MantleCon 1081 AE Workshop
Konig Des Todes
I meant to get this up on the 1st but I'm just so far behind on things... Bleh.
(Inspiration credits go to Tzu and the event workshops she hosts)
How good are your art skills? Writing skills? Music skills? For the first time, MantleCon will sponsor an art contest. From artwork (traditional or digital), crafts, writing, music, video – anything! Do whatever you want (so long as it follows the requirements listed below), however you want! Entertain the masses, and get a reward for doing so!
There will be four categories: Best Progress, Muse, Most Original, and the Golden Theater.
Workshop submission deadline is March 31st. Edit: The deadline has been pushed back to April 5th!
Best Progress
The Best Progress award is given to the artist who listened intently to critique, mastered the art of personal growth, and made long leaps to better his/her piece.
Muse
The Muse is an award given to a person who didn't necessarily enter the thread as a participant, but rather as a supporter of the thread and the goal. He/she is a person who kept the thread alive with kind chatter, maybe donated something to the prizes, gave useful critique, submitted tutorials and ideas selflessly, and generally kept everyone motivated all the way.
Most Original
The Most Original Art Award is given to the artist(s) who have, in a positive way, stood out from the crowd, in choice of art form, subject, style and finish.
Nothing But Mantle
The Nothing But Mantle awards are given to the works that best show the spirit of MantleCon and the Krytan civil war – from 1072 AE to 1079 AE.
Golden Theater
Those who write in the style of a play will be eligible for a second reward special to this contest only: having the story featured during at least one of the four Golden Theaters during this year’s MantleCon!
General Requirements:The theme of the work must be related to the White Mantle, Shining Blade, Shining Mantle, War in Kryta (event, not GW Beyond chapter), Mursaat, or Seers. Must be submitted before April 1st, 2011 (those submitted on April 1st will not be accepted) Be entertaining
Additional Writing Requirements:Cannot exceed 6,000 words.
Additional Golden Theater Requirements:Last 20-30 minutes in act-typing. Be written as a play. Be reasonable with amount of characters (and actions).
PRIZES
All prizes are subject to change based on new prizes obtained. Additional places will be added based on amount of prizes obtained.
Best Progress – 30 Royal Gifts; 1 Royal Gift Mini Set (Salma, Livia, Evennia)
Most Original –1st place: 7 Kegs of Ale - 2nd place: 30 Royal Gifts; 1 Royal Gift Mini Set (Salma, Livia, Evennia)
Muse – 15 Royal Gifts; 1 Full Common Birthday Mini Set (Jade Armor, Mursaat, Seer)
Nothing But Mantle – Full Oppressor’s set for HoM (110 Medals of Honor - see note)
Golden Theater – Featured during MantleCon; 1 Everlasting Unseen Tonic
Note: For the Oppressor’s weapon set for the Hall of Monuments, the winner will choose the attribute for the staff, focus, shield, and wand and which kind of bow. Weapons will be given one by one inside the Hall of Monuments for dedication; the prize is for the HoM, not to sell to others. If there are the weapons in the HoM already, the winner will be given another reward deemed equal by the staff based on how many oppressor’s weapons that are in the HoM already.
Judges:
Me (Konig Des Todes) TBA
(Inspiration credits go to Tzu and the event workshops she hosts)
How good are your art skills? Writing skills? Music skills? For the first time, MantleCon will sponsor an art contest. From artwork (traditional or digital), crafts, writing, music, video – anything! Do whatever you want (so long as it follows the requirements listed below), however you want! Entertain the masses, and get a reward for doing so!
There will be four categories: Best Progress, Muse, Most Original, and the Golden Theater.
Workshop submission deadline is March 31st. Edit: The deadline has been pushed back to April 5th!
Best Progress
The Best Progress award is given to the artist who listened intently to critique, mastered the art of personal growth, and made long leaps to better his/her piece.
Muse
The Muse is an award given to a person who didn't necessarily enter the thread as a participant, but rather as a supporter of the thread and the goal. He/she is a person who kept the thread alive with kind chatter, maybe donated something to the prizes, gave useful critique, submitted tutorials and ideas selflessly, and generally kept everyone motivated all the way.
Most Original
The Most Original Art Award is given to the artist(s) who have, in a positive way, stood out from the crowd, in choice of art form, subject, style and finish.
Nothing But Mantle
The Nothing But Mantle awards are given to the works that best show the spirit of MantleCon and the Krytan civil war – from 1072 AE to 1079 AE.
Golden Theater
Those who write in the style of a play will be eligible for a second reward special to this contest only: having the story featured during at least one of the four Golden Theaters during this year’s MantleCon!
General Requirements:The theme of the work must be related to the White Mantle, Shining Blade, Shining Mantle, War in Kryta (event, not GW Beyond chapter), Mursaat, or Seers. Must be submitted before April 1st, 2011 (those submitted on April 1st will not be accepted) Be entertaining
Additional Writing Requirements:Cannot exceed 6,000 words.
Additional Golden Theater Requirements:Last 20-30 minutes in act-typing. Be written as a play. Be reasonable with amount of characters (and actions).
PRIZES
All prizes are subject to change based on new prizes obtained. Additional places will be added based on amount of prizes obtained.
Best Progress – 30 Royal Gifts; 1 Royal Gift Mini Set (Salma, Livia, Evennia)
Most Original –1st place: 7 Kegs of Ale - 2nd place: 30 Royal Gifts; 1 Royal Gift Mini Set (Salma, Livia, Evennia)
Muse – 15 Royal Gifts; 1 Full Common Birthday Mini Set (Jade Armor, Mursaat, Seer)
Nothing But Mantle – Full Oppressor’s set for HoM (110 Medals of Honor - see note)
Golden Theater – Featured during MantleCon; 1 Everlasting Unseen Tonic
Note: For the Oppressor’s weapon set for the Hall of Monuments, the winner will choose the attribute for the staff, focus, shield, and wand and which kind of bow. Weapons will be given one by one inside the Hall of Monuments for dedication; the prize is for the HoM, not to sell to others. If there are the weapons in the HoM already, the winner will be given another reward deemed equal by the staff based on how many oppressor’s weapons that are in the HoM already.
Judges:
Me (Konig Des Todes) TBA
Death By An Arrow
Woah; quick deadline O.O
Ill try and draw something... wont have time to paint it for sure.
Good theme though
Ill try and draw something... wont have time to paint it for sure.
Good theme though
Etaoin Shrdlu
A play, you say? Well, count me in for that! I already have something in mind
Konig Des Todes
Quote:
Originally Posted by Death By An Arrow
Woah; quick deadline O.O
Yeah, my forgetfulness, combined with forcing to have the actual even earlier then planned and wanting a week to judge caused me to forget to move the start earlier than March 1st (I originally intended to give a month and a half, not a month), and then I forgot that it was March (or rather, that I had to put it up!).
So, sorry about that.
So, sorry about that.
Death By An Arrow
Not a problem. I'll start working on it when I finish up my landscape entry next week
Perhaps I'll do another painting? O:
the week after it is march break for me... got about 10 days in a row to work on it
Perhaps I'll do another painting? O:
the week after it is march break for me... got about 10 days in a row to work on it
Etaoin Shrdlu
Do I just submit my work here, in this thread? I have a draft of the script I want to offer up.
Frozen_Chips
Quote:
Originally Posted by Konig Des Todes
The theme of the work must be related to the White Mantle, Shining Blade, Shining Mantle, War in Kryta [...]
You're accepting stuff on the Shining Mantle, but not the White Blade?
Silliness aside, I can't draw or compose, so I'll probably have a go at writing something up. This competition sounds too good not to enter.
Silliness aside, I can't draw or compose, so I'll probably have a go at writing something up. This competition sounds too good not to enter.
Konig Des Todes
I know not what the "White Blade" is, but the "Shining Mantle" was a fan-made group which was the theme of the previous MantleCon - hence why that's a valid theme.
Etaoin Shrdlu
@Konig - The Shining Mantle was too mainstream, so the White Blade was set-up for the indie crowd.
Flying Ninja Monk
Oooh I so want to enter
But on a note....The oppressor's weapons, not everyone will want to donate all of them on one char
But on a note....The oppressor's weapons, not everyone will want to donate all of them on one char
Konig Des Todes
That's fine actually. I just need to know what attributes/kinds of the weapons would be preferred. Details like that and which character(s) would be discussed between me and the winner after said winner is finalized.
KiyaKoreena
Finally found some time so.... whoo hoo! Excuse for a new plushie!
Thistle Xandra
Here's my entry although I'm not really sure if it counts, because I break lore and rewrite history in Hollywood-adaptation-of-beloved-comic-book-that-angers-hardcore-fans style.
Here's the dA link: http://fav.me/d3c9dg8
and spoiler tag version:
The Lost Princess
by Thistle Xandra
Year 1072 of the Mouvelian Calendar
The warrior crouched, still as a statue and barely breathing as he hid like a coward instead of charging forth with his sword and shield. The sky was transitioning into darkness, and if they waited a bit longer, they would have the aid of darkness to give them cover.
The thought of fleeing left a bitter taste in his mouth. He knew he had no choice. Their mission was more important than the cry of his own wounded pride. They were lucky to have survived and escaped the small group of White Mantle warriors that had outnumbered them five to two. With Kryta slowly slipping into a dangerous police state in which the teachings of the White Mantle and worship of the Unseen Ones precluded the safety of her people, battles had to be chosen wisely.
As a member of the Shining Blade, a group determined to fight the tyranny of Confessor Isaiah and the White Mantle, he knew very well that he had to choose extra wisely, because the White Mantle had a particular thirst for his blood.
Finally, the last shades of color left the sky, plunging the world into darkness. Even the moon decided it didn't want to make an appearance, and he would take that and accept that as a rare bit of fortune. As he stood, he ran the back of his hand across his forehead to wipe the sweat from getting into his eyes. He cursed softly as he realized it was actually blood.
His companion turned at his soft curse. He could tell by her deep breath and the small flare of her nostrils that she was more annoyed than worried for him. She raised a hand up in front of his forehead. Gentle warmth tickled his skin as she clucked softly, healing his wound without being asked.
"You're getting soft, Bartholos, if a weapon can strike you."
"We don't all have the luxury of healing our wounds before others notice," he growled softly as they continued in their mission, using the darkness as an added precaution since their disguises apparently weren't enough.
"I don't understand how they recognized us," his monk companion muttered, truly puzzled. Their disguises should have been enough, and no one should have recognized them for who they really were. She looked back when Bartholos didn't answer. She didn't need more than the dim light from the stars to see the flash of pain on his face.
"It was me," he said slowly. "One of the soldiers recognized me from when we were younger."
The muscle in his jaw twitched before adding in a quiet voice laced with pain, "He was my friend."
The monk didn't say a word although her lips tightened into a straight thin line as she stared ahead and continued to lead them to their target destination. She hated that there were injuries that she couldn't heal, and a wound like the one Bartholos received was one she knew would take longer to heal than the deadliest of wounds. "When we succeed, everyone will see what the White Mantle really is."
" 'When'? You seem to take it for granted."
"No," she said softly, stopping. She turned around, forcing him to stop. "I will do whatever I can and fight whomever I must to make sure it happens. If there is another outcome, I refuse to let it happen."
She turned around and continued forward, her back straight, and her head held up high.
"I feel sorry for anyone who gets in your way, Evennia," he chuckled softly, giving in to a rare moment of levity.
* * *
Night hadn't descended for long when Bartholos and Evennia finally found their destination: The Temple of Ages, the Gateway to the Gods. Here, the Shining Blade would become stronger and hope would be restored to all of Kryta, but not because of the temple itself.
No…
It was something very precious within the temple walls that would be the heart of the Shining Blade.
