<untitled> Can't think of a name for my story

Narrator: The Charr invasions were over. The Guild Wars? Done. The White Mantle, the undead threats? Dead. The world was free from the horrible things it once endured. People began to start over and make the best of their lives. But something had happened that no one could explain.

People no longer felt a purpose in life, they constantly felt depressed and lonely. It seemed the world had stopped spinning. The world at at whole was vulnerable.


There was no longer any of the old Gods, such as Dwayna, it seemed they had vanished.

Since the world was at such a state, some people decided to take advantage of it, while others tried to uncover what was happening.

Arhtuul was the Grim Reaper. He decided when people were ready to die. He had always abused his powers, but now there were no more Gods to interfer. Him and his 13 Angels have all died, but came back to life. The job of the 13 angels is to actually eliminate those who Arthuul believes is ready to die.

Soon enough, Arthuul began taking control. Anyone who stood in his way would die gory, brutal deaths by his 13 angels. The 13 angels grew more powerful with each death, gaining power from the victims soul.

Raven, her angel name, had always been reluctant on carrying out her masters orders. Seeing the faces of people dying in her grasp had deeply disturbed her, but it seemed like there was nothing she could do.

On the anniversary of Arthuul's hostile takeover plans began, he had let the Angels do whatever they wanted. What did they want to do? Kill.

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Raven slowly followed the couple. She quietly climbed a tree for a better view as the couple had stopped to take a rest near a waterfall.

Aris felt uncomfortable.

"I want to go. I don't trust these woods, Damien." Aris said.

"Hold on, we're out of water." replied Damien.

As Damien reached down to fill their water container, a blueish colored beast sprang out from the water. Snatching Damien, the creature raised him up in the air, the light of the moon exposing the blood running down the monsters teeth. Aris's scream sent a chill down Raven's spine. Raven had little time to act. Aiming her bow at Aris, then back at the monster, she finnaly shot an arrow with black magic following it, right at the beasts heart. Confused at her actions, she didn't know why she killed the beast, when she had come for Aris. Knowing that she would get in trouble if she didn't, she aimed her bow at Aris, still hidden in the tree.

"Damien!" Aris cried. Aris placed a hang on Damien's chest and Raven was blinded by a blue and whitish glow. Aris dropped to the ground. Now both Aris and Damein were lying on the ground. Confused at what was happening, Raven put down her bow.

"Damien.." croaked Aris.
"Aris...I love you.." said Damien.

Despite Aris's attempt to heal Damien, her spell had not worked. Now Aris was in the same condition as Damien, both dieing.

Aris, using what strengh she had left, got up and craweled over Damien, looking in his eyes.

"My love..we should be happy. We are blessed to be given the chance to die together" said Aris

A tear rolled off of Aris's cheek, splattering on to Damien's ripped chest. Suddenly, not a blusish white glow, but a divine yellowish power had devoured the two. After the light had faded, Damien's wounds had vanished.
Knowing that this could only be the work of the Gods, Raven aimed at Aris's head. Just as she was ready to fire, Aris and Damien embraced eachother, kissing, smiling, and confused at what the light was.

Raven just couldn't do it. She lowered her bow, fighting back a tear. Jumping down from her spot in the tree, she began to walk away from Aris and Damien.

"Could that have been..the work of...Gods?" asked Aris.

"I don't know. Let's just get somewhere safe for the night...We'll have to get to a nearby village.." said Damien.

As Raven slowly walked away, she heard the sound of something heading her way. She dove behind the bushes, staring at the spiders heading Aris and Damein's way.

Aris jumped up, frightened. She looked towards the noise, and saw in horror what was comming their way. There was at least 4 of them.
The first one jumped at Aris, clawing at her shoulder. Raven had shot the spider in the eye, blinding him. Then, Damien had tackled the Spider bringing it to the ground, holding the insect's jaws closed with his hands. Another spider attacked at Aris, only to be knocked down by the mysterious yellow light again. Three spiders attacked Aris again, only to be knocked down yet again. Aris seemed to have the power of the old Gods, as if she knew, her eyes glowed with divine anger. She hovered into the air, and blasted the spiders with divine power. Aris wasn't the only one that had gained such godly powers. Damien broke off a pincer of one of the dead spiders and swung it like a sword, cutting the last spider's head off. Never before was he or Aris able to do such.
Raven approached them, laying her bow to the ground.

