Halloween Workshop [>2000k prize pot]
Dutch Sunshine
hmm, I probably should finish my entry today.... gotta fix the text, make the front poster look even better And have to scratch the text of the backposters to make them look older... After that, I believe I'm 'done' for.
Konig Des Todes
Finished!
The Death of Thorn
The Death of Thorn
Screams filled the air. Fire lit the crimson twilight sky. A tall lean man on a horse watched as a village before him burned, its inhabitants slaughtered by his men. King Thorn smiled as the smell of burning flesh filled his nostrils. His personal steward and body guards around him covered their noses, attempting to keep the smell out.
“Your majesty.” A soldier said as he walked up to the smiling king, bowing as he halted.
“Report.” Thorn said, never turning his gaze from the last of the villagers as they were killed and skinned.
“The insurgents were discovered and dealt with first. As your orders, we’ve captured everyone in the village. A single kid is unaccounted for, however.” The soldier said, nervousness ran through his voice in the last sentence.
“Is the kid related to any insurgent?” The king asked.
“No sire.”
“Then hunt him down later. What’s the progress of the ‘art?’” Thorn finally turned his gaze to the soldier, who began to take a step back but stopped halfway.
“There were only ten left as I came to report. They should all be dead by now.” The soldier paused, listening for the screams that have silenced. “As you wanted, we’ve skinned them and… positioned their corpses in various postures in the doorways.”
“And?”
“We’ve made sure they’re in humorous positions.”
“Good. Take the skin and feed it to the tengu. Those savages will eat anything you toss them.”
“Is that really necessary, mi’lord?” The king’s steward asked. Thorn quickly twisted his head towards the questioning man, making him and his horse retreat a little. “What I mean is, that if you provoke the tengu, they will attack more ferociously. The insurgents deserve a worse outcome to their bodies, but the fewer problems, the better.”
“Feed their skin to the tengu.” The king said to the soldier as he turned his horse around. His escort followed him as he rode back to Lion’s Arch.
The castle of Lion’s Arch loomed in the light of the night as Thorn and his guard arrived in the capital of Kryta. Few were out at the time and fewer candles were lit. Thorn merely grunted in the remembrance that he too needed to sleep.
On his way to his bedroom, Thorn passed by his herald who was scribbling down something on a parchment. “Bruce! What are you doing so late?”
Startled, the timid herald immediately turned and bowed to the king. “N-nothing mi’lord. Just some reminders for tomorrow.”
“Hmmm, if you say so. Get sleep, little man.”
“Yes, sire.”
Thorn watched Bruce as he grabbed the parchment, ink, and quill and scampered off, occasionally turning his gaze back to the king. Thorn returned to his bedroom and fell asleep, his armor from the day’s ride still on.
The next morning came with a jolt to Thorn’s awakening. “BRUCE!” Thorn shouted as he dashed out of his room and down the hall. “Bruce! Where are you!”
Thorn ran around the halls, shouting for his herald, for several minutes until the timid man appeared behind Thorn as he passed by. “What is it King Thorn?”
“What day is it?”
“Today is the 45th of the Season of the Scion. Why do you ask?” The timid man said, towered by the tall king.
“But what day is it?” Thorn said, grabbing his herald’s sholders.
“Pardon? It’s the 45th of the Scion, nothing more.”
“Exactly!” Thorn said, shaking the timid man.
“I’m afraid I don’t follow, my king.”
“Almost every day is nothing special, with only a couple days in the entire year! Today is the ides of the Scion! Why shouldn’t we celebrate today? Let’s make a celebration today and every year from here on!” The king began to shout, facing the ceiling. “We can, no will have the perfect autumn festival, designed for… Me!”
“My king, don’t you think it is a bit… drastic?”
“Drastic? I’m the king! The people love me, and I love me, so why shouldn’t we celebrate our love for me?” The king glared down the herald, making the already timid man shake.
“But, my king… If people love you then why are your people rebelling? Why do you have to ride out almost every day in order to quell revolts?” Bruce said, regretting what he said.
King Thorn stared at the herald silently for what felt like several minutes, then turned away. Without warning, the king swung around, grabbed Bruce by the collar, and hurled him through a nearby window. The screams from the herald filled the king with joy.
A woman’s scream came through the window as Thorn searched for Bruce’s body, seeing it pierced by a flag pole. Bruce weakly lifted his arm towards the king before dropping it as his blood dripped onto the street below.