* * *
Priestess Salma walked among the roses in the darkness, using the soft glow of light from her own hand to light the way. These walks were her sanctuary, a time when she walked among unparalleled beauty in silence. The garden had been nothing more than wild weeds and unkempt roses, but with her love, it had transformed into her refuge.
She was inhaling the aroma of a blossoming rose when she sensed the presence of another. Startled, the light in her hand flickered before she saw her guest. The young woman was merely staring at her, tears pooling in her eyes as she stood motionless.
"May I help you?" Priestess Salma inquired with a gentle smile.
The woman let out a short burst of laughter before wiping away the tears. "Yes. You can help us return Kryta to how she was."
Priestess Salma frowned, a look of concern on her face. "Please, sit." She gestured to one of the stone benches nearby.
"My name is Evennia, and I was sent by Watchman Arad," she began, suddenly feeling nervous as she sat next to the woman who could heal Kryta. "We know King Jadon would visit your mother, a holy priestess here, and after your birth, he provided special dispensation from the royal treasury for the two of you."
Salma's face was expressionless while Evennia took a deep breath and revealed, "You are his daughter, Princess Salma." When the princess didn't say anything, Evennia continued, "Kryta's throne belongs to you!"
Instead of responding with jubilation as Evennia had expected, she slowly blinked her eyes and stood. "I'm afraid you're mistaken. Kryta's throne does not belong to me. It would be best if you left."
Evennia sat in stunned silence as she watched Salma walk away, disappearing into the sanctuary of her garden. "Wait! Don't you understand?" she called out as she ran to her, blocking her way. "You're a princess! Kryta is yours, and she needs you!"
"Please," Salma said gently. "You are misinformed. Please leave."
Evennia tilted her head as she studied the woman before her. There was no surprise and no disbelief. Instead, there was a quiet acceptance, as if… "You already knew," she whispered with disbelief.
Salma blinked slowly. "About my parentage? Yes."
"Then you know your Kryta needs you!" Evennia shouted, suddenly desperate to break Salma's calm and emotionless expression. "With no ruler, the White Mantle has seized control, and they're using force to make Kryta bend to them!"
"The White Mantle took control and saved Kryta from the charr when my father could not," she answered calmly, making Evennia wonder if there was anything but ice that flowed in her veins.
"The White Mantle saved us from one horror and are plunging us into an even greater one. Do you know what happen to the Chosen? Do you know what happens to those who don't want to follow their teachings?"
"Do you know what they do to those who talk to the Shining Blade?" Salma asked, a right eyebrow raised, making Evennia stop speaking to really see the woman before her and hating what she saw. "Because, I can only assume that you're one of them, since you're looking for a legitimate reason for your rebellion."
While Evennia stood still, Salma circled her. "I often wondered who the Shining Mantle would send to get me to be their puppet – a legitimate reason for a civil war that may as well destroy Kryta." She stopped in front of Salma, her eyes burning despite the placid expression on her face. Evennia realized it was fire, not ice in the woman's veins. "I will not be your puppet, Evennia. The royal line died when King Jadon abandoned Kryta and his people." Her voice dropped lower. "It died when he abandoned me. There are no princesses here. Do you understand me?"
Evennia's chin raised higher as neither woman was willing to break eye contact. Her nostrils flared slightly. "It's a shame there isn't a princess here that is brave enough to do what her father should have done. The Shining Blade will find a way to overthrow the White Mantle." She took a step closer so their noses were almost touching. "Mark my words, I will make sure that Kryta will not be destroyed." With that, she turned on her heel and walked away.
Salma's fists tightened as she watched Evennia leave. She turned around to her roses, gently stroking a stem even though her hands were shaking with rage. She winced and pulled her hand back to see blood beading on the tip of her finger. She stared at it as her anger dissipated. "My blood bleeds red as everyone else," she said softly. There was nothing royal about her blood as far as she could see.
"Sometimes, what makes us different isn't visible."
Salma whirled around to see the head priestess walking towards her. "How much did you hear?"
Priestess Sherea slowly walked towards her. Her robes were silver like the hair pulled back in a long thinning braid. Her kind face was heavily wrinkled, but her brilliant green eyes spoke of a youthful spirit. "If you're asking if I heard about your heritage, then do not worry," she chuckled softly as she stood next to her to smell the roses. "I already knew."
"Of course. You are the head priestess here," she said quietly.
"I knew, because your mother and I were friends," she gently corrected.
"You never said anything," Salma said in a soft voice that was slightly accusatory.
"There was nothing for me to say," she told her. "It's your own path to take."
"Then you know why that woman came to see me."
"I told her you were in the garden. I knew it was time for you to make one of the hardest decisions of your life," Priestess Sherea told her as she gently waved her hand over the tiny puncture wound on Salma's finger and healed it.
"My father abandoned his people. How can they trust me?" she swallowed. "How can I trust myself?"
"You forget something very important, Salma. While your father may have been King, your mother was a priestess." Her eyes sparkled as she smiled at the young woman before her. "You have the blessing of the gods, Salma."
Salma was speechless as she folded her arms across her stomach.
"Look here," the older priestess said with wonder as she focused on a rose bud among the blossoming roses. "This one hasn't bloomed yet. Wouldn't it be such a shame if it were content to stay safe within its bud? It would never be able to show the world how beautiful it could be."
"Priestess Sherea, how could I—" she began before getting interrupted.
"Shhh…only you can answer these questions," the wise woman said gently before leaving Salma alone in her garden, surrounded by the roses she loved.
* * *
"Let's go," Evennia hissed to her friend. She was still seething, and Bartholos didn't have to be told that the meeting with the princess didn't go well. He had been waiting inside the temple while she had sought the princess out. Passing the time by looking at the statues dedicated to the five gods had been a pleasant one, but when a furious Evennia had found him, he had wished that he knew what had made her so angry, and she was in no mood to share.
They were leaving the temple when they saw a hooded person at the entrance. When they came closer, the person turned to them and briefly shifted the hood so they could see her face.
"We're leaving. There's no need for you to see us go," Evennia said bitterly as she walked past her.
Salma's hand shot out, stopping Evennia from leaving with a firm grip on her arm. She repeated sternly, "I won't be a puppet."
"I heard you the first time," she said, trying to break free from Salma's surprisingly strong grip. Bartholos was at a loss at what to do and just watched the scene before him.
"The Shining Blade needs a camp where we can coordinate our attacks so that we can strike at the White Mantle where it hurts them most while protecting my people from unnecessary bloodshed," she continued as if Evennia hadn't spoken. "I won't be able to do it alone, so I'll need people like you to help me."
Evennia stopped fighting and Salma loosened her grip. "Are you saying what I think you're saying?"
"I'm saying that Kryta needs a ruler to protect them. They need me to come home."
* * *
Priestess Sherea strolled through the rose garden as the world around her woke from slumber. She stopped at the bud that had been closed the night before, smiling as she saw that the bud was opening, and she could see ruby red petals shyly peeking through. A ray of light from the awakening sun illuminated the little bud as if welcoming the rose to outside world.
She turned and let the sun's warm rays kiss her face as joy filled her heart. It was a new dawn for all of Kryta.
Don't worry, it's only ~2200 words, not 18,000 ;-)
Here's the dA link: http://fav.me/d3c9dg8
and spoiler tag version:
The Lost Princess
by Thistle Xandra
Year 1072 of the Mouvelian Calendar
The warrior crouched, still as a statue and barely breathing as he hid like a coward instead of charging forth with his sword and shield. The sky was transitioning into darkness, and if they waited a bit longer, they would have the aid of darkness to give them cover.
The thought of fleeing left a bitter taste in his mouth. He knew he had no choice. Their mission was more important than the cry of his own wounded pride. They were lucky to have survived and escaped the small group of White Mantle warriors that had outnumbered them five to two. With Kryta slowly slipping into a dangerous police state in which the teachings of the White Mantle and worship of the Unseen Ones precluded the safety of her people, battles had to be chosen wisely.
As a member of the Shining Blade, a group determined to fight the tyranny of Confessor Isaiah and the White Mantle, he knew very well that he had to choose extra wisely, because the White Mantle had a particular thirst for his blood.
Finally, the last shades of color left the sky, plunging the world into darkness. Even the moon decided it didn't want to make an appearance, and he would take that and accept that as a rare bit of fortune. As he stood, he ran the back of his hand across his forehead to wipe the sweat from getting into his eyes. He cursed softly as he realized it was actually blood.
His companion turned at his soft curse. He could tell by her deep breath and the small flare of her nostrils that she was more annoyed than worried for him. She raised a hand up in front of his forehead. Gentle warmth tickled his skin as she clucked softly, healing his wound without being asked.
"You're getting soft, Bartholos, if a weapon can strike you."
"We don't all have the luxury of healing our wounds before others notice," he growled softly as they continued in their mission, using the darkness as an added precaution since their disguises apparently weren't enough.
"I don't understand how they recognized us," his monk companion muttered, truly puzzled. Their disguises should have been enough, and no one should have recognized them for who they really were. She looked back when Bartholos didn't answer. She didn't need more than the dim light from the stars to see the flash of pain on his face.
"It was me," he said slowly. "One of the soldiers recognized me from when we were younger."
The muscle in his jaw twitched before adding in a quiet voice laced with pain, "He was my friend."
The monk didn't say a word although her lips tightened into a straight thin line as she stared ahead and continued to lead them to their target destination. She hated that there were injuries that she couldn't heal, and a wound like the one Bartholos received was one she knew would take longer to heal than the deadliest of wounds. "When we succeed, everyone will see what the White Mantle really is."
" 'When'? You seem to take it for granted."
"No," she said softly, stopping. She turned around, forcing him to stop. "I will do whatever I can and fight whomever I must to make sure it happens. If there is another outcome, I refuse to let it happen."
She turned around and continued forward, her back straight, and her head held up high.
"I feel sorry for anyone who gets in your way, Evennia," he chuckled softly, giving in to a rare moment of levity.
* * *
Night hadn't descended for long when Bartholos and Evennia finally found their destination: The Temple of Ages, the Gateway to the Gods. Here, the Shining Blade would become stronger and hope would be restored to all of Kryta, but not because of the temple itself.
No…
It was something very precious within the temple walls that would be the heart of the Shining Blade.
* * *
Priestess Salma walked among the roses in the darkness, using the soft glow of light from her own hand to light the way. These walks were her sanctuary, a time when she walked among unparalleled beauty in silence. The garden had been nothing more than wild weeds and unkempt roses, but with her love, it had transformed into her refuge.
She was inhaling the aroma of a blossoming rose when she sensed the presence of another. Startled, the light in her hand flickered before she saw her guest. The young woman was merely staring at her, tears pooling in her eyes as she stood motionless.
"May I help you?" Priestess Salma inquired with a gentle smile.
The woman let out a short burst of laughter before wiping away the tears. "Yes. You can help us return Kryta to how she was."
Priestess Salma frowned, a look of concern on her face. "Please, sit." She gestured to one of the stone benches nearby.
"My name is Evennia, and I was sent by Watchman Arad," she began, suddenly feeling nervous as she sat next to the woman who could heal Kryta. "We know King Jadon would visit your mother, a holy priestess here, and after your birth, he provided special dispensation from the royal treasury for the two of you."
Salma's face was expressionless while Evennia took a deep breath and revealed, "You are his daughter, Princess Salma." When the princess didn't say anything, Evennia continued, "Kryta's throne belongs to you!"
Instead of responding with jubilation as Evennia had expected, she slowly blinked her eyes and stood. "I'm afraid you're mistaken. Kryta's throne does not belong to me. It would be best if you left."