Aris, seeing the scars and gothic clothing Raven was wearing, knew she was one of the 13 angels. She slowly backed away.

"I do not wish to harm you. I wish you to join you." said Raven.

To be continued...

(It's a looooong story)

Note: This isn't an open RP so stfu! Comment and flames are welcome.

If it's not an open RP then why did u post it in the the RP Forum??? That makes absolutely no sense whatsoever

Sigh. Young one, one can also WRITE STORIES, by THEMSELVES, as it's been done BEFORE. Countless times have people written their OWN rp in this forum, and the moderators care less. So PISS OFF!

Woah. Cool it. I was simply stating my opinion which IS allowed on this forum if im not mistaken.

Your right this is the RP thread...if you want to debate go to another thread

Yknow what I just thought of? This could go in the Nolani Academy forum, as it's the one for arts

Storm Crow has an immense point.

This entire FORUM was made for us to ENJOY roleplaying TOGETHER.
Please, we wish to contribute with each other to create great stories.
Don't make up your own thread, make us read it, and say that WE cant post.
That ISN'T fair and ISN'T right.

Thanx for the backup ownage

-never said you can't POSt
-simply said it was a closed RP
-as far as I know, being at this forum for the past 4+ months, people were able to create stories themselves. Don't believe me? Waste your time looking back at older threads, it's been done before and the moderators didn't say anything, instead of wasting your time complaining to me.

I do see a need to have closed RP (which I define as "if you want to participate in the thread, ask for consent from the starter of the thread, send PM or something...").

Sometimes the original thread was still in development, not yet setup the environment, the story line not yet solidified, not yet introduced the main character(s) the first author would like to do. I feel it more enjoyable to participate in RP threads that have an interesting storyline. For the first author, a degree of satisfaction for seeing his/her creation comes alive. For the subsequent RP authors, to help bring the story even livelier and to alter the story line.

Does it sound reasonnable?

no

If you wanted to set up a storyline before others post then do it in the origonal post. This is an open RP forum, and if you didnt want others to post on your story then dont put it here, simple as that.

Divinity said "to be continued..." meaning that Dinivity has not yet finished her original post. Maybe he/she needs feedback on that portion before going on? I am assuming Dinivity would let other people play in the thread afterward.

It says 'closed rp' at the bottom of her post, therefore making me beleive that she will not allow others to post on her thread.

That's correct, Storm.

as I said, she doesn't want others contributing to her story, which is why it doesnt belong here

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Yea, we'd like to help contribute to stuff which is why we post on this forum if you dont want people screwing up your 'high and mighty' status then take your cheap story and shove it!

oh btw ownage I posted in your thread chapter two and added another part to the 'collision' part of ImagoX's thread

lol. Seriously I don't know why you guys are getting your panties in a bunch. I said it was a closed RP so let me be. If the moderators/administrators see this as a serious threat they'll come and tell me, not you.

hahahahahahahahahaha!! No.

"He's right guys stop making worthless posts if your going to contribute to the story then contribute, if not then dont post here anymore."
-Storm Crow

"I disapprove of you commenting on this person's post.

It may be wierd, but do we put down YOUR threads?

Dont be mean, please.

And making worthless posts, as such of Blow Holez is pretty damned worthless.

If you want to contribute something, please make it worthwile"
-ownage of teh elite(It hurts me to write your name, deep inside, it truly, hurt me)

Do you Guys have Multiple Personality Disorder or what?

Hey divinity, im really happy your checking my post history!
*You might want to check out the roleplay as an undead thread*
Sorry girl, no bones in my closet.

And btw, just to piss you off....
This is a closed RP no longer!
I shall end this fued right now
Bwahahahahaha
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"There He Is!!! After him!"

I cursed at the townspeople following me. They were ultimately egotistic, and couldn't even spare a piece of food for a hungry necromancer. These damned people were actually going to mob me, to take back a piece of bread.

My tormenter armour was very good at scaring people. My scarred face, snake-like eyes, and Spiked Red hair helped also. But these people had lost all previous fear of me, when I have first appeared and threatened them, making them hand over a piece of bread.

