Life of a Lich

Konig Des Todes

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I am still rather new to writing, so I know my writing style isn't that good. So I will be expecting some constructive criticism. I will be updating the thread with new chapters every Monday, unless I don't have time to write a full chapter. Anyways, enjoy.
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Life of a Lich
Journal of Konig “Des Todes” Doric

Rise of a Lich, Fall of Gods

Prologue:


Constantly, evil and good quarrel in this world; I have been cursed, and so has this world. But no matter how cursed this world becomes, I will always have a greater curse - for I am forced to save it, lest I suffer the same fate as him. I was an idiot then, I wanted power. I received that power, but was cursed by it. I now am forced to do what I don’t want to do. How did this all begin? Oh yeah…

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Chapter One:


Konig Doric, born in the year 147 AA (After the Arrival *of humans on Tyria*), became a self-imposed outcast of his family. He was tutored by the current vizier, Grenth, but, with Grenth knowing, escaped to train with the Sacred Guard of Balthazar, the top fighter in all Tyria and Elona. Konig desired power, and in search of that, he left his family and the few friends he had. He searched for power with only finding trouble.

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But there was another reason why he left Arah. When his father, Herzog Doric, arranged a forced marriage for Konig; that is when he finally decided to escape the city of Arah. Konig, in a dark red cloak, travelled with a caravan to the edge of the Crystal Sea, to the port of Amnoon. Just as the rumors said, it is a desolate and barely visited town. Some may mistake it for a ghost town, and it would be if it wasn’t for the Margonites who used it.

Margonites, the people of the sea, they only worship the God of Water. While fitting, they miss out on true power. Only Dhuum and Balthazar can give the power people desire, why bother with weaklings. I’ll never understand them. People care about wealth, not strength. Strength is what moves this world; money cannot save your life from the hands of Dhuum. It’s a shame that to get off of this rock I need to help the Margonites.

To be allowed on the seemingly wrecked ship just to get a ride, even though he paid, Konig was forced to manage the cargo. Among the cargo he spotted a rare Garnet stone, the only stone found to resemble Konig’s favorite, and signature, color on all of the known Tyria. And with his departure, he stole it the color fit his lust for power easily.

But, Konig did not get far before the Margonites found out. Konig just got off of the ship and into the cesspool of an outpost. Realizing that he was found out, he ran. Past the giant beetles, and through chasms, Konig found himself in an underground complex of tunnels. He used this to escape his pursuers. But whenever he thought he was safe, the very same Margonites found him again. Constantly, Konig headed Northeast. North, east, north, east; never changing direction, hiding where possible. He escaped several close calls, each time he cursed Abaddon simply because the Margonites worshipped him.

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Several days have passed, possibly weeks, and the Margonites never gave up the chase. Konig found himself near the brink of civilization, if he hadn’t already passed it. The number of Skree and Hekets that he avoids has increased tenfold. Chasms are much more common in site, and with that, more hiding places. For now, he keeps low, hoping that either the Margonites back off or are assaulted by the filthy monsters.

Waking up the next day, Konig hear Skree shouting, shouts and cries of fight. Quickly getting up to see where they were and who or what they were fighting, he say that they were just attacking each other. Common quarrels among a primitive race. Nothing to worry about. Wait… What is that? Peering closer at what the Skree were fighting over, he noticed a Margonite bag. Easy to tell it was a Margonite bag due to the unique design of the common mark of the Margonites, one every Margonite ship held and every Margonite wore on their cloths and items. A six eyed mask, the symbol of their patron god.

Sighing, he knew he was no longer going to be pursued, whether the Margonites gave up and left, or were killed, he couldn’t tell. He didn’t know if the Skree ate on sight or took the bodies elsewhere. Who knows how primitive animals think.

Konig started sneaking around the other side of the Skree, hoping to leave before they noticed him along with the Margonites’ supplies. Slowly and carefully, using the best of his abilities to not make a sound, he nearly made it out unnoticed. Just nearly. When he thought he was in the clear, he turned and quickened his pace. But the very first step after turning around, he kicked a tiny rock. But that rock was all that was needed for the Skree to hear. Seeing a fresh meal, they went into frenzy and chased Konig.

Once more Konig found himself running for his life, just when he thought he was able to be at ease and not have his life threatened, he was being chased by Skree. Skree were worse than the Margonites. The Margonites simply wanted to kill him, Skree wanted to eat him, alive or dead.

After a sharp turn in a canyon, Konig spotted a cave. Knowing the Skree were far back enough to not see him go into the cave, he ducked in. But he forgot that the Skree had a better sense of smell than humans. The Skree were not fooled by Konig’s actions. Cornered in a dead end cave, thinking he would die, he surveyed his surroundings. Behind him, a large rock – not enough to take out his enemies - above him, he noticed many cracks, and to his right above, a sword. It looked like someone tried to make the cave collapse on some pursuers in the past.

Thinking he would be able to dig his way out after the Skree die from the rocks or leave if they got out, he grabbed a large rock that was just behind him. Thinking he would use the rock as a weapon, the Skree in the front backed up a little. At this, Konig took the chance and slammed the rock into the hilt of the sword. The crack spread, and at first only small rocks and dust fell. Then nothing. The Skree closed in, thinking nothing was going to happen.

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Because I'm slow, I missed updating this Friday, and nearly forgot to today.
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Chapter Two:


How long have I been stuck here now? It feels like forever. I can’t tell day from night anymore.


It has been several days, or so it seems, since the Skree cornered Konig in a cave and he created a break in the ceiling. Some of the Skree were crushed by the rocks, many got out before the rocks fell on top of them though. They were relentless, and he was starving, only surviving by the plants that came out of the ground – hardly edible at that. The rocks were bigger than expected. Too large to move, and the sword was buried underneath so he couldn’t use that as a tool.

Feeling like he was on the brink of death, hating his mistake upon the Margonite ship, and refusing to die just yet, Konig called out into the air.

“DHUUM! God of Death! Hear me!” Konig shouted. On the other side the Skree, shocked by the sudden sound inside the cave, started rustling.

“Give me the power I seek! Give me the power to do as I wish and I will serve you and your will! I would rather die now then be stuck here, but I know that you if any god would grant me what I desire!”

At this, the ground suddenly rumbled, and on the other side of the bolder Konig heard the Skrees scream in pain and agony. Perhaps they got hungry enough to revert to cannibalism?

A few seconds later, after the screaming halted, the bolder moved. Instinctually, Konig shied away, only to see the ghastly form of Dhuum’s well known servant, The Fury.

“You wished for power, and yet you shy away from the one who comes to give it. Humorous mortal.” The Fury said, taunting Konig.

“I only shied because I thought the Skrees found a way in finally.” Konig sneered without thought.

The Fury moved to a side, “As you can see, no Skree is left alive. I have sent them to my lord for their punishment. And now, for yours…” It said as moving slowly to Konig.

“So you are here to kill me then.”

“Yes, and no. You shall see what I mean soon.” At that instant, Konig lost consciousness. His last thought being: Damn that Dhuum. I didn’t ask for death.

****

A few hours later, Konig woke up. But to his surprise, he did not wake up in the Underworld. He was still in the cave. Staring at his hands and body, he saw that he was in his own body, flesh and bones, blood and all.

“What’s the meaning of this, I thought you were going to kill me.” Konig questioned, expecting to still see The Fury there.

“You will see soon enough, Mor- no, Konig Des Todes.” The Fury’s voice said, as if a part of the wind.

Confused but grateful he wasn’t dead; he left the cave and head West, the best way to go to get to civilization. It was a week before he reached Vabbi. Strangely, Konig never felt the need to rest, sleep, or eat. He didn’t bother thinking about things like that.

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In Vabbi, his cloths torn and wrecked, he tried to use the little money he had bother to keep in his journey to the east to buy some new cloths.

“WHAT?!? You want me to pay 25 Platinum for simple cloths? Don’t you have anything for poor people?” Konig shouted at the local tailor.

“Nope, there are no poor people in Vabbi, you should know that. Besides, where can you get any kind of cloths that better then that” pointing at Konig’s ragged cloths “anywhere in Tyria?” The tailor gloated.

“Orr for one. Few poor people there, but at least they can serve the poor travelers!” Konig, now making a scene, shouted.

“Orr? Look, just because the gods live in your country doesn’t mean their not a backwater country.” She taunted.

“My country? How did you know I was Orrian?”

“Those men over there showed me a poster of you saying their looking for an Orrian royal outcast.” She said, pointing at the very Margonites who were chasing Konig months ago.

“Look alive boys! It’s Konig, get ‘em!” The head of the Margonite party shouted.

“Great… just great” Konig said as he sprinted into a run south to the great river that fed the continent with life.

Not even five minutes later, the Margonites cornered Konig. “Damn shouters, so annoying.”

“Time to die, traitor.” A swordsman said as he stabbed Konig in the heart. Not this feeling again. Konig thought as he anticipated the fading of consciousness.

But to Konig’s surprise, that feeling never came. “Dead already? What a shame.” The swordsman said as he drew the sword out of Konig’s chest. As they turned around, Konig grabbed the warrior’s leg. “Did you just say, dead?” With this, the swordsman stumbled down, his face turning as pale as within seconds as Konig stood up with a grin on his face.

“How… I felt no heartbeat! Kill him! Hurry!” The rest of the Margonites stabbed Konig.

With a spear, sword, axe, scythe, and several arrows piercing his body, Konig started laughing. “So this is what he meant! LOVELY! ABSOLUTELY LOVELY!” Turning his gaze to the Margonites, “Time for you five to die. Umlenkung der Waffen.” With this, Konig chanted words that he didn’t know he even knew, and with him finishing these words, the weapons flew out of his body and stabbed all five Margonites at once.

“Lovely power. Lovely power indeed. You should be more direct Dhuum!” Konig said into the air, laughing with joy at his new found power.

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Awesome Konig! I love it! It kept me focused the entire time and I thought, "Over already?" when I got to the end. Can't wait to read more! *puts this in newspaper* I may also ask for an interview from you, someone with this great power and unable to die. hehe Good job again!

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Thank you Tender Wolf. Hopefully more people will read. I know the first chapter was bland a tiny bit, but I was told it would be better to have that scenario expanded instead of have it in three paragraphs like I did before :x

Also, I decided to update only on Mondays. Will give me more time to write. Quote:
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someone with this great power and unable to die. Shhhh, don't jinx it!

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Chapter 3 - do note, that this chapter is a little bland. Sorry about that, was thinking of adding a few filler chapters, but it wouldn't fit well. Bland but somewhat important, you'll see why. Next week will be better.
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Chapter Three:


It has been a week since the incident in Vabbi. Staring into the glittering water of the Crystal Sea, he silently reflects on what has happened… on what he now is. Believing that he is now immortal, he can do whatever he wants. He can rule the world if he wished! But he knew how Dhuum has acted in the past, and is expecting something he will have to do to return the so called “gratitude” of the gift that Dhuum gave Konig.

“So, do you like your new power? Konig Des Todes?” The Fury asked, taking shape behind Konig.

“What’s not to like? I’ve never seen anyone else with so much power. With this power, perhaps… No, no need to rush, I have plenty of time now. So, why are you here?”

“I am here to collect your dept to Dhuum.” The Fury, grinning maliciously, whispered to Konig.

“As I thought. Should have told me about a dept earlier, I would have prepared it for you. What is this ‘dept’ anyways?”

“A simple 50 souls before the end of the Season of the Colossus. Our lord is in constant supplies of souls to ‘play’ with. And his Titan army has become relentless and has been brawling to the death, he needs fresh recruits.”

“Funny, now tell me, how am I suppose to collect these souls, and how do you expect me to get 50 souls in one week?” At this, The Fury laughed.

“I am just a reminder, you don’t need to ‘collect’ anything, just kill people and you have done your job. And you already killed thirty-eight men since I visited you last. You need to kill eighteen more. Have fun.” At this, The Fury turned away. “Oh,-” facing Konig once more “-sometimes you’ll get visions of certain people. I suggest you take care of them immediately, those are people our lord wants specifically, and quickly.” Its voice faded once more into the wind. “Enjoy your life as a lich, and as a servant of our lord.”

“Fun. A job, didn’t sign up for that.” Konig said to himself, suddenly grinning with malice, “Perhaps it’s time to have some real
fun.”

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Ten years have passed since Konig ‘Des Todes’ became a lich. And as time passed, he gained infamy throughout Elona and Tyria. Few people would even go in sight of him. But still, those he sought, fought back. It was always the same outcome, never a challenge. This life became tedious to Konig.

He detested his choice since The Fury gave Konig his ‘job.’ Everyday, he is being forced to kill. Killing isn’t the problem though, killing is enjoyable to Konig, the problem is the fact that he is forced to kill.

On Konig’s way to Orr, to kill an old wise man going senile – Grenth – Konig finally had a chance to truly reflect on his decision, and its outcome.

You miserable god! I didn’t ask for this, I wanted power, but without a duty! Just as my father did, you too betray me. Everyone betrays me. This world needs to be destroyed. If not destroyed, then ruled by a proper ruler, one who will put these pathetic creatures in their place. One who can’t suffer from mortal betrayals. Someone like… me. But more importantly, I need to be rid of Dhuum’s hold. I WANT TO BE FREE! Even if it means death I will gain freedom someday, and soon. I swear that, whether by my hand, or another’s.

As if Fate itself felt pity for Konig, the day after arriving in Orr, he witnessed Grenth return to Orr from the Rift, shoulder to shoulder with Balthazar, Melandru, Lyssa, Abaddon, and Dwayna. And with Grenth’s return, the new news that Dhuum was no more. When the gods left into their residence in Arah, Konig left the city feeling relieved that he can live his life how he wished now. But…

“So, this is what you’ve become Konig Doric, no, its Konig Des Todes now isn’t it? Interesting. You’re power is great, more powerful then The Fury was before it fled abandoning Dhuum.” Out of nowhere, Grenth appeared in front of Konig.

“Suppose a new god would be able to appear out of no where like a ghost. To what do I owe this honor? Grenth, God of Death.” Bowing to show his respect, Konig spoke in a sarcastic tone.

“I am here to see one of Dhuum’s favorite puppets. I should just kill you here and now, but I am sure I can think of a better use for you.”

Sighing, “Right when I thought I was going to be free. What job do you want me to do?”

“No job. But I have a restriction, unless you want to be tossed into the Bone Pits like the remains of Dhuum. Don’t go killing just anyone like you have been doing. I’ll tell you who you can and cannot kill, I might be the God of Death but I don’t want a constant supply of souls to judge.” Grenth smiled kindly to Konig at the last statement. “However, if there is ever need of a lich’s power, you will be getting a job. Also, if you happen to see Desmina, say ‘hi’ to her for me. She was the first mortal to see me as a god. Like you, she desired power. I give power to those who desire it, but at a price of being limited in using it. I might not have given you your power, but you will be limited in how you use it.” And just as swiftly as he appeared, Grenth disappeared. “Oh, and it’s the God of Death. Remember that.”

“Death and Ice, fitting, you’ve always looked like you were on the brink of death, and you heart is as cold as ice. I’ll be sure to restrict myself, lord.” Konig bowed to the air, again speaking with his sarcastic tone.

Not perfect freedom, but freedom. Now to do what I want to do. You have my gratitude, old man... For now.

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Without having to kill, Konig had lots of time on his hands. He spent this time carelessly, fighting pirates and beasts. For once in his life, Konig was helping people by killing people; he considered it the lesser of two goods, and the lesser of two evils. Time and again Konig met Desmina, where he – for a time – helped build a Temple of Grenth in the Shiverpeaks, only to keep in Grenth’s good favor to prevent any troubles. While they found converts of Dhuum to maintain the temple, other former Dhuum worshipers focused on desecrating these new temples, and with the buildings, the “weak” worshipers of Grenth too.

The best targets possible, killing those against Grenth. Surely that old man won’t mind that! And I’ve recently learned how to make those of the dead my eternal servants. Deadites, that’s what I’ll call them. Unlike the simpleton’s minions, these don’t have restrictions. With enough Deadites, I can easily take over.

Life became normal for Konig, as normal as it can get that is. Unable to age, unable to die, Konig was a true immortal among mortals. He did what he wished while staying on the gods’ good side – not out of respect or fear, but out of convenience.

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Chapter Four:


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“Quickly! They’re getting away!” Desmina shouted to Konig and Asbeel, “We can’t let those blasphemers get away! KONIG! Hurry up!”

“Oh, shut it, it’s not easy to move when you’re dead ya know.” Konig resounded to Desmina as he hurried around the corner.

