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Hotel

Hotel

Academy Page

Join Date: Aug 2007

I'm known to AFK in various places. Call me: nomadic.

The Mirror of Reason [SNOW]

Mo/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tender Wolf
Cool shots everyone! Morag, your ele looks like a candy cane. hehe And Hotel, I like that ele.

Contestants are now free to post their outtakes in this thread! Stay tuned for voting results either later today or tomorrow, with assignment 2 shortly afterward!
Thank you Tender. :]
I can't wait for assignment 2 where I hopefully will get the chance to redeem myself.

tidus yumemiru

tidus yumemiru

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Mar 2007

Australia - other wise chained to my computer

Bring The Reign [Rain] Alliance

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whoa that one was a bit tougher then i thought it would be so looking forward to the next assignment plus i have more time to dedicate to it now seeing as Christmas is over

LOL @ chicken of the seas pics and go the reindeer!

CasterOfShame27

CasterOfShame27

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Mar 2007

Haha, hopefully I'll post some outtakes later. Love everyone's shots! And Hotel, I'm hoping I can redeem myself also, if I get the chance! Best of luck to everyone for results!

Toutatis

Toutatis

Walking Wiki

Join Date: Nov 2006

Isle of Medication

Visitors from Aranna [VFA]

Me/E

As the assignment writeups weren't included in the main thread with the submitted shots, I will be posting mine here. It is rather long, so please bear with me.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Toutatis' assignment 1 writeup
In this assignment, I have tried to retell part of an old Yuletide story told in my faith: the Tale of Rimen, the Wizard of Winter.

A long, long time ago, when the world was young, there was no winter. There was no great cold to balance the great heat of summer, and without this balance the earth was beginning to deteriorate; the spirits of the earth grew ever wearier of supporting life without having the opportunity to rest.

At this time, there lived a young hydromancer named Rimen. His astonishing affinity for water, the lifeblood of the world, alerted him to the earth's anguish; upon realisation that a new balance must be created he set out towards the northern mountains - the only place in the world where the cold ruled, and where the spirits of ice made their home.

Braving the bitter chill of the high peaks, Rimen spent many moons communing with the ice spirits. He learned the secrets of spreading cold; how to slow that which moves, how to call crystals from the clouds, how to force the very air itself to solidify into cold, hard ice. When Rimen returned to the lowlands, he was a changed man.

Sensing the spirits of earth still crying out for respite, Rimen gathered all of his new power and released it in a single titanic blast of pure cold. At his touch, the trees immediately grew heavy with hoar and icicles hung from their branches, shining like quartz knives. Beneath his hands the lakes froze to ice and the ground became covered with a carpet of white, glittering in the sunlight like diamond dust. In that instant the world was frozen, and under the blanket of snow the spirits of earth could finally slumber and regain their energies.

Thus was the first winter, and although Rimen's life was consumed by the cold he released on that day his spirit lives on. Every year, the spirit of Rimen returns to paint the world in crystalline white, putting the earth to sleep until the warmth of spring comes; a reminder to all of us that the balance of nature must be maintained whatever the cost.


In this screenshot, I have tried to capture the part of the story where Rimen unleashes his burst of frozen energy. Deus is dressed in blues and golds, which traditionally represent water, along with trimmings made from very fine white fur - reminiscent of frost - to show Rimen's new abilities with ice. In the background, the scenery has already started to change under his influence; the still green trees are being choked by the weight of ice that has formed on their leaves, snow is falling and coating the ground, the lake has frozen solid, and icicles can be seen forming in the nearby cave. His left hand is held up, as if to wave it over the bare ground he is standing on to summon more snow down from the sky to coat the rock with bright, feathery flakes; not wanting any piece of ground to remain untouched as he spreads the cold that the world needs to gain a new balance of nature.

CasterOfShame27

CasterOfShame27

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Mar 2007

Here's my little write-up that explains what's going on:

Quote:
"Holiday cheer? I think not. Even the slightest scent of peppermint gives Scarlet a migraine the size of Grenth's left claw."

Hotel

Hotel

Academy Page

Join Date: Aug 2007

I'm known to AFK in various places. Call me: nomadic.

The Mirror of Reason [SNOW]

Mo/

Wow, Toutatis. That story is full of imagery. Its numbing.

Quote:
My entries are tired into the holidays through stress. We all know how stressful holidays can be so I would like to try my hand at portraying that to the best of my abilities.

