Tyria's Next Top Model - The Finale -- Winner: Jaden Stone!
Unlucky Slayer
Not really a glitch when the bird is behind her.
LadyNilene
Alright guys, here are the evaluation/rankings for Week 2 of the competition, in random order...
Naga Xaviera
I aready knew that it was going to be tough trying to get the tiger (Roy) to sit still in a position long enough to get a good shot, so I basically just used a position that I thought would look good even if I didnt have him in the picture with me. Once Roy was in the shot I liked how both him and Naga were looking at the same thing so i cropped the picture to show that better.
Judge 1: I think the Tiger stole the spotlight from you, I'm looking right at the tiger and ignoring your presence completely. I'm looking at the full size and its gorgeous, I really wished that more of you were shown in the cropped.
Judge 2: It's a pretty picture, but nothing interesting is going on. It's quite boring.
Judge 3: I think this picture is great! I love scene, and I think your poses in the picture matches it perfectly. The serene look on your character matches the tiger, the cool environment, everything just works well together. But I do agree that more of you should've been shown, other than that, loved it.
Jaden Stone
This is a picture of Jaden getting into the water with one of the deadliest animals in the sea, the Canthan Tiger Shark. I wanted to Get a Jaws like feeling to the picture, where the shark is closing in behind her. I also wanted a look of shock or fear as if she didnt know what was behind her.
Judge 1: Definitely an original idea. Never crossed my mind that there would be sea creatures, so it was a nice surprise to see something unique like this come out.
Judge 2: I like the idea, but the execution fell a little bit short to me. I've actually done a similar shot like that myself, but what I did was do the dance emote and made it look like I was flipping into the water, so I feel that you could've done something more interesting than that.
Judge 3: I've actually totally read Jaws in this picture even before reading your explanation! The way your character looked like she was creeping in the water and such. I love the scenery, but for once, I think you should've used your nude look instead of clothes if you were going to be in water that is. It would've worked for the picture much more.
I Only Protect You
Because of the good/evil idea, I tried to put that aspect forth as good as possible. I used a monk spell to light my character and to put a peaceful breeze around it. Behind my character is the evil hyena roaring and harrassing my helpless monk, in the dark world of the desolation.
Judge 1: Ohhh another animal I didn't even think about. Hyena, interesting choice. I love the desert nomad look, it works for that area, obviously since that is where the armor is derived. Anyways, I liked it.
Judge 2: My biggest problem is the enchantments you had on, they distract and take away from the picture way too much. I assumed you had them to keep you alive, but seeing how you explained that you had them to show good and evil, I have to disagree. They distract from your picture, and the enchants you use can be used by enemy mobs too, so it doesn't show "good" really in my opinion...I commend you on trying to come up with an interesting concept, but I think you went too far and ended up falling short.
Judge 3: I agree, the enchants really take away from your picture, but other than that, I liked it. It reminds me of the Lion King!!! The area where the Hyenas lived at is reminiscent to the desolation, I like it, your character had nice composure, the hyena looked way to obedient to convey evil in my opinion, but still nice.
Raselle Deathblade
I chose the snow wolf. Simply said, I enjoy the looks of the animal, and as it seems to travel alone, it was a perfect match for my character. And as beautiful as it may seem, it also poses danger to anyone who may disturb its peace.
Judge 1: Great picture, one of my favorites, you and the animal compliment each other, the animal is in action. Both of you are equally in the shot, the ratio is good. Love it.
Judge 2: It's a pretty picture, but I don't like the background, I think you should've chose a darker place to do that, I think if you would've had the picture on rocks/snow, it would've been better. The colors would've went well with the wolf/you. So I think it was a strong concept, but weak execution.
Judge 3: I agree with the background, although it does add a lot of contrast to you and the wolf, I just think the background is so bland for something so interesting.
Malefic Mistress
The white tiger is tough, but Malefic is tougher. In this shot I wanted to show that Malefic was fearless of this deadly animal. Before the tiger even managed to touch Malefic, she turned around to stare him down. Malefic is fearless, even in the face of danger.
Judge 1: The explanation was good, but the picture didn't really appeal to me. eh.
Judge 2: Not amazing, though not horrible...nice concept, kinda like Yin and Yang, black and white, you contrast each other.
Judge 3: I like the body language for both you and the animal, though I think it would've been better if you were in some kind of battle stance, like mentioned before, I feel that this is kind of like a Yin and Yang thing where you're both trying to overcome each other, and I think if you had a battle stance like the tiger, it would've been so much better.
Perynne Walker
This picture is set in Raisu Palace, the home of the phoenix who are raised as decorative guards and pets for the emperor and his favourites. I wanted to portray how photogenic phoenixes are while still showing the close friendship Perynne and her pet Hopscotch share.
Judge 1: It's nice, I like the colors, you guys kinda match, and it makes you stand out rather than blending in, but I think you could've come up with something more engaging with you and your specimen.
Judge 2: Boring, very boring, nothing is going on at all. I think you could've done so much more to make it more interesting than just standing there.
Judge 3: I just think trying to keep the phoenix's wings in your picture makes it so wide, leaving lots of negative space which takes away from your actual picture. I love everything else though, maybe if you had a /attention emote, I think it would've been better than just standing there, then that way, you could've demonstrated the whole "decorative guards" for the emperor type deal.
Catherine Divine
Me freaking next to a giant spider, they bite you know and this one is pretty big. Yeah i look sexy when im scared
Judge 1: It's a shame really, you walked into this competition being the strongest, but now I just feel that you're falling behind and fast. The picture is so boring, there's too much in it, and not good stuff either.
