21 Jan 2012 at 05:24 - 5
You have too many slots dedicated to maximizing the potential of Fragility, which is met 90% by your build alone. There is a lot of wasted potential.
Some further tidbits from an experienced player:
Shared Burden is a bad skill, not because it is a bad skill, but because all the other options Mesmers have are better. If anything, swap the entire bar to a standard Ineptitude Mesmer.
Stolen Speed suffers the same problems as Shared Burden. Elementalists take the largest advantage from that skill, and you don't have any. The rest of the bar is also pretty weak. Heroes do not try to meet the extra criteria on Overload either. I'd switch this bar for a standard ESurge.
Virulence is just bad. Yea, it applies three conditions, but your build alone already does that. The Blood and Curses lines aren't enough to Justify it's use. Put a build here that does damage, such as another ESurge Mesmer or Searing Flames Ele.
I like the traditional side of the Minion Master you are bringing here. Take out Taste of Death (bad skill) and put in Animate Bone Horror. Don't use Animate Bone Minions because the spawns will probably overwhelm your minion cap and kill off all your pretty Bone Fiends. If you want Death Nova, replace Sig of Return with it. You can put a res on a Mesmer if you need to.
Your build lacks single target damage, so instead of the Dervish, put something like an Offensive Communing Rit here. That way, when the mobs dwindle, you'll kill them off quickly.
Heroes don't use Energetic Was Lee Sa properly (they'll drop it immediately after casting when low on energy). It's also a generally poor idea to use Glyph of Lesser Energy if you have several 5e Spells; much of it's potential is wasted. Run a standard ST Shelter rit with /P Command skills ("Fall Back!" and "Stand Your Ground!").
Run a /Rt Resto Necro for the last slot.
So, I basically just told you to run the meta but eh, it works. Honestly, like I said above, your build alone almost Maximizes the potential of Fragility, so burning all these bars to get another 10% or so is just bad.
If the team build is already working, just keep running it. I'm a min-maxer so my advice is probably going to suck the fun out of everything for you. :P