A Novice's Monk CGwork

Hihi,
I'm a novice in cg working and hope guys could give me some advices.
I can't help but drawing her this revealing. o.O
(a bit nudity)
http://forcesorcery.deviantart.com/a...oven-106473280

oooh
got the link to work
and i wished i hadnt
im srry but this stuff is creepy

It's decent work if you made it in MSpaint....

Yeah, it's pretty bad :\ it needs better shading and more realistic proportions (btw, monks have the flattest chests in the game besides sins)

Pretty bad? Well, I just trying some manga-style.
And I want it as upviewing sight, though not successed.

GW is dying cuz ppl just play stupid gimmicky builds and thinks they're leet.
Being a grim criticist is very easy, just like those overpowered lame spikes.

Whatever, maybe u can show us some more "realistic" monk you've done.

I paid much effort on this work.
Thanks very much, I lost all my passion on GW fanart working.

Welcome to the internet, kid. Whining if people criticise you will not earn you sympathy, it's pathetic.

Picture-wise, you will not get better if you don't listen to criticism. You asked for "advices," and IcyFiftyFive suggested you worked on proportions and shading.
The first thing you need to do is work on anatomy. Forgive me for saying this, but I get the distinct impression you drew the breasts first, put a great deal of effort into making it revealing and erotic, and then added the rest of the body as an afterthought.
Start with essentially a stick-figure, or even just a single line that shows the pose/movement and go from there. Illustrate joints with circles.


Then, and only then, flesh out the body, working out how muscles deform and twist through trial and error.

Then you can start to add detail/clothing, once you have the basic framework working.


Don't even think about CGing it until you've got at least a basic sketch working.


Note: the sketches above are about a year old, from when my brother asked me to draw an LEPrecon soldier from the Artemis Fowl books. It's not meant to be good, or even anatomically correct - just advice as to how to start anatomy. Feel free to correct me.

Oh, out of curiosity, I decided to browse your deviantArt gallery, and found that your link to your own website was this:
http://forum.hentaipalm.com/showthread.php?t=38472
Against my better judgment, I followed it, and even made an account under a false email address to view your "pictures."

I pity your poor, juvenile and pathetic little mind. Subject matter aside, from an objective standpoint your work is laughably poor. The abysmal anatomy makes the rape scenes about as erotic as a four-month-old corpse, just so you know.

If your "passion for GW fan art" has been neutered, GOOD.

My advice - take a long, cold shower, try drawing women and focusing on something other than their genitalia, and maybe go outside and meet a real, breathing woman.

If anyone else wants a good laugh, this links to one of the imbecile's "artworks." Be warned, it is NSFW. I hope any mods reading this post will not ban me for putting this link in - feel free to remove it if it breaks any rules.
http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/624...nforestvo5.jpg

I've seen a lot worse tbh.

As other people have said though, the anatomy is pretty bad, and the inking is ehh. I know a few good tutorial sites that helped me a lot when I first started drawing.

http://www.mangatutorials.com/
http://www.mangarevolution.com/tutorials.php
http://www.posemaniacs.com/
http://www.dueysdrawings.com/drawing_tutorials.html

Posemaniacs is by far my favorite site. Do the 30 second drawing everyday and just focus on shapes and important lines.

deviantart has a lot of good inking tutorials, I think I have a few on my favorites. I'll add you to my friends list. ;P Good luck. <3