“You’re just lucky Grenth hasn’t sent his cold reach to you yet, Konig.” Asbeel, the youngest and strongest students of the new Temple of Grenth, sneered at Konig.

“Byleth’s last men are getting away, shut up and catch them you two.” Desmina said, starting to get angry at their constant bickering.

“So do we want to know where Byleth is hiding? Or are we just going to kill these guys like the rest, huh Asbeel?” Konig taunted Asbeel. The two never got along since day one, due to their conflicting personalities.

“I only sent them to our lord to be judged, I did nothing wrong.”

“Nothing wrong? By killing them before I can even extract their knowledge you let Byleth slip away! I think that’s something wrong!” And you prevented me from being able to use their corpses by how you killed them.

“ENOUGH! Konig! Asbeel! Get along or I’ll send you both to Grenth before the day is over… Ah, our prey is cornered.”

The three of them, Konig, Asbeel, and Desmina, have been hunting down the last of the Cult of Dhuum (DOOM) – a guild made in secret for all remaining followers of Dhuum – for months now. The cult only having what is guessed to be around ten more members, including their leader, Byleth the Necromonger – the first chosen of Dhuum, still among the living but older then any mortal, given the power to suck the life out of his enemies.

“So, will you five tell us where Byleth is hiding? Or will I have to take it form you by force? Please say the later.” Konig asked the cult members before Desmina got a chance to talk.

“Why would we! You’re outnumbered; do you think you’ll win in a fight?” The cultist who seems to be the leader of the group taunted Konig and the others.

“Outnumbered? Yes. Outpowered? Never. Even the ten men behind that wall there can’t help you against me alone.” Konig pointed out the awaiting ambush. Being dead and so magically adept, while restricted his movements a bit through the little rigor mortis that occurred before he woke up in Dzalana, gave Konig the ability to sense life around him. “It’s impossible to surprise me anymore, mortal.”

“Mortal? You’re as mortal as us! Get them!” With that, the ambush sprang out of hiding and engaged in combat with Desimina and Asbeel. “I’ll handle the cocky one myself.”

“You don’t get it do you. You were never even chosen by Dhuum, I was “blessed” by him. Even if you brought a hundred men you wouldn’t be able to kill me. You can’t because I’m ALREADY DEAD! It’s time you all learn your place. Durch, Tod, Leben, Enden!” With his incantation, a spell only known as “Death’s Claws” to those few who witnessed and lived – and those few even witnessing his allies dying from said spell – was cast.

Bright translucent blue claws extended out of Konig’s fingers, slowly making the figure of a ghoul. When this figure was formed half-way, it created a loud shriek, affected all fourteen others around, and it impaled the leader through the head, heart, and both arms – severing them. One by one, Konig’s enemies fell. Always before, this spell made Konig lose control, but Asbeel and Desmina got lucky, Konig didn’t lose control.

All but one enemy was killed within seconds, and that last one, wished he had died. For no pain is greater to see all your comrades die in front of you, while you’re helpless thinking you’re next.

“So, will you tell us where Byleth is now?” Konig asked the near to death man, collapsed on the floor in fear.

“Y-y-yes, I w-w-will. Just d-d-don’t kill me! Please!” Konig nodded as he slowly neared the cultist, gripping the cultist’s head.

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“Byleth the Necromonger is hiding north of Kryta? You sure you can trust that coward’s words, Konig?” Asbeel questioned Konig and his ability to see through lies, a power given to him by the previous judge of the dead.

“When I question someone, I know when they lie. You know this. Stop bickering.” Konig reminded Asbeel once more.

“Yeah, but so far north is rather far to be leading a cult. Just doesn’t seem logical.” Confused, Asbeel was trying to figure out why anyone would be hiding underground deep within Centaurian and Tengu territory.

“Have you met Byleth before? I have, although for a short time, he’s not very logical. There’s not much to think about with Byleth, when he decides on something, no matter what it is, he goes through with it. He’s an “act before thinking” person. So give it a rest.” Desmina said, to quiet Asbeel down.

“Here it is. lets quiet down, we might be able to sneak up on them.” Konig whispered to the others, as he opened the door – as quietly as possible, although the rust made that hard – and walked inside.

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Awesome job Konig!!! I love how the story is going! So creative and I hadn't even heard of Desmina, so it gives me knowledge too. rofl Anyway, great job again and the next issue of my paper will for sure have the link to this outstanding story. Keep it up!

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Wow I am too hurried for time! I am soooo hunting this down to read when I am stuck waiting around in a long line at the shops...I want to take my time and enjoy this - looks so good Konig!

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Chapter Five:


I see you finally arrived. I’ve been waiting for you.
All three of them heard in their minds, as if there was a loud voice coming deep from the depths of the catacomb-like complex. Konig, my dear Blasphemer, tell me why do you serve that infidel Grenth when you should be serving along-side me! It will be a shame to let such potential die.

“What madness is this?! Where is the voice coming from?!” Asbeel shouted as he clutched his head, obviously in pain.

“It seems Byleth picked up a new ability since I last met him.” Kwahahaha, yes, I have picked up a new ability. The ability to read the minds of all those near me. You cannot beat me, you should know that. Asbeel, what’s wrong? Afraid? What happened to that big macho act you always put up. Are you afraid that she will show up again? Afraid that you’ll be tortured again as you were as a child? Heh heh heh. Don’t worry, I’ll be sure to make this time worse than before, you can trust me.

“SHUT UP! SHUT UP! JUST SHUT UP! PLEASE!” Asbeel shouted into the darkness as he collapsed on his knees, falling ill to Byleth’s mind game.

“Asbeel, calm down, don’t listen to whatever he says. He’ll probably try to turn us against each other, no matter what, do not listen to him. Understood?” Konig said, trying to calm Asbeel down. “Sigh. Asbeel, get up, the faster we finish this, the sooner he will shut up.”

“Yeah, you’re right… for once. Let’s hurry up.” Asbeel ran into ahead into the next room. “Come on, I don’t want to deal with this guy’s voice anymore, it’s more annoying than your breath Konig.”

“At least he’s back to normal.” Konig mumbled, now wanting Asbeel to be in pain again. Cries of pain are more bearable than cockiness.

The complex is a maze, twists and turns everywhere. And always, there is taunting of failure, of betrayal. Balyth never gives up trying to make the three fight each other – and has a couple times made Asbeel attack Konig from behind. And now, they reach finally reach a split.

“Three paths, which way do we go?” Desmina asked Konig, who has been leading them until now.

“Why bother asking the corpse. Let’s just go down the center.” Asbeel said as he jaunted into the center passageway.

“No, you fool! That way will-” Konig started to warn Asbeel that the path will close after one person passes through, but was too late. “That idiot! Can’t he wait for anything? Come on, lets hurry to him, all the passageways end up the same place, two are full of tricks and traps.”

“So he’ll have to deal with traps then?” Desmina asked, now worried for Asbeel.

“No, he was lucky, the center path has the tricks, including separating one person from the rest of the group.” Wish he went down the one with traps…

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After various twists and turns, Konig and Desmina finally found the room where the other two paths converged with their path. Dark and moist, all the torches seemed to have been out for some reason. In the middle of the room was a large lump, just short of the size of a full grown human. Perhaps it was one of Byleth’s underlings that he killed in rage.

“Think you can light a torch Konig? Don’t want to run into any traps.” Desmina asked Konig, as she carefully moved closer to the human-sized lump.

“Sure, but where is that fool Asbeel?” Konig responded as he grabbed two torches and brushed them against his armor, igniting some flames. The light brightened the room, allowing everything to be seen.

“Oh Grenth!” Desmina said as she rushed over to the lump. Noticing that the lump was in fact a person, Konig slowly walked over to get a better view. Bloody and impossible to tell the clothing, the body was missing the right arm and both legs from the knee down. “Asbeel! Asbeel! Can you here me?” Desmina shouted as Konig finally got a look at the body’s face. Asbeel was laying down, seemingly unconscious.

“Des…mina? Konig? Heh, you two are too slow. Byleth, he shouldn’t be far. That bastard was tougher than we thought.” Asbeel managed to say, blood spurting out as he spoke.

“Desmina, there’s nothing we can do to help him. He lost too much blood, and we don’t even know where his limbs are. Let’s go finish Byleth.” Konig said to Desmina as she sat next to Asbeel.

