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Hi there

I'm writing this partly because I have too write a fiction story for my English class at School, and I think it would be fun too type and post it on here, get suggestions & comments from readers, and copy & paste the story too word and print it out.
Anyway.. I'll be adding it in parts so it's not time consuming.
I hope you enjoy reading this.
ps: I might use terms in old style, like refer too competiton arenas as fort koga ect.
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Part 1- The Awaiting
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It was late evening, in the icy caverns of droknars forge, I was upgrading my bow, tainting the string and personalising the handle.
My pet bear, Yoggie, sat beside me, giving me a saddended- like roar, I comforted Yoggie, but he seemed upset.
" It's ok Yoggie, the night is coming, you can have a nice rest"
Again, Yoggie moaned.
" What's wrong, Yoggie," I inquisited, knowing that he couldn't answer me.
For the next 10 minuites, Yoggie kept yawning. I was starting too worry.
I started too think he may be diseased, I thought of taking him too see Mhelno too get him checked over and cleansed.
Yoggie didn't look ill, or offput, he looked more... bored.
I was still very lively, Yoggie looked like he was ready for action.
I said in a tender loving voice " Yoggie, you want too go practice?"
Yoggie jumped up, as if he was attempting a brutal mauling.
I assumed that he wanted too go fight in the Team Arenas.
I stood up, Yoggie scouted ahead, we reached the centre of the team arenas waiting area.
When we got there, I spoke too a Xunlai Agent and withdrawn my Frostbound armor, as it was very cold.
I searched around, looking for a party who would actually be competitive towards the enemys.
" Looking for a party, Need Monk & Elementalist!" I shouted. After I completed that sentence, Yoggie done a huge, deafening roar.
A red hair girl aproached me, her name was Cynn, I could tell by her armor she was attuned too fire magic.
" Hello, I would be honoured too join your party, as long as that foul bear will shut his mouth" Cynn stated, with envious eyes.
Yoggie growled at Cynn, and jumped in front of me too protect me, as if Cynn was about too shoot balls of fire at me.
" Hmmph " Cynn muttered, as she sat down on a icy bench nearby.
So, that's one party member, now we need two more people.
Again, with alterations, I yelled " Looking for two more people, a monk and a warrior!"
Suddenly, a holy servent of dwayna aproached me. I could tell by the divine glowing aura sorrounding his hands that he was a monk, a healing monk.
" Hello, I be Mhenlo, servant of dwayna, I shall protect thee in the mists of combat"
Mhenlo sat down, and I introduced Mhenlo too Cynn, I could tell Cynn didn't like Mhenlo.
" Don't rant on about been all holy and that, I've heard it before on the fiery island chain, when hydras were chasing from all directions. Where were monks holyness then? Eh?" Cynn ranted.
Ok, two down, one too sit

" Need one warrior for completion of group" I yelled.
A mighty female warrior by the name of Devona aproached me, she was wielding a huge like hammer, I knew I wouldn't want too be on the opposing side of that.
"I would like too join your party, if the place still exists" Devona said politely,
with loyalty in her words.
" Sure you can join" I said.
So, they we were, Me( Ash McMahon, With my almighty bow), Cynn The Elementalist, Mhenlo The Monk Of Healing, Devona The Mighty Hammer Master and my lovely big bear, Yoggie, ready too enter the frontier gates of the action stage.
" Is everyone ready" I asked.
I heard a triple yes, and a huge roar coming from my allies.
"So be it, we shall make for the arena itself" I said in confidence.
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End Of Part 1- The Awaiting
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Notes: Wow, that was alot of typing


Thanks for reading
Best Regards, Ashleigh.
PART 2- COMING SOON