Wintersday Workshop 2011!

Minami

Minami

Site Contributor

Join Date: Jul 2008

Dallas, TX. USA

Not in any guild at the moment

N/

Merry Christmas and a Very Happy New Year to everyone! ^_^

Unfortunately I simply don't have time this year to finish my picture
I started it but there are so many things happening that I'm happy if we can relax a bit during Xmas day and New Year's Day.

Good luck everyone! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^

Valdis the Unmaker

Valdis the Unmaker

Academy Page

Join Date: Oct 2011

Knights of Caelo [Hevn]

W/Rt

Merry Christmas everyone!!!

Ahhh, and life continues to be packed and busy.

BUT! I pretty much finished the drawing of Grenth! Time to work on the next one.
Critique, warm fuzzies, and comments welcome. I can finalize things about it based on input ^^

Oh, and if you're wondering... The thing in his hand is Dwayna's head-circlet thingymahwut. I added in a little blood for symbology, but I didnt go overboard at all. The coloration on the bottom portion and lower torso (the red bids), ended that way after color adjustment. Its just dramatic, its not blood covered clothes... So please dont panic or get grumpy about that XD

I thought it was a nice color contrast to the whites, blues, and greens above :]

Enjoy!

... PS - when I'm done with an art piece how do I officially submit it? XD

Arghore

Arghore

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Jun 2009

Tyria, Catacomb dweller..

N/

Hello everybody interested in the Wintersday Workshop Party, the information for the party is FINAL.

Wintersday Workshop Party

Date: Sunday 15th of Januari
Time: 18:00h GMT - 23:59h GMT (6pm gmt - 11:59pm gmt)
announcements of Workshop Winners starts around 19:00h gmt
Location: The Frost Gate (mission outpost), International District 1

As far as activities and refreshments go you need not to worry, this is not a 'bring your own booze' party. There will be 'on air' music and trivia provided by gw-en.com radio. We have confirmation that Elfs and Snowmen will come to our party to supply everybody with drinks & entertainment (amoungst which an 'in district' wintersday trivia), and even Santa has promised to pay us a visit ^^ ... but be alarmed! ... The chance that Grentchies will show up and try to ruin our party is pretty much a given! We managed to capture a couple during wintersday and 'extracted' this information ... We can assure you though that no charr plushies were hurt during the interrogation process, we merely used their cuddliness to break the Grentchies ... So if you see any Grentch appear in district grab them and hold them upside down and give them a good shake, anything they 'stole' belongs to the honest person that 'found' it thus be adviced not to show up in a grentchie disguise, or you may have a lot of explaining to do!

As far as give away prizes go, I seem to have most of it sorted out, what i could do with is a bunch of ecto's (20 +/-) to drop over some of the activities (though any donations are welcome as 'we' can fit them in somewhere). To give everybody an idea of what can be won during this party:
- 1 oppressor weapon of the winner's choice (donated by Iceblue), will be handed out 'on air' to give everybody a chance of winning it.
- 1 'old skool' ghostly staff (donated by Death by an Arrow), will be handed out 'on air' to give everybody a chance of winning it.

- Workshop donation 'left overs', a wild assortment of items donated to the workshop that didn't find a place in the actual prizes for the workshop. But don't be fooled by the mental image of 'left overs' "Those that don't value the small, aren't worth the large" and "Some of the best things come in small packages"

- *wintersday surprize*, roughly amounting to 1.800.000 gold in value (actual value may change based upon market fluctuations), being handed out in various games, activities and as refreshments. A huge chunk outof "Arghore's party Warchest", and i don't like spoiling what can be won, join in on the various activities and find out

*!* above Not including anything Santa may bring along and the stuff that the Gaming World Entertainment Network (www.gw-en.com) will hand out during their 'on air' trivia *!* ... a big tnx in advance for their donations to the workshop party!


** Side note **: If during the party it turns out the interest is so large that a 2nd district opens, we will try and do what is needed to supply both districts with activities based upon how crowded it gets. Prizes won in the 'on air' trivia will either be delivered to D2 or can be claimed after the party, the announcements of the workshop winners will also be repeated 'on air', so if you get stuck in D2 you wont have to miss much ... and in the odd occation that a 3rd district opens, we will try and do the same, we will spread thin but we rely on your understanding to make the event as enjoyable as possible for all that wish to attend.

