RPG!!(Want more!Plz read 1st post)
Storm Crow
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Originally Posted by ownage of teh elite
LoL Alicia, at the end, try to copy the whole thread into Microsoft Word, see how much pages we make.
yeah, as of not your most recent but the next older one we have 30 pages in Times New Roman, size 12
valid user name
30 pages?? lmao
Link Ironhammer
so did u guys like my little story??
valid user name
It was alright.
Link Ironhammer
ok cool what did u think stormcrow could it lead up to where u guys are in the story??
valid user name
dude, use some punctuation marks please, otherwise it's difficut to read
Link Ironhammer
ok srry
Dac Vin
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Originally Posted by Link Ironhammer
You did it again!
Anyway, we finish the pregnancy story and then me and the others join the adventure! Be worried, be really worried...
*cough*Expect a love triangle between Alicia, Vantie and me xD*cough*
PS: About my other rant; don't worry, the "religious" thing only concern the person listening to metal, and not metal itself. Unless the song iss about Satan, and I can assure you Metallica NEVER did such a song! Hell, (no pun intended) the ONLY song they have done about a religious being/event was Creeping Death, and this one was about the liberation of Egypt by Moise (with a slight emphasis on the tenth plague...)
Okay, i"ll shut up now, but still, METALLICA RULES THE WORLD!!!!!!!
Storm Crow
link to answer your question, no not really and Dac I intended t do so at a decent hour tomorr..I mean later today 
and I don't think Metallica owns the world, maybe just Canada, or something bigger and further away from me.....aha!.....RUSSIA!
and I don't think Metallica owns the world, maybe just Canada, or something bigger and further away from me.....aha!.....RUSSIA!
Link Ironhammer
Hey at least i tried right??
Storm Crow
yea, i guess
Link Ironhammer
Dac Vin
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Originally Posted by Storm Crow
link to answer your question, no not really and Dac I intended t do so at a decent hour tomorr..I mean later today and I don't think Metallica owns the world, maybe just Canada, or something bigger and further away from me.....aha!.....RUSSIA!
Nononono, IN SOVIET RUSSIA, Metallica own YOU!
Anyway, off until you finish
and I don't think Metallica owns the world, maybe just Canada, or something bigger and further away from me.....aha!.....RUSSIA!
Nononono, IN SOVIET RUSSIA, Metallica own YOU!
Anyway, off until you finish
Storm Crow
and to continue where Vantie left off.....
(and for those of you who dont know how to pronounce it, Malikai is Mal-i-kye, just spelled wierd)
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3 weeks later
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A baby's cry broke the silence.
"I'll get him." Alicia said, rolling out of bed for the third time that hour.
"Mali, Mali, Mali," she said picking her baby boy up from his cradle, "What is it this time, sweetheart?"
She cradled him in her arms, rocking and shushing him.
Born just a few weeks before, little Malikai had somehow aquired Vantie's jet black hair, along with his mother's soft, grey-green eyes.
He quieted down a bit, but didnt drift off. Alicia put him back in his cradle and turned around, only to have him cry again. She sighed and picked him up again.
"Prepare for yet another night of baby-in-the-middle."
"Again?" Vantie asked falling back into his pillow.
"It's not his fault, he's just a baby."
"You're right, but who could resist him? He did get my looks."
"Vantie."
"Yeah?"
"You scare most people."
"You're just jealous that you cant scare people away just by looking at them."
She rolled her eyes and laughed at Vantie's optimism about his Necrotic looks.
By this time Mali had fallen asleep again, surely only to wake up again in a few hours. He was returned to his cradle for the last time that night, wrapped in his sky blue, poison stained blanket...
(and for those of you who dont know how to pronounce it, Malikai is Mal-i-kye, just spelled wierd)
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3 weeks later
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A baby's cry broke the silence.
"I'll get him." Alicia said, rolling out of bed for the third time that hour.
