Avatar, The Martyr Guardian

The Avatar:
"The Martyr Guardian"


Introduction:
-Hi, Uhm, Hope you like it^^!


The Contents:

• The Background, Tells it's purpose in the GW Lore.
• The Status, Tells what is it's Status and General Data.
• The Attributes, Abilites or Skills which diffines this Class from the others.
• The Strength, Tells which does this Class' Abilities are good at to.
• The Weakness, Tells which does this Class' Abilities are burdened to.

Background:

Uniqueness:

• Coming Soon!..., ................................
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Status:
-Maximum Health 480.
-Maximum Energy 30.
-4 pipes of energy.


Armour:

Headgear
-Headress

-Starter Armor: AL 20
-Low: Al 30-40
-Medium: AL 50-60
-Maximum: AL 70

Insignia:

Martyr's
-Bonus Armor +5 (While Maintaining 1 or more Mantra/s)
Armor +5 (While Maintaining 2 or more Mantras)
Armor +5 (While Maintaining 3 or more Mantras)

Saint's
-Bonus Armor +10 (While Not Attacking)


Weapon:

Tonfa
Blunt/Slashing Damage 16-20 (req.9 Tonfa Mastery)
Armore Rating +15
DPS 0.99 seconds
Dual-Handed


Attribute:

Devotion(Primary)
-For each rank of Devotion, Gain 2% more Adrenaline and take 1% Damage Reduction.

Tonfa Mastery
-Specializes in Tonfa, Counter Attacks and Buffing.

Mantra Weaving
-Specializes in Protecting, Tanking and Bonding Allies.

Mantra Forging
-Specializes in Countering Attacks and De-Buffing Foes.


Skill Listing:

Devotion(Primary)
Coming Soon^^!..


Tonfa Mastery
Coming Soon^^!..


Mantra Weaving
Coming Soon^^!..


Mantra Forging
Coming Soon^^!..



Functions:
-Devotion is your Primary.
-Tonfa Mastery is your De-Buff.
-Mantra Weaving is your Buff.
-Mantra Forging is your Buff.


Strengths:
-

Weaknesses:
-

Picture:
Copyrights by: Namco




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Hope you like it^^!

First impressions:

the weapon description is 'blunt' but on your picture I see some very sharp blades =D.

And from your attributes; I feel it's a bit like a paragon. But maybe when you have more detailed information that will clear itself up.

For more Info About the Avatar please Check.
http://www.guildwarsguru.com/forum/s...php?t=10226699
http://www.guildwarsguru.com/forum/s...php?t=10221249
http://guildwarsguru.com/forum/showp...2&postcount=54
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Avatar

Sorry It isn't done yet^^.
Please don't Flame nor Critisize yet, But you may Suggest or Comment^^.
Good Morning, Please, Thank You and Good Bye^^.

@Faure
It'll have a Tribal Theme, Also Hinduistic so it'll be no close to the Paragon^^.
Please read the Links for more Info, Especially the Templar^^.
Oh, Let me fix that, Thanks for the Notice^^.

hmm... you put "^^" in everything you say to wheret it actually bugs me (typing-terrets ftl, lol) <.< and btw, criticism from outside sources is the best way to get even "better" ideas for making something.

other than that, it 'does' somewhat seem a small tad bit close to a para; we'll see what happens.

It's not^^.
Compair it with Para skills, It's not^^.

Check the first of the list of the links that I posted^^.

ok ^^
i will do that when i have more time ^^
anyways, have fun with this idea. ^^
hope it goes further than another dead post like all ofhter posts ^^





oh yea... did i mention to say "^^" ?

Main worry would be too many "counter-attack". If you don't have any punch, people will kill everyone else and kill you last when they can "grind you". Somehow reminds me of a riposte warrior with more "riposte" and less survivability. The word that springs to mind is... Retard check : good in unorganised/PvE, bad everywhere else.

The Avatar would be different, It's like the Other Avatar or Templar but with some added etc.
And Nerfed obviously XD.

Please also read my Acrobat XD
http://guildwarsguru.com/forum/showt...php?t=10269284

/signed It might need work, but I like the idea and where it is going, It's like a sin using dervish skills :O!