Came up with something, just wanted any opinions

After playing the game "Nightfall" to be accurate the story says there's a sixth god and basically the game is about this one god.
While drawing a map for a geography project I said to myself "Hey I'm going to make a map regarding all five gods excluding the sixth" so far I came up with 1 mainland, 3 islands each having a trait to a god. Each group is organized into Isles, Isle One is Islands of Melandru which is mostly grass lands and forests, Isle Two is Islands of Grenth, and Isle Three is Islands of Balthazar.

With the islands of Balthazar and the Islands of Grenth I thought it was appropriate to fuse their map together this fuse mark is a mountain Isle which includes "Remains Of Nightfall" and "Battle Field of the Gods".
Since death is always with battle so should Grenth be with Balthazar.

To make this interesting I added scribbles between the islands and the mainland this is representing "Tarnished Seas" this prevents any travel to it without unlocking "portals" to the island. Portals can be found on Islands within the mainland's reach. Each island is a representative to that god and in order to unlock travel you must first get the appropriate title.

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part1__The Creation
"Opens with a short film of a old story teller telling the story to the townsfolk around a campfire."

Long ago before man and beast, the mighty race of Dragons existed making a balance on this world of ours.
They were created by the Gods, the mighty gods!
The gods made a Island named __________ that was to be the very link to their realm, the dragons had easy access to these mysterious Islands seeking the god's help whenever needed. Then a Eruption seized the sky, mighty boulders flew upon the ground, the "Nightfall" the sixth god was making room for a new species ready to conquer the world! Their name lost to history, to the sands it's self! The five gods acted without missing a beat in a battle field that would be later called "The Battle Field of the Gods" or "Dezxr' nei godz" This sealed the "Nightfall" god but tarnished the land around. No one knows where this place was or is for that matter.

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After that mighty battle we appeared all over the world. Naked with no fur or scale amour to protect us we made what we lacked.
With this tool we soon expanded far across the known world.
When reaching the island without notice the gods quickly acted to prevent humans or any other creature to cross into the godly realm.
They created the "Tarnished Seas" without a portal creatures from the mortal world may not cross, but one man was tempted to brake the rules of the gods just like many before him. He invented the Godly portal, a portal that would lead to ant realm of any god.
He suffered greatly for this and was exiled in the Grenth's realm on a island called "the Isle of the Lost Souls".

*note* you may not gain passage until you have a title called "protector of the gods".

"Mountains in the middle shall show us the way!" -Blavoner "famous historian of the the known world (Guild Wars)"

*hint* In the middle of the Mainland Mountains will rise to the heavens themselves.

You...completely....lost....me....

You...completely....lost....me....

You...completely....lost....me....

twice

I don't get it.

me neither....

You...completely...lost...me...

(Actually not really, but I question the purpose)

Are you refering to the Battle Isles?

BTW, I asked Kormir, god of wisdom, and she said she did not get it either!

me...lost...completely...you...

(to be different)

Ummmmmmmmmmmm huh?

You...still...have me...lost...

(this thread is fun, how long do you think it'll go until it's locked?)

In Soviet Russia, threads lose you.

Not lore. epic noob fail, noob.

Hi. I like your ideas. Copyright?

So what was the point of this again?

I want to catch the person that keeps redirecting these to the Lore Forum and Power Shot him.

hahaha to think i started a trend of "You...completely....lost....me...." in this forum lol

i... really don't get it.

Dobby Dies In Harry Potter 7!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok... What? How is this lore?

Que,meperdiste comletamente.....
(You lost me Dude)......

You...completely....didn´t lose me cuz im de imba supah genius uf all in de worl