Katrina: Natures Fury

I am going to write a story about Hurricane Katrina, I have a feeling that I must do this most of it will be fictional, i am using a random character put into the disaster, everything else is real.

Prologue
Sitting on a makeshift bed at Reunion Arena in Dallas Texas, Phillip couldn't believe all that he had been through happened,he had told his story to many reporters who had come to hear his story. "I hate Hurricanes" he thought.
He saw another reporter walk over to him and he took a deep breath preparing to recite his story yet again.

I am thinking that this should be really good plz leave your coments.

Walking to school Phillip couldn't help but notice how beautiful it was. He saw Alison walking ahead of him alone. Alison was the most beautiful girl Phillip had ever seen, they were next door neighbours, but Phillip couldn't find words to say to her. School as usual was boring, it started a couple of weeks ago. He had been watching the weather alot lately, Florida was just hit by Hurricane Katrina and Katrina was in the Gulf of Mexico strenghtening every day moving to the west.Phillips grandparents had just moved into town he was supposed to come over tomarrow to chat and talk, or so he thought. In a few days Phillips world would be turned upside down.