Journey of a Lost Girl - The Story Behind the Lies

Storm Crow

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Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-

OOC: You may have read the bio's of Alicia Stormcrow before, but this is her TRUE story, uncut, unedited, and no lies this time. Please post your comments, and I'll continue!

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Part One - The Happy Home

"Shhh. Quiet now." A soothing voice came from above her as a calm hand was placed on her head. She looked up to a tall man with a muscular build. Although he was not training, he had let her come along on a leisurely skale-slaying afternoon. "Stay here, just watch. I don't want you getting hurt, now."

"Okay, Daddy." she said, running to behind a tree, kicking her heels up happily.

She watched as her father easily cut through the skales that were making a nuiscance around their home and garden. Her little sister wasn't yet old enough to come along, besides the fact that she was talkative, as most her age were.

After killing the Brood, her father returned, and told her to go get some water from the waterfall so Mommy could boil some potatoes for supper. She ran back to the small bridge she had helped build a few years before and gathered up a small bucket and her hat, perching it upon her head.

She was just a few minuets after her father getting home and she placed her bucket on the table, hugging her mother, and running off to play with her little sister.

She walked into her room, throwing her sunhat on her bed and going to greet her sister, her little blonde pigtails bouncing off her back.

"Licia!!" the little brunette yelled as she saw her sister. She ran up to her and jumped into her arms. Alicia laughed joyfulled as she squeezed her little sister. "It's good to see you again too, Duney." she said, rubbing her sisters back.

"C'mon Licia! I wanna show you my drawings!" she said as she was placed back on the floor. She pulled her big sister along, eager to share her creative capability. After the drawings had been shared, their mother called them out for dinner.

Some of the skale meat had been baked and potatoes boiled. Her father was the first to speak among the four.

"So Licia. Your birthday's next month, what do you want this year?"

Alicia's eyes brightened at the sund of 'birthday' and a plan emerged in her mind. "Could I get a new wand?" she asked looking back from her mother to her father.

"We might be able to do that." her mother said, swallowing a bit of skale.

"Oh, Liss, don't tell her that!" her father said. "Of course we can get you one!"

"Don't get her hopes up now Dirk. We don't know that we'll be able to get her one."

"Enough! We'll talk about it later." he spoke up, putting half a medium sized potato in his mouth.

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NOTE: This is NOT an open roleplay! This is a writing for myself and my dad ONLY. Thank You!

hawk3y3

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Hmmm, good beginning so far Stormcrow, just, A little short.

PS: I wont post. Only listen...*Disappears*

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Originally Posted by hawk3y3
Hmmm, good beginning so far Stormcrow, just, A little short.

PS: I wont post. Only listen...*Disappears* Ah! But you see, thst is only Part ONE! There shall be more! Much more to come!

chris_nin00

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Then give us this 'more' you speak of

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Then give us this 'more' you speak of Have you ever heard of 'BREAK-TIME'?? hehe ^^ more in an hour or so when my dad gets home...

hawk3y3

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Chris...its called patience...I shall wait...*Disappears*

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damn cliffhangers! lol

awaiting part 2

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Quote:
Originally Posted by Storm Crow
"Enough! We'll talk about it later." he spoke up, putting half a medium sized potato in his mouth. Maybe this is just me but that description strikes me as a little too quantitative.

chris_nin00

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R/

It's been an hour!

Symeon

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A+, but if you don't post another part soon I'm afraid it'll be an F(or some people like to say 0 MARKS).

ownage of teh elite

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Paradise =)

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12:44 AM Hawaii time...

Still waiting...

*Munches on chips*


EDIT: 12:44 PM Hawaii time...

Still waiting...

*Munches on chips*

Storm Crow

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Children of the Order [CoO] -True Heroes Fight to Keep the Balance-

The good people of Lyssa's Fiction have waited LONG ENOUGH!! I give you, Part Two!

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Part Two - The Brithday Surprise

Alicia tossed and turned in her bed, for she could not shake the nightmares. Horrible images of lion-like beasts flooded her mind, but finally, a sound reached her ears and woke her.

As she rose from her bed, the sweet smell of honey wafted through the doorway. It almost lifted her off her feet as she followed it to it's source.

The kitchen counters were lined with bags and boxes of ingredients, everything from sugar to Mary Malone's super sweet apples. She only assumed her mother was having another Season of the Phoenix baking fit, but then she remembered what the day was. Fourty-third day, Season of the Phoenix, the sweetest day in the house, and her birthday.

She quickly looked around. No sign of her mother.She snuck up to the oven and gently blew on the iron handle, nearly frosting over the old metal. She opened the door, taking in the wonderful aroma of her mother's honey infused apple cake.

As she turned from the oven, she almost fell back into the hot coals. Everyone from Ashford was there. Little Gwen and her parents, the Malone's, and even Devona, the town gaurd.