Metal clattered as guards ran through the hallway rushed to the source of the shattered glass. Upon seeing their king, they halted and saluted as they caught their breath.
“My king,” one of the guards said, “what happened? Are you alright?”
“Bruce fell, poor fellow.” The king said.
The guards looked at the window, which was raised four feet from the floor. They realized quickly that the king threw the herald through.
“I have a message to the people.” Thorn said, regaining the attention of the guards. “I want today to be a new festival! Every year, this day, we shall decorate all of Lion’s Arch with an autumn feel to it! Leaves, pumpkins, whatever the people can think of! And not just that, make it spooky at night! Let this day of every year be the year of fright and a sign of autumn!”
The guards stood there, baffled, until Thorn grabbed a nearby candleholder mounted on the wall. The guards immediately saluted and retreated from the king’s presence. What began to feel like hours passed as Thorn watched a carrion fly to Bruce’s corpse and peck at the eyes. Intrigued, Thorn rested his head on his arm as he saw Bruce’s eyes pulled out of their sockets.
“King Thorn, your message as been sent to the public.” A guard said behind Thorn, startling the king. The guard moved backwards in fear. Moments of silence passed before the guard spoke again. “There’s also a report of Hakewood housing rebels.”
“So close? Do my people not love me anymore? I give and give for them, yet they take and take and want more! So be it, they want, I shall give. Death shall be given to all who rebel – as always. Darelum, get my guard. I’m tired of these revolts. I want my personal guard to handle this one.”
“Shall I send word to cancel tonight’s feast?” Darelum asked.
“No, I had to cancel yesterday’s feast with my noblemen, today won’t be a far ride. I’ll be back before they know it!”
“Yes sir.” Darelum said as he saluted the king then rushed out.
Thorn looked out the window once more at the partially devoured corpse, and then made to the royal stables. A skinny young man stood still with a broom in hand as the king passed him by. Thorn stopped at the first empty stall. “Stable boy, why does this stall have an extra lock?”
The young man stared at the king for a few minutes before finally answering. “Because it is empty, my king.”
“Empty? What are you talking about! My favorite horse is in here.” Thorn said, reaching in and petting the air. “Isn’t that right? Oh, you’re such a good animal. Don’t worry, that stable boy won’t keep you locked up for long. I’ll make sure of it.” Thorn turned to face the stable boy as he finished talking, continuing to pet the air.
“Your Majesty… There’s nothing there. The horse that was kept there died twenty-some days ago.”
“Nonsense! My beloved horse is right here in front of me! Can you not see it? Well, obviously you can’t, can you. Don’t worry my invisible horse. Your little king thorn will make sure you’re not forgotten. Unfortunately because someone locked you up extra tightly, I can’t take you to Hakewood. I’m so sorry; you can join me next time, okay?” Thorn said, nuzzling the air with his hands and cheek as if there was a horse in his grip.
Thorn sighed and walked to the next stall that held a large horse that breathed into Thorn’s face as the king advanced. Instantly, Thorn tossed a saddle on the horse, let it out of the stall, and rode out of the stable towards Hakewood. Before leaving Lion’s Arch, his guard had caught up to the king, surrounding him.
“My king, I’m sorry, but we cannot let you leave.” The leader of the guards said. “Please return to the castle. I’ve sent soldiers to Hakewood in your stead.”
“No, Vulgamor! I will not! If I do not go, this will continue! I will have my people love me! Love me or die!”
“My liege, I am sorry, but I cannot permit that.” With a brief wave of his hand, half of the guards got off of their horses and enclosed the king.
“I will go!” The king shouted at the top of his voice. The guards knocked Thorn off of his horse and tried to pin him onto the ground. With more strength than the average man, he knocked guard after guard onto the ground and tried to get back onto the ground.
One of guard pulled out a knifes and lunged toward the king.
“No! Do not harm the king!” Vulgamor shouted as the king fell to his knees. “Why? Why did you do that?!”
“Vulgamor, you remain loyal to the king even after what he’s done?” The guard who stabbed King Thorn said. “Starved us, made us poor, killed on whims? We do not follow those loyal to this abomination.”
“We will execute him in front of everyone, to show him in his final moments that he was loved by none. None but those insane like him… Like you and his court. And you will join him, ‘leader.’” Another guard said as the group now enclosed their former leader, ignoring the unconscious king.
