explanation to go with pic maybe we should show the background stories to avoid confusion? >.>
CasterOfShame27
Yeah, I agree with Kitiara. Oo My shot's caption pretty much explained what was going on, but however the judges want to judge is how they do it.
/Edit: read Nymph's post. XD Thanks for clearing that.
And also, (trying not to go against judging) I think it was stated we were allowed to go anti-cheer as long as it showed holiday? Unless I misunderstood. But great shots everyone! Competition is fierce!
/Edit: read Nymph's post. XD Thanks for clearing that.
And also, (trying not to go against judging) I think it was stated we were allowed to go anti-cheer as long as it showed holiday? Unless I misunderstood. But great shots everyone! Competition is fierce!
Toutatis
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The Grumple
That would be nice Toutatis, perhaps on the feedback thread? I dunno... I'd love to see it because the judges all seemed very impressed with how you'd explained you picture.
Why is it that the male mesmers always have a way with words? It just seems so fitting that they would too....
warrior. bash things. feel good. ... hungry. >.<
Why is it that the male mesmers always have a way with words? It just seems so fitting that they would too....
warrior. bash things. feel good. ... hungry. >.<
Hotel
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Yeah, I agree with Kitiara. Oo My shot's caption pretty much explained what was going on, but however the judges want to judge is how they do it.
/Edit: read Nymph's post. XD Thanks for clearing that. And also, (trying not to go against judging) I think it was stated we were allowed to go anti-cheer as long as it showed holiday? Unless I misunderstood. But great shots everyone! Competition is fierce! |
The Last Anthem
I think Nymphalis did the best with the holiday christmasy cheer
*waits impatiently for results*
grumple, call me render won't sound so weird haha
*waits impatiently for results*
grumple, call me render won't sound so weird haha
Lord Sojar
ack, i was in colorado... guess I am eliminated. Poo.. 
GL to everyone.
GL to everyone.
Tender Wolf
Okay everyone, unclench those fists! Here are the results for assignment #1! Expect assignment #2 to be posted sometime tomorrow!
Scores:
Render Me Useless: 9+10+10=29 (up for immunity)
Nymphalis Antiopa: 10+7+7=24 (up for immunity)
Ao Kanashimi: 5+8+8=21
Deus Toutatis: 8+5+6=19
Gracie Grumple: 4+6+9=19
Nobushige Sanada: 7+9+3=19
Ember Coals: 6+4+6=15
Scarlet Renoux: 3+3+4=10
Corrupt Rosary: 2+2+2=6 (up for elimination)
Ambriel Deison: 1+1+1=3 (up for elimination)
Immunity:
Render Me Useless: We all thought you did very well with this assignment. Other than that distracting leg, you did a good job capturing yourself as the main focus with the tree as a good background prop. And though your shot isn't centered, that doesn't hurt it at all. We look forward to seeing more from you!
Nymphalis Antiopa: We loved your creative approach to this assignment. Putting the finishing touches on that snowman shows us Wintersday and makes us want to build our own snowman. Aside from the orange bush, great shot all around. Can't wait to see more!
After some discussing, we've come to a decision. This was a tough one. But there can only be one winner each week. And as promised, a bounty poster was made (as the "most wanted" thing, not to mention I'm into Cowboy Bebop now lol) to show the winner. So, without further adieu:
Immunity
Congratulations! You may choose one of the following:
An in-game prize of one Armor of Salvation, or 3 points added to your next assignment's score. Feel free to PM me here, in game, or leave a comment with your answer.
Elimination:
Corrupt Rosary: We know you were rushed for this assignment, but we've seen what you can do and felt that you could have done much better for this assignment. And you failed to meet the main focus of the assignment, which was to show holiday cheer. We do see potential, but will we get to actually see it like we did for your application shots?
Ambriel Deison: This is very hard for us, being up for elimination the first time around for two contests. But we just don't see much variety here. You used the same location for this assignment as you did in your application shots, and cropping and lighting were issues. And of course you didn't show us holiday cheer like the assignment called for. Will we see some better shots from you?
