Nice idea Tommy! I like it!
But if you have time (and feeling), please finish the other pumpkin witchy picture, the lighting there was really nice, and it had a good flow.
I'd have a really hard time choosing between this pic of yours and the other one... both are good ideas, and that pumpkin just looks so awesome ^_^
Tommy's
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02 Oct 2010 at 09:27 - 362
Yeah it was very close to being finished so I'll probably do that sometime But this first >
Minami
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02 Oct 2010 at 09:29 - 363
^_^ Looking forward to seeing the new progress
Minami
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02 Oct 2010 at 09:59 - 364
My progress for today.
Blended a lot, especially on the face. Fixed a shine in the left pupil. Made the background visible. Ambient color is not added yet anywhere, so she still looks pasted in. Drew and colored the candy corns.
Any C&C is welcome.
Tommy's
Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Dec 2006
[Bone]
Mo/
02 Oct 2010 at 10:14 - 365
Looks great. Still in love with those hands! Colours on that candy corn is just right, stunning. As for the face. I would lift up her left mouthcorner a bit, perhabs add stronger eyelashes, and I would make the skin on her nose a bit more dull, to get that much of a shine on your nose it should be very fat. And perhabs the haircut is a bit too straight. But thats just opinion And gahh can't stop saying how nice those hands are!
Tommy's
Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Dec 2006
[Bone]
Mo/
02 Oct 2010 at 10:57 - 366
Ok more spam from me on this page. Small WIP for today, now study time again D: I don't get a Law degree by doing nothing.
So added the Guards, still need to work on poses a bit, make them less identical.
actionjack
Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Oct 2005
Kali
W/E
02 Oct 2010 at 14:06 - 367
Quote:
Originally Posted by Minami
My progress for today.
Blended a lot, especially on the face. Fixed a shine in the left pupil. Made the background visible. Ambient color is not added yet anywhere, so she still looks pasted in. Drew and colored the candy corns.
Any C&C is welcome.
Oooh... the hand and the sugar corn look so real! (she can play with my sugar corn anytime....)
Love how realistic it look. But one thing I think could still improve on is the cloth, perticually those green line patterns. Some of the edage look a bit unatural, and some could be shave down a bit more.
actionjack
Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Oct 2005
Kali
W/E
02 Oct 2010 at 14:07 - 368
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tommy's
Ok more spam from me on this page. Small WIP for today, now study time again D: I don't get a Law degree by doing nothing.
So added the Guards, still need to work on poses a bit, make them less identical.
I like the guards. Look awsome.
Oh_Frustration
Academy Page
Join Date: Jun 2009
Finland, [Outi] HQ
Outin Omat [Outi]
Rt/
02 Oct 2010 at 15:05 - 369
Everyone's progressing so fast and doing such darn good job too!
Minami, the completed parts look almost photo-like... I wish I could get that effect with my drawings. Also, too bad I'm not eating candy for some time, that candy corn looks so real I'd like to taste one or two
Tommy, I agree with the "less identical", but the models of the guards look very good. Maybe draw one guard's arm upward? Keep it up!
/E: I need some time to draw... But that's what I'll use my fall break for! Yay, 9 days of nothing but drawing
obastable
Krytan Explorer
Join Date: Nov 2005
Mo/
02 Oct 2010 at 15:38 - 370
I've been lurking in this thread for a while now, and I figure there should be more than one entrant for literature so I guess I'll write something.
Name: Obastable
Art Form: Literature
Idea: I have some ideas floating around, a couple of words, possibly graphic novel or childrens book ... depends on how much time I have to focus on the illustration part and how the story comes out in the end.
Progress Gallery: http://obastable.wordpress.com/
Real Life Prizes: []
Official Contest: []
Workshop Awards: []
Minami
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Dallas, TX. USA
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02 Oct 2010 at 15:59 - 371
Tommy, thanks for the tips! I still have lots of work to do on everything, nothing is considered done yet. I made the haircut so straight, because it's how it is on the in-game necro. Maybe I'll try and see how it would look with a bit more messy lined bangs though.
As for your pic, I love the mad king's guards! Very nice backlighting on them! Can't wait to see the Mad King Thorn himself! O_O
I know you didn't want to make the guards the same pose, but I just had this crazy picture pop up in my head of those guards doing the necro dance
It must be super difficult to draw something like that so it comes through effective. O_o
Maybe one of the guards you drew could be standing normal like it does now, and the other one could be saluting?
