Guild Wars:Legend [COMIC]

Tzu

Tzu

Site Contributor

Join Date: Mar 2008

UK/norway

Order Of The Etherbloom Crown [ZEN]

comic me and Zholn Cherub are working on, to keep our good memories from our GW characters when GW2 is released.

PROLOGUE page 1

CHAPTER 1: WANDERLUST page 1
CHAPTER 1: WANDERLUST page 2

Tatile

Tatile

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Sep 2007

Stygian Disciples of Tenebrasus

N/Me

Nice. I find the writing a tad predictable, but that's by no means a bad point for this, it just seems familiar.

A point though, some of background colouring makes parts of the text hard to read. This is annoying to fix, I know, I've tried it, but it's something you should probably keep an eye on.

All in all, me likes :3

Tzu

Tzu

Site Contributor

Join Date: Mar 2008

UK/norway

Order Of The Etherbloom Crown [ZEN]

XD lol, yes I know... I dislike the dialogue the way it is now, and the storyline might sound really predictable at this point, but I promise to surprise :3
I'm quite bad at prologues/build-ups, but this story seriously requires one.

I tried to make the writing as legible as possible, but if you have any kind of problem reading it, it means I'll have to be even warier of it. Thanks

Elder III

Elder III

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Jan 2007

Ohio

I Will Never Join Your Guild (NTY)

R/

looks cool to me - keep the good work coming!

Tatile

Tatile

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Sep 2007

Stygian Disciples of Tenebrasus

N/Me

Don't worry, as much of a story-teller as I like to think I am, I hate writing. Particularaly for comics, did that once, it was a nightmare.

Sin City Gamer

Sin City Gamer

Academy Page

Join Date: Dec 2007

Las Vegas, NV, USA

Death Design Cult [DDC]

I like the style its being presented in Good work so far.

One point of constructive criticism though: The text can be hard to read at certain places. Maybe find a color that fits your theme other than the black and white you are currently using. A difficult task I would think, considering how good the black and white look though...

Tzu

Tzu

Site Contributor

Join Date: Mar 2008

UK/norway

Order Of The Etherbloom Crown [ZEN]

thanks everyone, I've tried to make the text easier to read this time; page 2 is now up.

Sin City Gamer

Sin City Gamer

Academy Page

Join Date: Dec 2007

Las Vegas, NV, USA

Death Design Cult [DDC]

Beautifully done I love the new text style.

Smilin' Assassin

Smilin' Assassin

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Apr 2007

Cantha

Pixies O Wickid Nawtyness [pixy]

A/Me

beautiful, Tzu
lovely screenshotting/editing & text, and has an epic feel about it .. like it's gonna be one big project, wonderful to keep you busy in GW for just about ever, and plenty for us to look forwards to:}

Tender Wolf

Tender Wolf

Banned

Join Date: Jul 2007

All over Tyria, Cantha, & Elona

The Eternal Night Vanguard [TEN]

R/

Very creative Tzu! Beautiful pictures and I'm looking forward to reading more of this. *adds this to newspaper so others can also enjoy it* Keep it up! I may have to do this before long. haha

Hollow Gein

Hollow Gein

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Aug 2007

Menos Espadas

N/

This is quite good. You have established the hero, now for the villain. Mwa hahahaahha!!!.... Seriously, they have the best lines.

Calaval

Calaval

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Jun 2005

Forever Knights

E/

Great work! I'm looking forward to reading more!