Judge 2: I don't like it, this feels so novice to me. I don't think much thought went into this. I don't think you can be in a competition and submit such amateur work. There's a level of performance that I'm expecting out of everyone, and you're not meeting it for me.
Judge 3: There is a huge gap of nothing in your picture. It completely overwhelms you and your animal. The amount of negative space in your picture is so tremendous. If you took off the top half of your picture, it would've made the same statement. There was just no reason to have that much unnecessary space in your picture. Aside from the bad cropping, I think your picture was stiff and boring.
Summer Newmentz
Yawning is contagious. This picture only proves that as Summer comes aross a sleeping tiger and cant help yawning herself.
Judge 1: I think it's cute, it's very adorable how the tiger is positioned, but its not a good shot...but it's certainly not the worst.
Judge 2: Yawning is contagious, and this picture makes me yawn too, it's a little dull. But at least you and your animal work together well.
Judge 3: I love your armor choice for this, the stripes on it is very complemental to the stripes of your animal the color is good, but I do agree that it's a bit boring.
Mortissia Faust
The Lions and Lionesses represent the cut-throat critics and agencies (hence, there is more than one animal). They have just finished up an old trend (represented by the old bone,) consumed in its entirety, and broke down the trend to nothingness. Now with an old trend finished, a new one must arise, and in this case, Mortissia is shown as the new trend. Innocent, fresh, still natural, untainted by the pressures of the industry. In this case, Mortissia is also shown wearing white (bones), foreshadowing the inevitable end that will come to be, once the "animals" are done with her. She is seen in a pose that shows beauty, and her face is slightly lowered to show that she knows she will be used till her own death.
Judge 1: Great concept, it works, but I think it's just too much, there is so much going on in the picture, I don't know where to focus on, but least it's interesting.
Judge 2: This picture is going way too far, the concept is agreeable, but there is too much going on and it makes your picture unappealing. And from the picture, it looks like the next fashion trend to go is you...
Judge 3: lol, I see the Lion King again...anyways, At least your being creative, and that's never a bad thing, just reel it in a little bit next time, assuming there will be a next time.
Burnout Chic
I find that this picture is very moody, and suits well the spider and my elementalists dark (almost witchy) look.
Judge 1: It's an interesting shot, the scene, the animal, everything works together, good job.
Judge 2: Not much can be said about it, I think it's pretty self explanatory.
Judge 3: Very nicely done, it's a good shot, everything goes together and met your mark on trying to convey the mood you wanted.
Xo Katina Xo
I chose the swan because swans to me are very classy and elegant. They carry themselves in an elegant way when they walk. Top Models are supposed to be elegant and glamerous, and I feel the swan is a great example of that.
Judge 1: Pretty! I like it, explanation was good too. Not bad at all.
Judge 2: It's ok, I think if you had a better background, it would've been better, right now, I see "swamp lake", but everything else works for me, the colors, the concept, it was good, I just really wished the background was more elegant.
Judge 3: I love this shot, my only problem is that you're covering your animal too much, but least you can see it's face. Everything else is good, and I like your background, it kinda goes back to the "ugly duckling" story, beautiful things come from ugly things...like a butterfly lol
Here are the scores...
Burnout Chic 10 11 10 = 31
Catherine Divine 02 01 01 = 04
I Only Protect You 08 07 04 = 19
Jaden Stone 07 09 09 = 25
Malefic Mistress 03 05 07 = 15
Mortissia Faust 06 06 05 = 17
Naga Xaviera 04 03 08 = 15
Perynne Walker 01 02 02 = 05
Raselle Deathblade 11 08 06 = 25
Summer Newmentz 05 04 03 = 12
Xo Katina Xo 09 10 11 = 30
Which means Burnout Chic and Xo Katina Xo are up for MOTW, and leaves Catherine Divine and Perynne Walker for elimination.
Naga Xaviera
I aready knew that it was going to be tough trying to get the tiger (Roy) to sit still in a position long enough to get a good shot, so I basically just used a position that I thought would look good even if I didnt have him in the picture with me. Once Roy was in the shot I liked how both him and Naga were looking at the same thing so i cropped the picture to show that better.
Judge 1: I think the Tiger stole the spotlight from you, I'm looking right at the tiger and ignoring your presence completely. I'm looking at the full size and its gorgeous, I really wished that more of you were shown in the cropped.
Judge 2: It's a pretty picture, but nothing interesting is going on. It's quite boring.
Judge 3: I think this picture is great! I love scene, and I think your poses in the picture matches it perfectly. The serene look on your character matches the tiger, the cool environment, everything just works well together. But I do agree that more of you should've been shown, other than that, loved it.
Jaden Stone
This is a picture of Jaden getting into the water with one of the deadliest animals in the sea, the Canthan Tiger Shark. I wanted to Get a Jaws like feeling to the picture, where the shark is closing in behind her. I also wanted a look of shock or fear as if she didnt know what was behind her.
Judge 1: Definitely an original idea. Never crossed my mind that there would be sea creatures, so it was a nice surprise to see something unique like this come out.
Judge 2: I like the idea, but the execution fell a little bit short to me. I've actually done a similar shot like that myself, but what I did was do the dance emote and made it look like I was flipping into the water, so I feel that you could've done something more interesting than that.