“No. No, you go on Konig. You should be strong enough. I’ll make sure the Envoys take Asbeel to Grenth. He’s my student, it’s my duty to do that much.” Desmina whispered just loud enough to be heard. As Asbeel’s hand fell limp, Desmina covered his eyes. “Lord Grenth, take your servant, Asbeel, into your icy grasp. May he see his rightful judgment and reside within the Underworld for as long as you see fit.”

With her words fading from hearing, Konig went on. Byleth must be stopped, and Desmina left it to Konig to finish him.

hawk3y3

hawk3y3

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Aug 2005

Droknar's Forge!

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Keep up the excellent work, Konig. Can't wait to see what the King of the Dead does next.

Burning Freebies

Burning Freebies

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Jan 2008

The wonderful land of gift giving

[FoW]

E/Mo

Good work Konig. Looking forward to see you ARK alliance video comp entry too!

Nathaniel (Was 'ere)

Nathaniel (Was 'ere)

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Join Date: Jan 2009

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Heh, wow, this is brilliant, good job.

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

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Join Date: Jan 2008

Citadel of the Decayed

The Archivists' Sanctum [Lore]

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Eh, sorry I didn't update on monday. Life has caught up to me finally, so updates may end up being random and inconsistant at times. I will try to stick to updating on either mondays or fridays, whether once or twice a week, or not at all during a week, I am not sure at this time. Once February hits, I should be clear for a little bit for the month to get more writing it.

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

Ooo, pretty flower

Join Date: Jan 2008

Citadel of the Decayed

The Archivists' Sanctum [Lore]

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Ok, first, sorry for missing last week. Second, Mondays have become hectic for me since school has started - a main reason why I missed last week - so instead of updating Mondays, I shall update Fridays when I am absolutely free. Next update shall be on the thirteenth.
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Chapter Six:


Walking down a dark, damp corridor, Konig continues on, scanning every enclave in search Byleth. Byleth, enjoyed attacking at any chance and render his opponents immobile for torture. Konig, my dear Konig. Why do you bother searching for me. I’m just ahead of you. No tricks, I promise.

“A promise from you is as trustworthy as the words of a Margonite.” Konig sneered back at the taunt from the shadows. “You might as well come out Byleth! Your end is here!”

To the end, end, the end of the tunnel. There you shall see, what is in store for you, Blasphemer. Your false god, Grenth, should expect you soon, my dear Lich. Yes, yes, come to me. Come to your end, Blasphemer. The taunting continued, seemingly endlessly, all the way down the tunnel. Constantly, Konig wanted to end the annoyance, to rush to Byleth and kill him. Struggling to maintain a calm mind, Konig continued on, trying to ignore the mockery, until he finally reached the end of the hall – after what seemed to be hours.

“You’ve finally come, Blasphemer. Your slow, but that’s expected from materials.” Byleth welcomed Konig in an insidious voice as Konig viewed the room. Lit by ceremonial means with various insectoid designs – a common room for a chamber designed for sacrifices to the dark god. “You like this room? I would hope so; it will be your burial chamber.”

“Interesting, I was thinking the same thing for you, Byleth. You’ve caused enough trouble for me, go join your master in the Bone Pits. Griff, der, Schatten.” As Konig chanted his spell, Byleth gripped a scythe near and used the back blade to stab his own arm.

As blood dripped down, a large hand emerged from Byleth’s shadow, grabbing him as a loud ‘clank’ sounded through the now quiet room. “Heh, this is all? A hand? Pathetic Blasphemer. Trasferimento di vita.” As Byleth chanted his spell, the hand tightened its grip until it couldn’t tighten it anymore.

“Wha- Gah, my… body. Byleth, what did you do…” Konig gasped for air as he realized, even though the hand is clenched, it did not crush Byleth’s body, but instead his own body was crushed.

“KWAHAHAHA! Did you really think you could kill me that easily? You give to little credit, Blasphemer.” Byleth simply walked out of the hand, as it truly was what the name implied – a shadow. Byleth picked up his scythe once more, “It’s much more enjoyable not just to torture another, but to make them torture themselves. Don’t you think?” Gripping Konig by his hair, Byleth swung the scythe straight into Konig’s right leg. “Should be careful what a Blood Mage does with his own blood, Blasphemer.”

“Damn… you.” Konig tried to speak, still unable to breathe properly – despite him able to heal quickly. Gripping Byleth’s throat. “You fail… to see… I cannot be killed. We can keep at this… until you run out of blood.” Grinning, Konig crushed Byleth’s throat, but instantly clutched his own.

Pain… This is something I hardly feel anymore. Usually, Konig enjoys the feeling, but this time, he hated it. I wonder if those he had killed felt the same pain, the same strength, the same power, no… I don’t have time for thinking about such things. I need to figure out how Byleth’s magic works.

****
“You really do have a lot in you, Blasphemer. You must have lasted for a few hours, even a lich should have passed out from the pain already.” Byleth huffed out. The long battle must be making him run low on energy.

“Sooner or later, Byleth, you will die. We both know you can’t kill me. Unless you decide to bore me to death.” Konig retorted at his foe’s compliment. “Where is Desmina? Watching over Asbeel’s soul shouldn’t take this long.”

“Don’t worry about your woman, Blasphemer, or perhaps you should. My remaining minions are sending her to Dhuum now. Kwhahaha!” Byleth once more charged at Konig with his scythe, hoping that telling him of Desmina’s situation will open a guard. But Konig countered his attack by flipping Byleth over his back, taking a chance to steal Byleth’s scythe.

“I think I have figured out your spell. Not that it matters since you seem exhausted.” Konig said as he turned to face the necromonger on his back. “As you said before, one needs to be careful about what a ‘blood mage does with his own blood,’ but you left one part out didn’t you. That is, be careful what a blood mage does with anyone’s blood. You started your spell with your own blood, then used mine for the rest until now.”

“Kwahaha, you’re a smart lich, but you’re not quite right. I need my blood, but adding yours to the spell just strengthens it!” Byleth corrected Konig, pulling out a hidden curved and jagged blade as he rushed Konig. “I’m going to take your soul this time!”

Konig reacted too fast for Byleth, dodging his initial thrust then swinging the scythe and stabbing Byleth’s heart. As Konig fell to the ground grabbing the chest that was ripped open, Byleth stumbled forward and fell to his knees. “Damn it… You, got lucky, Blasphemer.”

Blackness encroached on Konig. Exhaustion finally catching up to him, his last sight is a pool of blood from the still necromonger. I guess… his spell… doesn’t work… without blood in his body… Heh.

Anime Divine

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Nov 2007

W/

nice story
cant wait for the rest

Tender Wolf

Tender Wolf

Banned

Join Date: Jul 2007

All over Tyria, Cantha, & Elona

The Eternal Night Vanguard [TEN]

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Awesome once again Konig! I should start writing my story again. *thinks of how to put it together* hehe

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

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Join Date: Jan 2008

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Chapter Seven


“Grenth! Grenth! Vizier Grenth!” A young girl called out for an old man at his desk.

“Oh? Why hello Hala. Why are you here? Shouldn’t you be playing with the other children?” The Vizier of Orr said as he welcomed the princess.

“Grenth, teach me how to be a monk!” Hala said as politely as she knew how to.

“Oh ho ho, Hala, you know that only those favored by the gods can use magic. Not even I can use magic, so why do you ask me?” Grenth responded as he put away his feather ink pen.

“Ohhhh you know everything Grenth, stop teasing me!”

“Well, I’m flattered that you think so highly of me Hala, but I don’t know magic, let alone how to teach you it. I think you should go visit Priestess Lamya, she would know more in Dwayna’s teaching.”

“But she’s out of town for a month! I can’t wait that loooong.” Hala pouted, hoping to make her vizier cave in to her wants.

“Oh ho ho, I suppose that is true. I guess this old mind can’t remember everything afterall. Now, why don’t you go play with your brother, I have a lot of work to do for your father.” Grenth then went back to writing in his scrolls.

“But Konig always gets me in trouble! And his friends tease me! It’s no fun, why can’t there be any girls in this stinky palace. Humph.” Hala pouted as she walked out of the room.

After Hala left, Grenh paused in his writing for a moment “*Sigh* Konig, stop hiding outside my window.” Grenth said to point out his eavesdropper.

“What? How did you know? I didn’t make a sound!” Konig jumped up suddenly at being found out.

“You’re just predictable, you youngin. Now go and play or something, leave me be for once.”

“Pfft, fine. Old man.” Konig said as he ran off to go train with Afzal, the Sacred Guard of Balthazar.