So after some hard consideration, one of you sadly has to go.
Eliminatee
Good job to everyone all around! Stay tuned, as the next assignment will most likely be posted sometime tomorrow!
Scores:
Render Me Useless: 9+10+10=29 (up for immunity)
Nymphalis Antiopa: 10+7+7=24 (up for immunity)
Ao Kanashimi: 5+8+8=21
Deus Toutatis: 8+5+6=19
Gracie Grumple: 4+6+9=19
Nobushige Sanada: 7+9+3=19
Ember Coals: 6+4+6=15
Scarlet Renoux: 3+3+4=10
Corrupt Rosary: 2+2+2=6 (up for elimination)
Ambriel Deison: 1+1+1=3 (up for elimination)
Immunity:
Render Me Useless: We all thought you did very well with this assignment. Other than that distracting leg, you did a good job capturing yourself as the main focus with the tree as a good background prop. And though your shot isn't centered, that doesn't hurt it at all. We look forward to seeing more from you!
Nymphalis Antiopa: We loved your creative approach to this assignment. Putting the finishing touches on that snowman shows us Wintersday and makes us want to build our own snowman. Aside from the orange bush, great shot all around. Can't wait to see more!
After some discussing, we've come to a decision. This was a tough one. But there can only be one winner each week. And as promised, a bounty poster was made (as the "most wanted" thing, not to mention I'm into Cowboy Bebop now lol) to show the winner. So, without further adieu:
Immunity
Congratulations! You may choose one of the following:
An in-game prize of one Armor of Salvation, or 3 points added to your next assignment's score. Feel free to PM me here, in game, or leave a comment with your answer.
Elimination:
Corrupt Rosary: We know you were rushed for this assignment, but we've seen what you can do and felt that you could have done much better for this assignment. And you failed to meet the main focus of the assignment, which was to show holiday cheer. We do see potential, but will we get to actually see it like we did for your application shots?
Ambriel Deison: This is very hard for us, being up for elimination the first time around for two contests. But we just don't see much variety here. You used the same location for this assignment as you did in your application shots, and cropping and lighting were issues. And of course you didn't show us holiday cheer like the assignment called for. Will we see some better shots from you?
So after some hard consideration, one of you sadly has to go.
Eliminatee
Good job to everyone all around! Stay tuned, as the next assignment will most likely be posted sometime tomorrow!
tidus yumemiru
whoa good job useless! such a nice pic
sorry Ambriel Deison >_< never fun being the first to go but keep posting love to see how u go
woo bring the next assignment!
sorry Ambriel Deison >_< never fun being the first to go but keep posting love to see how u go
woo bring the next assignment!
Toutatis
Congratulations to this assignment's winner! You made a really great holiday shot and this is a very well deserved victory!
*applauds and gives a garland of tinsel and baubles*
I had some high hopes for our eliminee knowing her background. I guess it just wasn't to be; but just getting into this contest was tough enough with the sheer quality of talent that applied. That alone is something to be proud of! Good luck with whatever pursuits you follow next and I hope you'll be playing along with us in the feedback thread
As a side note, I scored better in this assignment than I thought I would. I think I understand the criticism from the judges, so with a little extra pre-planning I'll be able to work an even better shot in the next assignment
*applauds and gives a garland of tinsel and baubles*
I had some high hopes for our eliminee knowing her background. I guess it just wasn't to be; but just getting into this contest was tough enough with the sheer quality of talent that applied. That alone is something to be proud of! Good luck with whatever pursuits you follow next and I hope you'll be playing along with us in the feedback thread
As a side note, I scored better in this assignment than I thought I would. I think I understand the criticism from the judges, so with a little extra pre-planning I'll be able to work an even better shot in the next assignment
Heavenly Messanger
I wonder, if the Shiverpeaks weren't my favorite place, if things would have gone differently. Then, there'd've been some variety. Oh well, guess i am just cursed, contest-wise (/giveup). Well, gl to everyone, i'll continue watching. I'll get over my bitterness sometime 
(/giveup). Well, gl to everyone, i'll continue watching. I'll get over my bitterness sometime
Hotel
Oh my goodness, I was excited to see this come but honestly now, my heart was racing. However, it looks like I've been granted a second chance to redeem myself. I'll be giving it everything I've got and this underdog will truely shine. Given the criteria the judges deemed me lacking, I have learned what was missing, and what I needed, and I will be using that to my advantage. I would just like to thank the judges for allowing me this chance and I can honestly say I won't let you down.
