New Proffession Idea!

Name: Crusader ( or Twinblade)
Attributes: Dualingship,comforting,Sedation and critical skill.
its only rough but they would be a dual weapon kind of warrior in which could dual 2 swords or 2 axes etc if you understand what i meen i think it would be unique and could make a good farmer.it would have around 75AL armour for max and would dress like a Dervish but without a skirt rather like a paragon but with armour what covers head to toe and has a hood.Some skills could be:

Twinblade Slash: Attack Target Foe Twice With Each Weapon Your Weilding.

Extraordinary Healing: Heals You For 20-150hp and an extra 1-10 for each attibute point in Comforting.

Critical Jump: Teleport to targets foe location and cripple that foe for 1-10seconds.

Nation of Fire: For 2-16seconds whenever any allies in earshot strike an opponent the opponent is set alight for 1-5seconds.

if you understand what i meen then i would see this as a very enjoying proffession.

Is this just a combination of a para and assassin? Except with swords or axes. How about 2 scythes of two hammers?

So, basically, a sin with more damage, more armor

It's a good idea, but it would have to have limited damage swords/axes in order to not be overpowered. Maybe a separate weapon type?

I like the idea, but the one thing is, Dualingship doesn't flow well, that needs a new name.

yeah maybe a new weapon such as a Machete? or something on them lines it cud have 15-27dmg etc.. i appreciate your thoughs and ideas just i think this thread needs to be moved to CC

[wiki]Machete[/wiki]?
And you still should have used search, we already have assassin/warrior clones that dual wield swords(axes a few less but still too many) sticking out of all holes.<WTB relevant Kitty picture for that>

You could have at least used some of those for a little inspiration.

I will find a pic!!!


found it!!!

Lewl, it's not sticking out of all holes but a nice and relevant pic none the less.

I was at first going to go with "have them up to here" and then someone putting a gun to their own head, but I though that might be a little over, I got flamed pretty bad too when I went over with the "techno classes cannot be unique" thing.
(well actually Phoenix got flamed more after he stood up for me)

All the one's who flamed you must die!!!! *pulls out the stick of lies*

Is that from LFG too? I know the (hand-)fork of truth, but never seen any stick Richard harasses his friends with...

It's in episode 104

crusaders don't fight with machetes >.>

they fight with Sword and Shield or with Lances + Shield , when they ride on their horses


I'd suggest you first to change your thread more to something, that can be rated as a "serious" concept ...

look at concept threads of for example me, system, magna, action jack or so...

where you see from the start on, that the thread looks ORDERED & STRUCTURED and not like something, that a small child has thought of within 5 minutes and just had written down before posting it here on a small piece of paper and then copied and pasted the text from paper to here in same format oO


really, there should be a stickied thread in the concept class sub forum, that shows people, which intend to make a CC, first some good examples, of how CC Threads should look like >.>

come on you gotta admit my last cc was pretty good!!!! as long as you ignore the name :P