"Mali, Mali, Mali," she said picking her baby boy up from his cradle, "What is it this time, sweetheart?"
She cradled him in her arms, rocking and shushing him.
Born just a few weeks before, little Malikai had somehow aquired Vantie's jet black hair, along with his mother's soft, grey-green eyes.
He quieted down a bit, but didnt drift off. Alicia put him back in his cradle and turned around, only to have him cry again. She sighed and picked him up again.
"Prepare for yet another night of baby-in-the-middle."
"Again?" Vantie asked falling back into his pillow.
"It's not his fault, he's just a baby."
"You're right, but who could resist him? He did get my looks."
"Vantie."
"Yeah?"
"You scare most people."
"You're just jealous that you cant scare people away just by looking at them."
She rolled her eyes and laughed at Vantie's optimism about his Necrotic looks.
By this time Mali had fallen asleep again, surely only to wake up again in a few hours. He was returned to his cradle for the last time that night, wrapped in his sky blue, poison stained blanket...
Storm Crow
took everything through word, 34 pages of complete storyline posts 
Sanjinu Dalsworth
(Guys if we do do a book we will have to cut out the talk about music and OOC talk and Storm Crow and I would get most credit because we were here from day 1.Oh and about the three way triangle between Alicia and Ventie I am already the third person.Also I am only 12 and I knew about water breaking)Sanjinu woke up hearing the baby.He walked over to where Alicia was."I'll take him/her(havent said yet i think)"He took the baby and began wishpering arcane words as Malikai's back got warm but not too warm.As Alicia went back to bed Sanjinu sat there with Malikai in his lap.He heard...no felt something.Once again the gods came down."You must attack the char by sunset tomarrow or your power not being used will well up and ye shall lose control." "But wait.."Sanjinu said but they left.Alicia is in no condition and with the baby she cant fight.....His thoughts were clouded.I shall go alone in hopes to hold them off and when I get back I will just.....make them use their power?No they will think I am tring to get them to waste em.......What to do??Maybe....I could try to steal their power with a necro ritual.I could wake up Venti and hold a dagger to his neck or the babies neck......(I could turn evil...I think I will ever so slowly!!)No....."Venti wake up"He said quietly."Come with me..."He moved away from Alicia."We must steal Alicias power with a necro spell" "NO!Why would you say that?" "look it has been so long since we have killed a char and used our power by sunset tomarrow we will die if we dont use it.Alicia is in no condition to fight...It is best for her.You can transfer it to me." "But shouldnt we ask her?" "No it will only make her worry.Omega and I will go fight the char and the rest of you give us your power." "But but.."Venti had no way out." Do it for Alicia and your kid." "Fine" He gave Alicais power to Sanjinu and his to Omega.They left soon after to go fight the char just as the sun arose.....
Link Ironhammer
ooo I got an idea i can be Mali all grown up!!!
Storm Crow
Sanjinu, Mali is a he if you read my post carefully and if we ever do make it into a book, everyone should get credit if they contributed to the story, and Link that sounds like a good idea
Link Ironhammer
thanks since u guys are so far into the story
Storm Crow
yea, it might take some time to get that far though, and I want no skipping of years just to make my Mali be grown up *eyes everyone suspiciously*
Link Ironhammer
One question how is it that you got pregnant but you didn't even do it with Vantie or Sanjinu? I read the whole story and it didn't say anything about it, either I missed, u skiped ahead, or i just misunderstood something. Could someone answer this for me plz????
Dac Vin
OOC: Lyssa be cursed, that "thing" you wrote just confused me much more Sanjiru. I mean, "Power transfer"? Omega? Oh, and press enter sometimes
Okay then, time for me to enter the story! Meet DAC VIN!
IC:
Sanjinu and Omega had only traveled a few miles before they saw the first charrs - a flame keeper and a ashen claw - starting to burn something on the road.