` Marshmallow

` Marshmallow

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: May 2009

Canadaa!

Last Friday Night [TGIF]

E/

I probably won't be able to finish my entry x_x Good luck to everyone entering though :33 Amazing pieces in here <3!

BlackXI

BlackXI

Academy Page

Join Date: May 2011

In a house

Me/

Hmm... I decided to do some insanely quick sketches of my ideas. What I wanted to do was a very 'simple' drawing of Nicholas the Traveler giving gifts to children in Tyria. I would like an opinion on Nicholas' clothes.

I wanted them similar to Katy Hargrove's Nicholas with Yakkington. Nevertheless, it looks as if he is wearing an unusual looking poncho . I'm thinking I might do it in pencil instead of digital, because I'm too lazy to pick up my pen tablet

Here is where I have stopped:



@KiyaKoreena: Masking tape, plastic bags, and stuffing! That looks very nice. I would have never thought of using such simple material. It looks awesome so far!

@Sura: I would have loved to see what you could have done with your original. However, both of the new ideas look lovely. The children versions of gwen and thackery are too cute <3!

@Iceblue: Nice use of watercolor pencils! I love the polar bears, the boy bear draws a lot of attention to the piece. It reminds me of a "Wish You Were Here" postcard. Awesome job!

@Valdis the Unmaker: Winter must end, I don't much like the cold . Nice job I like details in his armor, specifically around the arm area. I do think his arms are a bit too large, but at the same time it strengthens the piece. It causes Grenth to look as if he is gradually reaching out at the viewer. Poor Dwayna...I like Lyssa anyway

Have a wonderful and safe holiday season everyone!

KiyaKoreena

KiyaKoreena

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Jun 2005

USA

Kirins of Holy Light

N/

Test quaggan is sewn. There are a few alterations to the pattern I need to make for the eventual final one but overall it seems ok. I dont think I have time to make a second proper one before the due date so this little guy will have to be my entry. Time to dress him up!


Death By An Arrow

Death By An Arrow

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jul 2009

The Kurzick Mob [Mob]

R/

Oh my god kiya. That quaggan. THAT QUAGGAN.


Let the jealousy flow through me.

AS FOR ME. Now that the holidays are outish of the way, time to get crackin.

Tomorrow.

Morag D

Morag D

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Mar 2007

UK/Austria

[bone]

P/

PLUSHIEEEESSSS :3 :3
what I really wanted to say is Merry Christmas, belatedly, to all of you! The European equivalent of Santa gave me a new Laptop (yayay!!), but as a result, I'm now suffering from a severe case of Skyrim. MUST FINISH PAINTINGZ!

Muzai

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Sep 2011

Mo/

So, i've finished the lineart, I'll had colors now :3

Aeronwen

Aeronwen

not so much fell as.....

Join Date: Jan 2009

UK

bone

R/

Good work everyone, it is lovely to come back to so much art awesomeness

Sura, Kid Gwen is lovely. I don’t know what you think is wrong with the Sylvari’s anatomy.

Iceblue, That’s so sweet

Minami, so sad about the entry but I hope you have a nice relaxed time.

Valdis, Having Dwayna’a crown is very nice, very understated. I love the concept but I didn’t get it when I looked at the pic, is there any way of making it more distinct? I know you like the gore but perhaps less blood would be more coherent? I love the armour, particularly the skulls.

As long as it is on your progress Gallery and clearly the final piece it will be fine – but that is where the judges will be looking. It is helpful if the progress pieces are there too.

Arghore, I will have to be semi afk for the earlier part of the party but otherwise day and time is Ok for me


Black, ummm I am too lazy to look up the Katy Hargrove pic – need a link – he looks a bit like a Cornish fisherman, which is OK. But I would say make the top less of a smock. I suppose it is just the start, where’s Yakkington? Are the rest of the toys in his bags?

Kiya, that Quaggan is a Marsh level of cuteness.


OMG Morag , it is like Invasion of the Body Snatchers, is there no-one left? Who was it said…..
‘lol Aero.
It is true though that Skyrim causes nerd-shaped black holes where people used to be...’?