****
“Konig! Hey Konig! Wake up!” Desmina shouted as she gently slapped Konig’s face. “I said wake up you pathetic corpse!”

“Wha-? Desmina? Where… where are we? BYLETH! Where is Byleth?” Konig jumped out of a bed searching the too bright area.

“Calm down Konig. Byleth is dead, you killed him, but he did a good number on you. When I finally got to you, you were unconscious. We’re at the Temple of Grenth.”

“How much time has passed? How did we get here?” Konig, confused, tried to focus his mind back to the present.

“You’ve been out for 3 days with that scythe clutched in your hands – you know, you have a very hard grip, three students at once couldn’t even get you to let go of that scythe. Anyways, we just got back here, so rest up. It seems that instead of going to Grenth, Asbeel’s spirit first warned Ninian where we were and some of the students came to the cult’s hall.” Desmina got up, and started walking to the door. “I’m glad you’re alive, I was afraid you were dead.”

“I am dead.”

“Right, how silly of me. Anyways, it looks like you took a heavy beating. Even an undead needs to rest. But, you’re old enough to know what to do, so go out and wreck your body again like I know you’ll do. I think you should pay some respect to Asbeel, if it wasn’t for him, you probably would have been left for dead. I know I wouldn’t carry you.” Desmina said as she left

“Whatever.” Konig said as he laid back down. Usually he didn’t sleep, it was nice to for once, and to remember his childhood. Something very rare indeed. Unable to go back to sleep and becoming bored, Konig decided it was time to go and visit Grenth now that he didn’t have anything to do for a while.

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

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Join Date: Jan 2008

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New flash! I have finally gotten around to writing some more of this story out today. Though not much. I hope to finish the next chapter (finally) this week, but I'd want 2 chapters written out before posting, so I'll post the monday after chapter nine is done and post weekly from there.

Ciao!

Unendingfear

Unendingfear

Academy Page

Join Date: Mar 2009

D O M I N I O N [WARS]

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Awesome story! =D I really like it =)

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

Ooo, pretty flower

Join Date: Jan 2008

Citadel of the Decayed

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Just a note: I am very busy, but I intend to get back to writing full time (sort of) starting November (latest December!), I got two chapters done, so next one I'll update at the beginning of November - unless I get free time and write another chapter. Anyways - Enjoy!

Chapter Eight

204 AA


“It’s too windy…” A silhouette of a man whispered to himself as he took a sip of his imported Dwarven Ale. “This ‘vacation’ isn’t as good as I thought it would be…” Zasalamel Rofocale, a jack-of-all-trades freelancer, watched the docks from his boat.

“I don’t get it, why are all six gods in Arah? Usually only three of them reside here.” Zasalamel overheard a silhouette of a man ask another silhouette as the walked along.

“I don’t know. From what I hear, not even their most favored beings even know. But rumor says that they are having a debate regarding that outcasted Doric.” Said the other silhouette.

“You mean Konig? I hope they get rid of him. Filthy undead and a shame to King Doric he is! He gave up his name and his life to be a follower of Dhu-“

“Shh! You know Grenth doesn’t like his predecessor’s name being said. You’ll be punished for saying it.”

“Bah! Grenth was just a man who served under the Dorics. He gained too much for him, how could he be named successor?”

“Would you prefer the undead guy to be where Grenth is? There were few well known Necromancers before he was to fall, besides, I’d rather have someone as levelheaded as Grenth to be my judge then some sadist...” the two walked out of hearing distance of Zasalamel.

A conference on an undead? What’s the deal with this “Konig” fellow anyways? Sounds like finding out would make this “vacation” a whole lot more fun!

“Hey! Margonite! Do you have papers to dock here? Margonites usually dock at the port near the Crystal Sea, nor here.” A lean and well armored centaur strode up to Zasalamel’s ship.

“Does it matter? Who are you to tell me what to do?” Zasalamel sneered as he shuffled through some papers “I got the documents, but unless you have authority, I won’t show you.”

“Don’t you take that tone with me, margonite. My name is Afzal, and I’m the Sacred Guard of Balthazar since you want to know if I have ‘authority.’” Afzal yelled at Zasalamel as Zasalamel found the documents.

“Balthazar favoring a centaur? Not surprising, I guess. Anyways, here.” Zasalamel shoved the documents into the centaur’s chest. “Say… I’m sure you’d know. I heard rumors of the gods me-“
“Rumors are rumors. Your documents check out for a week’s docking. Little long for a sea-lover, isn’t it?” Afzal handed Zasalamel back the documents and turned around to leave.

“A meeting about an undead, as I was saying. What is so special about this undead, if he’s a problem just kill him.”

“That is the problem with Konig. No one can kill him. He’s an abomination made by the former God of Death and now serves Grenth, but he and Balthazar are the only ones who don’t want to entomb him, since he’s been behaving. That is what the conference is said to be about. But not even I know.”
****“He’s my follower; I should get the right to choose what happens to him!” A loud, deep and old voice bellowed throughout a large chamber fit to hold a dozen giants.

“This isn’t a case of which one of us he follows, Grenth. He was created by Dhuum’s power. We agreed, yourself included even, to not let any of his magic remain in Tyria – to isolate it like we’ve done before. It’s our rule about past gods: Until their magic and creations becomes indistinguishable from others, those things which a previous god created are to be isolated from the universe. This is the best way to prevent a usurping and having mortals try to take the Godpower for themselves!” A demanding female voice rose, just as loud as the God of Death’s was second before. “This is how it’s always been done since I became a god; this is how it will always be. Or do you wish to be killed by greedy mortals who will lead not only this world, but all others into chaos?”

“But Konig has been removing the followers and belongings of Dhuum. We can change his past, just as we will Dhuum’s. It will work out the same!” Grenth said, trying to find compensation for his favorite follower. “I don’t see why we have to send him to the Bone Pits just because he was influenced by Dhuum like so many others.”

“Grenth, he won’t be going to the Bone Pits like the weaker creations of Dhuum…” A shadowy figure spoke for the first time during the meeting.

“What do you mean, where else would he go? The Bone Pits were made into the worst place for souls to be sent to since Dhuum’s fall.” The God of Death questioned Abaddon, who always stayed in the shadows as of late.

“A portion of my realm was decided to house those ‘tainted’ by Dhuum. I’m sure you’re very well aware of the darker side of knowledge. Most knowledge leads to insanity; some shows the fears of beings, and there’s the torment of pain and anguish, while others are indeed good – such as how to help others. But everyone should know that knowledge leads to giving into one’s own desires and may go insane. It is because of this that part of my realm has been decided to become a prison. Specifically, the Depths of Madness – the home of knowledge which leads the quickest to insanity. Don’t worry though; it’ll still be connected to your realm, specifically through the Bone Pits, as I believe they are called.” Abaddon added the last bit with a bit of humor, pretending not to be sure on something.

“But what did Konig do to deserve this? Well!? He made a deal with Dhuum in a desire of power. Desmina made a deal with me for power. What’s the difference? Just Dhuum’s method – which is why he was replaced, but all that wasn’t Konig’s fault, his ignorance, sure, but not his fault.” Grenth said, as he started playing with his skull mask in front of him, a sign of nervousness.

“I must take Grenth’s side on this.” A bulk figure said, putting a giant sword aside at last. “Konig’s fault is only in his desire of power. Desire of power is not always a villainous act. Many of those whose actions are considered heroics throughout the histories could only have been possible through gaining power. Now, that’s not to say this Konig shouldn’t go unpunished, but he shouldn’t be dealt in the same manner as others of Dhuum. If we punish him so unjustly, we’d be no better than Dhuum!”

There was a long eerie silence gathering around the gods at those final words.

Arcole

Arcole

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Feb 2008

The other side of the rainbow

Medieval Knights of Darkness [MKOD]

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This is great! thanks for continuing the story; it's a very interesting read.

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

Ooo, pretty flower

Join Date: Jan 2008

Citadel of the Decayed

The Archivists' Sanctum [Lore]

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Because I'm slow and some recent developments among my family (grandma died and my mom's brothers and sisters are practically at each others throats for the inheritance), I haven't finished Chapter 10 yet (for some reason I'm finding it very hard...). I was hoping to be writing Chapter 13 at least by now but meh... Anyways! Chapter 9 for your viewing pleasure.

