Made this for my fathers work

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Abonai Laguna
Abonai Laguna
Wilds Pathfinder
#1
Well I was requested to do this for my fathers work, and I thought maybe the people on guru can judge it. Please rate from 1 to 10, it used to be 1280x1024 but scaled it down, so please dont mind the edited quality.
Tatile
Tatile
Desert Nomad
#2
Nice, you should link to the full version.

However, I don't think this belongs in the 'Screenshot Exposition', so much as Nolani.
jimme
jimme
Lion's Arch Merchant
#3
Ehm.. You just downloaded a brush ?
Nothing special about it.
Celestial_Kitsune
Celestial_Kitsune
Krytan Explorer
#4
Quote: Originally Posted by Abonai Laguna
Well I was requested to do this for my fathers work, and I thought maybe the people on guru can judge it. Please rate from 1 to 10, it used to be 1280x1024 but scaled it down, so please dont mind the edited quality. Umm... How can one judge a design if its purpose and audience is unknown?
Dem Babyz Iz Mine
Dem Babyz Iz Mine
Ascalonian Squire
#5
Makes me want to buy a jellyfish...

UL, standard in safety...Is this for a welding supplies company? Seems like something industrial. Looks cool though, I like it
jimme
jimme
Lion's Arch Merchant
#6
Ye I want to add:
http://axeraider70.deviantart.com/journal/15799051/

You might want to read that before using it, it's the rules of using that brush.
Konig Des Todes
Konig Des Todes
Ooo, pretty flower
#7
Quote: Originally Posted by Celestial_Kitsune
Umm... How can one judge a design if its purpose and audience is unknown? Yeah, gotta agree with Kitsune, can't judge correctly without knowing the purpose and audience. But its rather nice being alone. Maybe a 6.5
jonnieboi05
jonnieboi05
Forge Runner
#8
Quote: Originally Posted by jimme Ye I want to add:
http://axeraider70.deviantart.com/journal/15799051/

You might want to read that before using it, it's the rules of using that brush. owned >,<



~LeNa~
Abonai Laguna
Abonai Laguna
Wilds Pathfinder
#9
Quote: Originally Posted by jimme You just downloaded a brush. I am Insulted... I didn't do that, I made it from scratch

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dem Babyz Iz Mine
Makes me want to buy a jellyfish...

UL, standard in safety...Is this for a welding supplies company? Seems like something industrial. Looks cool though, I like it UL is a company which checks electrical stuff before it goes to store, like MRI-scanners, computers, and tons of other electrical stuff.
Sjeng
Sjeng
Desert Nomad
#10
the text: "standard in safety" isnt aligned correctly underneath the circle.

And never mind people claiming you cheated in some way or another. There's always people who for some reason need to talk down to other Photoshoppers, so they feel better about their own skills I guess. And even if they ARE better, that's not the issue here. But it happens, I've been through it as well. Just ignore it.
I for one think it looks nice, I think it's cool someone can draw such thing from scratch.
K
Kenny Mack
Academy Page
#13
haha solo, play nice!
ezilo
ezilo
Pre-Searing Cadet
#14
I think it looks visually appealing but I'm not sure what message you want to portray with the graphic?

I also think that it would be nicer if the text was centered, and if it wasn't sticking to the bottom of the logo. Unless you wanted the text to be a part of the logo, rather than a caption?
fenix
fenix
Major-General Awesome
#16
You should really make one that doesn't copy an existing (and copywritten) brush. Or, just not steal the brush... as it could cost your fathers company money.

Either way, the tip I have is; the 'sparks' are wrong. Too many, too big and too dull. Make less, make some a bit smaller, and brighten up the colours used for the sparks.