Must be an unlucky animal, Sanj thought, quickly running toward the two beast. But as he approached, he could only see what it was not that...
"It's a man!" Omega shouted. "They are burning one of our kind!"
But Sanjinu couldn't care less about this fact. All he could see was the charr. All he thought was to kill them, if only to keep the power under control for more than just after the sunset...
Thirty seconds later, both charrs layed dead in a pool of theirs blood.
"Dwayna be blessed, he's still alive." Omega said. "Unconscious, severely wounded and burned, but still alive."
"So, what we do with him?"
"Let's bring him back to Alicia. He's not safe here."
So they both went back to Alicia, then resumed their journey. Little did they know...
OOC: So there, saved by our heroes! Now I am resting peacefully with Alicia and her friends (And Malikai)
Next part of my story coming soon. Hope it wasn't bad for a first!
Okay then, time for me to enter the story! Meet DAC VIN!
IC:
Sanjinu and Omega had only traveled a few miles before they saw the first charrs - a flame keeper and a ashen claw - starting to burn something on the road.
Must be an unlucky animal, Sanj thought, quickly running toward the two beast. But as he approached, he could only see what it was not that...
"It's a man!" Omega shouted. "They are burning one of our kind!"
But Sanjinu couldn't care less about this fact. All he could see was the charr. All he thought was to kill them, if only to keep the power under control for more than just after the sunset...
Thirty seconds later, both charrs layed dead in a pool of theirs blood.
"Dwayna be blessed, he's still alive." Omega said. "Unconscious, severely wounded and burned, but still alive."
"So, what we do with him?"
"Let's bring him back to Alicia. He's not safe here."
So they both went back to Alicia, then resumed their journey. Little did they know...
OOC: So there, saved by our heroes! Now I am resting peacefully with Alicia and her friends (And Malikai)
Next part of my story coming soon. Hope it wasn't bad for a first!
Storm Crow
Good show Dac! *claps* and Link, i didnt get it either, ask ownage he's the one who said it, I just went along with it...
Link Ironhammer
ok i will
Storm Crow
Dac hurry up on that second part plz!
Storm Crow
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Originally Posted by Sanjinu Dalsworth
Guys if we do do a book we will have to cut out the talk about music and OOC talk and Storm Crow and I would get most credit because we were here from day 1.
I agree in the fact that we were here from day one, but Vantie has contributed a lot to this story too, and probably has actually put more work into his posts than you did. Try spacing between your sentences, its anoying to have to space them all out in word, and maybe brush up on you're spelling a bit, I really hate running spell check on everything you write. This is not trying to dis you, just a few suggestions on what you could do to make your posts better, and maybe a lesson on not trying to take all the credit for yourself.
Dac Vin
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Originally Posted by Storm Crow
I'm working on it, don't worry. It just take me some times to get it right, but I promise I'll post it
EDIT: Okay, here we go!
IC:
It was the wailing of Malikai that broke the wounded man from his unconsciousness. Slowly and painfully, he got up, and looked at one of his arm, severely burnt.
Oh damn... Is this what really happened? he thought, the incessant crying of the baby slowly being replaced by one of Alicia's lullaby, until the melodious song what all that remained.
He quickly reached for his bag, not far away from him, and pulled out a medium-sized bottle reading:
"Troll Unguent. Use with moderation.
And he sprayed it all over his body. Within seconds, the unguent was taking effect, and he felt all the pain slowly vanishing into nothingness...
"Feeling better?" The voice nearly made him jump out his bed.
"Yea, think so." He slowly spun around to see Alicia, who was considerably relieved that he survived.
"Our two friends brought us there after you got attacked by two charrs, you don't remember?"
"Err, all I remember is feeling a sharp pain in my back, then I blacked out. Anyway, I am still very tired, so I'll just go back to sleep until morning set up. But one last thing, what's your name?"
"I'm Alicia. And you?"