Actionjack, thanks for the comment ^_^ I am not even close to the armor's finished look, there's a lot to be done yet. I just wanted to do some shading on it, because the bland and flat blocked in mid-tone grey and green colors were bothering me when I was working on other parts of the picture.
Frustration, thanks very much!
Oddly enough, I never ate any candy corn, I have no idea what it tastes like, what the texture of it is, what's the inside like, etc. etc. So it's nice to hear that they look like the real ones ^_^
Hopefully I can work some more on my picture today. I have some things I really want to try out ^_^
Death By An Arrow
Jungle Guide
Join Date: Jul 2009
The Kurzick Mob [Mob]
R/
02 Oct 2010 at 16:49 - 372
wow, these pieces are all looking amazing. :x
Tommy: I know you dont like the guard's being identical but i kind of like it, maybe move one of them slightly but keep them relatively similar. It makes them feel (to me anyways) like they're an arsenal of disposable candy minions the King cares nothing for.
And i mean... that IS what they are, isn't it? :P So id try and keep that feel resonating with whatever changes you make.
Minami: That just looks mind blowing, i can't believe that was a 3D model rendered with some light. It actually looks real; you're a shoe-in for the actual contest for sure. I really like the way you blend the shadows with the skin tones evenly accross the whole piece, cause it makes it look... i dont know, better is the best word ive got xD
however, having the skin look so amazingly depth-ful makes the armor look kind of flat to me. Try making the edge's more rounded out (if it's clothy) or make the edges really, REALLY sharp and add some bright shine (if it's a steel-type metal). I like the choice of colours though.
Silverfire: I really, really like you're background. The way the colours bounce off the silhoutes of the trees without giving or removing any extra attention is nice. I also really like the pumpkins, but I feel like they're highlights are inconsistent with the sky... I drew over your final piece (sorry Dx) to illustrate what I mean a bit better.
See how my lines general point to the top left corner? That's the darkest part of you're sky (which is still pretty bright), so i just thought it was strange that the pumpkins on the right (with highlights coming from the brighter sky) were very similar to the pumpkins on the left (with highlights coming from the darker sky).
Sorry for being really maticulous, but I'm probably the most anal (dont even make that joke...) artist about details I've ever met. When I'm drawing pencil/paper, i tend to shade the tiniest nooks and crannies until they're exactly how i envision them. Which can take anywhere from 5mins-30mins... I'm just crazy like that. But seriously, you're piece is beautiful and i think the colour choices play off eachother and makes the piece that much stronger
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So i havn't exactly started my halloween piece, but I pulled out my tablet for the first time yesterday and started drawing/painting boba fett's helmet. I think I wanna incorporate that into my halloween piece but I'm not quite sure how... Maybe i'll make the halloween NPC's starwars characters? (Madking Vader, Mad King Troopers, etc.)
but I'm not sure what boba fett would be... :P
Maybe I'll try sketching out some ideas later for it. I'm also not exactly the best when it comes to drawing figures/people (as I'm also just learning this thismonth/abit last month) and I don't have alot of practice. So I could really enjoy critiques on just about anything. Figures, colour choices, brush choices, Styles, blending, making things look real, etc.
@ Obastable: Yay! Another lit entry Represent! I like how you're using the wordpress blog for your WiP. I hadn't been sure where to put my stuff, but I think I'll go check out that site to see if I can get one going for myself So far, your story is looking interesting… I think there's just something about Rits that just fit with Halloween, huh?
@ Tommy: I love that pumpkin The candy corn guards really came out well. Are you going to keep the sharper lines on the guard coloring? It really gives them character although smoother would match the pumpkin style. I really like the difference though!
@ Minami: Loving the background! I think Death By An Arrow hit it on the mark when he said the armor looks kinda flat but I think it's because of the absolute gorgeousness and detail of the face. But, if you can make a 3D face look like that, I can't wait to see the final armor!
@ Silverfire: Her armor is very pretty
@ KiyaKoreena: Your costume is really turning out well! It's going to look so cool when you're done!
Minami
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02 Oct 2010 at 18:56 - 374
Quote:
Originally Posted by Minami
*snip*
Actionjack, thanks for the comment ^_^ I am not even close to the armor's finished look, there's a lot to be done yet. I just wanted to do some shading on it, because the bland and flat blocked in mid-tone grey and green colors were bothering me when I was working on other parts of the picture.
*snip*
Death by an Arrow, Thistle, thanks very much for your comments!
I did a post not too long before you guys commented, please see the bolded section quoted here
Hopefully today I can finally start working more seriously on the armor.