****
The king tried to call out to them, but nothing came out. A bloody knife was tossed to him as he reached out to his people, begging for help, only to see a bloody stump at the end of his arm. Confused, he began to push himself up again. A heavy force came down on his back, cracking his elbows as they slipped on the ground.
Thorn turned to find the source of the pressure, to see a large ax come down before everything went black.
****
"What a kind speech, my son." A deep cracking voice said behind the new king. The too-tall-to-be-human being, appearing out of no where, laughed as the pumpkin head tottered back and forth. The sky brightened with a dark orange glow as the clouds transformed and the moon cracked open with a sinister smile.
"Why King Thorn, you have a pumpkin on your head!"
♠ Konig Des Todes: "The Death of Thorn" [Literature] [Progress Gallery]
Dutch Sunshine
Almost done! 1 or 2 more rounds of feedback and I'm going to send it in and cross my fingers
Just so you guys know, I changed the credits to be more epic, added some scratches added some nails and made the cement of the bricks look a bit more realistic. Oh and I rounded the pumpkin a bit.
Just so you guys know, I changed the credits to be more epic, added some scratches added some nails and made the cement of the bricks look a bit more realistic. Oh and I rounded the pumpkin a bit.
Aeronwen
wow this thread grows like Topsy...
Epic Dutch, looks perfect to me.
Epic Dutch, looks perfect to me.
Sordrax
Quote: Originally Posted by Thistle Xandra Sordrax, congratulations on getting your entry done and submitted It looks so cool, and I love how you have the sweetness of a rose and the violence of a mace to enhance the skull! Gorgeous! Very observant. I think out of everyone who has seen it, and gave me feedback, you were the only one to understand the balance I was trying to achieve with 'Love and Hate' on either side. I wanted to use a red rose, but that just disappeared in the back ground.
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I wouldn't doubt that Eir goes commando. Looks good!
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Originally Posted by Hailfall
Eh wow Tzu.. you are hot.. that looks hot.. wow
/also agreed
Widowmaker
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^This.
/Is probably not the only one glad A-net decided to separate the categories this year.
/Is probably not the only one glad A-net decided to separate the categories this year.
shady tradesman
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kay, here's what I think I'll submit. Any feedback as to the level of cheesyness and so forth is very welcome. ^^'
All photos of the costume are in my deviantart gallery.
Also, for those concerned, the underwear strap goes underneath the belt around the midriff. It's much less gaudy and tasteless than that big thing I submitted! xD
Wow! Great work on the costume! I really appreciate the craftsmanship and time that went into that, and the tats look awesome. Seriously. Nice effin job.
All photos of the costume are in my deviantart gallery.
Also, for those concerned, the underwear strap goes underneath the belt around the midriff. It's much less gaudy and tasteless than that big thing I submitted! xD
Wow! Great work on the costume! I really appreciate the craftsmanship and time that went into that, and the tats look awesome. Seriously. Nice effin job.
stouda01
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Charlie Dayman
@Stouda: Awesome entry, it looks great
@Mina: The light source on the table REALLY made a significant difference. It looks great - and I also see that you'll be finishing on time. Awwwwriiiiighhhht
@Tom: It came out fine, don't get so down on yourself. I think the colors are what really make it. Something about how vibrant the colors are really fun to look at.
@Verene: I was wondering where you were at. Good to see your piece in this gallery. And only a 10K reward for Thorn? Shiiiieeeeeeeee.
@Tzu: Awesome cloth work as usual. Are you wearing a wig, or did you actually dye your hair red? And I'm with the rest of the group that say you're hot stuff.
@Shady: Badass. The fire pics came out fantastic.
@Death: Nice work, Death. Your piece came out nicely. Keep it up with the practice in PS.
@Najade: Again, I like the texture effects. Everything seems to have a feel like a collage, which is neat.
@Operative: I like the idea. I'd suggest maybe just adding a wee-bit more light on the right side of the tree and the tombstones near the flare.
@Dutch: Nice, the lighting on the left side of the bricks made a big difference. And the new poster you added really gives an extra punch to it.
@Konig: Awesome, that was a great read. Was some of the information you fit into your story actually based on the lore surrounding Thorn? Or was this strictly made for fun? In any case, I don't really know much about Thorn other than he tells jokes and gives out hats and candy. So this was some fun background info to read.
