Commission - Closed: Tommy's Sketchbook

frostkisses

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O.O
Both look GREAT Tommy!!!
You've improved sooooooooo much!
*wants another commission*

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The colour scheme you've picked for the background works really well. I can't wait to see the finished version. Both the purple and the yellow really draw the eye, and it'll be interesting to see which one wins out.

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Thanks! I really hope I'll be in time to finish it, won't be able to work on it monday and tuesday so only tomorrow left D: Gonna be more towards a speedpainting again, since I'm really rushing in custom brushes in there
More progress, added a ghost tree. At least thats the feeling it gives me. Caves have strange inhabitants



And @ Forst. Perhabs in due time...

hoodiestarfish

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hey tommy looking good

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Quote:
Originally Posted by hoodiestarfish View Post
hey tommy looking good Thnx bro, welcome back!



*I do hope you look a bit happier *

InfestedHydralisk

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Make me a speedy of my name too! <3

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LOL i think you mean "speedy" IH this is a speedo

@Tommy- *waits patiently*

InfestedHydralisk

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o.O I wanted to say speedy in a different way. Didn't know speedo was something like that rofl. Quick edit change!

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Ok ok :P There was no question mark involved, it was an order! :P

Nah, do whatever you want to do.

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Bit more progress. Examweeks suck!



Still havent figured out what to do with her other hand.

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May be a bit busy, but she could be mid-twirl of a dagger.

InfestedHydralisk

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Probably something like playing with a dagger. Also, realistic face much. ;o

Smilin' Assassin

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omg thankyou Tommy~!
I'm touched that you remembered ..


I love her smile, just a hint of mischief, perfect :}



Don't worry about repeating what's been done before, with the volume of art featuring Alacrity, there's likely to be overlap somewhere ~
and balancing a dagger would work very nicely here
besides, the angle is different from that other pic.

other ideas to use all that space - casting/having just cast a spell, with a crackle of magic
perhaps her hand stretches towards us (palm up or down~? or facing us, up as if to offer or cast a spell, down as if to say "that's far enough")
- she might be holding something, doesn't have to be a weapon; GW is full of items .. maybe a Tome (or part of one)
or a consumable (examples: a half-full Sugary Blue Drink, or some other readily recogniseable item)

but any cheeky gesture, such as pistol-fingers, is well in character for Ala :}


If that doesn't quite fit in with brushing her hair away, you can still make her raised hand do something else
eg, suppressing a giggle (would need to adjust arm, so that her hand is reaching, not yet covering her mouth - shame to cover up that smile~!)
or a finger over her lips, not so much "shh" (but could be), more like http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&se...20hand#/dt96yh
(most others I can think of, only make sense if she's leaning towards the viewer)

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I'm touched your touched

How about instead of a dagger balancing on her finger, a little voodoo doll? Like the effigy thing in Guildwars. Balancing on one leg on the tip of her finger. Or is Ala not so much into the voodoo

Ok little scetch to show what I mean:


Also some adjustments to her face, noticed her nose was a bit long.

Also don't know wether to put Sai's on the middle of the belt, or dragon Kamas on the sides. Any preference?

Smilin' Assassin

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ha, those Straw Effigy's~?

Ala does actually have one, which she used in a pre-NF assacaster build

so yes, it's part of her GW history .. she had some sort of notoriety for it in AB's, in those early Faction days before the rollface builds


edit: oh, use whichever will go better, but if I had to pick, then Ala would have had Dragon Scythes in those days, and also Korambits if something shinier would suit

Thistle Xandra

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I love her face! She looks sexy and playful.

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Tommy! This has to be one of my favorites from you yet. I love the face and the shading and the hair *_*

nice abs too

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Thanks y'all
Still in testweek, epicly failed for my last test, so needed to loose some stress on my tablet So I've put the Nolani Database to use!

wip of Hailfalls Shala Jarias (hope I spell it right this time xd), 1 hour so far. Thank you for helping me relax

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Ha! That's a total sweet surprise of you there dear! I figured id randomly open some topics on guru to see what was going on.