"You can call me Dac Vin. Or just Dac, if it's too long." Dac could easily see the amused smile on Alicia's face. She's a real sweetheart... he thought, before falling back into dreamland...
He's cute, Alicia thought too, and then she went back to bed.
Link Ironhammer
so how long will it take for Mali to grow up???
Storm Crow
a while, geez hes only what, a month old at the moment
Link Ironhammer
ok ok what classes would mali be anyway?? It sounds like Necro cause of Vantie and Ranger or ele for you stormcrow
Storm Crow
he has his choices, Ele, Necro, Range, Mez
Link Ironhammer
ok cool if i would choose for him i would be ele necro u know to be like my father
Storm Crow
yay! my main prof! atta boy!
Link Ironhammer
Thank you
Storm Crow
no prob Link
Sanjinu Dalsworth
((Well we could make a part two after we finish the char maybe..just a thought. Does Omega come here anymore?))
Sanjinu moved faster because the set back of some worthless mans I mean if he is weak enough to get killed by only two char he is most likely a peasant. Some how he got attacked by only two char and started to die and then Omega made us take him back. What a worthless piece of junk. Must all things be taken away from him??
First he lost his mother in a fire in the village and then his father was killed by bandits raiding their village. Then I promised myself I would always be able to defend myself. After that I lost my dog. Next he lost Ashley his girlfriend who died by hunger and they were to be wed next week. Then I promised myself I would never love again. Then came Alicia....like an angel to help lighten the burden. However as everything around me is false hope so was she. She was lost to the evil, stupid, uncaring, unloving, un...un... well whatever he was evil. All necros are evil. None can change.
His thoughts were interrupted by the char army to the north. He saw their massive army. How could he survive? I will survive for Alicia. I will kill for Alicia...I love Alicia.
The onslaught began. The char only saw two and sent a small group after them. They were easily destroyed. After seeing this the whole army came. Char blood was everywhere. Wave after wave came and he began tire. I must save Alicia...I must save..his thoughts were cut short by the first char to hit him shattering his arm. Not much later the char was burning and shortly dead. The army was two massive. In one last try Sanjinu summoned all of his strength and with one massive fireball he killed the last wave of the char.
He fell over in pain screaming. Hang Sanjinu hang on. He kept telling himself. You must stay alive to protect Alicia. You must. All was lost. He was in pain, anger, hunger, and thirst.........
Omega saw all the char fall and began to rejoice. However when he saw Sanjinu he moved and began to lift him. He moved as fast as he could. They soon came back to their camp. Sanjinu was still in his arms...........
Sanjinu moved faster because the set back of some worthless mans I mean if he is weak enough to get killed by only two char he is most likely a peasant. Some how he got attacked by only two char and started to die and then Omega made us take him back. What a worthless piece of junk. Must all things be taken away from him??
First he lost his mother in a fire in the village and then his father was killed by bandits raiding their village. Then I promised myself I would always be able to defend myself. After that I lost my dog. Next he lost Ashley his girlfriend who died by hunger and they were to be wed next week. Then I promised myself I would never love again. Then came Alicia....like an angel to help lighten the burden. However as everything around me is false hope so was she. She was lost to the evil, stupid, uncaring, unloving, un...un... well whatever he was evil. All necros are evil. None can change.
His thoughts were interrupted by the char army to the north. He saw their massive army. How could he survive? I will survive for Alicia. I will kill for Alicia...I love Alicia.
The onslaught began. The char only saw two and sent a small group after them. They were easily destroyed. After seeing this the whole army came. Char blood was everywhere. Wave after wave came and he began tire. I must save Alicia...I must save..his thoughts were cut short by the first char to hit him shattering his arm. Not much later the char was burning and shortly dead. The army was two massive. In one last try Sanjinu summoned all of his strength and with one massive fireball he killed the last wave of the char.
He fell over in pain screaming. Hang Sanjinu hang on. He kept telling himself. You must stay alive to protect Alicia. You must. All was lost. He was in pain, anger, hunger, and thirst.........
