OK, working backwards!
@ shady tradesman: very cool! I love how you add in those notes so we can see your reasoning (also loved the part where you have to protect your work from those pesky deers)! I found the way you did your base interesting… I had been wondering if you put metal stakes or something, but those boards make much more sense

BTW, the way you described how you're going to burn it sounds sooo cool! youtube video!!! gogogogogo
@KiyaKoreena: You're costume is amazing so far! I love the level of detail you put in and like everyone else said, that belt is too cool!
@Dutch: Still looking amazing, but I'm still seeing something off with the king's face on the upper left. Maybe it's a bit too saturated or something and that's why I can't really see the different shades of orange I'd expect there? I really like the added guy on the right side of the poster by the way and the second poster just adds in an extra fun/believable effect
@ Lil Thing: Looks good! I like the shading you did to give it added depth
@Death by an Arrow: Grats for being featured about lighting

Those front 2 pumpkins look really good!
@ Charlie: I love the detail you went into with the lighting/shadowing, really gives it a lot of extra depth! I haven't seen the movie where this is from though
@ König Des Todes: Very cool and dark start to a story! Can't wait for the rest of it! Is the village of tengu? Is that why the tengu would be mad if fed to them? Is it that the tengu cared for the villagers? Is it that the tengu just really hates the fact that they're being fed? Can't wait for more!
@Minami, she's ssoooo gorgeous! I love the way you did her armor and headpiece! Even the lipstick color is gorgeous! Only critique I can think of is that the armband looks like a flat piece instead of a bunch of spheres/hemispheres added together. You can really see it on the bottom leftmost one where it looks much like you would expect if you cut a curve in a thick paper and then wrapped it so you'd see the thickness of the paper instead of as if you stuck a ball at the end of the paper and then wrapped it, where you'd see a ball at the edge (does that even make sense?!?). ANyway, that's just a minor critique, because she really does look gorgeous!
@obastable: I'm still looking forward to reading your story

maybe you can submit part of it to the contest? like the parts you really, really enjoyed? Anyway, I liked the 1st version with a 'generals life,' i think using general gives it a more serious start contrasting with the lightheartedness of a jesters book where as the 2nd version is more of just a straight lighthearted start.
@ arvida: great start (loving color purple)! i think you might have changed the angle on your rider from the 1st sketch though, because now he looks like he might fall off! Maybe have him angled a bit back or put a bend to his knee to show he knows he's in danger of falling?
<Phew> I think I've got up to everyone. Sorry if I missed anyone!