Chapter Nine

Zasalamel continued searching for the conference of the gods. Soon, he found himself in a corridor with deem torches poorly lighting the way. All signs pointed to leave, or that this wasn’t the area in which the gods were. But he could tell. Zasalamel didn’t know why, he just knew, and he continued down.

Soft voices grew louder, and louder, as Zasalamel moved on down the corridor, walking slowly and silently. Soon, he found his pace quicken, as if the gods were calling on him to move faster. He couldn’t stop, and was now able to make out the voices.

“If we punish him so unjustly, we’d be no better than Dhuum!” A large echoing voice finished as Zasalamel was finally able to stop at a giant doorway. Peering into the room, he saw six large figures, each distinct from the others, it had to be the gods themselves! Zasalamel – the first mortal to view all six gods at once – was able to hide his presence from them.

A female with wings and a tree-like body began gesturing. “Then how about putting him into service to the gods? Not just Grenth, but all of us, until we see it fit. And perhaps weaken him a bit as well.”

“We cannot just strip him of his power though, Konig would surely rebel against us if we tried to do that, and with his power, he could easily wreck havoc across Tyria before we catch him!” The figure with the skull said in protest to Melandru’s idea.

“If we cannot make him weaker, then why not make everyone else stronger?” The dark shadowy figure who must be Abaddon spoke.

“Stronger? What do you mean Abaddon, explain yourself.” A bright figures with folded wings demanded.

This is very interesting… I bet anyone would sell their souls to be where I am now. I wonder what money I could get for this information.

“A simple idea, really, but even the worst beings which magic has been given too haven’t been that hard to handle when fighting others with magic. So why not give magic more… spread out? Give magic to everyone, those who would do evil, would be countered by those who would do good, keeping a balance there, and in the mean time make Konig weaker, without actually weakening him.” Abaddon said as the other gods thought about his idea.

“Very well, however, we cannot make them as strong as Konig. Except for this one…” Dwayna said as she gestured her hand towards the door where Zasalamel was.

Zasalamel was lifted into the air and flung forward. “Woooaah!” Picking himself up, the realization hit him, not once was he able to hide from the gods.

“Did you enjoy listening in, Zasalamel Rofocale?” Dwayna said, smiling at his dumbfounded look. “You’ll be our little warrior to keep Konig in check for now on.”
****
“Another dark corridor… How annoying.” The dark hooded figure, Zasalamel, continued walking down to the depths of the dungeons in the Catacombs. “Why was he put all the way down here?”

“The gods’ orders. ‘Put him in the furthest place from society, guards.’ That’s what they said.” A darkly cloaked guard said as he moved in front of the newest so called prophet of the gods. A bloody Margonite gets chosen to be the gods’ strongest warrior just because he was an eavesdropper. How pathetic.

Zasalamel and his three escorts continued moving, deeper into the catacombs underneath Arah. The further they went, the less the structures look Orrian. Soon, they were walking in stone caverns which had no distinctness to the structures except unusual pillars. The engravings and serpents around the pillars with their gems for eyes made the dungeon all the more creepier when the torch light passed over them.

“We’re almost there sir.” The guard to Zasalamel’s left said as he looked around. “This place always gives me the creeps… I sometimes feel like there’s some ancient being wanting to swallow me whole down here…”

“That’s just an urban legend, quit peeing your pants over nothing.” The guard in front pushed through a door on the side, “We’re here. Hey! Monster! Looks like you’re in luck.”

“I told you, if you ever called me monster, I’d kill you.” A dark, bound, figure spoke in a rash voice, “I take it I’m finally free after all this time? Good, now I can kill you basta-“

“Not quite, Konig.” Zasalamel took his new scythe – which Konig stole from Byleth – and cut the lich’s bindings apart. “I’ve been put in charge of making sure you don’t get out of hand. You’re released on two conditions – I stay with you, and you serve the gods till they deem your service enough and you are let go.”

Konig stood up and stretched his arms and legs, staring Zasalamel in the eyes the whole time. “I guess I don’t have much say in the matter. As long as I don’t have to go kissing babies for charity, I can survive I suppose.”

“Good, then let’s go.” Zasalamel turned to head out, stopping when he heard some mumbling. Seconds later, his three guards were scattered across the room, blood covering the walls, floor, and even the ceiling.

“You’re lucky that you stopped, that spell targets moving creatures in my eyesight only. Word of advice, even if I am forced to serve the gods, I will not subject myself to a weaker being. Every chance I get, I will try to kill yo-“ Konig ended abrubtly as his throat was cut and a hole appeared in his chest.

“Weaker? All six gods blessed me and granted their own magic to me. I am far stronger than you. Now that you cannot talk, let’s go find a cleric to heal that hole of yours. Although I do think it looks good on you.” Zasalamel walked away as Konig tried to shout, but found no sound coming out.

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

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Join Date: Jan 2008

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I meant to put this up last week, but missed it. I'm currently working on chapter 11, should have it done for next week. If not, I think I'll just update monthly instead of weekly. I got up to chapter 19 planned out in events, and just need to write it out. Figure this will finish up by chapter 23-ish.

Chapter Ten

A broad and tall man pushes his small boat off of the shore into the sparkling Crystal Sea. He rowed as fast as he could, not bothering to enjoy the view as many do. Those blasted serpents accuse him and his now-dead crew of slaughtering some of their highest order. Jadoth rowed on for countless days into the Crystal Sea until he came upon a small oasis of an island. Hiding his boat, he waited for days, fearing when the Forgotten will find him.

Over a month and a half have passed since Jadoth fled to his little sanctuary of an island, no Forgotten has appeared, no life at all has passed aside from the occasional school of fish or turtle. The wait… not knowing if it is safe to leave… all of it was unbearable, driving Jadoth insane – Is it safe to go out? Are they still after me? If I leave, can I escape from them? Will they find me if I stay?

Jadoth laid down as the sun set, he eases his mind from the questions and worries and drifts off to sleep. For once in a long while, he has a calm and peaceful rest.



Laughter and singing filled the tavern of the city of Amnoon. Tankards of ale were picked up full and placed down empty as Jadoth laughed and enjoyed the evening with his crew, the crew listened to the first mate as he bragged about their captain’s exploits – how courageous it was for Jadoth to dive into the sea and fight with the sea monster, and how he was able to out swim the boat – all of which were exaggerated more and more as they were told.

The doors of the tavern suddenly burst open and the laughter silence almost instantly as the upright serpents slithered in and surrounded the crew. “We have found you at lassst. You should have known that you wouldn’t get away with your crimesss!”

“Crimes? What crimes are you talking about! We’ve done nothing wrong!” One of the crewmen shouted, and in response a serpent brought a blade through his chest.

“How dare you! If my men did anything wrong, I shall be the one to take responsibility! Tell me the crimes and keep your own men under control, snake!” Jadoth stood in fury as his crewman’s last breath wisped out of his body.

“The crime of your band of criminals was the slaughter of our elders! And all of you were seen at the scene of the crime!” The leader of the serpents stated as he gave a signal Jadoth barely noticed.

“Move men!” Jadoth gave the order as he drew his spear, his favorite of all weapons, and put it to the throat of the serpents’ leader. His men scattered as blades of all kinds were placed at where they were seconds before. “We did no such thing, we have been either on the dock or in this tavern all day celebrating yesterday’s successful run.”

Chaos erupted in the tavern and blood was spilt – human and serpent alike.



A jolt was sent through Jadoth’s body as he woke from the beloved dream turned nightmare. Walking to the coast to wash up, Jadoth peered into the seemingly endless waves and froze in horror at the sight he saw upon the waves: a fleet of warships of the Forgotten heading towards the island.

Falling to his knees, Jadoth wept in sorrow that they have found him at last. Knowing it was his last hope, he prayed to the god of water for salvation.
****
Deciding to take his time on his way to his destination, Abaddon slowly floated along the sparkling waters of the Crystal Sea. Nearing his destination, Abaddon started to hear a whisper, a prayer to him, floating along the waves.

~Abaddon! Lord of the Everlasting Depths, Keeper of Secrets, open mine eyes and bestow upon me the knowledge of the Abyss that I might smite mine enemies and send them to the watery depths!~

Abaddon sighed and paused, seeking who it was that wished for his gift of power. In an instant, he knew of the suffering Jadoth went through, and he set out to the island at a great speed, splitting the water behind his path.