The rest of the day was filled with feasting and merrymaking, but when the party was done, and all presents unwrapped, she still wasn't happy.

"Mommy, why didn't Kerk and Rayne come? And what about Aunt San--" but she was interrupted by a loud banging on the front door.

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that's where I'll leave you. In suspense...

hawk3y3

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Mo/

...Cliffhangers...You sound kinda like...ME!...*Disappears*

PS: Mmmm Pancakes

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its...so...sad.... wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ill stop now. its good, but was i supposed to read another story before this, because it seems like im missing out on something....

Storm Crow

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nope you're not missing anything...her first few years of life were a blur, and only bits and peices stuck in her memory...

Symeon

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Damn, an interruption by a big knock on the door is always a great cliffhanger...
















































right? Oops!

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Part Three - An Old Friend Returns

Alicia went to the door and opened it a crack. After seeing the man, she whipped the door open and flung herself into his arms. Duney also ran over to greet his large stalker.

"Hey birthday girl!" The man said, squeezing his little sister a little tighter.

"Did Aunt Sandra come too?" She asked as he put her down to hug his stalker, Rayne.

A white light came from the ground and played with her hair, lifting her off the ground and tossing her about. She laughed gleefully as her aunt caught her and greeted her with a light hug.

Her mother came over and hugged her sister. "It's good to see you again, Kay." Sandra said.

Dirk also came over and shook his son's hand, whispering something to him.

"Yes I did. How could I forget?" Kerk said, turning to Alicia and handing her a small package. She looked back and forth between her big brother and the package he had given her, but finally tore off the wrapping.

A wand lay within; small, but just the right size for her hand. The glass on the end was intricately twisted into a flame-like design. The iron rods on the head were gently twisted to form a cage, in which a small enchanted flame grew when she picked it up.

She gawked at the wand for a moment, as if not believing it was real. After a while however, she accepted it's presence and fired a flare at the fireplace, making it burst into flames.

chris_nin00

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R/

You're Harry Potter!

No 'real' cliffhanger this time...
But I feel I'm still missing something

MORE MORE MORE MORE

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Paradise =)

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*Still munching on chips

Symeon

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Yeah, good but...tick tock tick tock...

And the cliffhanger wasn't as good as the last one...


















































Tick tock tick tock tick..........

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Part Four - Duney's Adventure

A few years went by, and Alicia's nightmares came true. The Charr army had waged war against the Ascalons, and all who could be, were sent to war.

Alicia was only sixteen when she was sent to the academy. She had fought horribly, not wanting to leave her little sister alone with no one to care for her. The last thing she managed to scream before they dragged her off.

"Duney!! Get to Kerk's house as fast as you can! He'll protect you! Follow the old trail through the woods, and sing the old song if you have to! Rayne will hear you when you come near and she'll come! Be brave Duney, be brave!!"

"Licia!! NO!!" Duney screamed at the Vangaurd, pounding on one's arm. "Let her go!! She can't leave me! No!!"

In her anger and tears she managed to curse and poison the men who were dragging her sister away. Although a monk they had brought with them had releived them of it, she kept screaming the incantations, over and over again.

"NOOO!!" She screamed and started to cry harder. "YOU CAN'T TAKE HER! SHE'S MY SISTER AND YOU CAN'T TAKE HER FROM ME!!"

She thought of every spell she had ever been taught and screamed them at the vangaurd.

"Duney, stop!! You can't beat them! Save your energy!" Alicia managed to yell back at her sister as she was dragged along. "Just GO!! Get to Kerk! He'll know what to do!"

Duney stood in the road crying as she watched her sister being dragged to Ascalon, fighting the entire way. After her sister was gone from view, she decided to do as she was told. She ran back to the house and rested a minuet, letting what little energy she had left rebuild. After she had done so, she started her packing.

She went to the closet and took out a salvage kit, double checking to make sure it hadn't been depleated of resources. She also reached for an identification book, rapidly flipping through it's old pages. She ran to her room, digging beneath her bed for her staff. As she pulled it out, she gently caressed the skull at the top. She also rummaged in an old box for a map, and once finding one, tucked it into a pouch on her belt.

Her supplies in hand, she took off out the door, stopping to let out her pet warthog on the way.

Storm Crow

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*..::Coming Soon To Lyssa's Fiction::..*
Part Five - The Academy's Prodigy

Part Six - Defending the Wall

Part Seven - Goodbye, Big Brother

Part Eight - The Lost Survivor ~ Alicia

Part Nine - Saved by a Stranger ~ Duney

Part Ten - Parent's Worry*..::Coming Soon to Lyssa's Fiction::..*

Symeon

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Cool

Just don't go too fast... .......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh................




































































ahhhhhh.

Storm Crow

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part five coming sooooooonn!!!

