A good W/R Build for PVE?

Apply Poison
Troll Unguent
Final Thrust
Sever Artery
Gash
Bonettis Defense
For Great JUstice
Hundred Blades

Strength: Bout 9
Swordsmanship: 12
Wilderness Survival: Bout 10
All this is W/o runes, so with runes it would be different.
I would use gladiators armor for the extra energy.

Strategy: Before battle, cast For great justice just before fighting and possibly Apply Poison if you need to. Thus, ur adrenaline charging is handled by FGJ and Apply Poison seriously damages your opponents. I would then use hundred blades to rack up damage and adrenaline, then I would use sever+gash+final. When I'm low on hp, i would use troll unguent. When low on energy, use bonettis defense.
Any pros or cons about this build? Would it work for pvp as well?

anyone?

Not to be mean, but PvE isn't that important, a lot of shaky builds can get through, just because it's so easy... you won't find as much critical analysis for a PvE build than you would for a PvP one.