Nice comments Stalker and Kit. rofl
Okay guys, now that the assignment 2 submissions are up, contestants can now post their outtakes in here! And here is my attempt at assignment #2 (I picture it taking place in Guild Wars 2 time, based on what the PC Gamer Guild Wars edition said about Elona):
Starli looked around at the remnants of her home. Nothing was left. Her fists clenched and fire filled her eyes as tears rained down her face. Tears of anger and loss.
Alone since she was only 13 years old, the clothes on her back made from her own hands, Starli remembered that horrific day that changed her life.
She was only 13 years old. The Kournans were attempting to take control of Elona. They slaughtered hundreds, burned homes, destroyed everything in their path for domination. Few survived that terrible day. Starli’s family was taken from her when she was so young and innocent. She’d been learning the art of the Ranger, to hunt and survive on her own. When she’d returned, she found her home ablaze and nothing but the corpses of her parents and three siblings remaining. Frightened for her life, she fled.
The terrible scene she’d witnessed as she returned home from hunting played over and over in her mind like a cricket playing its lullaby. Nothing left of her home but flames and ashes, the dead bodies of her family helpless inside.
Starli had to survive on her own. She hunted for food, made her own weapons and clothes, and hoped that one day she would join her family in the Underworld. But until then, she vowed to avenge her family.
Now, she is hell-bent on revenge. Though their numbers are great, the Kournans must pay. That is the thought that runs through Starli’s mind every day and every night. She lurks in the shadows, behind the trees, waiting for the right moment to strike.
And here are some outtakes:
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"The Open Door" anyone?...
