2011 Halloween Workshop!
UnOrthOdOx
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Originally Posted by bonjela

Like the green one posted earlier, it's inspiration has some roots based in the Dark Crystal as well. This one, the Garthim.
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Quote: The legs: you caught me! I am really bad at drawing legs and feet and kinda knew that the perspective was wrong. In fact i think both legs are not in the right perspective. To be honest I was hoping that it wasn't that noticeable but I guess I was wrong

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[*spoil]harry potter dies[*/spoil] without the *s.
The middle spike at the bottom: It is actually supposed to be attached at point 1. This is an area i haven't really adressed at all, so i hope it will be clear once i have.
Ah, ok. I think the problem is that it's currently paler than both of the chair "legs", making it look like it's further away from the viewer than the legs are. The shape of the chair also leaves a large chunk of negative space in the bottom left corner, which my brain expects to be filled with more chair legs, so the spike feels like it needs to be further back.
Sura
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Originally Posted by bonjela
![]() @Sura: Glad to help! By the way, I love the last two examples of your other works; how did you accomplish that textured look?
Oh thanks a lot Bonjela
![]() And yes my legs still need a lot of adjusting (none of those examples show legs for a reason, i really suck at them), making the foot more relaxed is a good point, i don't want it to look strained. Death By An Arrow
I now look so much more forward to your piece Sura, having seen those examples of previous works
![]() If you arent including a lightsource, then I still suggest the downlighting. Its much more sinister and halloween-y. It may be out of your comfort zone, but i personally think it will look more impressive and fit the theme much better. Plus, if you screw up along the way, we can help steer you back in the right direction ![]() Anywho: update on my stuff. Still dont have an idea, but I bought some acrylic paint today and tested them on the board. The colour is still quite vibrant on the board, so it should work. But I'm not sure if I would prefer working digitally or not, as painting with the acrylics is a little uncomfortable. I could use the digital practice, but ive still got all these board to use up :/ It will all come down to the idea, I think. Sura
@Death By An Arrow
I will go for the light from the bottom, at least i will try ![]() For posting on the GW forums i created an wordpress account: http://surassketchblog.wordpress.com/ . There is all my GW related work, including WIPs. About your project: i did see your post about the cardboards and thought that it was a great idea. But i have no good idea what you could draw on it, so i didn't comment on it. The only idea i came up with was to use them to imitate a stained glass window (i am not sure if that is the right word...) and paint an Mad King mural on it, like the murals for the various GW gods. Death By An Arrow ![]() ![]() The idea of the stained glass mural could be very interesting. I'll work on some thumbnail sketches and such for it, and if it doesnt turn out I may get some base work for another idea ![]() Sidenote: Verene, was it you who pumped out that stained glass piece for last years wintersday contest and managed to make honourable mentions/wins? Verene
It's funny that you brought up the stained-glass idea, Sura; that's what I did last year for Wintersday and I was considering continuing that theme for the Halloween contest this year XD
Originally Posted by Death By An Arrow
![]() DBAA, I think the idea of doing something with the cardboard inserts, actually! I'd probably recommend seeing how they hold up to having primer applied to them so you have a base white surface to work on, otherwise you have to adjust everything to the fact that you're working on brown. I think it'd be neat to have each piece be part of one painting (like a grid), and then connect/hang them all together. Quote: ![]() Sidenote: Verene, was it you who pumped out that stained glass piece for last years wintersday contest and managed to make honourable mentions/wins?
Hah, I just mentioned that. Yep, that was my piece. I did it digitally in Photoshop, though; part illustration and part photomanipulation.
Death By An Arrow
Primer... yes... [PURREYE-MOORE]. Oh yeah... I know.. what.. that...
>___> <___< do what now? Verene
XD
Primer is a special type of paint that you put on the surface and let dry before you start painting. It gives you a uniform surface to work on, and allows the paint itself to adhere better to it. It also helps waterproof the surface you're working on. bonjela
Primer? It's a film about time-travel.
*Runs off whooping and clutching her digital tablet* Death By An Arrow
Welp, looks like i'll be making another trip to the art store... unless we already have primer. But i shall look into it!
![]() obastable
Name: obastable
Art Form: Literature, possibly with stick figure pictures unless I can arrange a photo shoot and do some fancy manipulations (I cannae draw). Idea: Thoughts that go through the Mad Kings mind ... maybe in a comic panel with stick figures. ! Progress Gallery: none yet Real Life Prizes: [x] Official Contest: [x] Workshop Awards: [x] Unlike last year, where I entered & wrote a line or three then got distracted by shiny things, this time I actually have a pretty fluid notion of how to carry out my unfinished idea. Now if only I could remember how to use the spoiler button thingie .... Frozen_Chips
Wow… can’t believe I only just noticed this. Looks like there’s some serious competition already, but count me in:
Name: Frozen_Chips Art Form: Literature Idea: ‘Revenge of the Dead Bookah’ – a GW2 legacy story. Progress Gallery: TBA. I’ll be posting it up a couple of scenes at a time to get feedback, and I’ll also do one big edit at the end for the finished product. Real Life Prizes: [X] (Assuming delivery takes place outside of USA) Official Contest: [_] Workshop Awards: [X] As the name suggests, there’ll hopefully be a little humour as well as Halloween thrills, but there is an underlying idea at work too. I was thinking of how a GW hero’s legacy could be passed on to non-human races in GW2, and one possibility (among others) could be aspiring adventurers uncovering the hero’s tomb / crypt some 200 years after his death, and finding some inspiration there. I never got around to writing anything about it, but with Halloween coming up and fabulous prizes to be won, now seems the perfect time to get started. Tzu
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Thoughts that go through the Mad King's mind, eh? This should be fun.

