w/me pvm build

I want to try out the warrior mesmer combination

However i'm not the such a great builder I came up with this :

Ineptitude
Attribute: Illusions
Description: For 4-11 seconds, if target foe attacks, that foe takes 10-85 damage and becomes Blinded, and Ineptitude ends.
Energy Cost: 10
Recharge Time: 20 sec.

Illusionary Weaponry
Attribute: Illusions
Description: For 30 seconds, you deal no damage in melee, but whenever you attack in melee, target foe takes 8-38 damage.
Energy Cost: 15
Recharge Time: 40 sec.

Illusion of Weakness
Attribute: Illusions
Description: You lose 50/202 health. Illusion of Weakness ends if damage drops your health below 25% of your maximum. When Illusion of Weakness ends, you gain 50/202 health.
Energy Cost: 10
Recharge Time: 30 sec.

Energy Drain
Attribute: Inspiration
Description: Steals 8-20 energy from the target foe.
Energy Cost: 5
Recharge Time: 20 sec.

should i lose this one and take frenzy instead?

Gash
Attribute: Swordsmanship
Description: If this attack hits a bleeding enemy, it strikes for 5-9 more damage and the enemy suffers a deep wound lowering the enemies max health by 20% for 5-17 seconds. This skill requires adrenaline and will be usable after 7 strikes.
Energy Cost: 0
Recharge Time: 0 sec.

Sever Artery
Attribute: Swordsmanship
Description: If this attack hits, the opponent will start to Bleed for 5-21, losing health over time. This uses adrenaline and is usable after 4 strikes
Energy Cost: 0
Recharge Time: 0 sec.

Wary Stance
Attribute: Tactics
Description: For the next 5-12 seconds, while wielding a sword, you have a 75% chance to "Parry" incoming melee attacks. You gain 5 energy for each successful parry. Bonetti's Defense ends if you use a skill.
Energy Cost: 0
Recharge Time: 0 sec.

Watch Yourself
Attribute: Tactics
Description: Party members near you gain +20 armor for 5-12 seconds.
Energy Cost: 5
Recharge Time: 15 sec.

Total skills : Swordsmanship 12 // tactics 8 // illusion 10 // inspiration (rest)

Is it any good or not? I really don't know cuz the recharge time of the mesmer skills looks really long:/

-Hawky

Thats not very good, as a warrior u wont have much energy so u want to take spells that only cost 5 to cast maybe 1 big one for 10, nothing 15...also as a warrior u will mostly be fighting casters be it monks or elem or necros so u want mes abilities to hinder their casting, not dmg dealing spells cause their armor is weak and u will do enough dmg with your weps with out exta dmg from spells. Also your armor is strong enough so u dont need to blind em or buff your armor by 20...people dont attack warriors till everything else is dead.

You should(i would say must) wear Gladiator Armour (+7 energy)
grab a +12 Chaklam (req. Illu Magic)
for such high cost of energy

But, that makes ur 11 Attrb point in Tactic worthless, mayb make it be 11 Str instead

Talizar: pvm build - ai attacks warriors a little earlier than people...