With that said, i'm sorry to see you go, ambriel, hope to see you more on the feedback forum!On another note: congratulations Render, your shot was beautiful.
With that said, i'm sorry to see you go, ambriel, hope to see you more on the feedback forum!On another note: congratulations Render, your shot was beautiful.
The Last Anthem
wow thanks everyone o.o really wasn't expecting that 
Tender, I'd like the 3 points added
heavenly no reason to be bitter, you tried!
Tender, I'd like the 3 points added
heavenly
no reason to be bitter, you tried!
tidus yumemiru
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I wonder, if the Shiverpeaks weren't my favorite place, if things would have gone differently. Then, there'd've been some variety. Oh well, guess i am just cursed, contest-wise
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SO! chin up and keep at it!
Queen Kitiara
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I wonder, if the Shiverpeaks weren't my favorite place, if things would have gone differently. Then, there'd've been some variety. Oh well, guess i am just cursed, contest-wise
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I don't think you are cursed, just a few tweaks and you would improve by leaps and bounds! Remember, you had to beat out people to even get to do the first assignment...I highly recommend u do the assignments and put ur shot in the feedback thread and let peeps make some suggestions
I think u know the basics but maybe try a checklist before deciding to submit a shot like...1) did the shot meet the basic demand of the assignment
2) did my cropping make me the focus of the shot
3) did my background set the mood and enhance my "story"
4) did my armor choice & color fit the color scheme and help tell my story
5) did my emote relay the right message and did I get the right angle of it
6) is the lighting working for my character's face or am I hard to see...
7) when I look at this pic regardless of answering yes to 1-6 do I think it's awesome?
This was my kind of basic checklist and I know it's late...but maybe it can help some of the others
I really hope u try to participate still Heavenly ^.^Grats Render!!! way to start off!
lawl...I just read Heavenly's sig...>.> I can't help giggling
CasterOfShame27
WOW. That was a huge surprise. I feel so blessed to be still in the competition! I just have to kick myself into gear!
Ambriel, it is very sad to see you go! You did great so there's nothing to feel bad about.
Jeeze my heart is pumping, this is a wake up call. And congratulations Render! You deserved it.
Ambriel, it is very sad to see you go! You did great so there's nothing to feel bad about.
Jeeze my heart is pumping, this is a wake up call. And congratulations Render! You deserved it.
The Grumple
Cripes! Looks like me, Deus and Nobu all tied for "Middle of the Pack" status
but this is only the beginning....
Ambriel, such a beauty, kinda reminded me of Eryn Shadowbayne. I totally see how its unfortunate your application picture was set in the snowy region, and then the first assignment (being xmas and wintersday) also required snow. :s
but this is only the beginning....
Ambriel, such a beauty, kinda reminded me of Eryn Shadowbayne. I totally see how its unfortunate your application picture was set in the snowy region, and then the first assignment (being xmas and wintersday) also required snow. :s
Tender Wolf
Assignment #2: Take Me Home
Welcome to week 2 of Guild Wars' Most Wanted! For our second week, after the holidays, what better place to go than home? That's what we want to see this time!
You are to go to your home continent (Tyria, Cantha, or Elona), the one your character came from, and find a place there that symbolizes home. It can be a house, with family, or even with pets. But it has to give that "homey" feeling. However, if you're from Tyria, you don't have to take a picture in Ascalon. As long as you stay within your continent, any region in it is fine.