=P

Symeon

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And I'm your most loyalest loyalest loyal reader and fan! Every second waiting is like a letter being typed in my mind! I do hope it comes soon!








Old Man: Bah, stupid kids.

Storm Crow

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*..::Part Five - Currently Under Construction::..*

I have been busy lately..homework, the bid fight between me and a friend over Itachi...(*mutters, but eventually screams HE'S M~I~N~EEE!!!*) and yeah, so be sure that it should be up sometime this weekend

@King: *gives King a big check to his favorite grocery store for free peanut butter for life* *hug* =P

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Part Five - The Academy's Prodigy

Alicia fought violently as the vangaurd dragged her along the rocky path to Ascalon. Although she was nearly drained of energy, she managed to spout off one last fireball, badly burning some of the group. She continued to kick and scream through the rest of the journey, and into Ascalon.

The townspeople stared on as she was dragged up the sairs and across the bridge to the Academy. She was breathing hard as she continued to fight through the halls of the old building.

I was not until she was thrown down before the professor that she quieted. She looked up, shaking her head to the right to get the hair out of er eyes. She scowled at the professor as she righted her position on the cold stone floor.

"A fighter? Oh, well you're just wht we're looking for.." The professor's voice trailed off.

"I am an Elementalist." She said as if him calling her a fighter was an insult, standing and turning to a wall filled with weapons, scanning over the wands.

"Get me a target will you?" she said pulling a flame artifact and wand from the wall.

As she turned she started the incantation to Fire Storm, an arcane breeze lifing her off her feet. She shouted the last word of the incantation and thrust the gathered energy at the target. Balls of fire rained from the sky as the wooden target burned to the ground.

"So, where's my class?" she smirked as she played with the little flame captive in the iron cage at the head of her wand.

Symeon

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OMG THIS IS THE BEST PRESENT EVER!!!!!!!! APART FROM AN AUTOGRAPH!!!!!!! CMON PLEASSSSSSSSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[/sarcasm]
Bah, stupid kids. When will they ever learn just to read the book and not think about the author.

Storm Crow

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aiye!! part six is gonna be sooo hard from Dirk and Kay's pov...

if anyone has any suggestions on this PLEASE post them!!!

Thanx in advance!!

Saox

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R/Mo

Just read over this. Simple, but enjoyable. question though...did like...the Alice girl just change from not wanting to go to willingly hitting a target?

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Just read over this. Simple, but enjoyable. question though...did like...the Alice girl just change from not wanting to go to willingly hitting a target?
Alicia did not want to leave her sister behind, no, and fought because of this. Once she realized she would be trained and had no say in it whatsoever, though, she decided she might as well make the best of it.

ownage of teh elite

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Paradise =)

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Hello there!

This is Vantie here, doing his forum check!

GJ with the story Alicia!

Can't wait until a male enters the picture and pwnzors teh vanguard. :P

Hehehehe.

~Vantie

Saox

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R/Mo

Quote:
Originally Posted by Storm Crow
Alicia did not want to leave her sister behind, no, and fought because of this. Once she realized she would be trained and had no say in it whatsoever, though, she decided she might as well make the best of it. Ah, ok. Thank you for clearing that up. Maybe you should try and include parts like that in the text though, giving the reader some insight into the characters head. Either way, this is an enjoyable fanfic, Keep at it.

Storm Crow

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Ah, ok. Thank you for clearing that up. Maybe you should try and include parts like that in the text though, giving the reader some insight into the characters head. Either way, this is an enjoyable fanfic, Keep at it. thanks! ^^

ownage of teh elite

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WHO is that new GUY in your AVATAR eh?

I demmand to have an answer!

Storm Crow

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WHO is that new GUY in your AVATAR eh?

I demmand to have an answer!

it's Sasuke-koi!!


oh how I love you, Sasuke-koi! *hugs*


idn't he CUTE?!? ^^ and Sakura can't have him, she CAN'T, I say, SHE CAN'T!!!







<3 to Sasuke-koi...*hug*

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Stupid cat boy.

Storm Crow

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he's not stupid! he's hotness!! and his Sharingan kicks ass!

here's a piccy of him in his *ahem* normal form, un chibi-fied and ah, what the hell, what I changed it to to make it look even cooler:



*drools*

Come ON!! he's RED ENGINE GORED ENGINE GORED ENGINE GORED ENGINE GOing hot!! (I loves my Sasuke-koi!!)

AND for a boy of 13, he can crush a rock with his bare hand...lets see you try that, Tropicana.

Goats17

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House Zu Heltzer, laughing at them.

The [GEAR] Trick

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wow storm. I've read your other stuff on some RP's. Your really good. Can't wait for the next few parts.

Saox

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R/Mo

Did this turn from a fanfic to pointless spam? hmmmm....