Evennia sat in stunned silence as she watched Salma walk away, disappearing into the sanctuary of her garden. "Wait! Don't you understand?" she called out as she ran to her, blocking her way. "You're a princess! Kryta is yours, and she needs you!"
"Please," Salma said gently. "You are misinformed. Please leave."
Evennia tilted her head as she studied the woman before her. There was no surprise and no disbelief. Instead, there was a quiet acceptance, as if… "You already knew," she whispered with disbelief.
Salma blinked slowly. "About my parentage? Yes."
"Then you know your Kryta needs you!" Evennia shouted, suddenly desperate to break Salma's calm and emotionless expression. "With no ruler, the White Mantle has seized control, and they're using force to make Kryta bend to them!"
"The White Mantle took control and saved Kryta from the charr when my father could not," she answered calmly, making Evennia wonder if there was anything but ice that flowed in her veins.
"The White Mantle saved us from one horror and are plunging us into an even greater one. Do you know what happen to the Chosen? Do you know what happens to those who don't want to follow their teachings?"
"Do you know what they do to those who talk to the Shining Blade?" Salma asked, a right eyebrow raised, making Evennia stop speaking to really see the woman before her and hating what she saw. "Because, I can only assume that you're one of them, since you're looking for a legitimate reason for your rebellion."
While Evennia stood still, Salma circled her. "I often wondered who the Shining Mantle would send to get me to be their puppet – a legitimate reason for a civil war that may as well destroy Kryta." She stopped in front of Salma, her eyes burning despite the placid expression on her face. Evennia realized it was fire, not ice in the woman's veins. "I will not be your puppet, Evennia. The royal line died when King Jadon abandoned Kryta and his people." Her voice dropped lower. "It died when he abandoned me. There are no princesses here. Do you understand me?"
Evennia's chin raised higher as neither woman was willing to break eye contact. Her nostrils flared slightly. "It's a shame there isn't a princess here that is brave enough to do what her father should have done. The Shining Blade will find a way to overthrow the White Mantle." She took a step closer so their noses were almost touching. "Mark my words, I will make sure that Kryta will not be destroyed." With that, she turned on her heel and walked away.
Salma's fists tightened as she watched Evennia leave. She turned around to her roses, gently stroking a stem even though her hands were shaking with rage. She winced and pulled her hand back to see blood beading on the tip of her finger. She stared at it as her anger dissipated. "My blood bleeds red as everyone else," she said softly. There was nothing royal about her blood as far as she could see.
"Sometimes, what makes us different isn't visible."
Salma whirled around to see the head priestess walking towards her. "How much did you hear?"
Priestess Sherea slowly walked towards her. Her robes were silver like the hair pulled back in a long thinning braid. Her kind face was heavily wrinkled, but her brilliant green eyes spoke of a youthful spirit. "If you're asking if I heard about your heritage, then do not worry," she chuckled softly as she stood next to her to smell the roses. "I already knew."
"Of course. You are the head priestess here," she said quietly.
"I knew, because your mother and I were friends," she gently corrected.
"You never said anything," Salma said in a soft voice that was slightly accusatory.
"There was nothing for me to say," she told her. "It's your own path to take."
"Then you know why that woman came to see me."
"I told her you were in the garden. I knew it was time for you to make one of the hardest decisions of your life," Priestess Sherea told her as she gently waved her hand over the tiny puncture wound on Salma's finger and healed it.
"My father abandoned his people. How can they trust me?" she swallowed. "How can I trust myself?"
"You forget something very important, Salma. While your father may have been King, your mother was a priestess." Her eyes sparkled as she smiled at the young woman before her. "You have the blessing of the gods, Salma."
Salma was speechless as she folded her arms across her stomach.
"Look here," the older priestess said with wonder as she focused on a rose bud among the blossoming roses. "This one hasn't bloomed yet. Wouldn't it be such a shame if it were content to stay safe within its bud? It would never be able to show the world how beautiful it could be."
"Priestess Sherea, how could I—" she began before getting interrupted.
"Shhh…only you can answer these questions," the wise woman said gently before leaving Salma alone in her garden, surrounded by the roses she loved.
* * *
"Let's go," Evennia hissed to her friend. She was still seething, and Bartholos didn't have to be told that the meeting with the princess didn't go well. He had been waiting inside the temple while she had sought the princess out. Passing the time by looking at the statues dedicated to the five gods had been a pleasant one, but when a furious Evennia had found him, he had wished that he knew what had made her so angry, and she was in no mood to share.
They were leaving the temple when they saw a hooded person at the entrance. When they came closer, the person turned to them and briefly shifted the hood so they could see her face.
"We're leaving. There's no need for you to see us go," Evennia said bitterly as she walked past her.
Salma's hand shot out, stopping Evennia from leaving with a firm grip on her arm. She repeated sternly, "I won't be a puppet."
"I heard you the first time," she said, trying to break free from Salma's surprisingly strong grip. Bartholos was at a loss at what to do and just watched the scene before him.
"The Shining Blade needs a camp where we can coordinate our attacks so that we can strike at the White Mantle where it hurts them most while protecting my people from unnecessary bloodshed," she continued as if Evennia hadn't spoken. "I won't be able to do it alone, so I'll need people like you to help me."
Evennia stopped fighting and Salma loosened her grip. "Are you saying what I think you're saying?"
"I'm saying that Kryta needs a ruler to protect them. They need me to come home."
* * *
Priestess Sherea strolled through the rose garden as the world around her woke from slumber. She stopped at the bud that had been closed the night before, smiling as she saw that the bud was opening, and she could see ruby red petals shyly peeking through. A ray of light from the awakening sun illuminated the little bud as if welcoming the rose to outside world.
She turned and let the sun's warm rays kiss her face as joy filled her heart. It was a new dawn for all of Kryta.
Don't worry, it's only ~2200 words, not 18,000 ;-)
Aeronwen
Thistle, thats gripping, as usual, and beautifully written. But now I want to read more, and I am already waiting for more on your other stories.
Konig Des Todes
Posts on these workshops (guru1 and guru2 both have threads) are slow. Glad at least one thing works.
Depending on how many submissions there are, I may shift prizes around because everything I have MUST go (too many things were donated and mushed with the things I farmed for me to figure out what doesn't have to go).
Depending on how many submissions there are, I may shift prizes around because everything I have MUST go (too many things were donated and mushed with the things I farmed for me to figure out what doesn't have to go).
Thistle Xandra
aww, thanks, Aero <3 I'm so sorry to keep you waiting on the Wintersday story, but on the plus side, you don't have to wait on this one since it's complete
Konig, I guess it's getting kinda late, but maybe you can catch more people's attention if this was a sticky? I would have expected more interest by now :/
Konig, I guess it's getting kinda late, but maybe you can catch more people's attention if this was a sticky? I would have expected more interest by now :/
Konig Des Todes
If the mods were paying attention they woulda seen my request to sticky it (and they normally sticky things like this).
I guess people just aren't interested in the theme...
Edit: Had a prize altered. Most Original will be having 7 Kegs of Ale as first place, and the previous prize as second.
Considering the lack of wip's and "muse"s, I'll probably move Best Progress and Muse into a second for Nothing But Mantle and Golden Theater.
I guess people just aren't interested in the theme...
Edit: Had a prize altered. Most Original will be having 7 Kegs of Ale as first place, and the previous prize as second.
Considering the lack of wip's and "muse"s, I'll probably move Best Progress and Muse into a second for Nothing But Mantle and Golden Theater.
Etaoin Shrdlu
Well, entries are accepted through 31 March, correct? I have grown accustomed to people waiting until the last minute to put something out on the table, so around five days is plenty of time for new works.
That being said: How can Mantlecon NOT be an interesting topic? It is Mantlecon, one of the greatest player-generated pieces of (maybe quasi-)lore in Guild Wars...it is interesting by nature!
That being said: How can Mantlecon NOT be an interesting topic? It is Mantlecon, one of the greatest player-generated pieces of (maybe quasi-)lore in Guild Wars...it is interesting by nature!
Konig Des Todes
Still can't have a best progress and a muse without wips being posted. People tend to wait to the end for final products.
I'll just re-distribute prizes on the 31st. Winners will be announced on the day of MantleCon (April 10th). Speaking of which, I need to post that information soon.
I'll just re-distribute prizes on the 31st. Winners will be announced on the day of MantleCon (April 10th). Speaking of which, I need to post that information soon.
Konig Des Todes
I'm extending the deadline.
I realized that I don't need 10 days to judge works, so I'm giving an additional 5 days before the deadline (making the deadline April 5th).
I realized that I don't need 10 days to judge works, so I'm giving an additional 5 days before the deadline (making the deadline April 5th).
KiyaKoreena
Yay because I keep getting distracted with spring cleaning and its birthday week for my family so am only 25% done!
Tommy's
I don't know why I haven't openend this thread earlier. I will see if I can get something done, I always have loved the White Mantle casters perhabs I can make something out of those Quick deadline though indeed.
KiyaKoreena
Doing my best to try and finish tonight.
Etaoin Shrdlu
I am really looking forward to seeing the pieces for this event. The GW community has some fantastic artists, and I hope we end up with some amazing entries.
Konig Des Todes
There's only one literary entry and the deadline is... well, for me, today. I'm honestly not expecting many entries in total anymore.
Etaoin Shrdlu
Bummer about the lack of entries. Is everyone on hiatus? I guess it is Spring Break for some people. Well, it would be a bit dull to just have one literary entry (no offense to Thistle's work, which I think we all thoroughly enjoyed ) and one play. I guess I could always...write more?
Aeronwen
This competition was a good idea - something different and nice prizes
I think after the intense time from Halloween to Xmas most people need a time to relax and follow their own ideas for quite a while. After all most people are making art here on top of full time work or college.
That combined with the initial short timescale probably put people off starting. Maybe try and allow more time for the artists to have an idea and work on it for the next comp
I think after the intense time from Halloween to Xmas most people need a time to relax and follow their own ideas for quite a while. After all most people are making art here on top of full time work or college.
That combined with the initial short timescale probably put people off starting. Maybe try and allow more time for the artists to have an idea and work on it for the next comp
Konig Des Todes
KiyaKoreena
Not my best work but... Fleecy Mursaat!
I couldn't find my black wire, so wingy things are floppy still.
I couldn't find my black wire, so wingy things are floppy still.
Etaoin Shrdlu
@Kiya - That. Is so. ADORABLE! I just want to hug him and cuddle him and squeeze him and-OHSWEETMERCIFULDWAYNATHESPECTRALAGONY!
Seriously, very cute
Seriously, very cute
Charlie Dayman
Quote:
Originally Posted by KiyaKoreena
*snip snap*
Baller.
12charsforawesomeplushie
12charsforawesomeplushie
Aeronwen
Kiya, that made me smile. A cuddly Mursaat huh
Too awesome
Too awesome
Frozen_Chips
Edit: Okay, looks like this missed the deadline, even if it was hypothetically posted from a factory ship in the Bering Strait, lingering on the very border of the international dateline... unless you’re also willing to believe there was a four hour lag spike, and furthermore are a staunch advocate of the postal acceptance rule under extremely novel circumstances. Konig, if you need me to delete the post, just say the word.
At any rate, I forgot to add a brief explanation for the story. Basically, it’s based on two small pieces of lore from the GW universe: firstly, the fact that by the year 1079 AE only Peacekeepers could tame drakes, and secondly the eventual emergence of drakehounds as a mainstream hunting companion for Krytans. Admittedly, incorporating the latter involved a little creative licence on my part as it’s part of the GW2 canon, but that’s almost the point – it’s supposed to be something of an origin story, and it makes sense that it’d find its roots in a time when drakes were at their least popular in the eyes of the Krytans.