Judge 3: I've actually totally read Jaws in this picture even before reading your explanation! The way your character looked like she was creeping in the water and such. I love the scenery, but for once, I think you should've used your nude look instead of clothes if you were going to be in water that is. It would've worked for the picture much more.
I Only Protect You
Because of the good/evil idea, I tried to put that aspect forth as good as possible. I used a monk spell to light my character and to put a peaceful breeze around it. Behind my character is the evil hyena roaring and harrassing my helpless monk, in the dark world of the desolation.
Judge 1: Ohhh another animal I didn't even think about. Hyena, interesting choice. I love the desert nomad look, it works for that area, obviously since that is where the armor is derived. Anyways, I liked it.
Judge 2: My biggest problem is the enchantments you had on, they distract and take away from the picture way too much. I assumed you had them to keep you alive, but seeing how you explained that you had them to show good and evil, I have to disagree. They distract from your picture, and the enchants you use can be used by enemy mobs too, so it doesn't show "good" really in my opinion...I commend you on trying to come up with an interesting concept, but I think you went too far and ended up falling short.
Judge 3: I agree, the enchants really take away from your picture, but other than that, I liked it. It reminds me of the Lion King!!! The area where the Hyenas lived at is reminiscent to the desolation, I like it, your character had nice composure, the hyena looked way to obedient to convey evil in my opinion, but still nice.
Raselle Deathblade
I chose the snow wolf. Simply said, I enjoy the looks of the animal, and as it seems to travel alone, it was a perfect match for my character. And as beautiful as it may seem, it also poses danger to anyone who may disturb its peace.
Judge 1: Great picture, one of my favorites, you and the animal compliment each other, the animal is in action. Both of you are equally in the shot, the ratio is good. Love it.
Judge 2: It's a pretty picture, but I don't like the background, I think you should've chose a darker place to do that, I think if you would've had the picture on rocks/snow, it would've been better. The colors would've went well with the wolf/you. So I think it was a strong concept, but weak execution.
Judge 3: I agree with the background, although it does add a lot of contrast to you and the wolf, I just think the background is so bland for something so interesting.
Malefic Mistress
The white tiger is tough, but Malefic is tougher. In this shot I wanted to show that Malefic was fearless of this deadly animal. Before the tiger even managed to touch Malefic, she turned around to stare him down. Malefic is fearless, even in the face of danger.
Judge 1: The explanation was good, but the picture didn't really appeal to me. eh.
Judge 2: Not amazing, though not horrible...nice concept, kinda like Yin and Yang, black and white, you contrast each other.
Judge 3: I like the body language for both you and the animal, though I think it would've been better if you were in some kind of battle stance, like mentioned before, I feel that this is kind of like a Yin and Yang thing where you're both trying to overcome each other, and I think if you had a battle stance like the tiger, it would've been so much better.
Perynne Walker
This picture is set in Raisu Palace, the home of the phoenix who are raised as decorative guards and pets for the emperor and his favourites. I wanted to portray how photogenic phoenixes are while still showing the close friendship Perynne and her pet Hopscotch share.
Judge 1: It's nice, I like the colors, you guys kinda match, and it makes you stand out rather than blending in, but I think you could've come up with something more engaging with you and your specimen.
Judge 2: Boring, very boring, nothing is going on at all. I think you could've done so much more to make it more interesting than just standing there.
Judge 3: I just think trying to keep the phoenix's wings in your picture makes it so wide, leaving lots of negative space which takes away from your actual picture. I love everything else though, maybe if you had a /attention emote, I think it would've been better than just standing there, then that way, you could've demonstrated the whole "decorative guards" for the emperor type deal.
Catherine Divine
Me freaking next to a giant spider, they bite you know and this one is pretty big. Yeah i look sexy when im scared
Judge 1: It's a shame really, you walked into this competition being the strongest, but now I just feel that you're falling behind and fast. The picture is so boring, there's too much in it, and not good stuff either.
Judge 2: I don't like it, this feels so novice to me. I don't think much thought went into this. I don't think you can be in a competition and submit such amateur work. There's a level of performance that I'm expecting out of everyone, and you're not meeting it for me.
Judge 3: There is a huge gap of nothing in your picture. It completely overwhelms you and your animal. The amount of negative space in your picture is so tremendous. If you took off the top half of your picture, it would've made the same statement. There was just no reason to have that much unnecessary space in your picture. Aside from the bad cropping, I think your picture was stiff and boring.
Summer Newmentz
Yawning is contagious. This picture only proves that as Summer comes aross a sleeping tiger and cant help yawning herself.
Judge 1: I think it's cute, it's very adorable how the tiger is positioned, but its not a good shot...but it's certainly not the worst.
Judge 2: Yawning is contagious, and this picture makes me yawn too, it's a little dull. But at least you and your animal work together well.
Judge 3: I love your armor choice for this, the stripes on it is very complemental to the stripes of your animal the color is good, but I do agree that it's a bit boring.
Mortissia Faust
The Lions and Lionesses represent the cut-throat critics and agencies (hence, there is more than one animal). They have just finished up an old trend (represented by the old bone,) consumed in its entirety, and broke down the trend to nothingness. Now with an old trend finished, a new one must arise, and in this case, Mortissia is shown as the new trend. Innocent, fresh, still natural, untainted by the pressures of the industry. In this case, Mortissia is also shown wearing white (bones), foreshadowing the inevitable end that will come to be, once the "animals" are done with her. She is seen in a pose that shows beauty, and her face is slightly lowered to show that she knows she will be used till her own death.
