pomes ? peoms ? poems !

I wrote all these myself, they're a bit noobish and soppy but here goes nothing.

As I look into your eyes,
I don't care for the curves of your thighs,
I don't care for the shape of your lips,
your chest or your hips,
if your are poor or rich,
while other men may say Im blind,
your body is not the the first thing on my mind.

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I go asleep tonight without fear,
for is I don not wake I will be with you my dear
should I not rise I would wathc you eternally with both eyes
should I not wake again, it will be as God intends
but I'll take this chance now to expalin and tell you how
that while Im still alive, the thought you you helps me surviuve
this tough and lonely life, wherein I wished you'd be my wife
some one to love and lend a hand
Oh how I dream of being your husband.

indeed soppy.

but get a bit of blood in it and they are ok

yeah well I dont really condone voilence in the real world.

deep, deep. liked the first one
ill post some of my stuff soon.

This is some good stuff here.

you can see a reoccuring theme can't you....
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beauty is everywhere
in the flowers and trees
the open sky and the bees
beauurty is not only in the eye of the beholder
there is the scent of wild blossoms as the blow in the breeze,
blossoming, ever bolder
It is in the texture of tickeling grass or in a zephyr blowing leaves, en masse
The beauty of nature is a dream come true but none of this compares to you

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Poems are the only way
I will ever have to say
how I really fell
to express myself for real
Dont' laught or call me a fool
when this is read then you'll
see that what I say is true
for it has been forever you

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I look into your eyes what do I see ?
A future together, you and me

children, happiness, love and, peace
why is this how I feel
each time me meet
Is it love for real?

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