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Originally Posted by Frozen_Chips
Idea: ‘Revenge of the Dead Bookah’ – a GW2 legacy story.
Haha, I'm looking forward to it already.
![]() obastable
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![]() Thoughts that go through the Mad King's mind, eh? This should be fun. ![]() |
Well, this is what I have for the rant/ramblings ... I think it needs some tweaking here and there, so lets see if I can get some input.
A Generals life is overlooked
I live a Jester's life from a Joker's book
With golden wells and pretty quills <- "golden wells" is in reference to the accompanying image - it WILL make sense eventually
Ink splattered flesh and thoughtless kills
I hit the bar and then I hit the floor
After a drink or two or three or four
Riding a dream and falling from sleep
And these pieces of you are the pieces I keep <- my favourite line
They decorate my home and adorn my walls
When I'm asleep I wander those halls
These random thoughts I'm not thinking
Yet I think, "I'm still sinking ..."
Escape to sea and swim to the sun
Feel the burn, it could be fun
The blackest Charr I understand
Dripping slowly from my hand <- the beginning is awkward
It lies in the corner on the ground
Blood makes such a pretty sound
Emotions surge yet I don't show it <- i don't like the end of this one
Yes I'm insane but at least I know it
Joraala
Looks like I'm late to the party! Here is my submission for now.
Name: Joraala
Art Form: Music
Idea: Create then record my own GW1 (2?) Halloween themed song.
Progress Gallery: (Empty for now)
Real Life Prizes: [X]
Official Contest: [X]
Workshop Awards: [X]
Name: Joraala
Art Form: Music
Idea: Create then record my own GW1 (2?) Halloween themed song.
Progress Gallery: (Empty for now)
Real Life Prizes: [X]
Official Contest: [X]
Workshop Awards: [X]
bonjela
Hi there to all the newcomers. 
An update on my piece: I've barely made any progress. -_- Partly due to procrastination, partly due to uni starting up earlier than I was expecting, and partly due to my incompetency at backgrounds. I won't bother to post a WIP, since it looks much the same as the previous one right now, albeit more polished. Still very dark and very blue. I want to put more variety and brightness into the base colours, but I'm not sure how to accomplish that in a night scene without making it look like it's not night anymore.
@obastable: Interesting concept! However, I'm afraid I don't know anything about poetry, so my critique will be uninformed. (I'm also super tired right now, so apologies if I don't make much sense.)
I found the story confusing. I assume the it's meant to be like that, since it's a) the stream-of-consciousness of the Mad King, and b) currently lacks the illustrations which will give it context, but I think that it could be improved by adding a more logical structure to the point he's trying to make.
I also think it needs more punctuation. As it is, it's sort of bland and lacking in personality. For example, here are some variations on the final line; you can see how each one portays a different mood just from the punctuation:Yes... I'm insane... But at least I know it... Yes I'm insane! But at least I know it! Yes; I'm insane. But at least I know it.
Finally: there's an apostrophe in "General's".

An update on my piece: I've barely made any progress. -_- Partly due to procrastination, partly due to uni starting up earlier than I was expecting, and partly due to my incompetency at backgrounds. I won't bother to post a WIP, since it looks much the same as the previous one right now, albeit more polished. Still very dark and very blue. I want to put more variety and brightness into the base colours, but I'm not sure how to accomplish that in a night scene without making it look like it's not night anymore.
@obastable: Interesting concept! However, I'm afraid I don't know anything about poetry, so my critique will be uninformed. (I'm also super tired right now, so apologies if I don't make much sense.)
I found the story confusing. I assume the it's meant to be like that, since it's a) the stream-of-consciousness of the Mad King, and b) currently lacks the illustrations which will give it context, but I think that it could be improved by adding a more logical structure to the point he's trying to make.
I also think it needs more punctuation. As it is, it's sort of bland and lacking in personality. For example, here are some variations on the final line; you can see how each one portays a different mood just from the punctuation:Yes... I'm insane... But at least I know it... Yes I'm insane! But at least I know it! Yes; I'm insane. But at least I know it.
Finally: there's an apostrophe in "General's".