Judge 1: Great concept, it works, but I think it's just too much, there is so much going on in the picture, I don't know where to focus on, but least it's interesting.
Judge 2: This picture is going way too far, the concept is agreeable, but there is too much going on and it makes your picture unappealing. And from the picture, it looks like the next fashion trend to go is you...
Judge 3: lol, I see the Lion King again...anyways, At least your being creative, and that's never a bad thing, just reel it in a little bit next time, assuming there will be a next time.
Burnout Chic
I find that this picture is very moody, and suits well the spider and my elementalists dark (almost witchy) look.
Judge 1: It's an interesting shot, the scene, the animal, everything works together, good job.
Judge 2: Not much can be said about it, I think it's pretty self explanatory.
Judge 3: Very nicely done, it's a good shot, everything goes together and met your mark on trying to convey the mood you wanted.
Xo Katina Xo
I chose the swan because swans to me are very classy and elegant. They carry themselves in an elegant way when they walk. Top Models are supposed to be elegant and glamerous, and I feel the swan is a great example of that.
Judge 1: Pretty! I like it, explanation was good too. Not bad at all.
Judge 2: It's ok, I think if you had a better background, it would've been better, right now, I see "swamp lake", but everything else works for me, the colors, the concept, it was good, I just really wished the background was more elegant.
Judge 3: I love this shot, my only problem is that you're covering your animal too much, but least you can see it's face. Everything else is good, and I like your background, it kinda goes back to the "ugly duckling" story, beautiful things come from ugly things...like a butterfly lol
Here are the scores...
Burnout Chic 10 11 10 = 31
Catherine Divine 02 01 01 = 04
I Only Protect You 08 07 04 = 19
Jaden Stone 07 09 09 = 25
Malefic Mistress 03 05 07 = 15
Mortissia Faust 06 06 05 = 17
Naga Xaviera 04 03 08 = 15
Perynne Walker 01 02 02 = 05
Raselle Deathblade 11 08 06 = 25
Summer Newmentz 05 04 03 = 12
Xo Katina Xo 09 10 11 = 30
Which means Burnout Chic and Xo Katina Xo are up for MOTW, and leaves Catherine Divine and Perynne Walker for elimination.
Maria The Princess
/highfive Katina
thx for good feedback judges. i eliminated like 1000 pictures before i settled for this one
thx for good feedback judges. i eliminated like 1000 pictures before i settled for this one
broodijzer
well done everybody, glad I'm through
Can't wait till the next round, I'm really enjoying this ^^
Can't wait till the next round, I'm really enjoying this ^^
mrmango
I'm surprised you did THAT awesome of a shot Maria. I'm impressed! =)
G'luck in the next round!
G'luck in the next round!
tomcruisejr
judge #2's comments i like.
dansamy
That's not a swan, Katina. That's a crane. You don't have to be smart if you're pretty, eh?
ecknine
For Shame dansamy , For Shame :O
dronex
zomg im not sending anything anymore i dont like you !
LadyNilene
After much Deliberations...This week's MOTW is...
Congratulations to Xo Katina Xo, you may choose one of the following prizes...
1. An in game prize of 10 Jadeite Shards and 10 Amber Chunks.
Or
2. Complete immunity for the next round of competition, Week 3.
Please get with me on your decision through email/pm/etc to your nearest convenience Congratulations!
Onto the elimination...
Catherine Divine - All of us judges, pegged you to be at least in the top three, but we look at your performance for the first two weeks competition, and none of them have been amazing. You have the strongest application...but with two weeks of mediocre performance, we're not sure if we should keep you in this competition.
Perynne Walker - Your application and your first week were pretty good...but you bombed the second week...
So who gets eliminated? Good application and two weeks of poor performance, or pretty good application with a good first week, but a bad second week?
This was a difficult decision, but Catherine Divine, you are no longer in the running to becoming Tyria's Next Top Model, that means Perynne you are safe to continue on the next round.
And at this time, I have to say...I knew from the start, and I said it before, our twelve contestants will be all happy and loving that they are chosen to be in the competition, but as soon as you get eliminated people will get sour. This is why I made all the judges comments anonymous and thats why they'll continue to be anonymous. There should be no hard feelings between anyone, we are not here to offend you, we are not here to break you down, but we are also not here to hold your hand, we are not here to fuel your ego. You guys were chosen from 70 applications, so you should already be proud of yourselves for making it this far. No matter how the results go from here on, you guys should be proud of yourselves no matter what.
There is no way you can take this competition personal...and I hope our remaining contestants realize that, because this will not get any easier, we are down to our top ten, that ten will become three, and that three will become one.
With that said, Congratulations to everyone who made it pass the second week of competition, I'll send Week 3's assignment out shortly...alright guys, that's all for now!
Hope everyone is having a good time with their families and friends and what not! Happy Holidays!
broodijzer
hey, I'm the only bunhead in the competition now ~.^
LadyNilene
Seasons Greetings!!! Hope everyone is enjoying the holiday weekend, unfortunately for you guys, it's a new week of competition, except for Katina who has won immunity for this round, so while Katina gets this week off, you guys must work hard, cause now, your chances of being eliminated has gotten that much higher!
(I'm pretty sure posting this isn't against the rules, but if it is, I apologize and please remove it at once)
There should be no surprised that this theme is going to be focused on Wintersday, but of course I wouldn't want to make it too easy. So...one of the biggest events every Winter is the Victoria Secret Winter Fashion show, so for this week of competition I'm going to ask that you guys strip down to your undergarments and take a screenshot ad for a Winter Catalog.