The First Drakeslayer
It was painful enough for the Village Elder to see three of his wards dead. To also endure the presence of their murderers, who struggled to suppress smirks even as their leader theatrically staged an inquest, was almost too shameful to bear. Nevertheless, they had demanded his presence, and they had already demonstrated the cost for defying them. The man leading the mercenaries leered over the youngest of the dead villagers, nodding sagely at the fisherman’s knife in her hand, before straightening his back and turning to the Elder.
“Well. It’s regrettable that it came to this, of course, but at least the criminal was brought to justice.” He nodded yet again, agreeing with his own wise sentiments, before continuing. “A great shame that she felt herself above the law, though it seems judgement was delivered summarily.”
“Pardon my ignorance, Sir, but...” The Elder started.
“Please, call me Sathar...“ The man flashed his teeth, smiling disingenuously.
“Pardon my ignorance, Sathar, but I’m still not sure what crimes the other two committed.”
“Alas, their deaths were a direct consequence of the dissident’s unprovoked violence when she resisted arrest. As the criminal mauled the drake handler, we lost all control over the reptile as it tried to defend its master. Regrettably, the drakes have trouble telling one villager from the next, so if one resident fights...” He spread his other arm, gesturing to the other listless bodies.
The Elder looked to the pitiful weapon still clutched in the dead girl’s pale fingers. Its tip couldn’t have held more than a few drops of blood on it. One bandit gets a scratch, three villagers get senselessly slaughtered; the message was delivered with all the tactless brutality the ‘Peacekeepers’ were renowned for. Their leader carried on with his farcical commiserations.
“The drake will be destroyed, of course. Oh, I know it seems like a steep measure, but the protection of the Krytan people is our first priority. Ah, but there is one silver lining in all this, however...”
“Please, do share.”
“The drake handler has made a full recovery.”
*
Six months can be a short span for some – so short, it scarcely exists. For the villagers, the memory of those murdered still seared like a branding iron, as painful as the day it happened. For soldiers in the civil war, it was an indistinguishable addendum to the bitter stalemate between the White Mantle’s might and the Shining Blade’s cunning. For the Peacekeepers, it was little more than a blur as they wallowed in their borrowed power.
For Suharto, however, a great deal had changed. Where he had once been an apprentice – an untested novice supposedly unworthy of advancement - he had since elected to become his own master. In the intervening months, he had trained relentlessly under his own tuition, vowing to become a fully fledged trapper so that when Fate called on him to deliver his vengeance, he would be prepared. At last, that night had come. There were storm clouds smothering the moon to hide him from enemies. There was rain to dull his quarry’s senses. There was thunder to muffle their death cries.
Pausing on the outskirts of his village, he did a final rundown of his equipment. He hefted his weapon – an eel spear with its prongs hammered into a single tapered point. Crude, perhaps, but undeniably effective. He checked his trap components. Each was snug in its allotted pouch, enabling him to assemble his deadly snares even in the dark. Finally, he checked on his most recent acquisition – Saul, the tracking hound. It was, unquestionably, a fine animal... but it was also a reminder of his rather unofficial graduation to the ranks of trappers. Traditionally, tracking dogs were gifted to trappers when they redeemed their apprenticeship. Having never formally qualified, however, Suharto wasn’t entirely sure what he was supposed to do with Saul once he got it. Nevertheless, it had felt fundamentally wrong to declare himself a trapper without first acquiring a hound (even it was his own coin that bought it in the end). Unable to think of anything better to do, he ordered the dog to stay put, and watch for anyone approaching. The hound’s eyes glimmered with intelligence, but not obedience. The animal usually understood commands, it just rarely agreed with them. Fortunately, Suharto had also learned how to deal with the animal’s impertinence – he repeated the command in a stern and forceful tone, and then quickly turned around before the dog had a chance to openly disobey him.
He ignored the animal’s grumbling as he stepped silently into the thick undergrowth, making his way towards the river inlets. So what if the canine element was a little lacking? His spear was sharp, and his traps were merciless. He was a trapper... and the drakes were the predators no longer.
*
The night after the murders took place, the air buzzed with activity as every soul in the village stirred for their midnight ritual. The menfolk, for their part, gathered outside the massive walls of the communal warehouse, bottles of whiskey clutched fiercely in their hands and each wearing a grim scowl as if it were warpaint. It was local tradition that the genders be separated for their respective wakes, yet paradoxically it was also a show of solidarity. Any boy who was old enough to drink attended, as did any man still young enough to walk. Curfews and martial law be damned - they would face their grief together. The women would no doubt have their own ways of mourning, where they would embrace the heartbreak and, very briefly, let it overcome them. The men preferred to numb their senses with alcohol before handling sorrow. Both rituals required a certain degree of privacy, lest one sex mistake the other’s form of grieving for weakness.
Amid the ranks of farmers and workers who marched to the warehouse were Garan, the village trapper, and Suharto, Garan’s apprentice and friend. Neither guessed that their respective roles were mere days away from desertion. The village Elder was also there, his features wretched with shame as he waited for someone to blame him for the deaths that had occurred, but he needn’t have worried. The men might have acknowledged him as a skilled mediator of disputes, but in truth few saw him as a leader, far less a protector. Instead, they turned to their fellow villager Osro whenever crisis struck. Technically he held no more authority than the next man, but the respect he commanded was beyond compare. Not only did he possess the kind of strength usually reserved for oxen, but he was also gifted with the stoicism of mountains. Osro, they were sure, would steer them right.
As always, honouring the dead was the easy part. The Elder would call out the names of the departed, and the men would raise their drinks in bleak toast to their memories. The next part – discussing how to handle the cause of the tragedy – was slightly trickier. The attendees merely mumbled to their neighbour or held their tongue altogether, until at last one of the farmers had imbibed enough to speak his mind to the gathering at large.
“I wish it’d been quick. They deserved better than that. Not spending their last moments being gored open by some half-trained monster in their own home.”
“It’ll always be like that, though. It’s part of the peacekeeper tactics.” All eyes turned to Osro as the big man spoke. Sensing he had their attention, he carried on gloomily. “It keeps their hands clean,” Osro rumbled, “It gives them an intermediary to act through. If a peacekeeper kills a villager for no reason, that’s murder. Even the Mantle can’t put a spin on that. But if a dangerous animal slips loose and does it for them, well that’s barely even negligence. The whole thing’s just an unpleasant accident. Justice demands nothing more than a stern word. ”
“Justice? Hah!” The protest was issued from the anonymity of a shadowy corner.
“I meant Mantle justice. An air of righteousness and empty gestures. An act, but an important one as it covers up the rot beneath.”
“Why the drakes, though...” Garan whined miserably. As usual, Osro had the answer.
“There are plenty of drakes around, and they’re an untapped resource. If all you care about is beating an animal into submission, they are ready-made beasts of war.” He sighed wearily, his hefty frame deflating. “But more importantly, they’re also symbolic. Only the Peacekeepers know how to train them, so it’s a representation of power.”
“Well, we should just get rid of the drakes.” There were a few troubled murmurs from the rest of the group as Suharto made the suggestion, but he forged ahead recklessly, spurred on by the liquor burning his throat. “They’re a pest like any other! I say we wipe them out and force that bandit scum to...”
“Suharto, shut up!” Garan hissed. He glanced around nervously, as if an inquisitor might leap out of a haystack beside them. The man had been on edge all evening. “The Peacekeepers would hang you for poaching before the day was out, you idiot. We can’t risk it.”
“Hmm.” Suharto growled sullenly, his anger blindly stumbling from one target to the next. “How does Osro know all of this anyway?” The comment drew a few reproving glares, but the man himself merely sighed once more before answering the challenge.
“They tried to recruit me.” He stared thoughtfully into his bottle as he murmured away. He shifted uneasily as he spoke, suddenly aware of the number of eyes watching him. “They offered me a pile of gold and easy power, and assured me that I wouldn’t have to hurt anyone. Not directly. But I refused.”
“Hah!” Another villager raised his drink in salute, his voice filled with pride. “If they thought they could buy off Osro the Ox, they don’t know what we’re made of! Am I right lads?”
“Don’t kid yourself!” The massive enclosure fell into a stunned hush as Osro tersely rebuked the flattery. A sudden quiet dragged on uncomfortably, and for a while the big man tried to ignore the questioning glances boring in to him, as if pretending his outburst had never happened. At last, his nerves snapped and he rounded on his followers, shame-faced and angry, his words barbed and eyes glowering dangerously. “I gave up much and gained nothing. I made the wrong choice!” He rose to his feet in a single powerful motion and starting storming towards the exit. He faltered as he reached the threshold, before lurching around to sweep a hand across the warehouse, gesturing like some aspiring thespian. “Look around you. See what I see. I picked the losing side.”
A dreadful silence settled over the group as their former leader stalked off. When tremors had levelled their village, it had been Osro who championed the reconstruction effort. When a Tengu arsonist tried to set fire to the granary, Osro had snapped its neck with his bare hands. When whispers of the undead advance reached the village, it was Osro who’d laughed defiantly at the suggestion to evacuate. In their eyes, he had been a shining example of what every man should aspire to be.
But it seemed there were some trials that were too formidable to stand against, even for their champion.
In the weeks that followed, it became clear that Osro’s fall from grace had shaken the men far worse than they cared to admit, and despair started to worm its way into their hearts in the weeks that followed. Suharto was no exception; in the village’s darkest hour, his hero had become nothing more than a sneering, derisive doomsayer disgusted at his own foolish loyalty. He’d also lost Garan as both a mentor and a friend as he watched the man wither into a grovelling boot-licker who caved into the Peacekeeper’s demands without so much as a grimace, forever terrified that defiance would cost the life of another villager. Like all the rest, Suharto fell to despair... but where it ate away at the hearts of the other villagers like a disease, it turned his to stone. Hate, not fear, took root. Within days the colours had faded from his world and food turned to ash in his mouth. There was no weariness at the end of each day’s labour, nor satisfaction at a job well done – just a desperate, petty hunger for vengeance. Vengeance he could not attain alone, however.
A born trapper, Suharto’s mind worked with through a process of slow, methodical logic rather than sudden flashes of inspiration. He knew, for instance, that there was a limit to what one man could physically do against his enemies. Fighting the Peacekeepers directly would be useless; they were too many, he too few. A lone renegade could act as a saboteur, starting fires and slaughtering work oxen in the dead of night, but in the end that would hurt his fellow Krytans more than his enemies. He could become a spy – after all, he knew the lands better than anyone, and he could move through the marshes or trees like a ghost – but what would that achieve, when there was nobody to report to? Ultimately, it would be useless for a single person to pit their strength against that of an entire army, and wasteful to even try.
But then, some things did not need hands to lift them or shoulders to carry them. An idea could soar past the mightiest army. A symbol could pierce the thickest fortress wall. If he couldn’t retaliate directly, he’d win his victory through more subtle means. Suharto had said that the drakes were a symbol of the Peacekeepers; C had pointed out that anyone caught poaching would forfeit their life. They both made excellent points, though if the latter had been calculated to dissuade Suharto, it failed to do so. After all, had there ever been reward without risk?
*
Even before he arrived at his intended hunting ground, Suharto had told himself to be patient, to spend as long as it took – minutes, hours, days – to pick the perfect drake from the pack. He needn’t have worried, however, as Fate would guide his eyes to his mark in mere moments. On the edge of the little inlet, a solitary drake stood apart from the rest of its brood. Its back was to its peers, its attention instead focussed on the surrounding vegetation, seemingly waiting for a challenger. Waiting for Suharto. That settled it. He vowed to slay the beast, as Fate had clearly ordained for them to meet in battle. He studied the reptile thoughtfully for a few moments. In decades to come, he wryly foretold, people would still speak of Sir Suharto’s first kill.