As he arrives, the ships are nearing the island. Pausing for a brief moment, Abaddon swirled his hands as he spoke. “Torcendo le acque, il fuoco di caduta, inghiotte queste navi nel dolore…”

With his final words, he watched as his magic worked.
****Jadoth sat there, watching in fear as the ships approached closer and closer. Loud clashing waves woke him from his trance of terror. He looked around for the source, of the harsh water but didn’t find anything around him which would cause such waves, and surely the sound couldn’t come from the other side of the island.

Shaking his head, Jadoth stood as he saw water pass his feet from the other side of the island. He turned around and saw the entire ground soaking from the water that just passed him. Hearing shouts, he turned once more and saw whirlpools forming all around the Forgotten ships, the sky darkened and the stars grew brighter until they fell from the sky. Forgotten after Forgotten fell from the ship, ships caught on fire and turned over from the clashing waves. Abaddon had answered his prayers.

Jadoth fell back to his knees and thanked his god. As he did so, Abaddon came to stand next to him – shrinking his size to be that of a large human.

“Jadoth, stand, and follow me.” Abaddon said to his new personal follower. “Follow me and you shall gain more power than you could believe.”

“My lord, Abaddon, I desire no power, only salvation, and you have my eternal gratitude. Tell me where to go, and I shall listen.”

“I think I’ll like having you around, Jadoth. Come, I have a task to be done, and you shall help.” Abaddon lifted his left hand and the sand beneath Jadoth cleared as power coursed through him “This is enough power for now, you’ll be able to keep up with me like this.”

“Where are we going, Lord Abaddon?” Jadoth wondered as he followed Abaddon above the waves.

“To the Temple of the Six Gods, where the Heaven’s Gate lie.”

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

Ooo, pretty flower

Join Date: Jan 2008

Citadel of the Decayed

The Archivists' Sanctum [Lore]

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Here you go, enjoy those who still read but never comment. Despite my busy life, I might be able to hasten my writing of this to once every two weeks, instead of once a month.

Chapter Eleven

“A month ago, Abaddon had done his job. He gave out magic to the races, it took time for the races to realize they had this new power, and I doubt all do even now. At first, magic was used to heal the sick and strengthen defenses. Only peaceful means were known, and six schools of the gods have been formed or expanded. Sadly, many wars have broken out since that revelation was made.” A man in a hood said to himself, not caring for those who heard him.

“’Sadly?’ What is so sad about death? It’s just a part of life.” The dark figure in a cloak said as he grabbed a cup of ale to drink.

“If death is a part of life, why are you so afraid of it you sold your soul to Dhuum to prevent it?” The first hooded man asked his companion.

“I never asked for the prevention of death. But that doesn’t matter right now, why did we have to come back to Orr anyways? You know I hate this place.” Konig said as he pulled the cloak back over his exposed arm.

“The events have surely put the gods in a bind. Abaddon has fled to the Crystal Sea after his two acts. Ironic though, that the Crystal Sea is now filled with crystals. Anyways, the gods are sure to need our help. They may be gods, but they are only five.”

“I’d rather wait for them to summon us. I hate that place.” Konig eyed those who passed by the two with lifeless eyes. “Besides, I still don’t feel like I’m at my best yet. Over two decades of doing nothing and you guys expect me to move around like nothing happened.”

A bunch of people who looked like mercenaries stepped out of a nearby tavern as Zasalamel scrapped some animal feces off of his shoes. “The caravan heading to Arah should arrive any moment. I’m going to look around for it, try to stay out of trouble, will you?”

“Can’t promise anything. Have fun.” Konig said as Zasalamel got up and moved toward where the caravan was said to meet the two.

“Are you the one called Konig Des Todes?” One of the men from the tavern had snuck up on Konig while he wasn’t paying attention.

“Depends on why you want to know.” Konig replied without even glancing and started muttering under his breath.

“That means you are!” The man quickly whipped out a dagger and lunged toward Konig. The blade snapped in half as Konig stopped muttering and the man jumped back to the rest of his group.

The tallest man muttered a few words, the ground and walls around Konig began icing over then the ice reached out for Konig, ensnaring his arms and legs instantly.

“An ice prison? Is this really all you have?”

Like on queue, the shortest man softly spoke as Konig finished his question “Indistino Colpo.” His fingertips seemed to extend in the darkness until they reached the light and a shadowy skeletal hand became visible. The shade shot towards Konig and pierces his chest with all ten fingers.

“Bored now… Let me show you how it is done: Geistlich Angst.” Silence rang through the street as the group of men just stared at each other and shrugged. A thud echoed through the silent street, then another and another, until every man fell down, all that remained was the shouts of agony only heard by a select few. “That was fun while it lasted.”

“I thought I said not to get into trouble…” Zasalamel said as he returned. “The caravan is just around the bend over there, let’s go.

“Do you think I asked to be frozen? Actually, I think I would rather be frozen than going back to Arah… Do you think resurrecting these guys to kill them would be mean?” A corpse rocked back and forth as Konig gently kicked it, pondering ways to remove his boredom.

“Not going to answer, just come on.” Zasalamel grabbed Konig’s cloak and started to drag him to the caravan.
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“To think that we had to meet here again already,” the twins that make up Lyssa was saying, finishing each other’s sentence, “things have become turbulent as of late, hasn’t it?”

“I wonder why it is that beings wish to create constant conflicts with each other; it makes no sense, why can’t creatures exist in peace?” The feathered woman was fighting back the threat of tears while thinking of the various conflicts that have sprouted up in the past month.

“Ahahaha! Good one Dwayna, peace among races with different views of life. Think about it, if there are disagreements in belief then there will be arguments, and eventually arguments will become conflicts through extremists. War is an aspect of life, why do you think I govern it? Because it is inevitable!” Flames were attempting to engulf Balthazar as he began laughing in the gods’ conference room.

“Unnecessary death doesn’t have to be inevitable, and it pains me to see such suffering. I wonder if you’re lacking in emotions in more than your private life.”

“Enough you two!” Silence rang through the room, waiting for Grenth to continue. “We need to figure out the best way to fix this conflict. I think it is obvious to all of us that Abaddon was too carefree in giving out magic to the races. The power average beings now have is on par to that which Konig and Zasalamel were given, this cannot go on.”

“Yes, yes, we got that. We must do something, but what?” Balthazar was saying as he showed his annoyance of the topic as he frowned.

The nature goddess “Even for the five of us, settling the conflicts that are appearing across the world will be tough.”

“Tough or not, we need to do something. I suggest we split up – one of us in an area with followers should be enough to calm things down. From what we know, the worst conflicts are in southern Cantha and eastern Elona. Who’ll go there?”

Grenth quickly made sure he was the one to go to Cantha, leaving Lyssa with Elona.

“Then it’s settled. Get going.” Dwayna’s voice echoed in the hall as the two gods left from the meeting.
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Sitting like a large lump of dirt, the god of secrets stared into the sea of his domain on Tyria. Worrying about his god, Jadoth is walking up to Abaddon to confront him for the first time in the past month.

“My lord, is something wrong?” The lean man asks while walking up to Abaddon.

“It’s wrong… I was wrong… My calculations were perfect, I put in every variable perfectly… but it didn’t turn out right…” Sighing, Abaddon stood and walked away. “They’ll surely come after me for this… What went wrong…”

“Nothing went wrong~ It went just as I told you it would, Abaddon~” A bellowing and dry voice spoke coming out of no where.

Startled, Abaddon began searching for the owner’s location. “You didn’t say that the wars would be so great. We both knew that the conflicts would rise, but they should have stopped!”

“Humans are said to be the only greedy race… in truth, any race that doesn’t want to welcome me is greedy~”

Confused and still startled, Jadoth went up to his god while searching continuously for the voices’ source. “My lord, who is this foul voi-“

“SILENCE! Do not tempt me to kill you, being Abaddon’s favorite doesn’t mean you’re free of my wrath~”

“You don’t need to know for now, Jadoth… But what to do now…”

“It’s simple… build an army~ Those Margonites follow you, use them, turn them into stronger soldiers~ You’ll need all the help you can use, so bless them!~”

“Jadoth…” Abaddon, turning to Jadoth, ordered him to gather as many as would come under him.

“I understand my lord; I shall gather my brethren… though I don’t trust this… thing.” Jadoth left jolting, keeping an eye out for the bodiless voice.

“I don’t understand why you never wanted your own following before~”

“Never needed any and they seemed like a hassle, but can I count on you to join me if a battle is inevitable?”