And no, you do not need Nightfall or Prophecies to get this done, you can easily go to one of the winter areas in Factions to get it done as well...
(I'm pretty sure posting this isn't against the rules, but if it is, I apologize and please remove it at once)
There should be no surprised that this theme is going to be focused on Wintersday, but of course I wouldn't want to make it too easy. So...one of the biggest events every Winter is the Victoria Secret Winter Fashion show, so for this week of competition I'm going to ask that you guys strip down to your undergarments and take a screenshot ad for a Winter Catalog.
And no, you do not need Nightfall or Prophecies to get this done, you can easily go to one of the winter areas in Factions to get it done as well...
So after picking out your best screenshot, submit it along with the answers to these questions...
1. Where did you take your screenshot?
2. Why did you choose the background you used?
3. Explain your picture.
This Assignment Will Be Due On: Friday December 29, 2006.
In addition to our regular rules, one rule that will implemented this week is that your character is to wear NOTHING and to only have the undergarments. (I realize that Mesmers/Elementalist have special garments that can be used as lingerie hose and what not, but none of that will be allowed, no head gear either, not even holiday ones since some might not have them and it would be unfair.)
Alright guys, have fun and good luck, let me know if you guys have any questions or concerns about this assignment!
Maria The Princess
CONGRADZ kATINA!
wow thats a fun assigment
*so happy i chose my Ele cuz rangers (that was my 2nd option to enroll) have wierd undies*
wow thats a fun assigment
*so happy i chose my Ele cuz rangers (that was my 2nd option to enroll) have wierd undies*
broodijzer
cool assignment
xxSilhouette
Grats Katina!!! =)
Sounds like a fun assignment, now time to go get naked!
Sounds like a fun assignment, now time to go get naked!
broodijzer
Love this assignment. The one with the pet was hard, but I've made some pretty screens already here. I can't choose one to send in though..
ecknine
wierd ... i dont REALLY like any of the girls in the competition ...meh guess thats not my sort of taste
~ecknine
~ecknine
Maria The Princess
this assigment is hard!
well, only cuz i cant get a moment for a screen without some wammo(or other male toon) humping me
i know its not very holiday mood (this is why this is eliminated) but.... Victoria Secret Angel anyone?
well, only cuz i cant get a moment for a screen without some wammo(or other male toon) humping me
i know its not very holiday mood (this is why this is eliminated) but.... Victoria Secret Angel anyone?
Ember010
Ok, I dont know if this is allowed so let me know if it isnt loL! I wanted 2 participate a lot so have sorta been protesting by not posting in this thread lol. But anyway! I've decided u made the right choices and there are some really great screenies! i decided to do the assignment [just for fun mind u] and post the screenie here. Let me know if it needs 2b deleted or anythin =] Gd luck to all the models for this assignment!!
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Originally Posted by Maria The Princess
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this assigment is hard!
well, only cuz i cant get a moment for a screen without some wammo(or other male toon) humping me
Lol! Tell them ur a proffesional =]
well, only cuz i cant get a moment for a screen without some wammo(or other male toon) humping me
Lol! Tell them ur a proffesional =]
Maria The Princess
thats a very nice screen. she looks naughty
Geishe
Im back from vacation! thank god Im safe. Anyway, I had a question for this assignment. Even though this is nude, are we supposed to look like models or is going a more lusty path permitted?
LadyNilene
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Originally Posted by Geishe
Im back from vacation! thank god Im safe. Anyway, I had a question for this assignment. Even though this is nude, are we supposed to look like models or is going a more lusty path permitted?
Well, you want to be lusty but not over exert it...so try to find a medium, think tasteful nudity if that's what you're going for, but remember, this is an ad, not a playboy centerfold.
The Last Anthem
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Originally Posted by Maria The Princess
this assigment is hard!
well, only cuz i cant get a moment for a screen without some wammo(or other male toon) humping me
i know its not very holiday mood (this is why this is eliminated) but.... Victoria Secret Angel anyone?
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o...4011/CC400.jpg LOL that's great
well, only cuz i cant get a moment for a screen without some wammo(or other male toon) humping me
i know its not very holiday mood (this is why this is eliminated) but.... Victoria Secret Angel anyone?
http://i118.photobucket.com/albums/o...4011/CC400.jpg LOL that's great
Jaden Stone
Submitted mine today! and for once I'm feeling confident. I think I've got a pretty nice shot this time. For the mean time to tide you all over, here's one I sent in on my application.
Ember010
ooo thats a really nice pic of jaden! looks like shes been standing there for ages cuz the waters undisturbed lol!
mrmango
Nice pic Jaden. =D
Congrats Katina.
Go go go!
Congrats Katina.
Go go go!
broodijzer
just submitted mine Hope I make it to the next round, I expect lots of pretty pictures.
Hope I make it to the next round, I expect lots of pretty pictures.
Ember010
hehe! pretty little pictures!! =] i cant wait 2c everyones! cmooon lady nilene, you could just make the entry date a few days earlier ;]
Perynne
Phew, managed to avoid elimination... that did kind of scare me. Hopefully my nondescript ranger lingerie won't let me down during the next assignment.
xxSilhouette
Finally got my pic submitted - Very fun assigment!!!! =)
Stalker Haras
Bah, i missed re-entering this....damn...my ranger woulda won.