@Thistle: Argh, sorry I haven't gotten a time to sit down and read your story yet. Midterms are coming up, and my studio classes have me bogged down atm.
Can't believe that we're nearing the end of the workshop. It honestly felt like we just started a couple of weeks ago. Don't forget to submit your final pieces to the official GW CONTEST.
@Mina: The light source on the table REALLY made a significant difference. It looks great - and I also see that you'll be finishing on time. Awwwwriiiiighhhht
@Tom: It came out fine, don't get so down on yourself. I think the colors are what really make it. Something about how vibrant the colors are really fun to look at.
@Verene: I was wondering where you were at. Good to see your piece in this gallery. And only a 10K reward for Thorn? Shiiiieeeeeeeee.
@Tzu: Awesome cloth work as usual. Are you wearing a wig, or did you actually dye your hair red? And I'm with the rest of the group that say you're hot stuff.
@Shady: Badass. The fire pics came out fantastic.
@Death: Nice work, Death. Your piece came out nicely. Keep it up with the practice in PS.
@Najade: Again, I like the texture effects. Everything seems to have a feel like a collage, which is neat.
@Operative: I like the idea. I'd suggest maybe just adding a wee-bit more light on the right side of the tree and the tombstones near the flare.
@Dutch: Nice, the lighting on the left side of the bricks made a big difference. And the new poster you added really gives an extra punch to it.
@Konig: Awesome, that was a great read. Was some of the information you fit into your story actually based on the lore surrounding Thorn? Or was this strictly made for fun? In any case, I don't really know much about Thorn other than he tells jokes and gives out hats and candy. So this was some fun background info to read.
@Thistle: Argh, sorry I haven't gotten a time to sit down and read your story yet. Midterms are coming up, and my studio classes have me bogged down atm.
Can't believe that we're nearing the end of the workshop. It honestly felt like we just started a couple of weeks ago. Don't forget to submit your final pieces to the official GW CONTEST.
Aeronwen
Awesome Tzu
How did u manage the body art?
How did u manage the body art?
Shy Guy
Lke seriously, Verene. Sure it'd be fine if it was roughly the same idea, but there is no way in the world you thought up the exact same idea with the exact same background material with the same everything. Honestly, it's just not cool. I thought Dutch's poster ruined my chances at winning anything, but this is really just something else.
Endrance
I have a question; are our entries due ON the 22nd? Or before the 22nd?
Minami
Death By An Arrow
Yay for minami! ^^ That turned out so well! You're a shoe-in for thecontest
Arghore
Right, minecraft and custom textures took allot of my time in the last few weeks ... so i had to hurry over the last few days to make some serious progress :/ ... hopefully i can get some feedback tonight/tomorrow morning, so i can 'maybe' integrate the feedback into the final submission ... ill have to do my progress site 'in reverse' (ak. update it next week :P ) ... And yes there is still something missing from the picture ... The 'Bookah' ... it will go in tomorrow ...
@Minami, can you [spoil ] that image [/spoil ] please , otherwise, looks mighty fine !
@Tzu, im *cough* missing a bow *cough* ... otherwise, great job ...
@Sordax, spooky...
@Dutch, to busy for my taste, but i can see where you are going with the multiple posters
Minami
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Originally Posted by Endrance
I have a question; are our entries due ON the 22nd? Or before the 22nd?
The deadline: 12:00 Noon PDT, October 22, 2010
Minami
Thistle Xandra
@Konig: Yay! Congrats on getting done! I really enjoyed your story and I adore your writing style I have to complain that there aren't enough snuggling puppies and kitties in your final version though! J/K of course :P Btw, I still can't figure out what the pressure is spoiler tag for me please
@Dutch: How wonderful! I can't believe how much your piece has grown over this workshop.
@Sordrax: Yay! I'm glad to hear that's what you had intended
@Tzu: O...M...G... So stunning! I'll be very disappointed if you and kiya aren't one of the top 3 costume winners. I really hope we'll be seeing you both on the guildwars page and others will get to share in what you've both accomplished! BTW, I find it absolutely HILARIOUS that you had to clarify about underwear XD
@Charlie: aww, you are sooo sweet There's no need to say sorry, because I haven't even posted the whole thing yet XD Besides, I knew I was shooting myself in the foot for making it so long (I can't even get my hubby to read it QQ), but I couldn't help it once I fell in love with my characters XD
@Minami: Thanks so much for my new Halloween wallpaper Oh, and I realized an earlier typo when I said I liked the tattoo on his back when I meant tattoo on his back *arm* XD Great job! Now you need to photoshop me and marsh in there too since we love razah, too!