Omega saw all the char fall and began to rejoice. However when he saw Sanjinu he moved and began to lift him. He moved as fast as he could. They soon came back to their camp. Sanjinu was still in his arms...........
ownage of teh elite
YAY!
TIME FOR....*drumrolls*
THE BIG STORY-TURNER.
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Yeah...uhh.Link...about your post...
I dont really know who got Alicia pregnant...
She was already pregnant before our little reunion night..
Uhhh...
It could've been Sanjinu's...Mine's...or even Omega's..
But currently, Vantie is sort of staying at Alicia's house.
He's just there to take care o the baby.
He doesn't know who's it was.
No DNA tests in Tyria, now are there?
Ugh! You guys post too fast!
I thought you were all offline!
Dont post too much on the story, or my post will be lost!
This is continuing the part in which Dac Vin said that "Alicia really is a sweetheart"
*throws rock at Sanjinu*
Take your time!
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"FINE!"
"FINE!" Vantie replied back
Alicia was cradling her baby, slowly rocking Mali back and forth. Her face was consorted with anger, but Vantie could see that Dac Vin's reassuring hand upon her shoulder calmed her down. She and Vantie had both gotten into an argument about Mali's unknown farther, and the two UNWELCOMED guests, in Vantie's mind.
"I hope you have a good life!" Vantie spat out in anger.
"I HOPE YOU DO TOO!" Alicia yelled back.
"FINE!"
"FINE!"
Vantie looked at the three people in front of him with his hazel eyes, staring at them all in turn, icily. His eyes moved from Mali, the child he had cared for, for what had seemed like years, as he already was 3 feet tall. His eyes showed nothing but kindness for him. But then his eyes moved to Sanjinu Dalsworth. His eyes flared up with anger and hatred, and he made sure that Sanjinu & Dac Vin could see that. But....Vantie just couldn't look at Alicia. He bowed his head, not allowing his eyes to meet hers.
"I'm leaving, I'll catch you guys around" he said through gritted teeth.
"You do that, Vantie" Alicia said, cooly.
"Maybe you just won't ever see me again."
"I don't mind"
Vantie lost control.
With his emotions spilling out, the emotions of his life...the only emotions that he had ever felt...anger, hatred, fear, revenge, they all poured out of him. Blind with rage, he turned around, and slammed the door down with his fist. He turned and walked towards the doors, grabbing his gloves. As he fastened the last one on his hands, his boots stomped on the green grass outside of Alicia's house.
"Quite a show you put up there, Vantiel."
"Shutup."
Vantie could feel Omega's prescence, slowly mocking him, and leering him from a distance.
"Vantie, you know, Alicia really had something for you"
"Pfff"
"Naw, Im serious. That might've not been your baby, but I mean, we both know that you liked her pretty darn much."
"Mali's almost old enough to be told, how the man who raised him, left him forever."''
Suddenly a tear dropped down from Vantie's eyes.
"I...I never wanted Mali to feel the same pain I felt when I was a child" he stammered between gasps and cries.
Omega watched as Vantiel fell upon his knees, on the ground, his memories flooding him.
Tears flooded down from Vantie's eyes, the same tears that had fell for the same purpose, when Vantie was still young. When his mother was gone, and he had cried in sadness, only to have his emotions turn into anger. Then, in which Vantie had tracked down his father, completed his revenge, and was left in the world, by himself. With no one, but himself. In a world where he knew no friends. Where he knew not the meaning of love. Knew not the feeling's of warmth, the emotions of happiness, the emotions of bliss.
The only emotions that he knew, as he always had.
Were pain.
TIME FOR....*drumrolls*
THE BIG STORY-TURNER.
=-=-=--=-=-
Yeah...uhh.Link...about your post...
I dont really know who got Alicia pregnant...
She was already pregnant before our little reunion night..
Uhhh...