Yes, stealing was against my beliefs, but hell, I was hungry. These people just didn't understand how it felt to be hurt by your OWN spells, trying to fight off monsters. I have starved for three weeks, and it would be hell to pay if these people were to take back my piece of bread.

I rounded a corner of the streets, and nearly ran into another necromancer.

With the brief glimpse of her, I could see that she was around my age...in her early twenties. Pale, ice cold skin, silky silver hair, and it was her eyes that captured me. Plain, beautiful, cold, icey eyes. This lady sure was beautiful, for a necromancer. Unlike all other female necromancer's I have come upon, this lady actually had a beautiful composure, body, and face.

Spinning around her, I whispered "Sorry" in her ear.

She flashed me a smile, and she looked extremely beautiful.

"Damn Vantiel..Stop getting side-tracked" I said out loud.

Urging my feet to keep on moving, I could see that the townspeople still haven't given up. The fat store keeper who was leading them actually could run. I could barely contain myself as I watched the fat woman bounce about, trying to match my speed.

Jumping over a gate, I ran through a market.

Perfect, I thought to myself.

With all these people, I quickly blended into the crowd.

But I was the only necromancer here. My tormenter armour didn't help erasing my identity either. Looking around, I spotted a group of half naked dancers. Two elementalist, and the SAME necromancer my eyes beheld just minutes before.

How did she beat me here?!

It didn't matter, for the mob was approaching, and was intent on searching the whole marketplace for the necromancer in tormenter's armour.

Taking my tormenter armour off, save for my leggings and my shoes, I ran to the group of dancers.

Heck, I was going to dance with some of my clothes on.

The piece of bread had given me enough troubles.
I was going to eat it.

Biting it, I realized that it wasn't even good. Disgusting, crunchy and sickening, it tasted bitter to me. I don't know, maybe it was just my half dead state that mad me lose my sense of taste.

I didn't care if they caught me now.

I sure as hell wasn't going down, naked, save for my boxers.

Running to the beautiful female necromancer, I jumped up on the mini stage and danced my heart out.

She smiled, evidently remembering me, from the incident.

And I smiled back, re-assuring her that I was no creep, looking for a good time.

She probably knew my ordeal, for she danced with me, as If I was their own.

And hell, she was a good dancer.

Go Ownage!!! w00t!


and no I dont have a split personality, its simply the fact that THAT thread actually belonged here, as it was an RP please post stories type of thread. Your story 'un'fortunately doesn't belong here and obviously we're trying to tell you that. But alas, you simply will not listen to correct human logic. *sigh*

You took my story, Ripped it's throat at, and raped it.

lol.

*gives up*

Raven knew she couldn't get in any long-term relationships. But what was wrong with a one-night stand? Smiling to herself, Raven was about to ask (w/e your name is) out for some soul feasting, she heard a loud boom and the two naked female dancers scream. It was a GIANT, MEGA, VOLTRON! Raven aimed her laser bow at MEGAVOLTRON, firing, but missing. (w/e ownage's name is) Flew in the air and punched MEGAVOLTRON, knocking him over. One of the useless, defenless, naked elementalist rose into the air (Named Storm Crow) and blasted away at MEGAVOLTRON. MEGAVOLTRON shot at Storm Crow with lazer beams comming out of his eyes! Storm went spirling towards the ground, But Raven shot an arrow, piercing her right in the ponytail, putting Storm safetly tacked onto the wall. Just as Raven was about to shot another arrow at Voltron, he smashed the other naked elementalist. Then, to everyone's astonishement, (w/e ownage's name is) Transformed into a lean-mean(sexy) fighting machine, punching Voltron in the stomach. Voltron then opened a portal into another dimension, and hoped in. The force was pulling everyone in, but Raven and (w/e ownage's name is). Everyone was puleld inside. Storm crow, weak and defenless, was the first to get pulled in. She clung to the edge of the portal, yelling for help. Raven *accidently* stepped on Storm's hands, and Storm was gone forever. Then Raven and (w/e ownager's name is) married and lived happily after after.

May my story R.I.P

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Thank You!

*shows up out of the blue* I agree.. if someone wants to write a story for our enjoyment, trying to screw it up is the kind of thing I thought I would avoid by playing guild wars instead of diablo, or everquest. Getting kicks out of ruining someone elses fun is.. child like. Please start a new open rp post if you want to get involved. That Said, IMO, Divinity, you probably would have gotten a better response with calmer and more polite statements.