obastable
@bonjela Hey, thanks for the input! I know I haven't really used much punctuation in it, and I really need to clean that up to separate and give it more structure. I'm experimenting with different ways of doing just that, and I appreciate the feedback very much. Obviously I have some work to do. The written word is supposed to inspire the imagination to add its own pictures, and if you can't visualize something when you read the lines then I have, thus far, failed in creating something good.
Also, RE your piece, if you introduce a light source somewhere (either IN the picture or casting from outside of our field of vision) you create opportunity to highlight more vibrant pieces of colour. It could be a fire, a lantern, a torch, a glowing crystal, or perhaps the moon? Just an idea!
Also, RE your piece, if you introduce a light source somewhere (either IN the picture or casting from outside of our field of vision) you create opportunity to highlight more vibrant pieces of colour. It could be a fire, a lantern, a torch, a glowing crystal, or perhaps the moon? Just an idea!
Sura
@verene: i honestly hadn't seen your stained-glass entry! Checked it now, looks really cool
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@bonjela
do you know the FZDSchool channel (Link) on youtube? Those are by far the best and most useful digital painting tutorial videos i found (next to idrawgirls.com, which you all probably know). Especially the first few episodes (really old, you have to click load more) cover scene and lighting setup very nicely, they might be helpful to you.
Update for my piece: i spent some time adjusting the various perspective and anatomy problems, i think it's at least better :s. I added a first minion as well, but using a own design, not an GW minion (which would be too large). I will probably add more, maybe putting one on the awfulness that is the lower leg (in the spirit of the "How to draw anythng in 1 step" tutorial: Link). I started rendering a bit and tried out some main color options.
off-topic: i entered an Asura Fanart contest and placed among the finalists. Check it out, if you like my piece (Asura Lab by Azzazel) please vote for me! I would be very happy
! Contest-Link

@bonjela
do you know the FZDSchool channel (Link) on youtube? Those are by far the best and most useful digital painting tutorial videos i found (next to idrawgirls.com, which you all probably know). Especially the first few episodes (really old, you have to click load more) cover scene and lighting setup very nicely, they might be helpful to you.
Update for my piece: i spent some time adjusting the various perspective and anatomy problems, i think it's at least better :s. I added a first minion as well, but using a own design, not an GW minion (which would be too large). I will probably add more, maybe putting one on the awfulness that is the lower leg (in the spirit of the "How to draw anythng in 1 step" tutorial: Link). I started rendering a bit and tried out some main color options.
off-topic: i entered an Asura Fanart contest and placed among the finalists. Check it out, if you like my piece (Asura Lab by Azzazel) please vote for me! I would be very happy

GeminiJuSa
I just wan to thank you guys for the tips you gave me about how you find inspiration.
And it's so much fun to see you whom have already started your projects. ^^ I'm not much for critiquing stories though, so pardon me on that I haven't got anything to say to you more than; keep it up, you're doing great! And it's fun to see the writers are many this year.
I'm still thinking about what to make. The only idea poppin' into my head is neither original nor very funny. And for personal development it only has composition and colour to offer me practice in. If nothing else springs to mind I suppose I'll start on it. In the mean time I'll do some personal "farming" for items to trade for the festive ones hurr durr. At least my paragon and his pet flamingo are both level 20 and he's got a nice white armor.
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Sura: I love you for linking that FZD youtube channel! Dang, I'll never get to sleep now!
And it's so much fun to see you whom have already started your projects. ^^ I'm not much for critiquing stories though, so pardon me on that I haven't got anything to say to you more than; keep it up, you're doing great! And it's fun to see the writers are many this year.
I'm still thinking about what to make. The only idea poppin' into my head is neither original nor very funny. And for personal development it only has composition and colour to offer me practice in. If nothing else springs to mind I suppose I'll start on it. In the mean time I'll do some personal "farming" for items to trade for the festive ones hurr durr. At least my paragon and his pet flamingo are both level 20 and he's got a nice white armor.
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Sura: I love you for linking that FZD youtube channel! Dang, I'll never get to sleep now!
Death By An Arrow
@Sura I like the one with the purple lighting, because it reminds me of eerie purple halloween flames (think Chandelure from pokemon Black/White). I also like the orange, but its just a little strong. :S Call me wierd.
Also, thats the greatest 1-step painting aide ever! I personally prefer 1-2-Dragon.
@Konig Lots of those end with -ah, -i/on, and -us, and a few were _ah_ah or _vowel_vowel_vowel-n in form.
Sahlah, Kahnah, Tojin, Kogutin, Tahnus could potentially work :S
Also, thats the greatest 1-step painting aide ever! I personally prefer 1-2-Dragon.
@Konig Lots of those end with -ah, -i/on, and -us, and a few were _ah_ah or _vowel_vowel_vowel-n in form.
Sahlah, Kahnah, Tojin, Kogutin, Tahnus could potentially work :S
Morag D
jesus this thread moves too fast for me! o.O so much stuff in so little time!
It's always great to see those workshops lure new talent out from under their rocks
sorry, I haven't really got the time to read the literature drafts at the moment, but it's good to see that they get a good amount of attention too!
Sura, I LOVE that :3 I love your necro, and I love that chair!! personally I'm a fan of the B&W version, I would keep it quite neutral and only use some coloured light (sparingly) for highlights. I'm also quite intrigued to see your minion design
welcome all new people [Hi connor
] - keep up the good work!
It's always great to see those workshops lure new talent out from under their rocks

sorry, I haven't really got the time to read the literature drafts at the moment, but it's good to see that they get a good amount of attention too!