Fate aside, a more objective spectator might have seen other reasons for Suharto to pick that particular drake: it was, without a doubt, the smallest of its kind, its weedy limbs had yet to grow claws, and when it called to its brood it gave a strange, sickly bleat instead of the customary roar. If it stood alone, it was almost certainly because it was uncomfortable around bigger, deadlier, proper drakes. Had this hypothetical spectator said as much to Suharto, though, the trapper would’ve pointed out that they simply had no sense of Fate. He knew all about Fate, after all; he’d felt it once before.
Suharto cupped his hand to his lips, and gave a low, warbling croak. The effect was immediate; the lanky beast suddenly tensed up, sensing that there might be might be a quick snack nearby, and glanced hopefully into the gloom where Suharto was hiding. A second fraudulent croak was all the enticement the young drake needed. It surreptitiously swivelled its eyes around, making sure none of its seniors had noticed the siren call of easy food, and quietly started to slink towards the source of the noise. Suharto could hardly believe his success – Gods be praised for giving them bellies bigger than their brains! All he needed to do was to lure it further back, away from the surrounding ponds and riverbanks, where it would be properly isolated. A drake might not see humans as food, but they would still attack them on sight. Best to take them one at a time, Suharto assured himself. Slaying the dread-serpent before him would be heroic enough by anyone’s standards. It’d be sufficiently inspiring for others, and he’d have won his small victory against the Peacekeepers. Engaging two at once, however, would be suicide... even for a knight-to-be.
*
There were plenty of perfectly legitimate reasons to buy a dog, Suharto reminded himself for the thousandth time. The most common stemmed from the fact that only the Lionguard were permitted to carry weapons in Lion’s Arch, so it was common practice for merchants to have large, angry dogs to act as private security. That said, even villagers had occasional need of various canine breeds: clever ones for herding livestock, gentle ones to accompany children, vigilant ones to act as lookouts. He was just buying it for the last reason, almost certainly. That’s why trappers needed dogs. He certainly hadn’t trekked all the way to the city without a travel permit just to appease his clueless vanity.
Even before he arrived in the city, Suharto had told himself to be patient, to spend as long as it took – minutes, hours, days – to pick the perfect hound from the pack. He needn’t have worried, however, as Fate would guide his eyes to his mark in mere moments. In a little enclosure all of its own, his future companion was already waiting for him, displaying its unbridled ferocity to the world at large. With fire in its growl and unwavering energy in its gangly limbs, the lolloping canine had set about inflicting its wrath on every object within reach. It shredded its sackcloth bedding with grim determination. It tore through a thick leather glove, recently appropriated from the last person unwise enough to pat it. It had even made surprising progress in chewing through the cane stalks of its enclosure in the short time Suharto had arrived. He watched the dog approvingly as it waged its manic rampage of destruction – the animal practically oozed divine retribution. An objective, philistine observer might’ve also pointed to the heavily reduced price tag tied to its enclosure, but Suharto considered the dog’s... vigour to be an asset. It was a crusading force of righteousness, just like him. It would make a worth mascot for his hunts; it needed only an equally heroic name. That could come later, though.
Honest to a fault, the dog breeder has gone to great pains to point out every possible flaw in Suharto’s choice of hound when he expressed his intention to purchase the segregated animal. It (or ‘he’ as she’d addressed the animal, as if it were human) was constantly restless. It was a useless watchdog. If it was merely destructive then, it’d grow into an uncontrollable monster in the very foreseeable future. All her words fell on deaf ears, however, as Fate had intervened.
There was only a momentary pang of doubt as Suharto took custody of the teething engine of destruction, but it passed the moment he started to walk it home. Without so much as a word from its new master, the dog was dutifully trotting beside him rather than dashing in front or dragging behind, and everyone knew that was a sign of a good (or even perfect) dog. The fact that it was busily chewing through the leash while they walked was entirely irrelevant.
*
Even in the dark, Suharto could work quickly. His quarry was just behind him and seemingly at a loss, bleating mournfully in the hopes that the illusory toad would reappear. A single scythe of his trowel cleared away a small ditch to plant his traps. He quickly rammed a peg into each corner, as his master had shown him a hundred times before, and wound the tripwire between each one. Stakes were loaded, and a trigger fixed. His work complete, he glanced back up. The drake was gone.
He blinked in disbelief. Had it given up, and headed back? Visions of defeat and despair reared up, but he quickly forced them back. He just had to think. They’d been running parallel to the riverbed the entire time. If it had given up, it wouldn’t have gone far. He carefully pushed through the undergrowth, heading towards the river. A wave of relief washed over him when he saw a solitary drake fin poking out of the water. Fate!
There was no way the creature would hear his calls over the rain at that distance. Fortunately, he’d prepared for just such eventualities as well. Retrieving a hunting sling from his boot, he kept his eyes on his quarry while his fingers groped around – mindful of the tripwires, of course – for a smooth rock to load. That close to the river bed, he knew it wouldn’t take long to find one. Sure enough, his fingers brushes against slick stone half buried in the dirt. He twisted the pebble free and slipped it into his sling. His aim, as usual, was perfect. The little missile shot through the air to slam into the drake with a satisfying thump. He waited for the result. For the slightest of moments, the water dipped down as the mass beneath shifted quickly, and then the surface erupted into a geyser of churning froth and cascading rivulets. The creature’s back broke through the water and kept rising. Its shoulders cleared the waterline entirely. So did its flanks. Then its belly. A flash of lightning briefly illuminated the drake in all its terrifying splendour. Elaborate, razor sharp horns crested its skull like a royal crown. Its roar drowned out the subsequent thunder, causing the lesser serpents to scatter. The monstrosity thrashed around, pivoting to face the source of the attack, baleful eyes and wicked teeth leering towards Suharto.
The blood drained from Suharto’s face; he’d got the wrong drake. Definitely the wrong drake. Fate had not chosen that drake because Fate was terrified being violently torn limb from limb.
He watched, almost mesmerised, as the matriarch lumbered towards him with deceptive speed. As it neared the water’s edge, a powerful lurch carried it onto land, the sheer force pulling a column of water after it. Without as much as a pause, it then veered itself two massive steps off course to circumvent the little ditch; older and wiser than most, it had learned of the tricks human hunters used. In another gargantuan pace the drake lurched within throwing range of a spear. Suharto knew he should do something – anything – but suddenly discovered he couldn’t move, not to run, not to fight. The drake glided closer still, its enormous frame impossibly nimble atop its powerful legs. There wasn’t enough distance left to try bolting anyway, even if his legs started responding once again. Suharto’s heart hammered in his chest, watching his nemesis close in. As if caught at the end of an invisible tether, however, the drake halted abruptly. A quick dash would’ve closed the distance, but instead it merely stood its ground. It slowly swayed its massive head from left to right, its forked tongue flicking out to taste the air, its eyes almost level with the human’s. Suharto began to wonder whether he’d even manage to raise his weapon when the creature pounced. The head swayed again in a slightly larger arc, its eyes sliding off Suharto. There was a growl, followed by another, larger sweep. What was it doing?
Realisation swept over Suharto – it couldn’t see him! The darkness, the rain... he’d specially waited for such conditions after all, knowing the reptile’s senses were at their weakest then. The drake’s gaze swept right over him without as much as a flicker of recognition. Suharto took three very careful, very quiet steps backwards, moving only after the head had swung past. He suppressed a shiver as lizard eyes glanced over him yet again. Four steps that time. He’d take five steps next time, and then he’d almost be in the clear. The massive head began to swing back...
There was a flash of lightning as their eyes met. For a sickly instant, neither of them moved. The drake’s jaws then snapped open. Suharto started to run.
With all his immaculate cleverness, Suharto had already worked out an appropriate escape path before setting out. If a person stuck to hard packed earth, barrelled through ferns and finally weaved between the orchards surrounding the village, it was entirely possible for a human to outrun a drake. Unfortunately, it was one thing to carefully plot out a route in broad daylight. It was another entirely to follow it while charging through the undergrowth in the dark. Less than a minute into his terrified flight, the ground suddenly disappeared from under Suharto’s feet. He fell, and the earth rose up to meet him with a painful slap. Some unseen force plucked the spear from his hands, and another rolled him sideways away from the weapon. His senses reeled, wasting precious seconds, until he finally became aware of a steady stream of water rushing over him. He tried to push up, and the earth simply sank downwards to compensate. A wild thrashing brought his head above water, only to confirm his worst fears. A wide trench of crumbling dirt surrounded him, with water gushing down the centre – he’d blundered into the riverbed. Idiot!
A crazed panic gripped him; the drake would be in its element in the riverbed, and he could barely walk! It was going to catch him! He glanced around desperately, hoping to find some kind of deliverance amid the rain and mud. The wan moonlight glimmered off something metal. His spear! If he could brace it against the ground, he could impale the beast using its own weight when it leapt down – its underside wasn’t armoured! He scrambled on all fours, the cloying mud grasping at his limbs as they sank into the earth with each step. A jolt of dread twinged his heart as he got closer. He’d somehow managed to plant the weapon almost vertically into the mud as he fell, and it had plunged into the dirt like a stake until only its tip was visible. A frenzied scrabble closed the distance, and his feet struggled for some purchase amid the rushing water and muck – there wasn’t much time! His fingers curled around the spearhead and heaved. His weapon, his only lifeline, remained firmly stuck. The slurping mud refused to give up its prize without a fight. Gods be damned! He risked a quick glance over his shoulder and saw the as it drake crested the embankment, its head twitching quickly as it scanned up and down the river. Suharto raked frantically at the dirt, heaving aside three, four, five handfuls of silt. He just needed a few more seconds to free the spear...
A sharp hiss told Suharto he’d been spotted once more. A second glance confirmed it; the serpent crouched low, bunching its muscles for the coup de grace. The drake hesitated for a fraction of a heartbeat, its eyes flicking between the spear and the human, dimly aware that its enemy was rapidly marshalling his defences. With a final roar it leapt from its lofty perch, four plumes of grass and dirt marking the spot where it launched its enormous mass. For that singular instant, Suharto’s fear left him – there was no longer any place for doubt or emotion, just a cold analysis of what he needed to do to live. Suharto tightened his grip once more and heaved with all his desperate strength against the spear, pitting his boundless will to survive against the very earth itself. There was the briefest of deadlocks as the two primal forces competed. The spear started to budge and then, with little more than a quiet popping noise, snapped off in his hand. Suharto blinked, taking a moment to appreciate the magnitude of the disaster. He glanced to the sad little scrap of wood in his hand, then over to the drake as it soared towards him. The treacherous mud held his ankles in place. His fear returned unabated.
*
Six months can be a short span for some – so short, it scarcely exists. Granted, those six months had been slightly longer for Suharto, who had resolved to make the change from apprentice to trapper in that time, but it was longer still for Saul (hound, not hero) who’d made the transition from pup to adult without anyone really noticing.
The passage of time had vindicated the dog breeder’s competence, as one by one her predictions about Saul had come to pass. His restless energy meant that he’d always be source of chaos, not order, and when coupled with his constant yearning for company, his was role as watchman was doomed to fail on that stormy night. But for all his obvious failings, there were also subtle virtues. Cords of lean muscle and tough sinew lined his slender limbs, making him an unexpected force to be reckoned with, and his senses had grown as keen as a razor. Fine though these traits were, Suharto would learn (as every owner does, sooner or later) that a dog’s greatest gift was not in its body, but in its soul – in its unwavering loyalty, in its steadfast companionship, and most of all in its human empathy, which teetered on the supernatural.