“Of course, anything for revenge and regaining my rightful place~”

“Good to know… Dhuum”

Konig Des Todes

Konig Des Todes

Ooo, pretty flower

Join Date: Jan 2008

Citadel of the Decayed

The Archivists' Sanctum [Lore]

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Apologies to those who read this tale of death and mayhem for not updating at the beginning of this month (I'm not very reliable on this thing's deadlines am I?)

Since February I have been contemplating rewriting this from the beginning as I have a lot of new ideas for the story - both in the beginning, middle, and later on - and along with that reformatting - as such, along with having a rather busy life right now, I have not gotten the time to continue writing (or much certainty if I should continue until I figured out what I was doing).

However, I, now, have figured out what to do. I have begun rewriting, and have gotten a whole chapter (in one day, rather surprising to myself considering my time restraints! o.o). I am unsure whether I want to release the rewrite in sections or to release it all at once. Perhaps some feedback will help me convince myself of which.

Anyways, just a little outline of what I'm rewriting:
I'm changing a few things here and there throughout the entire thing. I'm editing the writing style (I am hating the earlier chapters). I rewrote the prologue into something much better. I have taken chapter 1 and split it into two chapters, expanding upon Konig's life before fleeing - though only one chapter focuses on that.
  • Chapter 2 and 3 will just get minor reworks, I may add in a new chapter for the then chapter 5 (which will take place between the now chapters 3 and 4) of Desmina and Konig meeting - not sure on this yet. I'll expand a bit more into Asbel, Byleth, Grenth, and Desmina (they got so little spotlight!). I might be reworking Grenth's personality as a whole - originally I wanted to make him out as a senile genius, but I don't think I hit that, but I got a slightly different idea of what to make of him now. That's all I can share without saying what I intend to change of the unreleased written and unwritten parts from the original idea. Though I will say that I am changing the overall arcing plot of Konig's story - there are a total of five "books" and the plot I have in mind reaches throughout all five, especially the fourth. Before the plot was just some lich who witnessed and at times had devastating effects on things - whether be on purpose of accident. Though that remains, more or less, I've changed it to focus around <spoiler alert will not tell>.

    Maybe as a fun read I'll release later on what I wanted to make out of all my characters, and what I turned them into - along with how I explain certain things which may clash, or seem to clash, with known lore - as being a lore lover, I hate going against lore, but my rewrite won't be at all (kinda).
  • hawk3y3

    hawk3y3

    Frost Gate Guardian

    Join Date: Aug 2005

    Droknar's Forge!

    -No current guild.-

    Mo/

    Good to see that your still hanging in their König.

    At any rate, change can be good. It seems you are putting a lot of effort into this. I applaud you.

    Just goes to show there is someone even more dedicated than me on this forum channel.

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    Edit!: That's saying a whole lot, coming from me. >_>

    Konig Des Todes

    Konig Des Todes

    Ooo, pretty flower

    Join Date: Jan 2008

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    If there's one thing about me that's absolute: I hate unfinished projects. If I start something I want it done. Which is why I'm having so much time issues, with GW-related projects alone, I have fixing up the lore in the official GW1 Wiki, moderating both gurus, writing this fan-fiction, working on my last two GW videos, about 7 more titles on my sin and a lot more on other characters, the Test Krewe stuff, keeping the official GW2 wiki up to date and accurate, and the next (and last, for me) MantleCon coming up next month.

    And then there's a lot of non-GW things as well... x.x Primarily classes, other free writing, and reading.

    I know rewriting this will make it longer, but I'd rather have it at a good level than just continuing with something half-assed. Also, rewriting it has been going much faster than how long the previous chapters took to write, so I hope that rewriting it will make the whole thing move along faster.

    hawk3y3

    hawk3y3

    Frost Gate Guardian

    Join Date: Aug 2005

    Droknar's Forge!

    -No current guild.-

    Mo/

    Looks like you are keeping busy then. Now that I think about it though, I never have completed a free writing project. Either I lose contact with people or I just lose interest in what I am writing. Usually other things get in the way. Currently, it is two PSX RPGs (Legend of the Dragoon and Wild Arms 2) that have been keeping me busy.

    Hopefully, the momentum for you (and I) continues. Weekly writings that are timed for 45 minutes tend to suck all my creativity out into a thesis statement

    Madruk Dhuum

    Madruk Dhuum

    Ascalonian Squire

    Join Date: Feb 2010

    D/W

    I found this to be a very enjoyable read and I can't wait to see more.

    Konig Des Todes

    Konig Des Todes

    Ooo, pretty flower

    Join Date: Jan 2008

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    The Bad: Last Thursday I lost my flash drive which had a lot of files that were not backed up. So I lost a lot of stuff - including things from the fan fiction. This means that it may be pushed back from when I wanted to start re-releasing the chapters (June 1st). But...

    The Good: I was able to find chapter 1 and half of chapter 2 (the first and last quarter of the chapter), so not all is lost. However...

    The Bad part 2: I ended up losing a majority of the revision of the prologue and the middle half of chapter 2. Thankfully,

    The Good part 2: I remember everything that I lost, and rewriting it shouldn't be too hard, I just need to make sure I write it down as well as I did last time.

    The Interesting: I have decided to create "extra chapters" which are basically chapters that do not directly tie into the story, but do hold relevance and are things I wanted to explain rather than leave up in the air. These will either be influencing or influenced by the previous or the next chapter, and the writing style may or may not change - for instance, the extra chapter may be written in first person view, or the view of a minor character, it could also be a vision, a dream, or even a letter.

    Thus far I have three of them planned: the Prologue, in between chapters 3 and 4 (thus deemed "Chapter 3.5"), and in between chapters 7 and 8 (thus deemed "Chapter 7.5").

    There is no set place for where these extras will be slipped in, but none of them are really fitting to be put in the actual story, but they are very much tied into the fan-fiction.

    The Interesting part 2 (because it needed a part 2): I have also just worked out what I want for up to chapter 17 - so while I only have more or less 2 chapters written, I have 17 chapters planned out (yay!), which is basically chapters 1-7 of the original version. Yes, I'll be adding 10 chapters, not including the "extra chapters."

    Now you'll learn the true reason why Konig was imprisoned under Arah!

    That's all for now!

    Grape Bird

    Grape Bird

    Academy Page

    Join Date: Jan 2010

    E/

    Like the whole idea of a sceenshot added to the actual story.
    Didn't have time to read each chapter, but a few small things:

    Words in all caps, and grammatical errors like having a question end in ?!?!?!, *action* , italicized words for emphasis, adding unnecessary letters to the end of words (ex. ohhhhhhh)

    All of the above are things that you, as a writer, should be able to express through either word choice or sentence structure. Also, it makes you sound like a wanna-be writer who resorts to fanfiction; and that is one thing that I hope you aren't. You have talent, kid. So show it.

    Konig Des Todes

    Konig Des Todes

    Ooo, pretty flower

    Join Date: Jan 2008

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    If you read the last few posts, you'd note that I am rewriting this (and have already removed half the things you pointed out). And when I first started writing this I was literally starting out.

    I don't see the issue of italicized or capitalized words for emphasis or "very loud" shouting (respectively). And I even see it done a lot in a variety of works. Adding unnecessary letters, when speaking, shows that the character is extending the word while speaking. Many things you pointed out shouldn't be used outside of quoting, but are not that bad for speaking.

    Konig Des Todes

    Konig Des Todes

    Ooo, pretty flower

    Join Date: Jan 2008

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    News, good news, bad news, and a question for readers:

    Firstly, news: Once I start posting again, I'll start a new thread - a fresh start.

    Secondly, good news: While I'm not where I wanted to be (which was chapter 10), I have enough written out to post by June 4th.

    However, the bad news comes in: I intended to have an artist do a couple quick works to replace the screenshots as people really enjoyed them. However, said artist lost her internet a couple days ago and will be unable to complete the work. So I won't have the intended works for June 4th and June 7th.

    Which brings us to the question: Would you, the readers, want me to wait until I can get a different artist and get the work(s) necessary, or would you prefer for me to just repost from the get-go?

    Let me know what you want.

    Tommy's

    Tommy's

    Furnace Stoker

    Join Date: Dec 2006

    [Bone]

    Mo/

    Get the art first D: Really I enjoy reading stories with pictures to it (much better then screenshots ) Brings stuff more to life. If you add them later its just a nice read and then a nice pictures. Better to bring 'm out at the same moment imo. Looking forward to it :3