Sura, I LOVE that :3 I love your necro, and I love that chair!! personally I'm a fan of the B&W version, I would keep it quite neutral and only use some coloured light (sparingly) for highlights. I'm also quite intrigued to see your minion design

welcome all new people [Hi connor

Tommy's
Ninja's in and out again!
Name: Tommy
Art Form: Digital Painting / Illustration
Idea: Mad King Thorn grabbing a womans throat from behind.
Progress Gallery: http://s741.photobucket.com/albums/x...Contest%20GWG/ (My progress from last year is still in there too, ignore that
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Real Life Prizes: [_] Only if there gets an artbook involved
Official Contest: [_] Haven't decided on this yet.
Workshop Awards: [◊]
Current first progress.
First sketched, then started in black and white, then color overlay, forgot to save separate times. Sorry for that.
@ Sura: Thats looks really good, very promising!
Name: Tommy
Art Form: Digital Painting / Illustration
Idea: Mad King Thorn grabbing a womans throat from behind.
Progress Gallery: http://s741.photobucket.com/albums/x...Contest%20GWG/ (My progress from last year is still in there too, ignore that

Real Life Prizes: [_] Only if there gets an artbook involved

Official Contest: [_] Haven't decided on this yet.
Workshop Awards: [◊]
Current first progress.
First sketched, then started in black and white, then color overlay, forgot to save separate times. Sorry for that.
@ Sura: Thats looks really good, very promising!
Konig Des Todes
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Originally Posted by Aeronwen

