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Stalker Haras

Stalker Haras

I Didn't Do It

Join Date: Jul 2005

Mo/

well ive been making some of these at home and in class, im fairly pleased with most of the ones I've made. Except for this one. Im not sure but i think its missing something, but i cannot figure out what. The skillbar has been removed, im just to lazy to upload it again on this schools network.

Was wondering if the people here could give me some suggestions as to what they think is missing.




Thanks!

PieXags

PieXags

Forge Runner

Join Date: May 2005

The Infinite Representation Of Pie And Its Many Brilliances

Assuming this is done in photoshop, I'd put the letters at the top (otherwise if used as a wallpaper part of them will be chopped off by one's taskbar), and I'd go in with a very very small eraser brush (one or two pixels) and erase some of those little white outlines that have been left around the edges of a couple cutouts. This should even out the flow of it a bit and give it a cleaner look. Oh, also making the text a different color wouldn't hurt, perhaps the standard GuildWars gold, or a green might do the trick.

Lampshade

Lampshade

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Jun 2005

USA

Xen of Onslaught

Can't really comment on the picture itself, but why the hell are you using power
shot?

xxSilhouette

xxSilhouette

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Jan 2006

Lost in the sands of time...

Blood Of Orr [BoO]

R/Rt

Definatly better without the skillbar, and like pieXags said, add some space at the bottom or it will be chopped off.

Otherwise, very good work

Stalker Haras

Stalker Haras

I Didn't Do It

Join Date: Jul 2005

Mo/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lampshade
Can't really comment on the picture itself, but why the hell are you using power
shot? Like i said, the skillbar was there for the fun of it, it isnt anymore. I just picked random skills to put in, but oh well.


and thanx for those that actualy know how to give feedback.

Nilator

Nilator

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Dec 2005

Mo/

you should get a pic of you using deliberating shot, that looks awsome, its blue or purple, im color blind, so its looks cool to me