Ember010
ooo 2days the due date! [lol makes me think of pregnancy] cant wait 2c everyones piccs! christmassy mee ! lol typically i get in2 the christmas spirit 4 days after! ahaha im so messed up =[
LadyNilene
Let's get the ball rolling...Deliberations for Week 3 in random order...
Mortissia Faust
"Since this was an ad for undergarments, I made sure I provided a frontal shot so the lingerie can be clearly seen. I also made sure the model(Mortissia) didn't move too much, so it doesnt pull away the attention from the lingerie. To show the winter and holiday theme, I included the Lollipops (they also contrast with the model and her clothing) in the background."
Judge 1: I think you should've cropped the picture with just you and the lollipops, this shot is an ad and I don't think your presence in the picture was strong enough to market the bra/panties.
Judge 2: I like your body position, but I agree, it's kinda pointless to shoot an ad and show so little of yourself and the product you are trying to sale.
Judge 3: Agreed, the cropping was bad, I'm surprised that you didn't catch that, your explanation clearly states that you knew that this was an ad assignment and you did not want to pull attention away from the garments, but you left the window of view so wide that I'm staring at the beautiful aqua tree and the lavender sky.
Perynne Walker
"Models will do anything to look good, even to the point of braving freezing temperatures in tiny undergarments. I wanted to show some of that resilience by having Perynne pose in a more open position, as if daring the cold to get at her while she's trying to look her best."
Judge 1: I like this shot, you look very commanding, the pose is on point, the background choice was nice and wasn't too much of a distraction.
Judge 2: This is a good shot, the cropping is good, your whole body is shown, and the top/bottom pieces are well shown.
Judge 3: Body position looks excellent, I like the background, it's nice to see that you didn't rely on the special Christmas decorations to make your picture "pop". You owned this picture.
I Only Protect You
"I chose the house as background, because I thought it looks very cosy and winterish. It's all decorated, and I can just imagine all sort of players having a party there inside. I make a kind of invite gesture, everyone is welcome! I think this picture fits in a winter catalog, not for it's sexy attitude but for the vosy family times"
Judge 1: I think this would've been and excellent shot, but I'm so mortified that you covered your bra. This is a catalog advertisement for your bra/panties...and you covered the product. Everything else is fine in my opinion, beautiful background, your presence was strong, but you definitely lost points for covering what was suppose to be advertised.
Judge 2: I like the reasoning of expressing a welcoming feel, but I have to agree with the fact that the objective if the assignment wasn't met.
Judge 3: Clearly, the garments aren't properly shown in the picture, it makes this picture pretty pointless.
Raselle Deathblade
"After having just finished building a snowman, an exhausted Raselle pauses to look back at the camera."
Judge 1: This is a pretty good shot, I think it's very engaging and it's cute. It works for catalog material, which most of the time trying to capture models in everyday situations to attract everyday customers.
Judge 2: I like this shot! This proves that Necromancers can be cute and fun as well!
Judge 3: It's a good shot, but the animations coming from the hands are a bit much, and I don't like the random boat in the background.
Burnout Chic
"i think the pose is sexy yet casual enough to not push it too much on the sexy side. the twist is showing off my Else great figure i as well show the sexy undergarments that match the snow so well."
Judge 1: I remember seeing another shot you did that you discarded from submission, the one with the paragon wings. I think that shot was much more interesting than this one. Of course we can't evaluate you on that, so moving away from that, I think this shot is good, but it's not great, the background is kinda lacking, the zone area is a bit of a distraction.
Judge 2: Yeah, the other picture was great, you look a little stiff in this picture, it's not great, not the kind of work we're use to get from you.
Judge 3: I saw that picture too, it's definitely more interesting than this one, I'm not exactly sure why you discarded that one... This picture isn't bad, the pose is nice, but the background was definitely not noteworthy.
Malefic Mistress
"In this shot I wanted Malefic to look like a true Victorias Secret model to go along with the theme of the assignment. I also wanted to show plenty of Wintersday decorations, but I still wanted Malefic to be in the spotlight. This picture shows some of the best Wintersday decorations for the background, but also shows Malefics excellent modeling abilities."
Judge 1: Stunning shot, the bra and panties are nicely shown, the pose is sensual but not sleezy, I really like it.
Judge 2: Good shot, top and bottom pieces are nicely displayed, nice choice background, and I like the movement in the pose.
Judge 3: This is a very good shot, I like the pose, I like how you managed to get a lot of interesting things your background and managed to shine through it all. Your presence in the shot is striking.
Summer Newmentz
"I'm not really sure how to explain the picture besides what was already said in the first two answers. Though looking for spots to take a winter picture, I figured this area would be untouched due to there being much more used and good looking areas, Camp Rankor for example. Using that, Summer's helper found this spot for her to take some nice pictures at. What was sent in for this submission was one of many that Summer and her help took. "
Judge 1: I like the picture, the pose is every engaging, cropping is a little iffy, I think you tried too hard to get all of the mountain in and not focusing on your character and the undergarments.
Judge 2: Your presence is strong, your character definitely come through in your shot.
Judge 3: Not good, not bad, the picture could've been more exciting, right now, it's kinda on the safe side.
Naga Xaviera
"I took this picture in front of a fire to give a nice red glow to not only the present but Naga as well. I think the red goes helps bring out the lingurie in the picture without distorting it too much. The pose she uses also gives off the unwrapped present feeling as well."
Judge 1: The pose looks great, but I don't like the chose background, it's too "cabaret" for my liking.
Judge 2: You aren't dominant on this shot, I think you paid too much attention on the background trying to crop all of the present in rather than trying to market your top/bottom.