I'm very flattered how much everyone who commented on my drawing likes it. It really means a lot to me! Thank you
Minami, I knew you weren't done with the armor, I was just pointing out that I'm really looking forward to the final armor look after seeing the level of detail you did with the face!
` Marshmallow
Wilds Pathfinder
Join Date: May 2009
Canadaa!
Last Friday Night [TGIF]
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02 Oct 2010 at 20:09 - 377
ogodthisthreadisspeedingup D':
I can't keep up ,___,~
oh yeah...
I don't even know thackeray's eye colour < W> so I guessed and made them brown 8D I think gwens are going to be brown, too, and I totally coloured that 'rock' wrong |: fffuuuu- >: O
editedit: Idk if i wanna keep that halloween house in the bg anymore D': im so bad with bg's ..-tear-
Thistle Xandra
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Join Date: Aug 2010
02 Oct 2010 at 20:46 - 378
lol, omg Marshmallow, I LOVE how you drew Thackeray and the eyes just completely sealed the deal on his cuteness!!
I like your background. What is it that's peeking over the roof?
Death By An Arrow
Jungle Guide
Join Date: Jul 2009
The Kurzick Mob [Mob]
R/
02 Oct 2010 at 20:48 - 379
Marshmellow: I really, really like your's so far. It's hilarious
i like thackery's pumpkin and the clouds the best
Keep it up ^^
actionjack
Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Oct 2005
Kali
W/E
02 Oct 2010 at 21:50 - 380
Quote:
Originally Posted by ` Marshmallow
ogodthisthreadisspeedingup D':
I can't keep up ,___,~
oh yeah...
I don't even know thackeray's eye colour < W> so I guessed and made them brown 8D I think gwens are going to be brown, too, and I totally coloured that 'rock' wrong |: fffuuuu- >: O
editedit: Idk if i wanna keep that halloween house in the bg anymore D': im so bad with bg's ..-tear-
Love the eyes!!!!
Thistle Xandra
Site Contributor
Join Date: Aug 2010
02 Oct 2010 at 22:43 - 381
Instead of pencil art, I decided to go the costume route
I'm going to try to do
Vekk
Step 1: Find model
Luckily, my model works for love and love alone.
Step 2: But, will he wear a costume??
I may be testing my model's love for me...
Good thing I have a cookie!
Looks like he'll wear a body and head piece so now on to turning that pic into an actual costume!
Death By An Arrow
Jungle Guide
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The Kurzick Mob [Mob]
R/
03 Oct 2010 at 00:17 - 382
I think I know what I'm gunna draw; or atleast attempt with first.
The idea is sort of like a bunch of pumpkins are all piled togethor, and it's a close up shot to find that Mad King Thorn is stuck in the stack. So you see a bunch of other pumpkins around the screen and then inbetween them is MKT's face (and probably the cape's collar and whatnot).
Its not a very serious idea, quite silly in fact. I'm not sure if it'll actually turn out very well or if i should just dump the idea but its the only one ive got (other than MKT cosplaying starwars..) and it seems to be the perfect level of difficulty for me; not very :P
I'm working on the sketch right now, so once the rough sketch is done ill upload it to my deviantART and throw down the link here
Silverfire
Ascalonian Squire
Join Date: Sep 2006
03 Oct 2010 at 00:40 - 383
Quote:
Originally Posted by Minami
Silverfire: Looking good with the colors! My suggestion would be to study her pose more carefully, and how she fits into the background. Right now she seems to be pasted into the picture, because the way her body is positioned doesn't correspond to the slant of the ground. (More specifically, the leg on the left side of the pic.)
I tried to use the puppet warp and some other things to show you a bit better how she's look more in synch. Please excuse the wobbly looking legs, puppet warp has a tendency to do that. Hope this helps!
EDIT: I just checked that pic again, so sorry for cutting up your figure there like that >_< Illustrating something with a quick work is still not something I can do very well yet. :S
Ooh, spaghetti limbs! Thankyou very much for your input though. I've been fiddling around in Photoshop, manipulating the layers I have her on with the Free Transform ----> Distort ----> Perspective tools, trying to "cheat" her into a different position. I can't do it extensively without making her look squished and misshapen though, so I haven't moved her as much as you illustrated. (See below.) Short of repainting her entirely I'm not sure how to go about it.
Maybe I should try changing the slope of the ground instead.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Minami
My progress for today.
Blended a lot, especially on the face. Fixed a shine in the left pupil. Made the background visible. Ambient color is not added yet anywhere, so she still looks pasted in. Drew and colored the candy corns.
