need help cos i hav a dumb build

can som1 tell me why im so shit?
this is my build:

Eternal Aura: 80 damage
Twin Moon Sweep: 44 health
Mystic Twister: 119 damage
Chilling Victory: +17 and 51 damage
Grenth's Fingers: 76 damage and 14 seconds
Test of Faith: 62 damage
Restful Breeze: 9 seconds
Avatar of Lyssa: 65 seconds and +35 damage

and i got a superior wind prayer rune but i got loads of + health runes

Restful Breeze is kinda bad on a Dervish, since you should be hitting stuff.
Test of Faith + Grenth's Fingers are not very good, along with Twin Moon Sweep. Mystic Twister I've found is only good on spikes.

This build needs more Heart of Fury, and Mystic Sweep is good -- but you're really best off using no Superior runes.

If possible can you post the attributes?

1 build i like to run is a D/Rt skills are
splinter weapon
eremite's attack
mystic sweep
reapers sweep
heart of fury
aura of holy might
mystic regen(yea i know nerfed again)
sunspear rebirth
this build works very good against mobs as well as spiking a single foe if there isnt one near you

Jon, I would really consider using Splinter Weapon on a Hero Ritualist, Splinter Weapon at it's full potential along with Ancestor's Rage is quite sexy.

this splinter is what i have used on my actrul dervish and got myself upto shiro and the lich mission, im still workin on that mission though finding a good group is hard for that one. but yea i run it on my meloni as well sometimes and it makes mobs go bye bye quick

http://www.guildwarsguru.com/forum/s...php?t=10261020

check out this thread. it has a few pretty good derv builds. basically if everyone doesn't rip it to shreds, it's pretty decent. I try and use skills mainly from mysticism and scythe mastery so I can max those attributes out. Bring a good monk when you enter an area or mission. And use minor runes so you don't lose any health.

Also if you're using eternal aura as a damage dealer, then you're using it incorrectly. Don't get me wrong it does good damage to a mob...once every 30 seconds. take an avatar as your elite (mel or lyssa usually) and use it to recharge your avatar so you can keep it up constantly. if you don't take an avatar, there isn't much reason to keep EA in your bar.

Twin Moon Sweep

That removes enchantments, that might be your problem.

That and you skills really aren't helping each out. Build combos. A good one that uses twin moon is to use lyssa- heart of holy flame - eternal aura -twin moon twice and then follow up with chilling victory.

Mystic Twister also removes your enchantments which easily gets you killed if your not paying attention.

I would remove these for better ones.
Grenth's Fingers
Test of Faith
Restful Breeze

good lyssa with heroes with is

chilling, twin moon, wild blow(W), heart of holy, mystic regen, eternal aura, heart of fury, lyssa

mystic regen helps with degen and let your m and me take care of the rest.

alright so basically i ditch wind prayers and restful breeze and maybe twin moon sweep; get heart of fury, mystic regen and mystic sweep

ok thanx
but i need 2 get further in nf for mystic regen.
ill post my build agen wen its finished.

You can go to RA, AB or whatever and get 1k balthazar faction to unlock it.

ok... sry 4 being a noob (i am) but wat is RA, AB?

Random Arenas, Alliance Battles.

The main problem with this build is that you're using Lyssa, but not bringing skills to take advantage of it. Bring an IAS or fast-draw skills (Mystic Sweep, Eremite's Attack, Prot Strike) to get damage compression against enemies activating skills.