The inspiration for this idea came through me being stuck in new york because of some crappy roads and returning home the day before the due date upon where i was struggling to come up with an idea - and then it struck me.
o_o, I just noticed I had a typo.. -_-'

Queen Kitiara

Queen Kitiara

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Aug 2007

youtube.com/user/QueenKitiara

[Rain] Alliance "Bring on the Reign"

W/P

Ok guys thank you so much for taking the time to post what u wrote ^.^ - gave me a lot of insight and wow Toutatis >.> cool story!

Clever work Caster and Hotel...sometimes I get a creative spark and it's always good to go try to cap your idea, but I always copy/paste my assignment and highlight what the main objective is to make sure I hit my mark cuz I although it's good to think out of the box, you have to make sure you are meeting the main task of the assignment. With that being said, I do think there was some confusion about the whole "anti-cheer" approach and I hope the judges take that into consideration.

Your mesmer's face looked beautiful (lighting) in her shot Caster, and Hotel the timing with the hand on Rosary's face must have been hard to cap! Don't give up guys! I see some good stuff in there and I'm betting the judges will let ya know what they hope you improve on ^.^

Good luck guys! I just hate that someone has to go already

CasterOfShame27

CasterOfShame27

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Mar 2007

Aww thanks Kitiara! I'm glad to know you're watching out for us. I'm sure it won't get in the way too much, and everyone did so well, so problems really aren't necissary. We did what we did, and that's that.

Now to wait for results.

Hotel

Hotel

Academy Page

Join Date: Aug 2007

I'm known to AFK in various places. Call me: nomadic.

The Mirror of Reason [SNOW]

Mo/

@ Kit:
As a matter of fact, yes it did take quite a while. It was either too high or too low and looked ridiculous. I had about.. 300 something or other screenshots that weren't just right. D:

Lets not forget: Everyone loves a BLOOPER!



From carrying those lovely present everyday, you're bound too pull some kind of muscle. Poor Rosary.

Heavenly Messanger

Heavenly Messanger

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Aug 2007

Looking for one >.>

Mo/

Here's what i should have sent it, a shot of Ambriel seeing the first snow fall in Lion's Arch (not cropped) :


And here she is trying to catch some snow in her hands as i falls:


This was my other sad one, which i think is better than what i sent in:


Thing that really frustrates me is, I took all of these before i did my assignment shot. I could still be in the running .

Oh well. I might continue to post here, we'll see.
Good luck everyone

tidus yumemiru

tidus yumemiru

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Mar 2007

Australia - other wise chained to my computer

Bring The Reign [Rain] Alliance

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lol aww u changed ur sig heavenly

The Grumple

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Dec 2007

W/

That first picture would have definately kept you in the running i think Heavanly

Morag D

Morag D

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Mar 2007

UK/Austria

[bone]

P/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Geishe
Your shot would have won this week's challenge if you were in this contest! Its stunning!!
wow, thank you


aw Heavenly, that's so sad, I was bound to cheer you because you made a paragon! it's very difficult to make dark-skinned chars look good, because they always seem to be slightly grumpy - remember, the lighting is very important, especially for dark-skinned chars I know what I'm talking about

read the assignments carefully, and then try a mix between doing exactly what the judges will expect and your own interpretation - there's no right or wrong with that, it can work out perfectly or it doesn't

Shizoku Jin

Shizoku Jin

Pre-Searing Cadet

Join Date: Dec 2007

Equal Rights For The Charr [HUG]

N/

Theres my festive shot ^^ clash of the festive colors!!! and far too many sweets

~nymph~

~nymph~

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Aug 2006

here are some of my outtakes:

hehe I just couldn't resist

Dwayna stop putting bunny ears on me!

Nymph's hair was glitching

Nymph moaning in despair because her snowman melted

faf

Academy Page

Join Date: Jul 2006

Wolf Demon Tribe [WOLF]

W/E

Hi everyone!

I am going to send an application for tyria's most wanted male 2, but it is the first time I will enter such a contest and was looking for feedback. Here are the pictures I got so far :
For the "favorite armor" picture :

I think this one is quite good, although I wanted to know : do you think it matters if the feets aren't in the picture? Just to make sure it is as perfect as possible.

For the "guild hall" picture (I have many takes, I am unsure yet if I will take one of these, and if yes which one):

I was suspicious about this one : I think the tree is taking too much attention and that we don't see my face enough.


I liked this one, but not more than that. I think it was a good shot but could have been better.


I am pretty sure I wont pick this one because there is a big empty space at the right of the picture, although if you see potencial in the picture tell me .


I think this one was really good and matching the theme of the task. Feedback on how to improve it would be appreciated

For the "why are you unique" picture, don't have it yet (need to find a scene).

