Commission - Closed: Tommy's Sketchbook

Aeronwen

Aeronwen

not so much fell as.....

Join Date: Jan 2009

UK

bone

R/

Nians monk is lovely, I just think the nose is perhaps a bit pink.

love your pencil sketches - especially the apple one

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

Bit more progress. Thigh-face ratio is a bit off I'm afraid I also need to do something about the hair, I always find it the most powerful thing about Mina, but it doesn't really stand out to the background

Morag D

Morag D

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Mar 2007

UK/Austria

[bone]

P/

face is lovely! lasso tool, transform & warp can probably fix the size issue in no time I like the hair, it might just need to be a bit darker

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

Small doodle, trying out stroke direction and more grey in parts that are further away. These small doodles are teaching me so much the last few days, I can advice it to everyone
NSFW - Boobs

Charlie Dayman

Charlie Dayman

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Apr 2009

Trifecta Luminati [TRI]

W/

Nice sketch, I really like that brush head you're using to do your strokes.

As for Mina's hair, try adding a few lighter colors as highlights to make it pop out from that dark background. It's a pretty dark picture, so you don't have to go too overboard with lighting.

InfestedHydralisk

InfestedHydralisk

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jan 2007

The Netherlands

None

R/

Really good job on the face.

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

Thnx IH and Charlie

Decided to take the doodle a little further. Will finish it tomorrow hopefully. Planning on the other hand to hold a cup of coffee, spilling a little. Unless someone has another idea that you may find fitting

Still NSFW, boobs.

Eastern Magik

Eastern Magik

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Sep 2008

ooh, that looks nice. Weapon looks like a real deal :O

And for the other picture, if you have corel painter, trying out wet acrylic brushes is a must. They leave incredible texture and blend at the same time. I think you would like it :3

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

I've got painter 11, I will try it out then, only tried the oil pastels really. And bleh my image got removed already, guess I'll have to start using dA scraps more for my nudities.

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

Not that much of a doodle anymore, turned out to be one of my favorites

Still NSFW: http://overtoom.deviantart.com/#/d3j8ai1

Going to close commissions since there doesn't seem to be that much interest, and I hate doing things with lines anyway (I discovered when doing those commissions )..

Death By An Arrow

Death By An Arrow

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jul 2009

The Kurzick Mob [Mob]

R/

I would comment on it, if I was able to see it. But I'm sure it turned out great ?

The Mina/Warden piece is coming out really great! The face looks awesome, but it looks familiar. And I can't tell where from o___o

Death By An Arrow

Death By An Arrow

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jul 2009

The Kurzick Mob [Mob]

R/

Can't switch it quite yet, just shy of 18 >.< Just gotta play the waiting game.

actionjack

actionjack

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Oct 2005

Kali

W/E

Shes turning out great!!!

And I want to drink wine with her.
No less 18+ but more visible Nudity involved people.

Aeronwen

Aeronwen

not so much fell as.....

Join Date: Jan 2009

UK

bone

R/

Haha, I said wine instead of the cancer stick.

I really like this one Tommy, her body shape is lovely, the colours and mood are just right.

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

Thnx Aero :) And sorry, you tried to make the piece morally better, and you only made it worse >:) Ciggy needed to be :p

Anyway small small update here:


Any suggestions on what to have the Warden wear? Full plating or some plating with cloths? I think the last would be best.

Gattsu05

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Oct 2006

Rt/N

It's a fluid pose so I feel stiff armor wouldn't work out too well. You are proly better off doing some kind of scale mail or like you said, clothes and some plating.

InfestedHydralisk

InfestedHydralisk

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jan 2007

The Netherlands

None

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I actually like the Warden like this, honestly. It looks natural, yet the sense of a dark warrior can be seen.

InfestedHydralisk

InfestedHydralisk

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jan 2007

The Netherlands

None

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Oh ok. :P I think you should do brown cloth, with iron plates on top.

Charlie Dayman

Charlie Dayman

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Apr 2009

Trifecta Luminati [TRI]

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I'd say a mix between organic looking plate-mail, cloth and fur. I have question though - what exactly is the pose for the Warden going to be? He looks like he's in a bit of a relaxed pose, but the Gothic Axe seems to say it's more action oriented. Not quite entirely sure what's going on with him.