Any C&C is welcome.
Yours is looking good. Only thing I would say is that she feels just a bit too perfect in some ways, like how people are saying with her hair being too straight - she'd feel more real if she was a little mussed up/rumpled/tousled.
Alright, so heres my sketch. Im really liking how it turned out ((and im even becoming more akin with my tablet pen q.q). Some of the pumpkins look flat or awkward but I think its just because there's no colour.
Heres the direct link to it on DeviantART.
It took me like, 2 and a half hours though.... so im gunna take a break from it for the night. heh :P
What does everyone think? ^^
Edit: Hrm... I don't appear to be able to post the image here from my deviantART... so ive got the link in while i find a temporary fix.
Silverfire
Ascalonian Squire
Join Date: Sep 2006
03 Oct 2010 at 02:51 - 387
Quote:
Originally Posted by Death By An Arrow
Hmm, changing the sky is a much better idea than changing the pumpkins. I like what you did. I put them side by side (i had the first one saved already ;P) to see and didn't notice a huge difference, however when they're apart I feel like your changed one works better. I can't really explain it, but what you did deffinatly helped. LOL I would perhaps play around with how bright and dark you can make the sky before the mood of the piece changes, because while a brighter "bright sky" would make things a little more dramatic, it would essentially take the eerie out of the piece. Plus, with so much brightness you wouldnt get as-rich shadows.
So it's kind of a delicate change. I like what you've got, but if you've got the spare time open up a seperate copy to see if you can make it more dramatic while keeping the mood. If not your piece already benefits from the change, and if it works than itll be even better ^^
I think I'm only being so finicky with your piece cause yours inspired the concept of my piece (dont worry, they aren't really anything alike. Yours is just really pumpkin oriented) and I'm thinking of ways i might highlight my pumpkins. I work at a golf course at nights too, so I'm always surrounded with changing skys and know how they look in settings at different times; so its nice to be able to apply my absentmindedness to improve things
Thankyou! I was thinking the same thing about not wanting to make it too bright, because it is supposed to be evening and I want to keep the atmosphere of twilight verging on dusk. I'm sure I'll play around with it a little more before the end of the contest. I'm keeping the whole document with all layers (all 313MB!) so it's possible to just tweak sections.
Ooh, I inspired someone That's a first! Yay pumpkins.
Actually ingame some of my guildies often nickname me "Pumpkin after midnight" because I always seem to fade faster than everyone else when staying up late.
Death by an Arrow, I like your sketch! I think it's a fun idea Can't wait to see the progress ^_^
Silverfire, the sky changing made the pic look better. Good job!
Thistle, Such a cute doggy! ^_^ I hope you can make him sit through the costume making and photo session, it's a very cute idea!
Marshy: OMG cuteness overload again! *flops* More more!!! I like the rock too, don't see anything wrong with it.
My progress:
Ok, did many smaller things today, and a big one.
Made the hair a bit more unruly, and the bottom of the bangs a little more "torn". I'll try and work some more on it, it doesn't show so good on this small pic I link here. (Original size is 4500x3730)
Added ambient color on the skin and lightened it a bit too. Added a bluish hue to the lips, so it seems more necromancer-y.
Did the black part of the armor and added ambient color to it.
Lifted the bust a bit, since it's a harder armor.
Started blocking in the armor's green metallic color. It's only a very rough version, lots of blending to follow, and will also fix the green line edges to be smooth (before I blend of course). Right now I didn't pay too much attention to the smoothness of the lines yet.
Also change the perspective of the armor, the other one didn't sit quite right. Liquify tool FTW...
Added the Vabbian scar to her face too, textured and shaded it.
I haven't done the mouth corner lift yet, I'll do that once all the skin layers are merged. I have about 5-6 skin layers now, some at different opacities and settings, it would be a paint to try and do the exact same lift on every layer
I think that's it... Difficult to keep up with all the changes I do, cuz it seems like I like to work on different things every 10 minutes D:
Workflow goes something like this:
Color blocking the black of the armor -> gone to draw the scar -> outline the green armor parts -> back to the black part, blend some -> work on the scar -> fix something in the background -> block in green colors -> blend black -> create the green color palette -> put ambient color on the skin..... etc etc... I have so many layers.... *sigh*
EDIT: I hate jpg compression artifacts in pictures V_V
Ok, here it is...