I am here because I would like to have some opinions about these shots. I would greatly appreciate if some of you would take the time to help me find my strengths/weaknesses (more interested into knowing my weaknesses) in my screenshots (example: do I put my character not enough in the front of the picture, do I crop badly... what am I doing wrong!).

I would also like to know which one of my "guild hall pictures" you people prefer and why.

Also... I know I am asking a lot, but if someone would accept to be my mentor to help me take better pictures/screenshots, I would be eternaly grateful.

thanks in advance

Geishe

Geishe

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: May 2006

The Agonized

Rt/Mo

Quote:
Originally Posted by faf
I would also like to know which one of my "guild hall pictures" you people prefer and why.
I prefer 2 the most because theres nothing much you need to crop. Every other one is currently unfinished, crop them... they're also too busy. As well, set Anti-aliasing to 4x when you take shots. It'll lag, but it'll look better. As well, lighting is your friend, make sure you face the direction in which you will be most visible. Unless you want to create a darker mood. In general though, lighting is your best friend... I mean look at Amergin's shots and you'll see what amazing effects you can get through good lighting!

Example: (TNTS):


I think for now, just learn to crop nicely. Like the first picture on the beach, right now, its just too wide and unfocused. Just a 2 second crop job:





Makes it more focused and not as busy.

I like that youre playing with poses. Keep it up!

faf

Academy Page

Join Date: Jul 2006

Wolf Demon Tribe [WOLF]

W/E

thanks you alot for all the constructive comments! I will for sure take them into consideration and will try to practice more, considering these weaknesses you have identified. If more wants to comment, feel free

Hotel

Hotel

Academy Page

Join Date: Aug 2007

I'm known to AFK in various places. Call me: nomadic.

The Mirror of Reason [SNOW]

Mo/

Well, I definately took a risk with this assignment; hope it pays off.

CasterOfShame27

CasterOfShame27

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Mar 2007

Quote:
Originally Posted by Hotel
Well, I definately took a risk with this assignment; hope it pays off.
Risks can be really good. I just always try to remember this is about fun, and taking great screenshots. If you're not having fun with it, there's no use.

Queen Kitiara

Queen Kitiara

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Aug 2007

youtube.com/user/QueenKitiara

[Rain] Alliance "Bring on the Reign"

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Hey faf - I think it's awesome that you've utilized the feedback thread to get help from these talented contestants - Geishe's info is dead on - I would break it down line for line and make sure you follow each part cuz it is all important advice not to be taken lightly ^.^

I'll give ya some tips after my holiday visitors leave that might be helpful (maybe late tonight or tomorrow afternoon CST) ...we warriors gotta help each other out

Diddy bow

Diddy bow

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Oct 2006

Jawsome!!!!!!!!!!!

looking for one :p

A/D

Quote:
Originally Posted by faf
I think this one is quite good, although I wanted to know : do you think it matters if the feets aren't in the picture? Just to make sure it is as perfect as possible.
Id definetly retake a full body one, it specified that nothing should be cropped out.

faf

Academy Page

Join Date: Jul 2006

Wolf Demon Tribe [WOLF]

W/E

Quote:
Originally Posted by Queen Kitiara
Hey faf - I think it's awesome that you've utilized the feedback thread to get help from these talented contestants - Geishe's info is dead on - I would break it down line for line and make sure you follow each part cuz it is all important advice not to be taken lightly ^.^

I'll give ya some tips after my holiday visitors leave that might be helpful (maybe late tonight or tomorrow afternoon CST) ...we warriors gotta help each other out
Omg the queen of the contests... would want to help me!?! :P hehe thanks for all advices everyone. I do appreciate that you take time to help me evolve. I will do as you say bow and take another shot, thanks for the tip

Queen Kitiara

Queen Kitiara

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Aug 2007

youtube.com/user/QueenKitiara

[Rain] Alliance "Bring on the Reign"

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Geishe

Geishe

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: May 2006

The Agonized

Rt/Mo

Queen, you are the loveliest contestant EVAR

Queen Kitiara

Queen Kitiara

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Aug 2007

youtube.com/user/QueenKitiara

[Rain] Alliance "Bring on the Reign"

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Quote:
Originally Posted by Geishe
Queen, you are the loveliest contestant EVAR
Oh no Geishe, I'm am just emulating you I so admire how you've helped contestants out with such valuable help, I think we both just love great photos and creativity and like to see others grow to be able to being a part of all this fun ^.^ but seriously, u inspired me to share what I learned cuz I found your past comments in threads to be so valueable to me as a newbie



edit: to my fellow screenshotters whom I much respect and admire, if I mislead Faf or made a mistake myself PLEEZ do put a shot up that corrects me I'd hate to misdirect anyone and certainly don't think I'm the final answer or perfect example of the best way for him to accomplish his shots...just offering some tips so please join in all and help me out