Judge 3: A for effort, but F for execution. The lighting is pretty bad, and your presence in the shot isn't strong enough either for such a vibrant background.
Xo Katina Xo
"I liked this pose and it seemed to go well with the background. Her leg and body positioning to me were great, not too over board but not too simple, as was her face. She still keeps her sexy but classy look."
Judge 1: I like the background, it matches with your undergarments, but the picture wasn't great.
Judge 2: Not good, not bad, again you're not dominating your picture, you're kinda lost in the background.
Judge 3: If you were going to choose a background that has so much energy radiating from it, I feel that you should match it. Your pose is too simple for such an exuberant background.
Jaden Stone
"In many photo shoots models are asked to do a falling or movement shot where they have to pose while in motion. This can create very effective shots you wouldn't be able to capture any other way. I've tried to mimic this in my photo and feel that this shot has come out great! I also wanted to get the full body in the shot to show off the lingerie as this would be for a catalog. I also think that reaching for the winterday star with a candy cane backround really gives a nice holiday feel to the shot. "
Judge 1: This is an interesting shot, it's a little to dark, but I think it works, it's looks very heavenly.
Judge 2: The pose is amazing! The picture is very pretty, I love the color scheme, the background is very ethereal.
Judge 3: Very nice, I love the slinky pose, but I think the background choice is a bit poor, you have to realize that you are modeling for the product in this assignment, and although the execution is flawless, I think it's the background is too dark to show off your clothing.
And here are the scores...
Burnout Chic: 05 06 04 = 15
I Only Protect You: 03 01 01 = 5
Jaden Stone: 08 10 08 = 26
Malefic Mistress: 10 09 10 = 29
Mortissia Faust: 04 03 05 = 12
Naga Xaviera: 01 02 02 = 5
Perynne Walker: 09 07 09 = 25
Raselle Deathblade: 07 08 06 = 21
Summer Newmentz: 06 05 07 = 18
Xo Katina Xo: 02 04 03 = 9
And Katina won immunity, so she cannot be eliminated, and seeing that her scores weren't high enough to win again, her scores are null and void and she is obviously safe for the next round which leaves...
Jaden Stone and Malefic Mistress up for MOTW and I Only Protect You and Naga Xaviera for elimination.
Congratulations to everyone else who is safe for the next round!
Mortissia Faust
"Since this was an ad for undergarments, I made sure I provided a frontal shot so the lingerie can be clearly seen. I also made sure the model(Mortissia) didn't move too much, so it doesnt pull away the attention from the lingerie. To show the winter and holiday theme, I included the Lollipops (they also contrast with the model and her clothing) in the background."
Judge 1: I think you should've cropped the picture with just you and the lollipops, this shot is an ad and I don't think your presence in the picture was strong enough to market the bra/panties.
Judge 2: I like your body position, but I agree, it's kinda pointless to shoot an ad and show so little of yourself and the product you are trying to sale.
Judge 3: Agreed, the cropping was bad, I'm surprised that you didn't catch that, your explanation clearly states that you knew that this was an ad assignment and you did not want to pull attention away from the garments, but you left the window of view so wide that I'm staring at the beautiful aqua tree and the lavender sky.
Perynne Walker
"Models will do anything to look good, even to the point of braving freezing temperatures in tiny undergarments. I wanted to show some of that resilience by having Perynne pose in a more open position, as if daring the cold to get at her while she's trying to look her best."
Judge 1: I like this shot, you look very commanding, the pose is on point, the background choice was nice and wasn't too much of a distraction.
Judge 2: This is a good shot, the cropping is good, your whole body is shown, and the top/bottom pieces are well shown.
Judge 3: Body position looks excellent, I like the background, it's nice to see that you didn't rely on the special Christmas decorations to make your picture "pop". You owned this picture.
I Only Protect You
"I chose the house as background, because I thought it looks very cosy and winterish. It's all decorated, and I can just imagine all sort of players having a party there inside. I make a kind of invite gesture, everyone is welcome! I think this picture fits in a winter catalog, not for it's sexy attitude but for the vosy family times
"Judge 1: I think this would've been and excellent shot, but I'm so mortified that you covered your bra. This is a catalog advertisement for your bra/panties...and you covered the product. Everything else is fine in my opinion, beautiful background, your presence was strong, but you definitely lost points for covering what was suppose to be advertised.
Judge 2: I like the reasoning of expressing a welcoming feel, but I have to agree with the fact that the objective if the assignment wasn't met.
Judge 3: Clearly, the garments aren't properly shown in the picture, it makes this picture pretty pointless.
Raselle Deathblade
"After having just finished building a snowman, an exhausted Raselle pauses to look back at the camera."
Judge 1: This is a pretty good shot, I think it's very engaging and it's cute. It works for catalog material, which most of the time trying to capture models in everyday situations to attract everyday customers.
Judge 2: I like this shot! This proves that Necromancers can be cute and fun as well!
Judge 3: It's a good shot, but the animations coming from the hands are a bit much, and I don't like the random boat in the background.
Burnout Chic
"i think the pose is sexy yet casual enough to not push it too much on the sexy side. the twist is showing off my Else great figure i as well show the sexy undergarments that match the snow so well."
Judge 1: I remember seeing another shot you did that you discarded from submission, the one with the paragon wings. I think that shot was much more interesting than this one. Of course we can't evaluate you on that, so moving away from that, I think this shot is good, but it's not great, the background is kinda lacking, the zone area is a bit of a distraction.