Muzai, I love the concept and Gwen’s face is priceless, her boobs are huge though.

cosyfiep

cosyfiep

are we there yet?

Join Date: Dec 2005

in a land far far away

guild? I am supposed to have a guild?

Rt/

dang...its gonna be a very hard judging with all the great work I have been seeing here...(back to trolling).....

Dalili Ojo

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Dec 2011

Never on our Best

D/N

I'm really impressed with what I'm seeing. Especially from Sura, and BlackXI

That being said I've added in the details for my Charr. Only a small bit to finish this step, then on to the next phase. http://daliliojo.wordpress.com/2011/...re-refinement/

GeminiJuSa

GeminiJuSa

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2009

BhLd

E/Mo

Woow, So much has happened since I went away for christmas. Hopefully, I'll manage to get done in time, but time's running short! :S

Great work everyone!

And the plushie... *dies a bit* So cute! ^^

obastable

obastable

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2005

Mo/

Well figured I should add an update since I have a reprieve from the craziness for a day.

I've been toying with background ideas, have done about 8 different test ones then trashed all the ones I really did not want to pursue further. Narrowed it down to 3 last night and decided to sleep on it.

#1 - basic winter with some tree outlines




#2 - mountain pass, couldn't decide where jingle kitty would go




#3 - wintery field, seemed like a more natural setting for a Jingle Kitty (I also really love the way the sky came out).

Thistle Xandra

Thistle Xandra

Site Contributor

Join Date: Aug 2010

How to vote for "The People's Award!"

If you qualified to vote for "The People's Award" and would like to vote, please read this post carefully to make sure your vote gets counted

Qualifying to vote: You can vote for this award if you:
1) Made a post before the Mon Dec 26, 2011 noon PST deadline, or
2) Send me a PM about the workshop before the Mon Dec 26, 2011 noon PST deadline, or
3) Are on the donor's, special thank you, or judge's lists before the Mon Dec 26, 2011 noon PST deadline.

Voting opens: Mon, Jan 2, 2011 noon! I will not accept any judging sheets before then (i.e., delete from inbox without opening/reading).

Who gets the award: Ideally, nominate those you think helped encourage the Wintersday Workshop spirit. These are people who strove to improve their art, gave feedback, helped the workshop in some way, etc But, this is your award to give! So, if someone was really helpful to you or really impressed you in some way, go ahead and nominate that person!

Who can be nominated: Anyone who made a post, judged, or donated prizes before Mon, Jan 2, 2011 noon is eligible for this award (except me - don't vote for me, because I'll have to PM you that you need to choose someone else, and that's just extra work for me and delays your actual judging sheet )! Also, Since everyone can only win one award, the winners of the "Wintersday Artist Extraordinaire Award" and the "Best Progress Award" First place cannot win this award and the award will go to the runner up. Important: don't vote for yourself!

Submitting: Fill the nomination form *exactly* and send it to me in a PM titled "People's Award Vote!" I will only accept the first judging sheet you send me (to make it easier on me to keep a running tally), so please choose carefully I will let you know immediately if there are any problems with your sheet within 24 hours

Due: Jan 9th, noon PST. Get your sheets in early, because if your form is somehow incorrect and there isn't enough time for me to let you know and for you to get a new one in, your vote won't be counted.

How to make nominations:
• You *must* nominate four people (use forum name).
• You *must* allocate a total of 40 points between your four nominations (minimum of 1 point), depending on how strongly you feel about each nomination. For example, if you felt your nominations all deserve the award equally, you would assign 10 points for each. If you felt only 1 really deserved the nomination and the other 3 are just filler, you would assign 37 points to one and 1 point to the other 3. This increases the chance that we won't have ties. Otherwise, I recommend something like a 20-10-5-5 allocation.

How the award is given: The person with the most number of points wins the award!

Why you should vote:
• It's fun to vote for your favorite artists!
• You get entered into the "Mysterious Raffle!"
• You automatically get 10 points towards the award!