Roguish Seraph

Roguish Seraph

Frost Gate Guardian

Join Date: Dec 2005

Kamadan

[Evil]

Mo/E

sheesh Kiti you are on a role . Like Geishe said, you are the ultimate ss contestant. I love how your so helpful to anyone. We need more people on this forum like you. ^^

Mind if I link these helpful hints to the TMW forum? <3

Stalker Haras

Stalker Haras

I Didn't Do It

Join Date: Jul 2005

Mo/

Wow. I might have to restrict kiti from posting and reading here, she's going to go nuts. xP

tidus yumemiru

tidus yumemiru

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Mar 2007

Australia - other wise chained to my computer

Bring The Reign [Rain] Alliance

P/

o_o holy cow Kiti

Queen Kitiara

Queen Kitiara

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Aug 2007

youtube.com/user/QueenKitiara

[Rain] Alliance "Bring on the Reign"

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Uh oh...am I being a bad wammo Stalker? >.> lemme know if I need to combine this alltogther (I'm still a forum noob )

And honestly this is for a TMW contestant Roguish so I'd be glad to move all this to TMW's thread, combine it into one post...it was that his request was here so I thought I was supposed to reply here :S

Ya I know I got a overzealous with the response but I promised faf I would help, got tied up with responding in the amount of time I said I would, and didn't want him to feel blown off so tried to make up for it heh heh...

Tender Wolf

Tender Wolf

Banned

Join Date: Jul 2007

All over Tyria, Cantha, & Elona

The Eternal Night Vanguard [TEN]

R/

Nice comments Stalker and Kit. rofl

Okay guys, now that the assignment 2 submissions are up, contestants can now post their outtakes in here! And here is my attempt at assignment #2 (I picture it taking place in Guild Wars 2 time, based on what the PC Gamer Guild Wars edition said about Elona):

Starli looked around at the remnants of her home. Nothing was left. Her fists clenched and fire filled her eyes as tears rained down her face. Tears of anger and loss.

Alone since she was only 13 years old, the clothes on her back made from her own hands, Starli remembered that horrific day that changed her life.

She was only 13 years old. The Kournans were attempting to take control of Elona. They slaughtered hundreds, burned homes, destroyed everything in their path for domination. Few survived that terrible day. Starli’s family was taken from her when she was so young and innocent. She’d been learning the art of the Ranger, to hunt and survive on her own. When she’d returned, she found her home ablaze and nothing but the corpses of her parents and three siblings remaining. Frightened for her life, she fled.

The terrible scene she’d witnessed as she returned home from hunting played over and over in her mind like a cricket playing its lullaby. Nothing left of her home but flames and ashes, the dead bodies of her family helpless inside.

Starli had to survive on her own. She hunted for food, made her own weapons and clothes, and hoped that one day she would join her family in the Underworld. But until then, she vowed to avenge her family.

Now, she is hell-bent on revenge. Though their numbers are great, the Kournans must pay. That is the thought that runs through Starli’s mind every day and every night. She lurks in the shadows, behind the trees, waiting for the right moment to strike.



And here are some outtakes:






Toutatis

Toutatis

Walking Wiki

Join Date: Nov 2006

Isle of Medication

Visitors from Aranna [VFA]

Me/E

Kit, your generosity is astounding! There are a lot of tips there that all of us can learn from

Tender, I like your take on this assignment. I love the way you've used the fiery backdrop as a graphical allusion to rage. Gives me the shivers!

(Note to self: don't aggro Starli when she's in a bad mood)



Anyhow: here are some of my outtakes... I think a couple of them could be seen as too large for a direct post and I don't want to end up on the wrong side of the ban stick, so I'll be linking to them this week.


"Hey, a penny!"
Gold among the goldenrods

"You show up uninvited, your infernal packmule ATE my begonias, and NOW you insist on flash photography?!"
Turn that thing off!

"$#&£! I left my keys at the tavern! AGAIN!"
Next time, pay attention to the barkeep when he says you've had enough

"Wanna come in for a coffee? I spent all day grinding for the beans."
How could anyone refuse that face?

CasterOfShame27

CasterOfShame27

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Mar 2007

Here's one of my outtakes:



You climb up that ladder and try to break into my house, you die.

