daring dolittle
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i haven't played prince of persia. but the poem is a nice tribute outlining the story and highlighting the time warp aspect of the game....
strong and brave is how i would describe this chant. it's strong in words and sentiments. it's brave because not everything had to rhyme...
another good poem. good meter, good rhyme. harder to interpret, i.e. more confusing. daring.
this poem has a good story. it seemed to go philosophical but pulled right back to plot. shouldn't you stick with one or the other? write...
good. harder to digest than those instant gratification poems. write some more. daring
very good. i like. write some more. daring
hello there, please take a few moments to read my poetry at the following address: www.daringdoings.blogspot.com 360.yahoo.com/daringdolittle...
hey there, i like it. good story. write some more. daring