Act I: Repeating the Past
“And when that end comes, the Holders of Judgment and Secrets will fall, the King of Battle shall denounce himself, and the King of Corpses shall wander off ignoring his new master’s orders. Only when the only wounds that he can suffer heal will he respond again.
Solitude will follow the King of Corpses. Years will pass by with him ignoring the word of his new master, and his life will be without devastation for a time. Time of calamity will come, for the Herald of Chaos cannot escape his nature. These calamities will be separated by peace, and some will be smaller and others greater. It will be when the Pretender King arrives that the King of Corpses’ first peace shall end and he shall once more be thrown into chaos.”
– Excerpt from the Tome of Time
Chapter 1
The streets bustled like a swarm of scarabs. The many high granite walls of Fahranur surrounded everything in the city, and at times even prevented the wind from entering. The only wind that entered the city came from the west, which was opened for the cliff’s edge. The city was built like a maze to ward off invaders in the early days of the kingdom. But there never were such invaders. Now, the winding and encircling passageways acted as ways to confuse travelers and give guides a large profit.
In the sunny day, there was only one cloaked individual in the city’s central plaza and bazaar. He stared up at the sky, the sun blocked by walls laced with vertical stripes and sparse reversed pyramid designs. The dirt was hardened by the heat of the sun, which also caused a slight rancid smell on occasion. The man’s hood fell off as he looked up, revealing his crimson hair and Orrian features.
The man sighed as he looked around. Those who were staring at him turned away. There were few Orrians in Istan, and all were viewed as nobles. Those who saw him would likely try to haggle him into buying unnecessary things.
He needed to leave.
“An Orrian traveler with blood-red hair? That’s pretty uncommon.” A quaking voice behind the traveler said. Turning around, he saw a small boy, perhaps around eleven or twelve, in rags with a huge childish grin on his face. “Can you really be him?”
“Don’t know what you’re talking about, kid.” The man said, walking away.
“You’re him right? Right?”
The man ignored the boy, who in turn simply repeated his question.
“I’m no one.”
“No one is no one because everyone is someone.” The boy said cheerfully. “I’m someone too!”
“Leave.”
“Answer my question please. You’re him aren’t you?”
“I am a guy, so I am a ‘him,’ but I don’t see how that is of any importance.” The two have passed several bazaars selling things from fish and grain to pieces of cheap jewelry and clothing; faces turned toward and away almost instantly as the two passed by. Neither were loud.
“No no, I didn’t mean that.”
The man whipped around, his cloak spitting in the air. “Look kid, I don’t have time for your childish games. So leave me be. I’d rather not kill a kid, but I will if it’ll shut you up.”
“You also have a temper. You must be him.” The boy said, keeping his wide grin.
“You have a death wish, don’t you.”
“Almost. I just want to be like you, Konig. You are Konig, right?”
The man stared in silence at the kid, and the kid just continued grinning. A minute had passed before the man turned around and walked away again. “Don’t mention my name again.”
“I knew it!” The kid shouted excitedly as ran to catch up. “So will you teach me? Can you make me like you?”
“No.” Konig snapped.
Konig began walking at a faster pace, hoping to leave the kid behind, but the boy managed to keep up while constantly asking questions. Without realizing, Konig had been going in circles in the halls surrounding the central plaza. Nearly an hour had passed without change.
The boy, no longer grinning, began to pout. “Why are you so stubborn?” When Konig didn’t answer, the boy ran up and kicked him in the back of the knee, knocking Konig down.
“Little brat…” Konig grumbled.
“There you are!” A woman’s shout sounded through the area. Donned in white armor with a golden circle shaped like a shining sun on the chest, a member of the Sunspear Guard, protectors of the continent, the woman strode up and grabbed the boy by the ear. “How many times do I have to go out looking for you? I’m taking you home immediately! And you, I’m sorry for any trouble this boy has caused you.”
Konig said nothing as he stood up and brushed the dirt off of his cloak. In doing so his hood once more fell off.
“You’re Orrian? My apologies, you must be one of the visiting nobles that the king has sent out for. I will gladly escor-“
“I’m not a noble. I’m merely a traveler, nothing more.”
“You are too something more!” The boy shouted, grinning once more. “You’re Ko-“
Konig quickly covered the boy’s mouth. “I would prefer if you didn’t announce my name to the world, kid.”
The woman pulled Konig away from the boy, her face now glaring with fury. “And why would that be? Do you have a bounty on your head?”
Konig stared at the woman, shocked by the sudden change in her personality. “No, I’m not that foolish.”
“Right, well if that’s the case, then I guess you won’t mind coming to my office to double check, would you? Or would you rather be dragged there for harming King Onrah’s son?”
“It’s okay, he’s not a criminal. He’s just famous.” The boy smiled. “And what he did was my fault anyways.”
“I don’t trust anyone who refuses to give their name to me.” The woman said before straightening up. “I’m First Spear Janah, Fahranur’s my territory. And I’ll be having my eye on you… the other on this kid.” She turned around and began to drag the boy as he protested.
Konig remained still, staring at the two. Minutes had passed after they were out of sight when he finally moved, bursting into laughter. Those nearby turned curiously at him.
“Reminds me of when I was young.” He said, remembering the time he’d sneak out of his father’s estate just to be dragged back by the head guard, Afzal.
Chapter 2
Konig deeply breathed in the humid air around him, doing what he could to clear his thoughts after his annoyance with the kid. He had a purpose in this city, a reason why he came, and he could not be distracted.
In order to prevent disasters like what happened during the War of the Gods, Konig decided to hunt down those who would abuse magic. That day, when he fought for and against gods, he saw the destructive powers of magic – power which he wished he had. He witnessed the ability to reshape the landscape.
He came to Fahranur out of rumors claiming mystical phenomena happening – though the rumors never said what these events were. Konig was rather surprised the rumors were true; he felt the magic in the air. A strong and ancient magic that was from the time of the gods that ended over two hundred years ago.
As he stood there silently, traders and merchants came up to him offering various unnecessary goods – various forms of jewelry were the most common. He simply ignored them all, and they left him grumbling shortly after arriving.
With his mind clear, Konig snapped out of his little meditation. Immediately after checking if anyone was around, and finding that he was being left alone, Konig performed a simple scanning spell, searching for concentrations of magic. When the spell found a strong abundance of magic, it was supposed to flare into an arrow pointing its direction.
Nothing happened.
Furrowing his brow in confusion, finding it odd that no powerful magic was detected despite being able to feel its presence, he walked around the labyrinthine city at random. He passed markets and tents, where those who didn’t sell items worked, and oddly considering the amount of people, very few homes. The homes he did pass were often simple shacks of the poor, living in the narrower ally-like passages. No one had well-structured buildings here due to the laws of the city, allowing business only to those who have permits which only lasted between a week and a month.
Every now and then Konig activated the scanning spell again, constantly getting no reaction. He looked up to the sky in frustration, attempting to clear his thoughts once more, trying to find out why there were no concentrations of magic around him. In the sky, he saw the looming towers of the royal palace that lied in the southern portion of the city. They were the only structures capable of being seen over the tall walls that encased him and everyone else in the city.
With a shrug, Konig decided to head there next, still activating the scanning spell every now and then just to be sure he didn’t miss anywhere. Despite it being not that far away, a hundred feet at most, walking to the palace still took over an hour due to the winding passages. Until the last century, the palace was in the deepest part of the city – since then, they removed part of the city’s walls and gave direct access to the outside of the city, which led straight into a couple canyons and eventually a bog, effectively replacing artificial mazes with natural ones. The only purpose of this was to create a palace garden.