@arghore: that's so great! He looks so spooky like that!
As for myself, I'm enjoying my 24-hour break from writing I didn't have to lug my laptop on the bus! Hopefully, I'll have everything proofread and formatted to be submitted tomorrow!
@Dutch: How wonderful! I can't believe how much your piece has grown over this workshop.
@Sordrax: Yay! I'm glad to hear that's what you had intended
@Tzu: O...M...G... So stunning! I'll be very disappointed if you and kiya aren't one of the top 3 costume winners. I really hope we'll be seeing you both on the guildwars page and others will get to share in what you've both accomplished! BTW, I find it absolutely HILARIOUS that you had to clarify about underwear XD
@Charlie: aww, you are sooo sweet There's no need to say sorry, because I haven't even posted the whole thing yet XD Besides, I knew I was shooting myself in the foot for making it so long (I can't even get my hubby to read it QQ), but I couldn't help it once I fell in love with my characters XD
@Minami: Thanks so much for my new Halloween wallpaper Oh, and I realized an earlier typo when I said I liked the tattoo on his back when I meant tattoo on his back *arm* XD Great job! Now you need to photoshop me and marsh in there too since we love razah, too!
@arghore: that's so great! He looks so spooky like that!
As for myself, I'm enjoying my 24-hour break from writing I didn't have to lug my laptop on the bus! Hopefully, I'll have everything proofread and formatted to be submitted tomorrow!
Aeronwen
Death By An Arrow
So i was on the guildwars.com website and thought I'd share a nice gem;
http://www.guildwars.com/events/contests/
here on the contests page, it says this contest ends 12 Noon PDT October 23rd 2009
http://www.guildwars.com/events/contests/halloween2010/
here it says the contest ends 12 Noon PDT October 22nd 2010.
samecontest, wrong copy paste
just something to cheer up the last minute rushers ^^
http://www.guildwars.com/events/contests/
here on the contests page, it says this contest ends 12 Noon PDT October 23rd 2009
http://www.guildwars.com/events/contests/halloween2010/
here it says the contest ends 12 Noon PDT October 22nd 2010.
samecontest, wrong copy paste
just something to cheer up the last minute rushers ^^
Odinius
Just putting the last details on the background and still have to get the flames into the oven lol.
I'll be done in approx 26 hrs, that includes sleep and work
I'll be done in approx 26 hrs, that includes sleep and work
KiyaKoreena
♠ KiyaKoreena: Mad King Thorn +1 [costume and plushie] [Progress Gallery]
I would hope that having the address on the picture would cause people to go look there because it leads to more pictures as well as two videos. Additionally, I hate Windows Movie Maker with the heat of a thousand suns.
Dutch Sunshine
Just saying, but I don't think Anet will follow links as they may eventually end up disclosing who send the submission and make a favor.. anyhow, it looks really awesome and it is the best costume for MKT to date that I've seen. Love the little kid too!
Widowmaker
Wonderful entry, Kiya. The videos are a nice touch.
/Is now doubly glad they divided the categories.
/Is now doubly glad they divided the categories.
Konig Des Todes
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Originally Posted by Charlie Dayman
The last line of the work is straight from one of Thorn's oldest jokes.
Quote: Originally Posted by Endrance I have a question; are our entries due ON the 22nd? Or before the 22nd? Before Noon Pacific on the 22nd. So if you send it in the morning (for Anet's time) on the 22nd, it'd still count. But it is best to send it today or tomorrow.
Quote: Originally Posted by Thistle Xandra @Konig: Yay! Congrats on getting done! I really enjoyed your story and I adore your writing style I have to complain that there aren't enough snuggling puppies and kitties in your final version though! J/K of course :P Btw, I still can't figure out what the pressure is spoiler tag for me please The pressure is the boot of the executioner (I told you there was a more specific answer than what you said). Also, if I ever put in snuggling puppies and kittens in my writings, it'll be because they're snuggling for warmth during a blizzard or are dying of some disease.
Hmmm... Afflicted Puppies.
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I'll be very disappointed if you and kiya aren't one of the top 3 costume winners.
I wonder if there'd even be more than 5 costumes submitted.
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