That looks great so far

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What happened to Smilin's sin?

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^^^^
agreed. It was looking totally awesome D:

Though, Hailfalls is looking pretty impressive as well I must say. I don't know why but I'm just sucked into the scar/paint in the eye... like someone hypnotized me o.0

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i just love looking at your wips--this has been helping me a lot with my own work in a way, learning from just hese pictures. i love your realism and the wonderful choice of colours. Hailfails is looking amazing with the mood, and the assassin's skin is looking so real--lovely

also back on that flipped image discussion i left you hanging in, when my images get too large, i resize it just for the sake of flipping. that helps

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@Hailfall. thnx Will be a while before its finished though
@IH. No worries I'm still going to finish it. It's just that I need to relax and I relax best on faces and bellies ;p So I'm doing those and once my exams are over I'm going to finish Nians > Ala > Haillfall > another commission I havent started on yet.
@DBAA: Thanks <3 again, I will finish it And I'm glad the scar works hypnotizing, hope the eye will do so aswell, once I've put it in there

@Lady, thanks, glad they are of help. Though my order or working is terrible, I really should learn to put everything down and then start detailing instead of just randomly start somewhere I tend to keep bad habbits. Though its working for me so far, so not that much of a big deal, just sometimes annoying if I decide to go for a diferent light/shade. And flipping is going good now, GO iMAC!

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You keep amazing me..

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Thanks Hoodie, really appriciate your thoughts. Not really sure how I need to interpretate the Hailfall likes it rough..
And you too Fierce

And thnx Fierce. Good to see you're still stopping by ^^


Ok I lied, Shala Jarias will be done soon enough, here is a bit more progress.

Lady Kaguya

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ooh i love it! i know i already said it, but this may be my favourite piece of yours in terms of experimenting with colour theory/schemes. the red just makes it so murky and mysterious...and for some reason, i really love how you draw mouths.

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Alacrity looks really good - definitely improving throughout your works. Hail's commission is coming along nicely as well.

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Thanks

The weather today was too sunny to sit inside, so I undusted my pencil again. Geeh, was a long time ago I drew traditionally. Anyway, here is what the day brought.
Note 1. the reference for the female was wearing a dress aswell, but I wanted to practice bodylines, not dresses so left that out. Thus the highheels. So no, my reference was not from a pornmagazine or something along those lines
Note 2. They were drawn on simple white paper, I just put this texture behind it to make it a bit easier on the eyes. The bright white is sometimes killing my eyes.

figured I'd but if behind a NSFW spoiler, though its not really nsfw

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Finished version of Shala Jarias

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*cheer*

*lubs it*

Lady Kaguya

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soo luvely!!

just something...and this MAY just be me, but i've noticed when viewing a person from the side, their eyes look much less like a oval and more like "< )" shape, if you know what i mean, especially on realism, it really helps with the anatomy imo. but it's only a suggestion... : )

Ravenhawk

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I agree with Lady K's suggestion. I tend to overlook that fact as well.

And lovely work Tommy. I love how detailed the ear looks

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Yes you may be right about that! I'll try to keep that in mind the next time (or you'll have to remember me ) Thnx for pointing it out :3

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She looks awesome ^^

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Quick scetch of Farai & Frost.


@ Verene, Would I have your permission to give her a samurai inspired dervish armor? Instead of the vabbian I scetched now.

I will be away to Russia next week, so no work from me then.

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Ooooooooooh.

And yes, play around with whatever armor design you want! I'm actually using Monument (which is quite samurai-inspired) at the moment XD I believe there's a picture of it in the Art Wanted thread.

Have fun in Russia! That sounds like fun ^^

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nice sketch Tommy

wow Russia - Have a great time.

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Cool poses on that action scene. I think the left arm holding the scythe has a bit of an awkward hand placement - as if it should be placed at a farther distance from the other hand.

And it's a bit hard to tell right now, but does that hand have an overhand or underhand grip? Right now, it looks like she has an underhand grip which doesn't make sense if she's wielding a two-handed polearm.

P.S. Have fun in Russia, where car drives you!