Just outside the palace grounds, and out of sight from the dozens of Sunspear Guards that kept the palace safe, Konig once more activated the scanning spell. A glow appeared, but held no form. Grumbling at the spell’s ineffectiveness, and deciding on researching on a way to improve it, Konig realized what was happening.
The source of magic was somehow being blocked. He knew that Fahranur couldn’t have been built on a magical hotspot – none existed that the six gods didn’t know of, and he was sure that they wouldn’t have let their precious humans build a city on top of one, in case someone used it for harm. Someone, or something, must have brought magic into the city, it was the only answer.
And to find out, there was only one means. He’d have to get into the royal palace, where the magic’s source appears to be.
Chapter 1
The streets bustled like a swarm of scarabs. The many high granite walls of Fahranur surrounded everything in the city, and at times even prevented the wind from entering. The only wind that entered the city came from the west, which was opened for the cliff’s edge. The city was built like a maze to ward off invaders in the early days of the kingdom. But there never were such invaders. Now, the winding and encircling passageways acted as ways to confuse travelers and give guides a large profit.
In the sunny day, there was only one cloaked individual in the city’s central plaza and bazaar. He stared up at the sky, the sun blocked by walls laced with vertical stripes and sparse reversed pyramid designs. The dirt was hardened by the heat of the sun, which also caused a slight rancid smell on occasion. The man’s hood fell off as he looked up, revealing his crimson hair and Orrian features.
The man sighed as he looked around. Those who were staring at him turned away. There were few Orrians in Istan, and all were viewed as nobles. Those who saw him would likely try to haggle him into buying unnecessary things.
He needed to leave.
“An Orrian traveler with blood-red hair? That’s pretty uncommon.” A quaking voice behind the traveler said. Turning around, he saw a small boy, perhaps around eleven or twelve, in rags with a huge childish grin on his face. “Can you really be him?”
“Don’t know what you’re talking about, kid.” The man said, walking away.
“You’re him right? Right?”
The man ignored the boy, who in turn simply repeated his question.
“I’m no one.”
“No one is no one because everyone is someone.” The boy said cheerfully. “I’m someone too!”
“Leave.”
“Answer my question please. You’re him aren’t you?”
“I am a guy, so I am a ‘him,’ but I don’t see how that is of any importance.” The two have passed several bazaars selling things from fish and grain to pieces of cheap jewelry and clothing; faces turned toward and away almost instantly as the two passed by. Neither were loud.
“No no, I didn’t mean that.”
The man whipped around, his cloak spitting in the air. “Look kid, I don’t have time for your childish games. So leave me be. I’d rather not kill a kid, but I will if it’ll shut you up.”
“You also have a temper. You must be him.” The boy said, keeping his wide grin.
“You have a death wish, don’t you.”
“Almost. I just want to be like you, Konig. You are Konig, right?”
The man stared in silence at the kid, and the kid just continued grinning. A minute had passed before the man turned around and walked away again. “Don’t mention my name again.”
“I knew it!” The kid shouted excitedly as ran to catch up. “So will you teach me? Can you make me like you?”
“No.” Konig snapped.
Konig began walking at a faster pace, hoping to leave the kid behind, but the boy managed to keep up while constantly asking questions. Without realizing, Konig had been going in circles in the halls surrounding the central plaza. Nearly an hour had passed without change.
The boy, no longer grinning, began to pout. “Why are you so stubborn?” When Konig didn’t answer, the boy ran up and kicked him in the back of the knee, knocking Konig down.
“Little brat…” Konig grumbled.
“There you are!” A woman’s shout sounded through the area. Donned in white armor with a golden circle shaped like a shining sun on the chest, a member of the Sunspear Guard, protectors of the continent, the woman strode up and grabbed the boy by the ear. “How many times do I have to go out looking for you? I’m taking you home immediately! And you, I’m sorry for any trouble this boy has caused you.”
Konig said nothing as he stood up and brushed the dirt off of his cloak. In doing so his hood once more fell off.
“You’re Orrian? My apologies, you must be one of the visiting nobles that the king has sent out for. I will gladly escor-“
“I’m not a noble. I’m merely a traveler, nothing more.”
“You are too something more!” The boy shouted, grinning once more. “You’re Ko-“
Konig quickly covered the boy’s mouth. “I would prefer if you didn’t announce my name to the world, kid.”
The woman pulled Konig away from the boy, her face now glaring with fury. “And why would that be? Do you have a bounty on your head?”
Konig stared at the woman, shocked by the sudden change in her personality. “No, I’m not that foolish.”
“Right, well if that’s the case, then I guess you won’t mind coming to my office to double check, would you? Or would you rather be dragged there for harming King Onrah’s son?”
“It’s okay, he’s not a criminal. He’s just famous.” The boy smiled. “And what he did was my fault anyways.”
“I don’t trust anyone who refuses to give their name to me.” The woman said before straightening up. “I’m First Spear Janah, Fahranur’s my territory. And I’ll be having my eye on you… the other on this kid.” She turned around and began to drag the boy as he protested.
Konig remained still, staring at the two. Minutes had passed after they were out of sight when he finally moved, bursting into laughter. Those nearby turned curiously at him.
“Reminds me of when I was young.” He said, remembering the time he’d sneak out of his father’s estate just to be dragged back by the head guard, Afzal.
Chapter 2
Konig deeply breathed in the humid air around him, doing what he could to clear his thoughts after his annoyance with the kid. He had a purpose in this city, a reason why he came, and he could not be distracted.
In order to prevent disasters like what happened during the War of the Gods, Konig decided to hunt down those who would abuse magic. That day, when he fought for and against gods, he saw the destructive powers of magic – power which he wished he had. He witnessed the ability to reshape the landscape.
He came to Fahranur out of rumors claiming mystical phenomena happening – though the rumors never said what these events were. Konig was rather surprised the rumors were true; he felt the magic in the air. A strong and ancient magic that was from the time of the gods that ended over two hundred years ago.
As he stood there silently, traders and merchants came up to him offering various unnecessary goods – various forms of jewelry were the most common. He simply ignored them all, and they left him grumbling shortly after arriving.
With his mind clear, Konig snapped out of his little meditation. Immediately after checking if anyone was around, and finding that he was being left alone, Konig performed a simple scanning spell, searching for concentrations of magic. When the spell found a strong abundance of magic, it was supposed to flare into an arrow pointing its direction.
Nothing happened.
Furrowing his brow in confusion, finding it odd that no powerful magic was detected despite being able to feel its presence, he walked around the labyrinthine city at random. He passed markets and tents, where those who didn’t sell items worked, and oddly considering the amount of people, very few homes. The homes he did pass were often simple shacks of the poor, living in the narrower ally-like passages. No one had well-structured buildings here due to the laws of the city, allowing business only to those who have permits which only lasted between a week and a month.
Every now and then Konig activated the scanning spell again, constantly getting no reaction. He looked up to the sky in frustration, attempting to clear his thoughts once more, trying to find out why there were no concentrations of magic around him. In the sky, he saw the looming towers of the royal palace that lied in the southern portion of the city. They were the only structures capable of being seen over the tall walls that encased him and everyone else in the city.
With a shrug, Konig decided to head there next, still activating the scanning spell every now and then just to be sure he didn’t miss anywhere. Despite it being not that far away, a hundred feet at most, walking to the palace still took over an hour due to the winding passages. Until the last century, the palace was in the deepest part of the city – since then, they removed part of the city’s walls and gave direct access to the outside of the city, which led straight into a couple canyons and eventually a bog, effectively replacing artificial mazes with natural ones. The only purpose of this was to create a palace garden.