How to know if your form is accepted:
I won't be sending you a reply if your form is accepted. Instead, I will add your name to the raffle list in this post If there is something wrong with your form, I will PM you. If you don't see your name on the raffle list AND I haven't responded there is something wrong AND I have made an edit since you send the PM AND it's been 24 hours, then you may send me another PM. *Do not repeatedly send me PMs, because there is an inbox limit, and I am expecting many, many PMs*

Additional notes:
• If you have general questions, ask directly in the thread - I want to limit the PMs I get to only judging sheets.
• There is always a possibility that my inbox gets full and you'll get an error. This will be most likely to happen around midnight - 9am PST since I won't be cleaning my inbox while I sleep XD Don't wait until last minute, because if I don't get your judging sheet by the deadline because of this, your vote won't be counted.
• Ties will be broken by whoever got the score first (i.e., vote early for your favorites!)
• You may not change your votes or answers to the prize questions, so choose carefully since I will only take your first vote.
• If you want to add comments on why you voted for an artist and have your comments potentially appear in the first post when I announce the winner, feel free to do so and let me know if you want to remain anonymous.
• Use forum names! If a forum name doesn't match one of the ones I have, I will automatically send you a PM saying your form is incomplete and you might miss having your vote counted!
• I added a "Prizes Questionnaire" to help with prize distributions, before all the winners are selected. Please fill this out. Answers cannot be changed later on. If you fill this part out incorrectly, but you filled out "The People's Award" nomination part correctly, your vote will still be counted.
• The drawing for the "Mysterious Raffle" will take place during the Wintersday Workshop party after all the other awards are given out and will only be awarded to someone who has not already won an award.


☆The actual nomination part!☆
Copy and Paste this *exactly* and send it in a PM to me! Do not post this in this thread!
HTML Code:
[b]Your Forum Name[/b]:

[b]Your Ingame Name (needed to make sure prizes go to the correct people)[/b]:

[b]☆The People's Award☆[/b]
List four nominees (use forum names) and number of points you want to give each one (total 40pts, minimum 1pt).  Don't nominate yourself!
1)[i]Name[/i]:
[i]Points[/i]:
[i]Optional Comments[/i]:

2)[i]Name[/i]:
[i]Points[/i]:
[i]Optional Comments[/i]:

3)[i]Name[/i]:
[i]Points[/i]:
[i]Optional Comments[/i]:

4)[i]Name[/i]:
[i]Points[/i]:
[i]Optional Comments[/i]:


[b]☆Prizes Questionnaire☆[/b]
These are the current RL prize packages that we have:
Prize Package A: 1 Charr plushie, 1 Guild Wars 2 artbook (signed!), 1 Guild Wars Mouse
Prize Package B: 1 Guild Wars 2 Artbook (signed!), 1 Guild Wars Mouse
Prize Package C: 1 Guild Wars Eye of the North game box
Prize Package D: 1 Guild Wars 2 t-shirts, Guild Wars 2 postcard book

1) Please list your preference order for the prize packages (1 to 4) or type "decline" if you don't want any below.  Remember, winners *must* be willing to provide a name and address to GWG (not me!  Someone from GWG will contact you when all the winners have indicated their prize package preferences) to receive their prize.

[b]Prize Package A[/b]:
[b]Prize Package B[/b]:
[b]Prize Package C[/b]:
[b]Prize Package D[/b]:

2) Aside from RL prizes, do you want/can you accept ingame prizes (type yes or no below so we know whether or not to allocate your ingame prize to something else)?




Quote:
☆Raffle Numbers!☆
If you're on this list, your vote has been accepted and counted This will be your raffle number during the party Raffle numbers are given sequentially according to when I get your judging sheet!


1. Dalili Ojo
X2. Death By An Arrow
X3. Obastable
X4. KiyaKoreena
X5. Tee Wrex
6. Sas Ultra
X7. Ferocious Thanatos
X8. Sura
X9. Olrun The Blade
X10. Morag D
X11. BadDrizztfan
X12. ` Marshmallow
13. Misamoriko
X14. Rahtschini
15. darkpierrot
16. Djembe Kaki Lambe
17. Qing Guang - declines package C
18. Cosyfiep - declines RL prizes
X19. BlackXI - declines IG prizes
20. Satomz
21. Iceblue

raffle declined - approved ballot
- Aeronwen

` Marshmallow

` Marshmallow

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: May 2009

Canadaa!

