Commission - Closed: Pery's Gallerie

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

I caught you still browsing your thread! You said you were gonna sleep! I don't know if I can trust you any longer...

But starting to look really sweet, loving the detail you've put in that curly hair. Though I would add a few strings of hair near her ears, because if you would give her a bandana now, well you probably know what I mean Also I would narrow the part of her nose thats between her eyes a bit. And omai the tongue on the wolf is looking so cute (I love animals in a non-threatening, non-sexual kind of way, to adjust some Charlieterms )

Charlie Dayman

Charlie Dayman

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Apr 2009

Trifecta Luminati [TRI]

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Your current wippie is a fun little piece. My main comment would just be on her smile. With her current expression, her smile comes off as a bit more sinister than it does playful. When most people smile, you normally see more of their upper than lower teeth. I think increasing the size of the upper teeth and reducing the bottoms would really reduce that feral grin she has.

Image related.

Perynne

Perynne

Site Contributor

Join Date: Oct 2006

Finland

Runners of the Rose [RR]

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@Tommy's: I swear I posted that like a second before I logged off Messenger last night! Please don't hit me!

Thanks for the tips. I shall narrow the nose! :3 And yeah, I'm going to add all kinds of small wispy hairs and stuff after I've finished everything else. I'm working on all the shadow/light detail on one layer, so if I add them now and have to change something later, I'll have to keep re-drawing them...

@Charlie: Ah, thanks. Didn't notice that the teeth were a little off. There was still something slightly creepy about her face, but couldn't pinpoint it exactly. I shall try changing them.

Perynne

Perynne

Site Contributor

Join Date: Oct 2006

Finland

Runners of the Rose [RR]

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Decided to put Nian's art-trade to the side for a while, so I can concentrate on getting frostkisses' commission done first, and then perhaps the Wintersday workshop drawing too. Don't worry Nian, I'll continue your drawing soon! I have a bad habit of working on several pieces at once, and taking longer at finishing them because of that.

Anyway, wip for frostkisses:


Doing it in grayscale first, then changing it to colour later. Wanted to work on the lighting more, instead of doing my usual vague lightsource, and grayscale is wonderful for working out where the shadows need to be.
Comments are very much welcome, there are some parts in it that are bothering me at the moment.

frostkisses

frostkisses

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Aug 2007

Wisconsin

Cerberus Guardians of the [GATE]

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squee!
If you wouldnt mind Pery, I might like to have a copy of your "finished" greyscale too. Always been a fan of black&white and greyscale. I could pay you extra for the second copy if you'd like.
If I might say, maybe have her mouth closed more into maybe a slight smile. I dont know if its just me, but she looks a little sad. Maybe she could be putting her right hand on his left forearm? Dunno might look like shes an octopus or something lol. Other than that, I love it so far!

Ravenhawk

Ravenhawk

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Apr 2009

Eon

Me/N

Awww that looks lovely Perynne! Yeah I am liking the grayscale method a lot. Makes it so much easier to identify light sources and shadows.

Perynne

Perynne

Site Contributor

Join Date: Oct 2006

Finland

Runners of the Rose [RR]

R/

@frostkisses: Sure, I'll send you a copy of the finished greyscale too. No need to pay extra, since it's technically part of the coloured version too.
Sure, I'll try changing her smile. I actually tried having her right hand on his left forearm when I was sketching out the drawing, but didn't like how it looked. Too many hands all over the place.

@Ravenhawk: Thanks! Greyscale <3

InfestedHydralisk

InfestedHydralisk

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jan 2007

The Netherlands

None

R/

Looks pretty sweet. What I also like is that you have improved alot on faces.

Perynne

Perynne

Site Contributor

Join Date: Oct 2006

Finland

Runners of the Rose [RR]

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Thank you! Yeah, I'm constantly pushing myself to learn to draw more realistically and better. It's good to hear that it's working.

Also, check this out: The Alot (sorry, couldn't help it... ;D seeing the word alot always makes me think of this)

Ravenhawk

Ravenhawk

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Apr 2009

Eon

Me/N

Quote:
Originally Posted by Perynne View Post

Also, check this out: The Alot (sorry, couldn't help it... ;D seeing the word alot always makes me think of this)


LOL I remember that article. It had been a running joke in our guild for awhile. In fact, I made some rough sketches based on posts in that same topic in our guild forums lol. Here's one of them: