Autumn Romance ;)
Tzu
recent drawing I did of Zholn (the monk) and Tzunedaine (the ranger).
Tzunedaine is supposed to look quite big compared to Zholn, she's 2-3 heads taller than him in-game... XD
Supposedly Tzunedaine is painting back on the Dragon Scalp Design he used to wear when they first met. Usually Zholn wears a black headwrap, but I'm not very fond of it... XP
Zholn is a little reluctant, he likes to keep his head warm, but Tzunedaine always has the final say in such matters ;P
Tzunedaine is wearing a Norn Armour, but I changed it around a bit as I saw fit for the setting. No need for all the fur in that climate.
EDIT: Critique is of course very welcome, always. I can use and constructive crit to better myself for my commissions.
AerisAMP
I don't know too much about art, but in my opinion, the white on the ranger kills the entire picture. Everything else is great, but my eye keeps getting drawn to the white on her armor. Maybe try something more subtle?
Widowmaker
In my opinion, much better. The white seemed to lack any shading at all, which made it feel very flat set against everything else.
Nice work.
Nice work.
Konig Des Todes
The ranger is now camaflauged into the background! 
Nice picture (I personally didn't mind the white, but it looks better this way
).
If I had more money, I'd ask for commisions in your other thread. >.<
I like my main characters enough to get multiple drawings of them.
Nice picture (I personally didn't mind the white, but it looks better this way
).If I had more money, I'd ask for commisions in your other thread. >.<
I like my main characters enough to get multiple drawings of them.
Tzu
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Originally Posted by Widowmaker
In my opinion, much better. The white seemed to lack any shading at all, which made it feel very flat set against everything else.
Nice work. yup, I see it now. I just tend to be sloppy with work I do for people I know ... ^.^''''
thanks though, I value especially your opinion very highly!
Nice work. yup, I see it now. I just tend to be sloppy with work I do for people I know ... ^.^''''
thanks though, I value especially your opinion very highly!
Kerwyn Nasilan
very nice, the faces look kind of funny to me, but good non-the-less
ZenRgy
Why is it so dark? I can't tell the bodies from the background.
Tzu
Nemesis Xero
Very cute picture Tzu, I like it 
Tzu
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Originally Posted by ZenRgy
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This picture could also use a real background, screenshot and premade backgrounds look lazy and drain the picture of it's beauty. But this could be called a good start.
well, apparently (90% of the feedback so far) this drawing is very, very, very poor. So why should I spend any time on making the background look any better? Wrapping a pig in sequins never helped much.
Konig Des Todes
I personally like the screen shot backgrounds. Unless your photoshopping (like EmJay), imo, screen shots are the best background.
But this all is matter of opinion.
Bestian Trueflight
What aspects were criticised in other forums? Because to me, although the colouring and lighting could use perhaps a little work (hypocritical, I know), the lineart looks fine. Surely it's salvageable?
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