Last Friday Night [TGIF]

E/

long & intimidating form looks long and intimidating D:

` Marshmallow

` Marshmallow

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: May 2009

Canadaa!

Last Friday Night [TGIF]

E/

lol a wip anyways

I wanna finish su badlyy ;__;

Thistle Xandra

Thistle Xandra

Site Contributor

Join Date: Aug 2010

Quote:
Originally Posted by ` Marshmallow View Post
long & intimidating form looks long and intimidating D: Awwww... But it's not supposed to look long & intimidating :*( T___T

steelborn

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Feb 2009

OH DEAR i finished it (..so far)

I would like to fix some things which are annoying to me, but i've got still no time to fix it until deadline...

So the "final version" is officialy postet in the spoiler!

ATTENTION: Filesize is *huge* (about 100MB of Data)

and i was not able to build a working preloader - so please - if you want to take a look: take a cup of coffee and wait until the following side looks like the following image... (it takes about 30 seconds with my connection - Downstream=12Mbit/Sec)

Then all files should be loaded probably and you can click on the "play music button"...

Maybe i will be able to fix another issue (jumping animation phase after pressing the button) but i will not promise it.

Please enjoy

Sura

Sura

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Sep 2011

Austria

N/

Thanks everyone for the comments !

@steelborn
Wow, that's amazing!! Freezie was kinda lonely at first because i pressed the play button too soon.... The three grentches are so funny

@marshmallow
omg the bear is sooo cute and Gwen as well of course . A problem i notice is that the snow globe and gwen are not in the same perspective. She sits on a different plane than the snowglobe, that makes them feel disconnected.

@obstable
personally i like option #1 best. what i don't like in #3 is that the shrubbery takes all the attention away from the cute kitty. It's so dark and has such a strong contrast to the bg that it feels like the focal point of the image. Either you should tone down the shrubbery a bit (and add snow on top or so) or bring the cat more to the front (value and contrastwise).

@Dalili Ojo
Thanks for your comments . About your sketch: LOL! That's one pissed looking charr . I think that's an hilarious idea and i am looking forward to the rest of the picture.

@BlackXI
I know Katy Hargrove's picture, it's so so adorable , one of my favourite pictures. So i am very much looking forward to your finished picture . And thanks for your comments, i will probably give my first idea another try once i have more time.

My own procress:
I more or less abandoned another idea, lol. This one http://surassketchblog.files.wordpre...sdaysketch.png
. Well, i haven't really abandonded it, i will definitely finish it, but not for Wintersday. The main reason is that when i thought about a coloursceme i realised that i don't want to use wintery and cold colours . I will use warm, earthy tones. Once finished i will post it in my thread on GW2Guru http://www.guildwars2guru.com/forum/...rt-t23263.html.

That leaves only the kid gwen and her friends idea . I am glad that you guys like the character sketches. I did two scene sketches.
Left: Gwen and her friends building a snow man. I am not too happy with that sketch, it's boring and the characters kinda lost their cuteness (i think i missed the proportions). But i still like the idea (i want Thackery be all "Omg, it's GWEN <3" with red cheeks and such), so i will try to rework the sketch.
Right: This sketch is called: "Ebonhawke, Early Attempt". It shows Gwen having fun with her selfbuilt snow fort... so it's more a less a joke referencing whats going to happen in her life.... I hope it's somewhat funny? But i like the composition, it's much more energetic than the left one.

Arghore

Arghore

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Jun 2009

Tyria, Catacomb dweller..

N/

Pointing everybody to this post again:
http://www.guildwarsguru.com/forum/s...&postcount=564

Please let me know if you have problems with the date and time for this event! Even a small 'its ok to me' would be nice, so i (we) am (are) sure not to have a lot of people that cannot make it to the party (and collect their prize) ... tnx

` Marshmallow

` Marshmallow

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: May 2009

Canadaa!

Last Friday Night [TGIF]

E/

Arghore , i d hae to wait for my schedule to come out :<

Arghore

Arghore

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Jun 2009

Tyria, Catacomb dweller..