Charlie Dayman
Desert Nomad
Join Date: Apr 2009
Trifecta Luminati [TRI]
W/
03 Oct 2010 at 07:42 - 389
Yeah, there's way too much going on in this thread for me to keep up with. I'll try to comment tomorrow.
More wippee.
Tommy's
Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Dec 2006
[Bone]
Mo/
03 Oct 2010 at 07:55 - 390
Omg I love the expression of this new girl. Cool how they both look so unique. Tbh I would leave it so light, it looks quite natural, more then the lightning on the other (but perhabs upcoming ambient lights will change that^^) And she looks like someone I know in real life .
Operative 14
Forge Runner
Join Date: Nov 2006
Arizona, USA
[OOP] Order of the Phoenix I
03 Oct 2010 at 07:59 - 391
Gah, I NEED to stop looking at Charlies piece just before I go to bed. >_<
Hello, I don't think any of you know me. I noticed this thread last year just after the contest, so I thought I might as well join you this year!
I always try to come up with virtual originality in my entries, I won a honorable mention with it last year (click to see entry).
I hope it's still possible to enter for this though?
Name: Sephios
Art Form: illustration
Idea: undecided
Progress Gallery: none yet
Real Life Prizes: [_]
Official Contest: [X]
Workshop Awards: [X]
Tzu
Site Contributor
Join Date: Mar 2008
UK/norway
Order Of The Etherbloom Crown [ZEN]
03 Oct 2010 at 14:07 - 394
Added new artists to the list!
Darcy's 100k donation was split between Most Amusing and Pure Evil, the dyes went to Most Original (black) and Muse (white)!
A notable donation from Kiya was split as follows: 1st Place Best Progress (Everlasting Macabre Tonic), 2nd Place BP (250 Mysterious Summoning Stones), 3rd Place BP (200 Mercantile Summoning Stones), Guru Halloween Artist Extraordinaire (Demonic Aegis Of Fortitude)
Charlie, your work looks absolutely fantastic so far. Bonechilling awesomeness. <3
Kiya, I really like your MK costume progress! The difference in textures shows an eye for detail I wish more cosplayers had, it makes a big impact on the final outcome. This costume will be so epic!
Loving the amount of Literature artists we have so far too! I like your progress so far Xandra! You can submit your final story whichever way you want; via PM or e-mail to me, post it here in spoiler-tags, put it up on a fanfiction site, Wordpress, Blogspot or Deviantart. I would personally reccomend Wordpress because you can post your progress as different blog entries, and you can give the story a fitting backdrop to create a good reading atmosphere.
Ravenhawk
Jungle Guide
Join Date: Apr 2009
Eon
Me/N
03 Oct 2010 at 14:29 - 395
Okay I have been in lurk mode in this thread for awhile now, drooling over all your progress! So glad to see new faces as well!
I am done with my piece but would work on some improvements today (I had a friend in DA look at it initially because I felt like something was lacking and couldn't pinpoint it. She got it spot on lol)
Then I will probably post it here for further critique
Death By An Arrow
Jungle Guide
Join Date: Jul 2009
The Kurzick Mob [Mob]
R/
03 Oct 2010 at 17:12 - 396
Alright, today I threw in some base colours. I made Mad King a little darker than the other pumpkins to make him stand out more. What do you guys think? Good idea/bad idea?
Heres the direct link if the image doesn't work again.
So deviantART image posting doesnt work... is there a reason for it? I might upload them to imageshack or photobucket to post them here if the link is inconvenient.
Stouda, darn great if you ask me. I like that comic book style, and the hellhound is simply amazing. My opinion for the "right" (our left) rear leg would be as close to the right front leg as possible without touching - as the left rear leg is far back and the left front leg is most probably going to stretch forth a little. Or however you have planned it, but I think that as the legs on the hound's left are far from each other, the right side ones should be close to each other in the picture.
Thistle Xandra, did I understand correctly that you're making a dog costume like this one?
If yes, then I'm quite excited to see the outcome
Looking good, keep up the good work, fellas
/E: Tzu, my name is not on the list My parttaking info is on the second page and my progress gallery is here. Thanks
actionjack
Furnace Stoker
Join Date: Oct 2005
Kali
W/E
03 Oct 2010 at 17:58 - 400
Woot.. its done (well, atleast stage 1, will try to progress it to stage 2 if have time)
I will go for the orginality... since I cann't compete against all the other amazing artist here
Name: Actionjack
Art Form: digital media
Idea: old school
Progress Gallery: none yet
Real Life Prizes: [X]
Official Contest: [X]
Workshop Awards: [X]