Is this a good PvE Dervish Build?

i take [wounding strike] over any of the avatars. i'd just stick to some sycthe attacking skills and a few enchants to power them
basically i do [wounding strike] along with any other attack skills i fell like such as:
[eremite's attack][crippling sweep][chilling victory] and i always take [attacker's insight]

other people may have ones that work better but i like my build quite a bit
although, you need factions for it
[for great justice!][aura of holy might][attacker's insight][wounding strike][crippling sweep][chilling victory][save yourselves!][eternal aura] aura is for just an all purpose aoe

if you dont have factions, you can go /e and use [grasping earth] as a snare and then [rending sweep] right after it.

aura of holy might=FTW

okay so I have considered all of your advice and I will take out the [Balthazar's Rage], [Zealous Renewal], and [Watchful Intervention] I will add in [Pious Assault], [Eremite's Attack], and [Crippling Sweep].

Would that work out better?

The thing I found out about my original skill list was it was very useful when I became blind or weakened

Crippling Sweep is not as useful in PvE as you might think, especially since you have a speed boost through Avatar of Balthazar anyway. I would suggest considering [[Attacker's Insight], [[Bull's Strike] or [[Victorious Sweep] as replacement skills.

If conditions are a concern just ensure your Necro heroes have [[Foul Feast], or your Monks have an alternative decent method of condition removal (such as [[Mend Condition]).

okay this is what I have now on my Dervish

[Chilling Victory] [Pious Assault] [Eremite's Attack] [Heart of Holy Flame] [Eternal Aura] [Victorious Sweep] [Avatar of Lyssa] [Faithful Intervention]

Now Im dirt poor

I usually use this build..no self heals but only mysticism, but a LOT!!! of damage ^^

[Wounding strike high DPS;OgmjYmpMbSAYXgMXzkibjevlCAA]

[Avatar of Balthazar] is generally considered the least helpful of all avatars. +40 armor is the only really helpful thing on it and you can get that through other skills without sacrificing your elite.

As for scythe attacks, [Mystic Sweep], [Eremite's Attack], [Victorious Sweep] and [Wild Blow] are generally considered the most powerful non-elite attacks for your scythe. [Chilling Victory] is ok, but it costs a lot and the area damage is cold damage which doesn't do as much damage as you'd think in Hard Mode. Also, at least two attack skills (usually 3) is a good idea, especially if your only attack skill has a 10 second recharge.

You also want increased attack speed and [Heart of Fury] is good and only has a few seconds downtime if you use a +20% enchant modifier on your scythe. Some people prefer [Drunken Master] because it lasts longer and also makes you run faster. The increased attack speed is considerably less though.

The avatar-based dervish bar usually looks like this:
[Mystic Sweep][optional][Heart of Fury][Aura of Holy Might][optional][optional][optional][Eternal Aura]
With an attack in the first optional (usually Eremite's Attack) and an Avatar in the second. The optional 2 skills can be anything you like. You still have a PvE skill open and you can still choose a secondary profession. Another scythe attack like [Victorious Sweep], something to heal like [Mystic Vigor] or [Mystic Regeneration], or some PvE skills to boost damage like ["I Am The Strongest!"] or [Asuran Scan] are a few choices, but depending on which Avatar you pick, there's a lot more good options here.

Don't forget to let your heros use enchantments on you. A hero using something like [Patient Spirit] on you is very beneficial because you gain extra energy and health through Mysticism. The use of energy-gaining skills is not needed if you plan your skills well.

People here seem very taken with Lyssa, Dwayna and Melandru as an avatar, but I'm a big fan of [Avatar of Grenth]. Melandru is ideal for areas with lots of conditions (especially blind) and Dwayna is good for areas with lots of annoying hexes, but IMO Grenth outperforms them in most areas.