In addition, please write a 100 word or more story explaining your home and the background of your location. The two should go together. For example, you shouldn't write a story about Istan if you're posing in Vabbi.
Juding will be a little different this week. First, the judges will read and rate your story. Then, they will see the picture and rate how well it went with the story. Those two scores will be added together for the final vote.
This assignment is due no later than Wednesday, Jan. 2. To send it, you can PM it to me here on Guru, or send it to one of the following emails (but just in case, it might be helpful to let me know you sent it there so I won't forget to check it).
[email protected]
[email protected]
Also, here are the rules again:
- No editing (other than cropping), modding, PhotoShop, etc.
- Please send a cropped and uncropped version of your picture
- No headgear
~nymph~
Yay results!
Thanks and congrats Render! Yours was an awesome shot
Ambriel, don't feel too bad, just keep on trying! Oh yeah, I stumbled across your favorite place. It's an amazing area and I can see why you love it.
New assignment! Time to start brainstorming...
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I think Nymphalis did the best with the holiday christmasy cheer
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Ambriel, don't feel too bad, just keep on trying! Oh yeah, I stumbled across your favorite place. It's an amazing area and I can see why you love it.
New assignment! Time to start brainstorming...
Toutatis
This assignment should be fun! I guessed that there would probably be an assignment like this early on, so I already have a good deal of the story part written and some of the screenshot composition planned out
Good luck everyone!
Good luck everyone!
Ember010
Ooh interesting... Need to scan the good ole' Tyrian Continent then..been a while.. :/
Writing may be a chance to get my score up a wee bit.. I need practise.. lol.
Writing may be a chance to get my score up a wee bit.. I need practise.. lol.
CasterOfShame27
Ooh fun assignment. This one will mean a lot. I have to dig deep.
Fenryl
What a great assignment! I have already some ideas ^^
Good Luck everyone
Good Luck everyone
CasterOfShame27
Okay, my inspiration has just struck.
Question: Can we make the story "sad" as well as the picture? As if home brings back memories of sad things?
Question: Can we make the story "sad" as well as the picture? As if home brings back memories of sad things?
Ember010
Oh dear, it looks like my story will be a tad longer than the 100 words, does that matter? Is there a maximum we're not allowed to exceed?
Tender Wolf
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Oh dear, it looks like my story will be a tad longer than the 100 words, does that matter? Is there a maximum we're not allowed to exceed?
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~nymph~
Tender, are we allowed to use guild halls that look like the continent we come from or no? Thanks in advance.
Tender Wolf
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Tender, are we allowed to use guild halls that look like the continent we come from or no? Thanks in advance.
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The Grumple
I really like this assignment!
Tender, you may be getting mine today, as I'm going away for new years and although I think I may get back in time, I'm so bad with time zones I am not going to risk it!
Besides... I've had a rare, but good, idea ^^
Tender, you may be getting mine today, as I'm going away for new years and although I think I may get back in time, I'm so bad with time zones I am not going to risk it!
Besides... I've had a rare, but good, idea ^^
Geishe
Wow that reminds me entirely of TNTM Cycle 1's First assignment! Well that was like 2 years ago lol.
Have fun, y'all
Have fun, y'all
Hotel
Oh dear.. I think I wrote a novel.
The judges are going to LOVE me. >.>
sorrrryyy, but the ideas just kept flowing with such fluidity I couldn't stop. D:
*sent to hotmail address
The judges are going to LOVE me. >.>
sorrrryyy, but the ideas just kept flowing with such fluidity I couldn't stop. D:
*sent to hotmail address
CasterOfShame27
So can the story be sad, along with the mood/picture? If the story is good enough and in-depth?
Tender Wolf
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So can the story be sad, as long with the mood/picture? If the story is good enough and in-depth?
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CasterOfShame27
PMed my submission to you Tender. This assingnment was really fun.