Ember010

Ember010

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2006

D/

Lol! These outakes are funny I havn't really posted in this thread, so I'll start with the sleep deprivation and too much caffiene shots. Pretty much nearly identical, but I was adamant not to move because I'd dfound the best lighting and didnt want to lose the exact spot.

Identical Spot:
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...ndmightdie.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...tomgtellme.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...moreperfec.jpg
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...TANDBECOOL.jpg

Lol note the pic names, I was chucking the url's into alliance chat looking for advice, panicking ALOT.

http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r...nhalelujah.jpg
One of the rejects of my final shot..

But it was the most stressful assigment for me. I'm gonna blame the sleep deprivation. =]

PS Kiti, I love your guides! They help me so much <3 Writing guide? *hint hint*

(cause I'm rusty)

Tender Wolf

Tender Wolf

Banned

Join Date: Jul 2007

All over Tyria, Cantha, & Elona

The Eternal Night Vanguard [TEN]

R/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Toutatis
Kit, your generosity is astounding! There are a lot of tips there that all of us can learn from

Tender, I like your take on this assignment. I love the way you've used the fiery backdrop as a graphical allusion to rage. Gives me the shivers!

(Note to self: don't aggro Starli when she's in a bad mood)



Anyhow: here are some of my outtakes... I think a couple of them could be seen as too large for a direct post and I don't want to end up on the wrong side of the ban stick, so I'll be linking to them this week.


"Hey, a penny!"
Gold among the goldenrods

"You show up uninvited, your infernal packmule ATE my begonias, and NOW you insist on flash photography?!"
Turn that thing off!

"$#&£! I left my keys at the tavern! AGAIN!"
Next time, pay attention to the barkeep when he says you've had enough

"Wanna come in for a coffee? I spent all day grinding for the beans."
How could anyone refuse that face?
rofl! Nice shots Deus! Love that turn that thing off one! And yes, it's not wise to make me mad. muhahahaha

faf

Academy Page

Join Date: Jul 2006

Wolf Demon Tribe [WOLF]

W/E

Hey all!

I took some other screenshots since all the very useful comments, and I tried to apply every little tips everyone gave to make better screenshots.

I will show you what I got so far.



These are the four screenshots I prefered in all those I took, still for the Guild Hall assigment. I think we are getting somewhere, but there are still two or three things I don't like about the screenshots. I am just unable to find out these mistakes in the screenshots. I would be glad if someone could help me (again hehe) and identify things I need to work on.

Thanks again in advance, love you all for the very nice comments!

-Faf

PS: unfortunatly, whenever I take a screenshot with anti-alias 4x or 2x, the screenshot in my screens folder is just ALL black. I tried to fix things but nothing is changing, its always black. Thus, I still take my screens with no anti-alias. Someone have an idea why this is happening and how to fix it?

PPS: Also, forgive me for my poor grammar and all the mistakes I do, I'm a frenchy hehe .

The Last Anthem

The Last Anthem

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Aug 2006

my guildhall.

Mo/

something you and everyone else might want to try for better quality screens is to go to your guild wars icon on your desktop, right click properties at the end of the target line type -bmp and apply so your shots aren't saved as jpeg

as for your AA, I don't have a clue. and for your cropping leave just a little bit more background in there, maybe not a lot more but as it is now its just your character and nothing else

tidus yumemiru

tidus yumemiru

Lion's Arch Merchant

Join Date: Mar 2007

Australia - other wise chained to my computer

Bring The Reign [Rain] Alliance

P/

Quote:
Originally Posted by The Last Anthem
something you and everyone else might want to try for better quality screens is to go to your guild wars icon on your desktop, right click properties at the end of the target line type -bmp and apply so your shots aren't saved as jpeg
/snip

Ahhh! TY! i had been trying to figure out how to do that for ages my SS used to be bmp's but i messed around with it and accidentally changed then to jpegs and could never get it to go back i was overly worried about it tho they still seemed to come up fine but now i can compare!

TY!

Tender Wolf

Tender Wolf

Banned

Join Date: Jul 2007

All over Tyria, Cantha, & Elona

The Eternal Night Vanguard [TEN]

R/

My attempt for assignment #3! I saw Amy Lee from Evanescence for Starli.



And some outtakes:

Can't really see her face

The pose doesn't really show me Amy Lee lol

And all of these were too dark if you ask me



"The Open Door" anyone?...

I saw that CD cover for these two. lol

Here is the original CD cover:

CasterOfShame27

CasterOfShame27

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Mar 2007

Ooh, good pictures Tender! Your Ranger totally does remind me of Evanescence...if only Rangers had long dresses!