Judge 2: Yeah, the other picture was great, you look a little stiff in this picture, it's not great, not the kind of work we're use to get from you.
Judge 3: I saw that picture too, it's definitely more interesting than this one, I'm not exactly sure why you discarded that one... This picture isn't bad, the pose is nice, but the background was definitely not noteworthy.
Malefic Mistress
"In this shot I wanted Malefic to look like a true Victorias Secret model to go along with the theme of the assignment. I also wanted to show plenty of Wintersday decorations, but I still wanted Malefic to be in the spotlight. This picture shows some of the best Wintersday decorations for the background, but also shows Malefics excellent modeling abilities."
Judge 1: Stunning shot, the bra and panties are nicely shown, the pose is sensual but not sleezy, I really like it.
Judge 2: Good shot, top and bottom pieces are nicely displayed, nice choice background, and I like the movement in the pose.
Judge 3: This is a very good shot, I like the pose, I like how you managed to get a lot of interesting things your background and managed to shine through it all. Your presence in the shot is striking.
Summer Newmentz
"I'm not really sure how to explain the picture besides what was already said in the first two answers. Though looking for spots to take a winter picture, I figured this area would be untouched due to there being much more used and good looking areas, Camp Rankor for example. Using that, Summer's helper found this spot for her to take some nice pictures at. What was sent in for this submission was one of many that Summer and her help took. "
Judge 1: I like the picture, the pose is every engaging, cropping is a little iffy, I think you tried too hard to get all of the mountain in and not focusing on your character and the undergarments.
Judge 2: Your presence is strong, your character definitely come through in your shot.
Judge 3: Not good, not bad, the picture could've been more exciting, right now, it's kinda on the safe side.
Naga Xaviera
"I took this picture in front of a fire to give a nice red glow to not only the present but Naga as well. I think the red goes helps bring out the lingurie in the picture without distorting it too much. The pose she uses also gives off the unwrapped present feeling as well."
Judge 1: The pose looks great, but I don't like the chose background, it's too "cabaret" for my liking.
Judge 2: You aren't dominant on this shot, I think you paid too much attention on the background trying to crop all of the present in rather than trying to market your top/bottom.
Judge 3: A for effort, but F for execution. The lighting is pretty bad, and your presence in the shot isn't strong enough either for such a vibrant background.
Xo Katina Xo
"I liked this pose and it seemed to go well with the background. Her leg and body positioning to me were great, not too over board but not too simple, as was her face. She still keeps her sexy but classy look."
Judge 1: I like the background, it matches with your undergarments, but the picture wasn't great.
Judge 2: Not good, not bad, again you're not dominating your picture, you're kinda lost in the background.
Judge 3: If you were going to choose a background that has so much energy radiating from it, I feel that you should match it. Your pose is too simple for such an exuberant background.
Jaden Stone
"In many photo shoots models are asked to do a falling or movement shot where they have to pose while in motion. This can create very effective shots you wouldn't be able to capture any other way. I've tried to mimic this in my photo and feel that this shot has come out great! I also wanted to get the full body in the shot to show off the lingerie as this would be for a catalog. I also think that reaching for the winterday star with a candy cane backround really gives a nice holiday feel to the shot. "
Judge 1: This is an interesting shot, it's a little to dark, but I think it works, it's looks very heavenly.
Judge 2: The pose is amazing! The picture is very pretty, I love the color scheme, the background is very ethereal.
Judge 3: Very nice, I love the slinky pose, but I think the background choice is a bit poor, you have to realize that you are modeling for the product in this assignment, and although the execution is flawless, I think it's the background is too dark to show off your clothing.
And here are the scores...
Burnout Chic: 05 06 04 = 15
I Only Protect You: 03 01 01 = 5
Jaden Stone: 08 10 08 = 26
Malefic Mistress: 10 09 10 = 29
Mortissia Faust: 04 03 05 = 12
Naga Xaviera: 01 02 02 = 5
Perynne Walker: 09 07 09 = 25
Raselle Deathblade: 07 08 06 = 21
Summer Newmentz: 06 05 07 = 18
Xo Katina Xo: 02 04 03 = 9
And Katina won immunity, so she cannot be eliminated, and seeing that her scores weren't high enough to win again, her scores are null and void and she is obviously safe for the next round which leaves...
Jaden Stone and Malefic Mistress up for MOTW and I Only Protect You and Naga Xaviera for elimination.
Congratulations to everyone else who is safe for the next round!
xxSilhouette
Great job everyone! some nice shots here And I must say I'm very pleased i picked the one i did
And I must say I'm very pleased i picked the one i did
Perynne
Very nice shots! I love the holiday theme most were able to get into their screenshots. Good job everyone, and congratulations to the models up for MOTW.
Jaden Stone, your pose in the shot is just amazing. Must have taken forever to get the right angle and place for it.
Jaden Stone, your pose in the shot is just amazing.
Must have taken forever to get the right angle and place for it.
Stalker Haras
Wow, some of the poses make me think I was actually looking at models, some you can tell they had a hard time.
Congrats to those that did well, you deserved it!
Congrats to those that did well, you deserved it!
Chyra Deathblade
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But, nonetheless, glad I made it to the next round.
broodijzer
ouch >.<
Hope I don't get eliminated >.<
Hope I don't get eliminated >.<
Jaden Stone
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Ember010
Whoa! Im impressed! [again!] lol! congrats assassins for high scores!! =]