As his vigil dragged on, Saul (hound, not hero) paced around nervously, a thousand little warning signs nagging ceaselessly at his thoughts. The hairs on his back itched with dread. His nerves simmered anxiously. His teeth ached with bloodlust. As his worry mounted, he raised his nose to the stars and sniffed, trying to confirm his suspicions. Sure enough, the fey sense that dogs posses answered Saul’s summons, and told him one thing with absolute certainty: his master wasn’t just gone, he was missing, and something in the river was to blame. When thunder shook the night air once more it was echoed by a wrathful growl, quieter but just as pure in its ferocity.
*
As the reptile’s body blocked out the stars, the opposite bank exploded with a screech of canine fury and a second silhouette shot out like a dart. The two shadows collided with a damp smack, their forms invisible amid the gloom. The smaller one disappeared against the night sky, and the larger one coalesced back into a drake on its unerring course towards Suharto. It thundered into him full force, crushing the air from his body and half burying him against the wall of grasping mud. Too slow, Suharto tried to heave an arm free to try and fend the monster off. The behemoth’s head slammed into his shoulder, its sheer weight to pinning him. He felt the prickle of razor sharp talons starting to dig into his stomach.
It was too late; even if help miraculously showed up, the drake needed only to twitch its paw to disembowel him. Suharto’s mind frantically raced for solutions that didn’t exist. The pressure of claws grew a fraction heavier. Time seemed to stop altogether as his eyes met the drake’s baleful glare, and with a sickening wave of horror Suharto’s methodical, logical mind concluded that he was going to die. For a while everything was completely motionless as a rising dread swept over him; it gave him time to despairingly curse the gods, his own stupidity and, while he was at it, Saul the dog.
Time seemed to drag on endlessly as Suharto waited for the beast to make its move. They were not renowned for toying with their prey as cats were; was it just the adrenaline making everything run in horrific slow-motion? Despite potentially being a millisecond from death, another odd little thought nagged at Suharto’s mind – the rain. It was still pattering away busily while he and the drake lay motionless, the predator and prey locked in a standstill the moment before the kill. That was... strange. Slowly, very slowly, he willed his chest to take a shallow breath. The drake didn’t move, its hate-filled eyes still boring relentlessly into him. He prodded it with a finger. The beast was as still as a painting. Moving as delicately as he could, Suharto carefully started to slide out from under the creature’s weight. For a sickening instant the drake started to shift – Suharto froze, working only his lungs so he could scream hysterically – but the creature merely toppled onto its side as its weight shifted, before sinking into the bubbling creek. His heart still hammering frantically against his ribs, Suharto quickly weighed up his options while he got the last of his scream out of his system. The sane thing to do would have been to run while he had the chance. Then again, it’d been a long, traumatic night for Suharto and he was sick of being rational. He heaved himself free of the cloying mud and sloshed up through the silt and water, his nerves frayed to breaking point as he lifted a shaking hand to shield his eyes from the driving rain. If it was going to eat him, fine. He just wanted it over already! As the quaking man closed in on the prostrated drake, the muddy little riverbed was illuminated by a timely flash of lightning. Two things leapt to Suharto’s attention: a ragged tear in the drake’s neck where its throat and arteries had once been, and his loyal hound as it trotted through the water to its master, its muzzle painted scarlet with steaming blood.
Suharto’s brain slowly processed the facts, almost too scared to accept the good news. The dog must’ve torn the brute’s throat out when they collided mid-air. The drake was dead by time it landed on him. The drake was dead, and he was alive. He was... victorious? Who cared! He was alive!
Delirious with reprieve, Suharto howled maniacally as he waded over to throw his arms around his unexpected saviour. A warm, bloodied snout nuzzled him enthusiastically in return while a tail whipped at the water amid frenzied wagging. Ignoring the lashing rain and gurgling rush of water, the two partners in crime were content simply to celebrate their small victory there and then with a cacophony of wild barks and shouts, lording over the freshly slain drake.
So what if it had four legs instead of two, and wouldn’t be knighted after all? The first Drakeslayer of Kryta had arrived.
As you might’ve guessed, it was originally intended to be the first half of a two-part story, but lousy editing and poor management on my part meant there was neither room nor time to even attempt the second half, where the protagonist and Peacekeepers invariably clash on more direct terms. In the end, there wasn’t even time to trim and polish the first part (again, my own fault... especially in light of the deadline extension) so the end result is more than a bit shambling and drawn out – apologies for that.
At any rate, I forgot to add a brief explanation for the story. Basically, it’s based on two small pieces of lore from the GW universe: firstly, the fact that by the year 1079 AE only Peacekeepers could tame drakes, and secondly the eventual emergence of drakehounds as a mainstream hunting companion for Krytans. Admittedly, incorporating the latter involved a little creative licence on my part as it’s part of the GW2 canon, but that’s almost the point – it’s supposed to be something of an origin story, and it makes sense that it’d find its roots in a time when drakes were at their least popular in the eyes of the Krytans.
The First Drakeslayer
It was painful enough for the Village Elder to see three of his wards dead. To also endure the presence of their murderers, who struggled to suppress smirks even as their leader theatrically staged an inquest, was almost too shameful to bear. Nevertheless, they had demanded his presence, and they had already demonstrated the cost for defying them. The man leading the mercenaries leered over the youngest of the dead villagers, nodding sagely at the fisherman’s knife in her hand, before straightening his back and turning to the Elder.
“Well. It’s regrettable that it came to this, of course, but at least the criminal was brought to justice.” He nodded yet again, agreeing with his own wise sentiments, before continuing. “A great shame that she felt herself above the law, though it seems judgement was delivered summarily.”
“Pardon my ignorance, Sir, but...” The Elder started.
“Please, call me Sathar...“ The man flashed his teeth, smiling disingenuously.
“Pardon my ignorance, Sathar, but I’m still not sure what crimes the other two committed.”
“Alas, their deaths were a direct consequence of the dissident’s unprovoked violence when she resisted arrest. As the criminal mauled the drake handler, we lost all control over the reptile as it tried to defend its master. Regrettably, the drakes have trouble telling one villager from the next, so if one resident fights...” He spread his other arm, gesturing to the other listless bodies.
The Elder looked to the pitiful weapon still clutched in the dead girl’s pale fingers. Its tip couldn’t have held more than a few drops of blood on it. One bandit gets a scratch, three villagers get senselessly slaughtered; the message was delivered with all the tactless brutality the ‘Peacekeepers’ were renowned for. Their leader carried on with his farcical commiserations.
“The drake will be destroyed, of course. Oh, I know it seems like a steep measure, but the protection of the Krytan people is our first priority. Ah, but there is one silver lining in all this, however...”
“Please, do share.”
“The drake handler has made a full recovery.”
*
Six months can be a short span for some – so short, it scarcely exists. For the villagers, the memory of those murdered still seared like a branding iron, as painful as the day it happened. For soldiers in the civil war, it was an indistinguishable addendum to the bitter stalemate between the White Mantle’s might and the Shining Blade’s cunning. For the Peacekeepers, it was little more than a blur as they wallowed in their borrowed power.
For Suharto, however, a great deal had changed. Where he had once been an apprentice – an untested novice supposedly unworthy of advancement - he had since elected to become his own master. In the intervening months, he had trained relentlessly under his own tuition, vowing to become a fully fledged trapper so that when Fate called on him to deliver his vengeance, he would be prepared. At last, that night had come. There were storm clouds smothering the moon to hide him from enemies. There was rain to dull his quarry’s senses. There was thunder to muffle their death cries.
Pausing on the outskirts of his village, he did a final rundown of his equipment. He hefted his weapon – an eel spear with its prongs hammered into a single tapered point. Crude, perhaps, but undeniably effective. He checked his trap components. Each was snug in its allotted pouch, enabling him to assemble his deadly snares even in the dark. Finally, he checked on his most recent acquisition – Saul, the tracking hound. It was, unquestionably, a fine animal... but it was also a reminder of his rather unofficial graduation to the ranks of trappers. Traditionally, tracking dogs were gifted to trappers when they redeemed their apprenticeship. Having never formally qualified, however, Suharto wasn’t entirely sure what he was supposed to do with Saul once he got it. Nevertheless, it had felt fundamentally wrong to declare himself a trapper without first acquiring a hound (even it was his own coin that bought it in the end). Unable to think of anything better to do, he ordered the dog to stay put, and watch for anyone approaching. The hound’s eyes glimmered with intelligence, but not obedience. The animal usually understood commands, it just rarely agreed with them. Fortunately, Suharto had also learned how to deal with the animal’s impertinence – he repeated the command in a stern and forceful tone, and then quickly turned around before the dog had a chance to openly disobey him.
He ignored the animal’s grumbling as he stepped silently into the thick undergrowth, making his way towards the river inlets. So what if the canine element was a little lacking? His spear was sharp, and his traps were merciless. He was a trapper... and the drakes were the predators no longer.
*
The night after the murders took place, the air buzzed with activity as every soul in the village stirred for their midnight ritual. The menfolk, for their part, gathered outside the massive walls of the communal warehouse, bottles of whiskey clutched fiercely in their hands and each wearing a grim scowl as if it were warpaint. It was local tradition that the genders be separated for their respective wakes, yet paradoxically it was also a show of solidarity. Any boy who was old enough to drink attended, as did any man still young enough to walk. Curfews and martial law be damned - they would face their grief together. The women would no doubt have their own ways of mourning, where they would embrace the heartbreak and, very briefly, let it overcome them. The men preferred to numb their senses with alcohol before handling sorrow. Both rituals required a certain degree of privacy, lest one sex mistake the other’s form of grieving for weakness.
Amid the ranks of farmers and workers who marched to the warehouse were Garan, the village trapper, and Suharto, Garan’s apprentice and friend. Neither guessed that their respective roles were mere days away from desertion. The village Elder was also there, his features wretched with shame as he waited for someone to blame him for the deaths that had occurred, but he needn’t have worried. The men might have acknowledged him as a skilled mediator of disputes, but in truth few saw him as a leader, far less a protector. Instead, they turned to their fellow villager Osro whenever crisis struck. Technically he held no more authority than the next man, but the respect he commanded was beyond compare. Not only did he possess the kind of strength usually reserved for oxen, but he was also gifted with the stoicism of mountains. Osro, they were sure, would steer them right.
As always, honouring the dead was the easy part. The Elder would call out the names of the departed, and the men would raise their drinks in bleak toast to their memories. The next part – discussing how to handle the cause of the tragedy – was slightly trickier. The attendees merely mumbled to their neighbour or held their tongue altogether, until at last one of the farmers had imbibed enough to speak his mind to the gathering at large.
“I wish it’d been quick. They deserved better than that. Not spending their last moments being gored open by some half-trained monster in their own home.”
“It’ll always be like that, though. It’s part of the peacekeeper tactics.” All eyes turned to Osro as the big man spoke. Sensing he had their attention, he carried on gloomily. “It keeps their hands clean,” Osro rumbled, “It gives them an intermediary to act through. If a peacekeeper kills a villager for no reason, that’s murder. Even the Mantle can’t put a spin on that. But if a dangerous animal slips loose and does it for them, well that’s barely even negligence. The whole thing’s just an unpleasant accident. Justice demands nothing more than a stern word. ”
“Justice? Hah!” The protest was issued from the anonymity of a shadowy corner.
“I meant Mantle justice. An air of righteousness and empty gestures. An act, but an important one as it covers up the rot beneath.”
“Why the drakes, though...” Garan whined miserably. As usual, Osro had the answer.
“There are plenty of drakes around, and they’re an untapped resource. If all you care about is beating an animal into submission, they are ready-made beasts of war.” He sighed wearily, his hefty frame deflating. “But more importantly, they’re also symbolic. Only the Peacekeepers know how to train them, so it’s a representation of power.”