It could've been Sanjinu's...Mine's...or even Omega's..
But currently, Vantie is sort of staying at Alicia's house.
He's just there to take care o the baby.
He doesn't know who's it was.
No DNA tests in Tyria, now are there?
Ugh! You guys post too fast!
I thought you were all offline!
Dont post too much on the story, or my post will be lost!
This is continuing the part in which Dac Vin said that "Alicia really is a sweetheart"
*throws rock at Sanjinu*
Take your time!
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"FINE!"
"FINE!" Vantie replied back
Alicia was cradling her baby, slowly rocking Mali back and forth. Her face was consorted with anger, but Vantie could see that Dac Vin's reassuring hand upon her shoulder calmed her down. She and Vantie had both gotten into an argument about Mali's unknown farther, and the two UNWELCOMED guests, in Vantie's mind.
"I hope you have a good life!" Vantie spat out in anger.
"I HOPE YOU DO TOO!" Alicia yelled back.
"FINE!"
"FINE!"
Vantie looked at the three people in front of him with his hazel eyes, staring at them all in turn, icily. His eyes moved from Mali, the child he had cared for, for what had seemed like years, as he already was 3 feet tall. His eyes showed nothing but kindness for him. But then his eyes moved to Sanjinu Dalsworth. His eyes flared up with anger and hatred, and he made sure that Sanjinu & Dac Vin could see that. But....Vantie just couldn't look at Alicia. He bowed his head, not allowing his eyes to meet hers.
"I'm leaving, I'll catch you guys around" he said through gritted teeth.
"You do that, Vantie" Alicia said, cooly.
"Maybe you just won't ever see me again."
"I don't mind"
Vantie lost control.
With his emotions spilling out, the emotions of his life...the only emotions that he had ever felt...anger, hatred, fear, revenge, they all poured out of him. Blind with rage, he turned around, and slammed the door down with his fist. He turned and walked towards the doors, grabbing his gloves. As he fastened the last one on his hands, his boots stomped on the green grass outside of Alicia's house.
"Quite a show you put up there, Vantiel."
"Shutup."
Vantie could feel Omega's prescence, slowly mocking him, and leering him from a distance.
"Vantie, you know, Alicia really had something for you"
"Pfff"
"Naw, Im serious. That might've not been your baby, but I mean, we both know that you liked her pretty darn much."
"Mali's almost old enough to be told, how the man who raised him, left him forever."''
Suddenly a tear dropped down from Vantie's eyes.
"I...I never wanted Mali to feel the same pain I felt when I was a child" he stammered between gasps and cries.
Omega watched as Vantiel fell upon his knees, on the ground, his memories flooding him.
Tears flooded down from Vantie's eyes, the same tears that had fell for the same purpose, when Vantie was still young. When his mother was gone, and he had cried in sadness, only to have his emotions turn into anger. Then, in which Vantie had tracked down his father, completed his revenge, and was left in the world, by himself. With no one, but himself. In a world where he knew no friends. Where he knew not the meaning of love. Knew not the feeling's of warmth, the emotions of happiness, the emotions of bliss.
The only emotions that he knew, as he always had.
Were pain.
ownage of teh elite
Oh and guys, if were making a book, we need to :EDIT: our posts, which PERTAIN to the Story itself, and make their titles.
Im seeing lots of blank spaces up there!
o_0
So you guys go do that!
Then we can sell our book for $10.00 plus tax, plus shipping and handling, and we will all be billionaires!
*laughs evily*
Im seeing lots of blank spaces up there!
o_0
So you guys go do that!
Then we can sell our book for $10.00 plus tax, plus shipping and handling, and we will all be billionaires!
*laughs evily*
Link Ironhammer
so if mali is 3 feet tall he is what 3 or 4 years old
ownage of teh elite
Ehhh...
Lets say 4 years old.
Mali can be niec and old.
Lets say 4 years old.
Mali can be niec and old.