Just outside the palace grounds, and out of sight from the dozens of Sunspear Guards that kept the palace safe, Konig once more activated the scanning spell. A glow appeared, but held no form. Grumbling at the spell’s ineffectiveness, and deciding on researching on a way to improve it, Konig realized what was happening.
The source of magic was somehow being blocked. He knew that Fahranur couldn’t have been built on a magical hotspot – none existed that the six gods didn’t know of, and he was sure that they wouldn’t have let their precious humans build a city on top of one, in case someone used it for harm. Someone, or something, must have brought magic into the city, it was the only answer.
And to find out, there was only one means. He’d have to get into the royal palace, where the magic’s source appears to be.
****Firstwatch Janah watched as King Onrah scolded his son Cianius. He was a man that cared deeply for his family, and one that Janah admired as a daughter would her father. He was the reason she worked so hard to become Firstwatch of Fahranur, and she would serve his family in any way she could. To her, that’s what it meant to be of the Sunspear Guard.
“Cianius Joko, do not talk back to me! You know that it is not safe to go out nowadays!” Although Onrah had a furious look on his face, he scolded his son not out of annoyance, as he knew how Cianius felt, but out of worry. Lately there have been unusual deaths in the city, and he didn’t want to risk his youngest son to such dangers.
“But da-“
“No buts! Just go to your room or play with some servants, please.”
The eleven year old son pouted as he stormed off towards his room, most likely to study. He was unusual for a child his age, preferring scrolls and tomes over running in the fresh air. Even though there were no other children around his age, as Fahranur was a city of business and not living, and his twin siblings were six years older than him, he was an odd one. The only time he went out was in disguise as a poor child who wondered into the city in order to buy things to study in secret.
What the child was always studying was a mystery to Janah.
The king leaned against a pillar in the large hallway the two, now alone, were in. The pillars were circular and bare; at the time they merged into arches that crossed the hallway and between those arches on the ceiling were more that created x shapes. The few windows – all stain-glass that depicted the history of the royal family – in the hallway were five feet high and had slanted windowsills.
“What will I ever do with that boy?” Onrah sighed.
“What you can, sire.”
“Ma’am!” A guard shouted as he ran towards Janah. When he stopped, he turned and bowed his head in acknowledgement to Onrah before continuing his report. “A stranger approached the front gates requesting reprieve. He appears to be an Orrian traveler.”
“Orrian? Interesting, why don’t we let him in.” Onrah said with a curious tone in his voice.
“With all due respect, sire, we can’t let him into this palace without knowing who he is. Orrians may be a peace-loving people, but that doesn’t mean all of them share that view.”
“Then keep an eye on him.” Onrah replied quickly, his voice in an uncaring tone. That was the problem with the king – he trusted people too easily, despite knowing the potential dangers. So long as there were guards around, Onrah would let rabid demons into the palace without care.
“Did he give you a name?” Janah asked the guard.
“He claimed himself a ‘Konig Doric.’ Normally I’d have turned him away but…”
“A Doric…” Onrah leaned his head back with a smile. “I heard that those who don’t rule the kingdoms go into isolation somewhere. Now he’s even more interesting. Guard, let him in. Janah, inform my wife and her sister. The rulers should be kind enough to greet a descendant of the fabled northern king.”
Reluctantly, Janah agreed. It would be too rude to ignore the requests of a Doric. Not without cause, at least.
I have just about all of the story plotted out, I just need to write it out - along with finishing Fall of Gods, doing a couple papers and research for classes, and push GuildMag's very very late issue to publication, oh and work on getting internet at my apartment. Busy busy busy.
“Cianius Joko, do not talk back to me! You know that it is not safe to go out nowadays!” Although Onrah had a furious look on his face, he scolded his son not out of annoyance, as he knew how Cianius felt, but out of worry. Lately there have been unusual deaths in the city, and he didn’t want to risk his youngest son to such dangers.
“But da-“
“No buts! Just go to your room or play with some servants, please.”
The eleven year old son pouted as he stormed off towards his room, most likely to study. He was unusual for a child his age, preferring scrolls and tomes over running in the fresh air. Even though there were no other children around his age, as Fahranur was a city of business and not living, and his twin siblings were six years older than him, he was an odd one. The only time he went out was in disguise as a poor child who wondered into the city in order to buy things to study in secret.
What the child was always studying was a mystery to Janah.
The king leaned against a pillar in the large hallway the two, now alone, were in. The pillars were circular and bare; at the time they merged into arches that crossed the hallway and between those arches on the ceiling were more that created x shapes. The few windows – all stain-glass that depicted the history of the royal family – in the hallway were five feet high and had slanted windowsills.
“What will I ever do with that boy?” Onrah sighed.
“What you can, sire.”
“Ma’am!” A guard shouted as he ran towards Janah. When he stopped, he turned and bowed his head in acknowledgement to Onrah before continuing his report. “A stranger approached the front gates requesting reprieve. He appears to be an Orrian traveler.”
“Orrian? Interesting, why don’t we let him in.” Onrah said with a curious tone in his voice.
“With all due respect, sire, we can’t let him into this palace without knowing who he is. Orrians may be a peace-loving people, but that doesn’t mean all of them share that view.”
“Then keep an eye on him.” Onrah replied quickly, his voice in an uncaring tone. That was the problem with the king – he trusted people too easily, despite knowing the potential dangers. So long as there were guards around, Onrah would let rabid demons into the palace without care.
“Did he give you a name?” Janah asked the guard.
“He claimed himself a ‘Konig Doric.’ Normally I’d have turned him away but…”
“A Doric…” Onrah leaned his head back with a smile. “I heard that those who don’t rule the kingdoms go into isolation somewhere. Now he’s even more interesting. Guard, let him in. Janah, inform my wife and her sister. The rulers should be kind enough to greet a descendant of the fabled northern king.”
Reluctantly, Janah agreed. It would be too rude to ignore the requests of a Doric. Not without cause, at least.
I have just about all of the story plotted out, I just need to write it out - along with finishing Fall of Gods, doing a couple papers and research for classes, and push GuildMag's very very late issue to publication, oh and work on getting internet at my apartment. Busy busy busy.
KiyaKoreena
I think I should have enough time to get a project done so have decided to give it a shot again. I am torn between two ideas: A) Costume. Most likely Lunatic Court Finery, which I would prob wear it for next Dragon*Con. B) Quilted wall hanging. Mad King Thorn based, might go overboard and turn it into a full blanket/quilt depending on which sketch I decide I like best.
bonjela
A bit busy today, so I can't go into the detail I'd like to with this post, but:
@obastable: Thanks for the suggestion.
@Sura: Thanks for the link! Haven't looked at the videos yet, but they seem promising. Your piece is looking much better; I especially love your solution to the chair's perspective.
Her left arm looks a little scrawny compared to the other limbs now, though. For the colours, I prefer the orange, since it's the most Halloweeny colour (and gives the piece a Lunatic Court feel).
@Tommy's: Wow, that looks really great! I can't see much wrong with it, except perhaps that her mouth is orientated further left than the rest of her face.
@Konig: I'll comb through your story when I've more free time; maybe tomorrow, but probably over the weekend. If you can, try to post a summary of the plot so we can help you hunt for plot holes; you'll need them gone now if you don't plan on making major changes to finished chapters.
@obastable: Thanks for the suggestion.