“Well, we should just get rid of the drakes.” There were a few troubled murmurs from the rest of the group as Suharto made the suggestion, but he forged ahead recklessly, spurred on by the liquor burning his throat. “They’re a pest like any other! I say we wipe them out and force that bandit scum to...”
“Suharto, shut up!” Garan hissed. He glanced around nervously, as if an inquisitor might leap out of a haystack beside them. The man had been on edge all evening. “The Peacekeepers would hang you for poaching before the day was out, you idiot. We can’t risk it.”
“Hmm.” Suharto growled sullenly, his anger blindly stumbling from one target to the next. “How does Osro know all of this anyway?” The comment drew a few reproving glares, but the man himself merely sighed once more before answering the challenge.
“They tried to recruit me.” He stared thoughtfully into his bottle as he murmured away. He shifted uneasily as he spoke, suddenly aware of the number of eyes watching him. “They offered me a pile of gold and easy power, and assured me that I wouldn’t have to hurt anyone. Not directly. But I refused.”
“Hah!” Another villager raised his drink in salute, his voice filled with pride. “If they thought they could buy off Osro the Ox, they don’t know what we’re made of! Am I right lads?”
“Don’t kid yourself!” The massive enclosure fell into a stunned hush as Osro tersely rebuked the flattery. A sudden quiet dragged on uncomfortably, and for a while the big man tried to ignore the questioning glances boring in to him, as if pretending his outburst had never happened. At last, his nerves snapped and he rounded on his followers, shame-faced and angry, his words barbed and eyes glowering dangerously. “I gave up much and gained nothing. I made the wrong choice!” He rose to his feet in a single powerful motion and starting storming towards the exit. He faltered as he reached the threshold, before lurching around to sweep a hand across the warehouse, gesturing like some aspiring thespian. “Look around you. See what I see. I picked the losing side.”
A dreadful silence settled over the group as their former leader stalked off. When tremors had levelled their village, it had been Osro who championed the reconstruction effort. When a Tengu arsonist tried to set fire to the granary, Osro had snapped its neck with his bare hands. When whispers of the undead advance reached the village, it was Osro who’d laughed defiantly at the suggestion to evacuate. In their eyes, he had been a shining example of what every man should aspire to be.
But it seemed there were some trials that were too formidable to stand against, even for their champion.
In the weeks that followed, it became clear that Osro’s fall from grace had shaken the men far worse than they cared to admit, and despair started to worm its way into their hearts in the weeks that followed. Suharto was no exception; in the village’s darkest hour, his hero had become nothing more than a sneering, derisive doomsayer disgusted at his own foolish loyalty. He’d also lost Garan as both a mentor and a friend as he watched the man wither into a grovelling boot-licker who caved into the Peacekeeper’s demands without so much as a grimace, forever terrified that defiance would cost the life of another villager. Like all the rest, Suharto fell to despair... but where it ate away at the hearts of the other villagers like a disease, it turned his to stone. Hate, not fear, took root. Within days the colours had faded from his world and food turned to ash in his mouth. There was no weariness at the end of each day’s labour, nor satisfaction at a job well done – just a desperate, petty hunger for vengeance. Vengeance he could not attain alone, however.
A born trapper, Suharto’s mind worked with through a process of slow, methodical logic rather than sudden flashes of inspiration. He knew, for instance, that there was a limit to what one man could physically do against his enemies. Fighting the Peacekeepers directly would be useless; they were too many, he too few. A lone renegade could act as a saboteur, starting fires and slaughtering work oxen in the dead of night, but in the end that would hurt his fellow Krytans more than his enemies. He could become a spy – after all, he knew the lands better than anyone, and he could move through the marshes or trees like a ghost – but what would that achieve, when there was nobody to report to? Ultimately, it would be useless for a single person to pit their strength against that of an entire army, and wasteful to even try.
But then, some things did not need hands to lift them or shoulders to carry them. An idea could soar past the mightiest army. A symbol could pierce the thickest fortress wall. If he couldn’t retaliate directly, he’d win his victory through more subtle means. Suharto had said that the drakes were a symbol of the Peacekeepers; C had pointed out that anyone caught poaching would forfeit their life. They both made excellent points, though if the latter had been calculated to dissuade Suharto, it failed to do so. After all, had there ever been reward without risk?
*
Even before he arrived at his intended hunting ground, Suharto had told himself to be patient, to spend as long as it took – minutes, hours, days – to pick the perfect drake from the pack. He needn’t have worried, however, as Fate would guide his eyes to his mark in mere moments. On the edge of the little inlet, a solitary drake stood apart from the rest of its brood. Its back was to its peers, its attention instead focussed on the surrounding vegetation, seemingly waiting for a challenger. Waiting for Suharto. That settled it. He vowed to slay the beast, as Fate had clearly ordained for them to meet in battle. He studied the reptile thoughtfully for a few moments. In decades to come, he wryly foretold, people would still speak of Sir Suharto’s first kill.
Fate aside, a more objective spectator might have seen other reasons for Suharto to pick that particular drake: it was, without a doubt, the smallest of its kind, its weedy limbs had yet to grow claws, and when it called to its brood it gave a strange, sickly bleat instead of the customary roar. If it stood alone, it was almost certainly because it was uncomfortable around bigger, deadlier, proper drakes. Had this hypothetical spectator said as much to Suharto, though, the trapper would’ve pointed out that they simply had no sense of Fate. He knew all about Fate, after all; he’d felt it once before.
Suharto cupped his hand to his lips, and gave a low, warbling croak. The effect was immediate; the lanky beast suddenly tensed up, sensing that there might be might be a quick snack nearby, and glanced hopefully into the gloom where Suharto was hiding. A second fraudulent croak was all the enticement the young drake needed. It surreptitiously swivelled its eyes around, making sure none of its seniors had noticed the siren call of easy food, and quietly started to slink towards the source of the noise. Suharto could hardly believe his success – Gods be praised for giving them bellies bigger than their brains! All he needed to do was to lure it further back, away from the surrounding ponds and riverbanks, where it would be properly isolated. A drake might not see humans as food, but they would still attack them on sight. Best to take them one at a time, Suharto assured himself. Slaying the dread-serpent before him would be heroic enough by anyone’s standards. It’d be sufficiently inspiring for others, and he’d have won his small victory against the Peacekeepers. Engaging two at once, however, would be suicide... even for a knight-to-be.
*
There were plenty of perfectly legitimate reasons to buy a dog, Suharto reminded himself for the thousandth time. The most common stemmed from the fact that only the Lionguard were permitted to carry weapons in Lion’s Arch, so it was common practice for merchants to have large, angry dogs to act as private security. That said, even villagers had occasional need of various canine breeds: clever ones for herding livestock, gentle ones to accompany children, vigilant ones to act as lookouts. He was just buying it for the last reason, almost certainly. That’s why trappers needed dogs. He certainly hadn’t trekked all the way to the city without a travel permit just to appease his clueless vanity.
Even before he arrived in the city, Suharto had told himself to be patient, to spend as long as it took – minutes, hours, days – to pick the perfect hound from the pack. He needn’t have worried, however, as Fate would guide his eyes to his mark in mere moments. In a little enclosure all of its own, his future companion was already waiting for him, displaying its unbridled ferocity to the world at large. With fire in its growl and unwavering energy in its gangly limbs, the lolloping canine had set about inflicting its wrath on every object within reach. It shredded its sackcloth bedding with grim determination. It tore through a thick leather glove, recently appropriated from the last person unwise enough to pat it. It had even made surprising progress in chewing through the cane stalks of its enclosure in the short time Suharto had arrived. He watched the dog approvingly as it waged its manic rampage of destruction – the animal practically oozed divine retribution. An objective, philistine observer might’ve also pointed to the heavily reduced price tag tied to its enclosure, but Suharto considered the dog’s... vigour to be an asset. It was a crusading force of righteousness, just like him. It would make a worth mascot for his hunts; it needed only an equally heroic name. That could come later, though.
Honest to a fault, the dog breeder has gone to great pains to point out every possible flaw in Suharto’s choice of hound when he expressed his intention to purchase the segregated animal. It (or ‘he’ as she’d addressed the animal, as if it were human) was constantly restless. It was a useless watchdog. If it was merely destructive then, it’d grow into an uncontrollable monster in the very foreseeable future. All her words fell on deaf ears, however, as Fate had intervened.
There was only a momentary pang of doubt as Suharto took custody of the teething engine of destruction, but it passed the moment he started to walk it home. Without so much as a word from its new master, the dog was dutifully trotting beside him rather than dashing in front or dragging behind, and everyone knew that was a sign of a good (or even perfect) dog. The fact that it was busily chewing through the leash while they walked was entirely irrelevant.
*
Even in the dark, Suharto could work quickly. His quarry was just behind him and seemingly at a loss, bleating mournfully in the hopes that the illusory toad would reappear. A single scythe of his trowel cleared away a small ditch to plant his traps. He quickly rammed a peg into each corner, as his master had shown him a hundred times before, and wound the tripwire between each one. Stakes were loaded, and a trigger fixed. His work complete, he glanced back up. The drake was gone.
He blinked in disbelief. Had it given up, and headed back? Visions of defeat and despair reared up, but he quickly forced them back. He just had to think. They’d been running parallel to the riverbed the entire time. If it had given up, it wouldn’t have gone far. He carefully pushed through the undergrowth, heading towards the river. A wave of relief washed over him when he saw a solitary drake fin poking out of the water. Fate!
There was no way the creature would hear his calls over the rain at that distance. Fortunately, he’d prepared for just such eventualities as well. Retrieving a hunting sling from his boot, he kept his eyes on his quarry while his fingers groped around – mindful of the tripwires, of course – for a smooth rock to load. That close to the river bed, he knew it wouldn’t take long to find one. Sure enough, his fingers brushes against slick stone half buried in the dirt. He twisted the pebble free and slipped it into his sling. His aim, as usual, was perfect. The little missile shot through the air to slam into the drake with a satisfying thump. He waited for the result. For the slightest of moments, the water dipped down as the mass beneath shifted quickly, and then the surface erupted into a geyser of churning froth and cascading rivulets. The creature’s back broke through the water and kept rising. Its shoulders cleared the waterline entirely. So did its flanks. Then its belly. A flash of lightning briefly illuminated the drake in all its terrifying splendour. Elaborate, razor sharp horns crested its skull like a royal crown. Its roar drowned out the subsequent thunder, causing the lesser serpents to scatter. The monstrosity thrashed around, pivoting to face the source of the attack, baleful eyes and wicked teeth leering towards Suharto.
The blood drained from Suharto’s face; he’d got the wrong drake. Definitely the wrong drake. Fate had not chosen that drake because Fate was terrified being violently torn limb from limb.
He watched, almost mesmerised, as the matriarch lumbered towards him with deceptive speed. As it neared the water’s edge, a powerful lurch carried it onto land, the sheer force pulling a column of water after it. Without as much as a pause, it then veered itself two massive steps off course to circumvent the little ditch; older and wiser than most, it had learned of the tricks human hunters used. In another gargantuan pace the drake lurched within throwing range of a spear. Suharto knew he should do something – anything – but suddenly discovered he couldn’t move, not to run, not to fight. The drake glided closer still, its enormous frame impossibly nimble atop its powerful legs. There wasn’t enough distance left to try bolting anyway, even if his legs started responding once again. Suharto’s heart hammered in his chest, watching his nemesis close in. As if caught at the end of an invisible tether, however, the drake halted abruptly. A quick dash would’ve closed the distance, but instead it merely stood its ground. It slowly swayed its massive head from left to right, its forked tongue flicking out to taste the air, its eyes almost level with the human’s. Suharto began to wonder whether he’d even manage to raise his weapon when the creature pounced. The head swayed again in a slightly larger arc, its eyes sliding off Suharto. There was a growl, followed by another, larger sweep. What was it doing?
