Mesmer Help Pls Quick!!!!

Hey Guys I Am New To This Forum.... ANd My friend told me if i needed some help to come here.... I am looking for the best Mez build possible for HoH.... I use

Me/R
Edge Of Extinction
Blackout
Mind Wrack
Power Drain
Chaos Storm
Energy Tap
Energy Burn
Conjure Phantasm

And this doesnt seem to be working, I Am tryin to make a shutdown mez so i can kill smite teams.... and this build i have made doesnt seem to be working... id like to be helped out with this so i cn make it by today and actually be a good mez....

i think your problem is you are trying to mix two separate builds: the edrain, and the dom.

thats an opinion, so ill start with something major:
diversion! you are missing that. an incredibly usefull skill to have, you absolutely need it.

chaos storm? id say useless...
mind wrack eonwe hates for some reason i havent quite figured out yet, but id trust him/her, usually right

eoe depends on your teams build, im not sure if its good for every team.

conjure phantasm? im not sure what thats doing for you....
energy tap/burn are edrain. they will have a minimal effect on an ele.

as for skills i would add, backfire isnt that bad. it does hurt somewhat and can annoy then. just remember not to do backfire/diversion/blackout all at once, thats dumb

also add shatter enchant/drain enchant. you need to debuf them somehow.

all in all i would rather go with me/n, you can annoy them a helluva lot more with well of profane, as well as necrotic transversal + chillblains.

oh and wheres your elite o,0

this isn't really a shut down build, Its an energy bomb build. More effective vs eles. Against a smite build, go with counter damage. Much more effective, as most monks are smart enough to have easily reknewable enrgy sources (e.g. Offering of blood).

If you want a shut down build, you'd need skills that actually "shut down" your enemies.

Try the following skills:

Arcane Theivery
Diversion
Ignorance
Blackout
POWER BLOCK! wow, this one is a must for smiters, healers, or any other monks.
Energizing Wind (your allies might hate you for it though)
Res Signet
Back Fire (Not shut down, but good anyhoo)

You'll have to remember though that your job is not to drain energy, so don't spam your spells.

Pace them so that once the disabled skills are recharged, your disable them again. Backfire is Allowed to be spasticaly cast though. Its just in case you mess up.

Okey I Just Came Across a mez that owned my smiter really quick with his spells and just him...... Thtas how i want my Mez lol The reason i am asking is bcuz i am remaking my mez ( a rp mez for HoH ) Im gunn atry all tips that i get from u guys Thanx