Smilin' Assassin

Smilin' Assassin

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Apr 2007

Cantha

Pixies O Wickid Nawtyness [pixy]

A/Me

cool, you've come back to this one .. I can see improvement~! your faces are getting better~!

BlackXI

BlackXI

Academy Page

Join Date: May 2011

In a house

Me/

I agree with Infested, iron plates would go lovely with the Warden

Morag D

Morag D

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Mar 2007

UK/Austria

[bone]

P/

that's coming on really nice! I'm gonna go with Charlie's suggestion, I think something organic-looking would be good. And whenever there's fur, I'm up for it

Ravenhawk

Ravenhawk

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Apr 2009

Eon

Me/N

Tommy, I am really really liking this! I can't wait! Also love what you did with the face

Gattsu05

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Oct 2006

Rt/N

Would be a real shame to cover up all the detailed work you put into the warden's body. I think a single pauldron with a dark leather strap, similar to the scale plate bracers, would look awesome.

` Marshmallow

` Marshmallow

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: May 2009

Canadaa!

Last Friday Night [TGIF]

E/

;__; omga this is so beautiful..

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

Thanks all! I like the idea of adding some dirty fur/animal pelt, combined with some tatters and metal plating (I really like the little metal squares connected to each other like on Charlies warrior. Might do something like that).

Next week I got my last exams of the year, and then vacation! So just need to study hard this week, don't expect any progress

PS. Great to see you stopping by again Trish, also epic avatar <3

Tommy's

Tommy's

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Dec 2006

[Bone]

Mo/

Bleh I had to draw Started doodling and came to this. Don't know really, was going for a mermaid, but turned out into a bikini girl with shells in her fair and floating fish. No refs used so far, lets see if I can keep that up. Trying out a bit new colors.

Drelias Melaku

Drelias Melaku

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Dec 2006

Avatar by unsolvedenigma.deviantart

Denizens of the Underdark [Nite]

N/Me

She's so pretty! I have to say, I LOVE the way you color. It's so realistic, but still painterly.
Looking forward to seeing it finished! The hair looks like it's going to be really cool.

Verene

Verene

Furnace Stoker

Join Date: Jan 2009

[SOTA]

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I love her face. But I might be biased towards red hair and freckles, so yeah

Her body looks a bit awkward, though. I really can't articulate what looks off about it, but I think it's mostly to do with the shoulders.

Drelias Melaku

Drelias Melaku

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Dec 2006

Avatar by unsolvedenigma.deviantart

Denizens of the Underdark [Nite]

N/Me

Now that you mention it, it does look like one breast (her left) is noticeably lower than the other one even though the rest of her left side looks like it's angling up. It could just be that I'm bad at grasping perspective, though.

Morag D

Morag D

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Mar 2007

UK/Austria

[bone]

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looks lovely, great colours and love the shading in her face! her left breast looks like it is where it should be, but the other one is too high up and looks about 1/3rd smaller than the other one..

Death By An Arrow

Death By An Arrow

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jul 2009

The Kurzick Mob [Mob]

R/

thats so awesome tommy, especially if you didn't use a reference! The face looks amazing ^^

I think what looks off is that her shoulders are a little to broad in comparison with the body. Size wise, the torsoswidth at the top is the width of the waist, and then on top of that the shoulders extend out. Which gives a bit of an upside down triangle-y shape.
If that made sense

BlackXI

BlackXI

Academy Page

Join Date: May 2011

In a house

Me/

Tommy I think I have a new favorite ^^. She looks lovely, the only thing I can say is that the angle of the chest is a little off. And one of her iris seems slightly larger than the other, but other than that she looks very beautiful!

InfestedHydralisk

InfestedHydralisk

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jan 2007

The Netherlands

None

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Looks great, I think you should lower her right breast and smoothen out her shoulders a bit more. Ithink they look too straight at the moment.

Shy Guy

Shy Guy

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Sep 2009

...

W/

yea this is awesome tommy ;o

Nian

Nian

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Mar 2007

Finland

R/

Wow, that's just... wow. I know some might disagree with me but you could still turn the bikini into something with pearls, shell & moss hehe. I think she would look amazing as a mermaid like your initial sketch! Or just take off the bikini lol! Anyway the colors are wonderful. I love her face and well... I'm biased towards redheads aswell hehe. Love it.

*cough* natural breasts usually are different sizes, I like it lol.