N/

Right in the meantime i figured out what my prize for the 'spirit of wintersday' is going to be. Based upon the previous prize i did for halloween:

---------------------- In the Spirit of Wintersday Prize ---------------
1x Royal Gift
5x Traveler Gifts
25x Huntsmen Gifts
250x Wintersday Gifts
100x Eggnog
100x Spiked Eggnog
100x Fruitcakes
100x Winter Green Candy Canes
250x Frosty Tonics
1x Ecto
1x Ruby
1x Sapphire
1x Elite Skill Tome of Choice
---------------------------------

That should be somewhere in the regions of 80-100k in marketvalue or a decent amount of surprizes, stuffz and pts for any character thats skillfull enough to win it

KiyaKoreena

KiyaKoreena

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Jun 2005

USA

Kirins of Holy Light

N/

@ Sura. I like the one on the right because she seems so cheery. :-)

@ Arghore. Place, time and date sound good to me.


My progress:

Been working on the quaggan decorations. Sewing on beads is slow work. The beads are gold but the flash makes that disappear.

obastable

obastable

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2005

Mo/

Cleaned up some existing things, threw in some new things (still messy). Does that help the balance issues? I think it looks kinda random .... ugh.



Dalili Ojo

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Dec 2011

Never on our Best

D/N

@Sura Thanks! I was going for that look with the Charr.


I can see why you'd want earth tones for that piece, it's very organic in form. A cool scheme might be best saved for something more ridged/ aggressive. It's too bad we won't get to see it sooner That being said the cuteness a young Gwen in a snow fort almost makes up for it ^^.

@Thisle yes, that form is quite long, but I'm sure it's for a good reason. So we'll all do our best to give a lot of thought when filling out.


Right everyone?

Muzai

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Sep 2011

Mo/

Thank you Aeronwen, but i'm sorry i've change her eyes 'cause they were too difficult to colors.

So, I've add some colors, i'll begin the shadow now.

Sasultra

Academy Page

Join Date: Jan 2010

I live on earth...I think oO

(ULOB)

Me/

@Valdis the Unmaker- Hale Grenth looks awesome good job the colours look dark and creepy like him
@Morag D- BEAUTIFUL!
@GeminiJuSa- I love the christmas tree in the backgorund hehe can`t wait for you to be fully done
@Starfleck Almighty- ADORABLE! sheloves that gift
@Marshmallow- Look amazing I love your details on Gwens dress. *jealous*
@Draken Burst- SUPER *jelly*I love colour of it so far its coming off really nicely.
@Koreena- What can I say your just brilliant. nuff said
@obastable- AWWWWW! makes me smile! great job!
@Iceblue- Stuninly beautiful. love the water colours you did an amazing job (how fast did you get done are you superwomen-man )
@Doctor Overlord- can`t wait for finished product )))
@steelborn- YOUR VERY TALENTED. amazing job. *appluades*
@Rahtschini- OMG that is just off the cute radar GREAT! job soooooo cute (mox toy hehehehe)
@Olrun The Blade- That`s going to be very coool
@Qing Guang- I know your amazing artist Ruth. it will turn out amazingly. great job so far
@darkpierrot- I love what you did with the paper craft VERY nice job
@Djembe Kaki Lambe- ALL I CAN SAY IS YUM! amazing job....YUMMMMY
@Afrodita- JUST WICKED.AMAZING JOB. (cheers)
@Kate- LOVE IT ALL. GREAT JOB!
@Lilycoeur- Very sexy gwen hehe (AMAZING) can`t wait for finished product it will be perfect i bet.
@BlackXI - :O SO SWEET!
@Sura- Amazing great job, BEAUTIFUL! on all levels
@Dalili Ojo- excited to see finished drawing GREAT JOB!

I hope everyone had a great christmas. And everyone have a safe and happy New Years.

GeminiJuSa

GeminiJuSa

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2009

BhLd

E/Mo

@Sasultra: Wow, I am impressed with how much time you took to check everyone out ^^ And thank you. I hope to finish it quickly :X Should have time to start colouring it tonight.

Rahtschini

Rahtschini

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Dec 2011

@Sasultra:
Thank you for your comment^^ I hope I creat to make it sweeter

Muzai

Ascalonian Squire

Join Date: Sep 2011

Mo/

@ Sasultra : Thank you, I hope that you like the final product too

KiyaKoreena

KiyaKoreena

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Jun 2005

USA

Kirins of Holy Light

N/

I think this is as decorated as this quaggan will get.





