Made this for my fathers work

Abonai Laguna

Abonai Laguna

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Jun 2006

Isle of the Dead [CoC] GH

Company Of Corpses [CoC]

E/

Well I was requested to do this for my fathers work, and I thought maybe the people on guru can judge it. Please rate from 1 to 10, it used to be 1280x1024 but scaled it down, so please dont mind the edited quality.

Tatile

Tatile

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Sep 2007

Stygian Disciples of Tenebrasus

N/Me

Nice, you should link to the full version.

However, I don't think this belongs in the 'Screenshot Exposition', so much as Nolani.

jimme

jimme

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Jan 2007

Netherlands

Mo/

Ehm.. You just downloaded a brush ?
Nothing special about it.

Celestial_Kitsune

Celestial_Kitsune

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Jun 2006

Me/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Abonai Laguna
Well I was requested to do this for my fathers work, and I thought maybe the people on guru can judge it. Please rate from 1 to 10, it used to be 1280x1024 but scaled it down, so please dont mind the edited quality. Umm... How can one judge a design if its purpose and audience is unknown?

Dem Babyz Iz Mine

Dem Babyz Iz Mine

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Mar 2008

Ninth ring of the Abyss

Underpaid Heroes [Hero]

D/A

Makes me want to buy a jellyfish...

UL, standard in safety...Is this for a welding supplies company? Seems like something industrial. Looks cool though, I like it

jimme

jimme

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Jan 2007

Netherlands

Mo/

Ye I want to add:
http://axeraider70.deviantart.com/journal/15799051/

You might want to read that before using it, it's the rules of using that brush.

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

Ooo, pretty flower

Join Date: Jan 2008

Citadel of the Decayed

The Archivists' Sanctum [Lore]

N/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Celestial_Kitsune
Umm... How can one judge a design if its purpose and audience is unknown? Yeah, gotta agree with Kitsune, can't judge correctly without knowing the purpose and audience. But its rather nice being alone. Maybe a 6.5

jonnieboi05

jonnieboi05

Forge Runner

Join Date: Mar 2006

Mableton, Georgia

Guild Ancestors Reunited [?????????]

Quote:
Originally Posted by jimme
Ye I want to add:
http://axeraider70.deviantart.com/journal/15799051/

You might want to read that before using it, it's the rules of using that brush. owned >,<



~LeNa~

Abonai Laguna

Abonai Laguna

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Jun 2006

Isle of the Dead [CoC] GH

Company Of Corpses [CoC]

E/

Quote:
Originally Posted by jimme
You just downloaded a brush.
I am Insulted... I didn't do that, I made it from scratch

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dem Babyz Iz Mine
Makes me want to buy a jellyfish...

UL, standard in safety...Is this for a welding supplies company? Seems like something industrial. Looks cool though, I like it UL is a company which checks electrical stuff before it goes to store, like MRI-scanners, computers, and tons of other electrical stuff.

Sjeng

Sjeng

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Aug 2005

in my GH

Limburgse Jagers [LJ]

W/

the text: "standard in safety" isnt aligned correctly underneath the circle.

And never mind people claiming you cheated in some way or another. There's always people who for some reason need to talk down to other Photoshoppers, so they feel better about their own skills I guess. And even if they ARE better, that's not the issue here. But it happens, I've been through it as well. Just ignore it.
I for one think it looks nice, I think it's cool someone can draw such thing from scratch.

Kenny Mack

Academy Page

Join Date: Dec 2007

Avatar Of Heroes

W/

haha solo, play nice!

ezilo

ezilo

Pre-Searing Cadet

Join Date: Dec 2007

GBCY

Me/N

I think it looks visually appealing but I'm not sure what message you want to portray with the graphic?

I also think that it would be nicer if the text was centered, and if it wasn't sticking to the bottom of the logo. Unless you wanted the text to be a part of the logo, rather than a caption?

fenix

fenix

Major-General Awesome

Join Date: Aug 2005

Aussie Trolling Crew HQ - Event Organiser and IRC Tiger

Ex Talionis [Law], Trinity of the Ascended [ToA] ????????????????&#

W/

You should really make one that doesn't copy an existing (and copywritten) brush. Or, just not steal the brush... as it could cost your fathers company money.

Either way, the tip I have is; the 'sparks' are wrong. Too many, too big and too dull. Make less, make some a bit smaller, and brighten up the colours used for the sparks.