@Sura: Thanks for the link! Haven't looked at the videos yet, but they seem promising. Your piece is looking much better; I especially love your solution to the chair's perspective.

@Tommy's: Wow, that looks really great! I can't see much wrong with it, except perhaps that her mouth is orientated further left than the rest of her face.
@Konig: I'll comb through your story when I've more free time; maybe tomorrow, but probably over the weekend. If you can, try to post a summary of the plot so we can help you hunt for plot holes; you'll need them gone now if you don't plan on making major changes to finished chapters.
Death By An Arrow
YAY TOMMY
That looks quite good so far, look forward to seeing it further.
Kiya, i think a costume of the lunatic court would be quite awesome, but I imagine that would take a lot of time :S But I'm sure you could make either work out very well
Today while on my spare period at school (do I ever love having a spare period this semester .___________.) I think I came up with an idea I really like. I sketched it down quickly, so it by no means is to scale, or even very good.
star wars.

That looks quite good so far, look forward to seeing it further.
Kiya, i think a costume of the lunatic court would be quite awesome, but I imagine that would take a lot of time :S But I'm sure you could make either work out very well

Today while on my spare period at school (do I ever love having a spare period this semester .___________.) I think I came up with an idea I really like. I sketched it down quickly, so it by no means is to scale, or even very good.
star wars.
GeminiJuSa
Name: GeminiJuSa
Art Form: Illustration
Idea: I don't have a final idea set, but I'm going to work out a few of them to get to where I want.
Progress Gallery: http://halloweenartforgw.blogspot.com/
Real Life Prizes: [X]
Official Contest: [X]
Workshop Awards: [X]
Gemini has entered the workshop.
I still don't have a clear "THAT'S the pic I'm gonna draw!" but I have a few ideas and I've begun drafting on one pic. This is going to be one hay of a learning trip. Please help me out everyone, I'm gonna need all the CC you can possibly give. Let's all have fun ~♥
EDIT
Here's what the first pic's sketch looks like.
Art Form: Illustration
Idea: I don't have a final idea set, but I'm going to work out a few of them to get to where I want.
Progress Gallery: http://halloweenartforgw.blogspot.com/
Real Life Prizes: [X]
Official Contest: [X]
Workshop Awards: [X]
Gemini has entered the workshop.
I still don't have a clear "THAT'S the pic I'm gonna draw!" but I have a few ideas and I've begun drafting on one pic. This is going to be one hay of a learning trip. Please help me out everyone, I'm gonna need all the CC you can possibly give. Let's all have fun ~♥
EDIT
Here's what the first pic's sketch looks like.