Final pics will get done tomorrow.

Qing Guang

Qing Guang

Wilds Pathfinder

Join Date: Nov 2008

California

Lucid Spirits [LIFE]

N/A

Aww, thanks Sarah!

Kiya: That quaggan is looking great! So cuddly...

So here's some sketchy lineart (I am so behind, I know).

Ignoring the stray marks... there's something up with Qing's face and I'm having a rotten time trying to fix it. I had trouble finding references for that weird angle of her head. Maybe once I've got the shading down it won't look so weird, but I can't help feeling it's more than just the jawline. (Gui needs to look more at her, too... ack)
Also, the top of the image is looking a little sparse, so I think putting in the wreath I talked about earlier would be a good idea... but I'm not entirely sure whether it should go behind Dwayna, or what.

obastable

obastable

Krytan Explorer

Join Date: Nov 2005

Mo/

Quote:
Originally Posted by Qing Guang View Post
So here's some sketchy lineart (I am so behind, I know).
http://i910.photobucket.com/albums/a...ayLineart1.jpg

Ignoring the stray marks... there's something up with Qing's face and I'm having a rotten time trying to fix it. I had trouble finding references for that weird angle of her head. Maybe once I've got the shading down it won't look so weird, but I can't help feeling it's more than just the jawline. (Gui needs to look more at her, too... ack)
Also, the top of the image is looking a little sparse, so I think putting in the wreath I talked about earlier would be a good idea... but I'm not entirely sure whether it should go behind Dwayna, or what.
I wouldn't worry about the upper part of the image, you can fill that with wall texture (wood paneling, log home style walls, brick, rock wall, wall paper, etc., with good shadows & highlights for ambiance will all take care of that).

For Qing's face, it looks as though her head is slightly too far forward - try angling the neck more upright - consider, when you're sitting and you look up and/or over at someone, you don't really crane your neck so much as just tilt your head up & to the side - the neck generally stays in an upright position.


Edit: I actually popped in to post this and forgot.

Rearranged the pic a bit, liking it much more now, just need to clean up & position some stuffs in front of the tree

Death By An Arrow

Death By An Arrow

Jungle Guide

Join Date: Jul 2009

The Kurzick Mob [Mob]

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Arkham City stole all the time I planned to do my entry today, damn you video games!

Hopefully I can figure out an idea and have it all sketched and pretty for tomorrow, and then painting can begin. I still have...plenty... of... time. x.x Doesn't help that I had a billion non-related art ideas I want to do now instead.

Kiya, that quaggan looks so intense. what do you have inmind for both your projects' submission pictures? Will they be togethor, or seperate?

Qing, thats looking nice! I feel like the position of her head isn't the problem but the position of her legs. Right now, her head and neck sort of look like she's peering over at the gift, and she looks greatly interested. However this conflicts with her bodys position, because she looks like shes more relaxed. Perhaps keeping her legs in that spot but shifting her torso and head over to the left might help her look like she's reaching as far as she can to take a peek at the box? Just rambling on here, feel free to take it or leave it if it doesnt make sense.

Obastable, that composition does look much better. The left side feels a little empty now, but it sounds like you've got that covered.

Arghore, that day should be good with me

Valdis the Unmaker

Valdis the Unmaker

Academy Page

Join Date: Oct 2011

Knights of Caelo [Hevn]

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@Aero: Hummm... I can try. Any suggestions? The blood was supposed to be symbolic of the fact that Grenth has done away with Dwayna... :3

I can remove some of it, but the coloration on the robes and such isn't blood, it's just the color of the robes :]

Mmmm... Is there some sort of symbol directly related to Dwayna other than her headband thing that I could add in?

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@Everyone: Your guys'n'gals art looks amazing!!! Even if I'm not commenting very much, all of it is bloody brilliant and you all need to know it! ^^

KiyaKoreena

KiyaKoreena

Desert Nomad

Join Date: Jun 2005

USA

Kirins of Holy Light

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@ Qing. I think it is more of a body position and scale then a head thing. And maybe a view of a quarter of a wreath to fill that space?




@ Death. Two separate entries. The quaggan will be having a makeshift portrait session done, still working out the best way to display the diorama. It feels like it is missing something.