Realisation swept over Suharto – it couldn’t see him! The darkness, the rain... he’d specially waited for such conditions after all, knowing the reptile’s senses were at their weakest then. The drake’s gaze swept right over him without as much as a flicker of recognition. Suharto took three very careful, very quiet steps backwards, moving only after the head had swung past. He suppressed a shiver as lizard eyes glanced over him yet again. Four steps that time. He’d take five steps next time, and then he’d almost be in the clear. The massive head began to swing back...
There was a flash of lightning as their eyes met. For a sickly instant, neither of them moved. The drake’s jaws then snapped open. Suharto started to run.
With all his immaculate cleverness, Suharto had already worked out an appropriate escape path before setting out. If a person stuck to hard packed earth, barrelled through ferns and finally weaved between the orchards surrounding the village, it was entirely possible for a human to outrun a drake. Unfortunately, it was one thing to carefully plot out a route in broad daylight. It was another entirely to follow it while charging through the undergrowth in the dark. Less than a minute into his terrified flight, the ground suddenly disappeared from under Suharto’s feet. He fell, and the earth rose up to meet him with a painful slap. Some unseen force plucked the spear from his hands, and another rolled him sideways away from the weapon. His senses reeled, wasting precious seconds, until he finally became aware of a steady stream of water rushing over him. He tried to push up, and the earth simply sank downwards to compensate. A wild thrashing brought his head above water, only to confirm his worst fears. A wide trench of crumbling dirt surrounded him, with water gushing down the centre – he’d blundered into the riverbed. Idiot!
A crazed panic gripped him; the drake would be in its element in the riverbed, and he could barely walk! It was going to catch him! He glanced around desperately, hoping to find some kind of deliverance amid the rain and mud. The wan moonlight glimmered off something metal. His spear! If he could brace it against the ground, he could impale the beast using its own weight when it leapt down – its underside wasn’t armoured! He scrambled on all fours, the cloying mud grasping at his limbs as they sank into the earth with each step. A jolt of dread twinged his heart as he got closer. He’d somehow managed to plant the weapon almost vertically into the mud as he fell, and it had plunged into the dirt like a stake until only its tip was visible. A frenzied scrabble closed the distance, and his feet struggled for some purchase amid the rushing water and muck – there wasn’t much time! His fingers curled around the spearhead and heaved. His weapon, his only lifeline, remained firmly stuck. The slurping mud refused to give up its prize without a fight. Gods be damned! He risked a quick glance over his shoulder and saw the as it drake crested the embankment, its head twitching quickly as it scanned up and down the river. Suharto raked frantically at the dirt, heaving aside three, four, five handfuls of silt. He just needed a few more seconds to free the spear...
A sharp hiss told Suharto he’d been spotted once more. A second glance confirmed it; the serpent crouched low, bunching its muscles for the coup de grace. The drake hesitated for a fraction of a heartbeat, its eyes flicking between the spear and the human, dimly aware that its enemy was rapidly marshalling his defences. With a final roar it leapt from its lofty perch, four plumes of grass and dirt marking the spot where it launched its enormous mass. For that singular instant, Suharto’s fear left him – there was no longer any place for doubt or emotion, just a cold analysis of what he needed to do to live. Suharto tightened his grip once more and heaved with all his desperate strength against the spear, pitting his boundless will to survive against the very earth itself. There was the briefest of deadlocks as the two primal forces competed. The spear started to budge and then, with little more than a quiet popping noise, snapped off in his hand. Suharto blinked, taking a moment to appreciate the magnitude of the disaster. He glanced to the sad little scrap of wood in his hand, then over to the drake as it soared towards him. The treacherous mud held his ankles in place. His fear returned unabated.
*
Six months can be a short span for some – so short, it scarcely exists. Granted, those six months had been slightly longer for Suharto, who had resolved to make the change from apprentice to trapper in that time, but it was longer still for Saul (hound, not hero) who’d made the transition from pup to adult without anyone really noticing.
The passage of time had vindicated the dog breeder’s competence, as one by one her predictions about Saul had come to pass. His restless energy meant that he’d always be source of chaos, not order, and when coupled with his constant yearning for company, his was role as watchman was doomed to fail on that stormy night. But for all his obvious failings, there were also subtle virtues. Cords of lean muscle and tough sinew lined his slender limbs, making him an unexpected force to be reckoned with, and his senses had grown as keen as a razor. Fine though these traits were, Suharto would learn (as every owner does, sooner or later) that a dog’s greatest gift was not in its body, but in its soul – in its unwavering loyalty, in its steadfast companionship, and most of all in its human empathy, which teetered on the supernatural.
As his vigil dragged on, Saul (hound, not hero) paced around nervously, a thousand little warning signs nagging ceaselessly at his thoughts. The hairs on his back itched with dread. His nerves simmered anxiously. His teeth ached with bloodlust. As his worry mounted, he raised his nose to the stars and sniffed, trying to confirm his suspicions. Sure enough, the fey sense that dogs posses answered Saul’s summons, and told him one thing with absolute certainty: his master wasn’t just gone, he was missing, and something in the river was to blame. When thunder shook the night air once more it was echoed by a wrathful growl, quieter but just as pure in its ferocity.
*
As the reptile’s body blocked out the stars, the opposite bank exploded with a screech of canine fury and a second silhouette shot out like a dart. The two shadows collided with a damp smack, their forms invisible amid the gloom. The smaller one disappeared against the night sky, and the larger one coalesced back into a drake on its unerring course towards Suharto. It thundered into him full force, crushing the air from his body and half burying him against the wall of grasping mud. Too slow, Suharto tried to heave an arm free to try and fend the monster off. The behemoth’s head slammed into his shoulder, its sheer weight to pinning him. He felt the prickle of razor sharp talons starting to dig into his stomach.
It was too late; even if help miraculously showed up, the drake needed only to twitch its paw to disembowel him. Suharto’s mind frantically raced for solutions that didn’t exist. The pressure of claws grew a fraction heavier. Time seemed to stop altogether as his eyes met the drake’s baleful glare, and with a sickening wave of horror Suharto’s methodical, logical mind concluded that he was going to die. For a while everything was completely motionless as a rising dread swept over him; it gave him time to despairingly curse the gods, his own stupidity and, while he was at it, Saul the dog.
Time seemed to drag on endlessly as Suharto waited for the beast to make its move. They were not renowned for toying with their prey as cats were; was it just the adrenaline making everything run in horrific slow-motion? Despite potentially being a millisecond from death, another odd little thought nagged at Suharto’s mind – the rain. It was still pattering away busily while he and the drake lay motionless, the predator and prey locked in a standstill the moment before the kill. That was... strange. Slowly, very slowly, he willed his chest to take a shallow breath. The drake didn’t move, its hate-filled eyes still boring relentlessly into him. He prodded it with a finger. The beast was as still as a painting. Moving as delicately as he could, Suharto carefully started to slide out from under the creature’s weight. For a sickening instant the drake started to shift – Suharto froze, working only his lungs so he could scream hysterically – but the creature merely toppled onto its side as its weight shifted, before sinking into the bubbling creek. His heart still hammering frantically against his ribs, Suharto quickly weighed up his options while he got the last of his scream out of his system. The sane thing to do would have been to run while he had the chance. Then again, it’d been a long, traumatic night for Suharto and he was sick of being rational. He heaved himself free of the cloying mud and sloshed up through the silt and water, his nerves frayed to breaking point as he lifted a shaking hand to shield his eyes from the driving rain. If it was going to eat him, fine. He just wanted it over already! As the quaking man closed in on the prostrated drake, the muddy little riverbed was illuminated by a timely flash of lightning. Two things leapt to Suharto’s attention: a ragged tear in the drake’s neck where its throat and arteries had once been, and his loyal hound as it trotted through the water to its master, its muzzle painted scarlet with steaming blood.
Suharto’s brain slowly processed the facts, almost too scared to accept the good news. The dog must’ve torn the brute’s throat out when they collided mid-air. The drake was dead by time it landed on him. The drake was dead, and he was alive. He was... victorious? Who cared! He was alive!
Delirious with reprieve, Suharto howled maniacally as he waded over to throw his arms around his unexpected saviour. A warm, bloodied snout nuzzled him enthusiastically in return while a tail whipped at the water amid frenzied wagging. Ignoring the lashing rain and gurgling rush of water, the two partners in crime were content simply to celebrate their small victory there and then with a cacophony of wild barks and shouts, lording over the freshly slain drake.
So what if it had four legs instead of two, and wouldn’t be knighted after all? The first Drakeslayer of Kryta had arrived.
As you might’ve guessed, it was originally intended to be the first half of a two-part story, but lousy editing and poor management on my part meant there was neither room nor time to even attempt the second half, where the protagonist and Peacekeepers invariably clash on more direct terms. In the end, there wasn’t even time to trim and polish the first part (again, my own fault... especially in light of the deadline extension) so the end result is more than a bit shambling and drawn out – apologies for that.
Konig Des Todes
Winners and Prizes for this (since MC is going on):
* Chips: 7 Kegs of Ale; 25 Royal Gifts; 1 Full Royal Gift Mini Set (Salma, Livia, Evennia)
* Thistle: Full Oppressor’s set for HoM (110 MoH); 15 Royal Gifts; 1 Full Royal Gift Mini Set (Salma, Livia, Evennia)
* Kiya: 1 Everlasting Unseen Tonic; 35 Royal Gifts
Hmmm, I wonder who wouldn't have guessed those winners.
* Chips: 7 Kegs of Ale; 25 Royal Gifts; 1 Full Royal Gift Mini Set (Salma, Livia, Evennia)
* Thistle: Full Oppressor’s set for HoM (110 MoH); 15 Royal Gifts; 1 Full Royal Gift Mini Set (Salma, Livia, Evennia)
* Kiya: 1 Everlasting Unseen Tonic; 35 Royal Gifts
Hmmm, I wonder who wouldn't have guessed those winners.
Thistle Xandra
Thanks a lot, Konig! I love my new weps, gifts, and minis <3 MantleCon looked like a smashing success, and I'm looking forward to seeing the 'Eye' screenshot!
Konig Des Todes
One exists in the MC event thread already - along with pictures of the costume contest winners and Stephane Lo Presti's visit (and subsequent death).
http://www.guildwarsguru.com/forum/m...02#post5448302 and following post
http://www.guildwarsguru.com/forum/m...02#post5448302 and following post
Verene
I have some more screencaps I took that I'm going to upload as well.
Adrienne Thornalder
Quote:
Originally Posted by Konig Des Todes
Winners and Prizes for this (since MC is going on):
Hmmm, I wonder who wouldn't have guessed those winners.
So out of curiosity, why is it so obvious that these three should win? I didn't see a lot of submissions, but at least Kiya had some competition.
I don't mean to sound bitchy or anything. I was just curious. The statement seemed odd.
Hmmm, I wonder who wouldn't have guessed those winners.
So out of curiosity, why is it so obvious that these three should win? I didn't see a lot of submissions, but at least Kiya had some competition.
I don't mean to sound bitchy or anything. I was just curious. The statement seemed odd.
Verene
They were the only submissions.
Adrienne Thornalder
A play was submitted for the contest on page 1.
Don't get me wrong - I love love love the plushie. I've seen some of Kiya's other plushies and I kinda want to snuggle with them...
But I was just confused about the play submission.
Don't get me wrong - I love love love the plushie. I've seen some of Kiya's other plushies and I kinda want to snuggle with them...
But I was just confused about the play submission.