Maybe....maybe not

Are we still arguing here?



Teeeheee.

Oh and btw, storm, sorry for not posting in Sanjinu's thread for a bit.

Im a lazy bum right now.

I got a match in counter-strike rightyz nowz.

Buh Byez.

Ill reply to the thread l8r.

yea I was wondering why you were on but werent posting....

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Vantie eventually divorced his lazy wife, raven.

He had expected many things from her, but of course, no children were needed, as he was only 15.

Vantie often visited his "daughter" who was actually older than him!

Bored, and wanting to do something exciting, vantie called sanjinu dalsworth and omega, on the imp-phone.

"Hello? May I speak to Sanjinu Dalsworth? Ah, yes, hello. Okay. Yes, bachelor party, 12:00 midnight, be there. Oh yes, yes. Sure. Okay. See you there."

Vantiel hung up the phone.

Later that night, Vantie and his friends held a bachelor party. Remembering the kiss that Sanjinu and Alicia held, in their prison cell, Vantie invited Alicia also. Vantiel was scheming a plan in his brilliant, necromantic mind.

And so, many beautiful elementalist and rangers came over. Vantiel even spotted cynn, and danced with her for a bit. But she seemed more interested in mhenlo, so Vantie decided to go say hello to devona. But after a bit of chat, vantie got bored. It wasn't until Eve came, that Vantiel felt happy. They talked a bit, remembering and reminenscing.

At the end of the party (5:00 pm the next day), Vantie was yet again, lone and single. So, Vantiel said his goodbyes. And walked off into the EDIT:SUNSET

how can you have a sunrise if it's 5 pm?

he means sunset! quick! get the rubber out!

^^rubber here hopefully doesn't mean what I think it means....

(OOC: It is certainly not the rubber that hits the road...)

that wasnt what I was thinking...you might have the same idea i do

Ehehehe...

I think I get what he means...

Sunset...

Darkness..

No ones around..

o_0

What does a man do?

0_o

Bust out the rubber.

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BTW

VANTIES BACK!

*Party Balloons*

*shudders*

YAY!! Vanties back!! if hes really back post please!!

~Licia

day after day, Raven begged. Begged for money, begged for a home. She spent two years living on the streets. Until, a mysterious man offered her a magic necklace, if she would do him a few errands. Raven finished the man's errands swiftly, ripping out her arrow from the man's wife's body. Blood had splattered on her cheek, and her necklace. The necklace grew with an intense black light. Raven was enrathed with dark power, stronger then anyone man alive. She rose into the air, and hovered to Storm's and (vinne?) house. Using her dark magic, she grabbed (vinne?) house and threw it aside. Hearing the noise, Storm came running our screaming. Raven's eyes glowed white, and she threw out her arms and a dark blast came shooting from her hands. She hit Storm head on, and storm flew back 10 feet. Storm sprang back up on her feet, and casted a small fireball towards Raven. Raven moved out of the way, but couldn't escape the intense heat. The fireball had burned some of her coat, so she removed her long, dark blue cape. Storm charged at Raven, swinging her staff. Raven used her dark powers to grab her staff, and turn into dust. Smiling, Raven rose into the air and bgan casting a spell. Storm interupted her spell with another fireball. Tired of this childplay, Raven took ahold of Storm and rose her into the air, choking her. Just as Storm was breathing her last breaths, vantie came in and .. . . . ..
























Swung his sword at Storm, cackling since he got the last hit. Then Raven used her dark powers to control Vannie so he would do whatever she said. . .

And they lived a happy, glorious, not to mention good sex-life!, life ever after.

VANTIE

Goddamnit!

V-A-N-T-I-E

Short for Vanatiel.

I am NOT V-I-N-N-Y.



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Raven was finished with Vanatiel sooner than expected. Vantie had dark powers also, as he too was a necromancer. Using his powers, he had KILLED raven, FOREVER, BLASTED, OBLIVERATED, KABOOM, DEAD.

Vantie then ressurected ALICIA STORMCROW and walked w/ V-A-N-T-I-E
to SANJINU DALSWORTH'S HOUSE, and lived happily ever after.

With no sex involved.

But yet a good life