Thank you for the kind comments

Really mean alot to me, specially yours raven^^
So react on your points of critique. I guess her boob is a bit too high indeed

I love boobs but I hate to draw them

I might slim the muscles a bit down, though I dont really want to since its supposed to be a warrior who fought over thousands of GvG battles. I would guess that makes you quite muscled ^^ As for the muscles are too many, I tend to disagree, man have more square and longer muscles (depends on the person though, females can have longer ones too).
As for the face, I'm still working on the eyes. I think making them a tat bit bigger will make her look more feminin. As for the rest, they are girly enough, I dont want to make her look too girly. I used Jessica Alba as ref, and this cheeck is actually less strong then hers
And Verene

Guess you're right. But I think I should make the nipple a bit smaller since otherwise it would indicate that the boob is falling to the side an awefull lot. But perhabs thats the case when you put your arm up. Damn me not having boobs! I want direct reference!